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Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5 (Page 44)

ArmaanRidhima Senior Member

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
mindblowing part... thankgod Armaan ne uski baat per gaur nahi kiya, warna woh toh.... LOL
waiting for ur next part Rukz

hrhr Senior Member

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
rukz as usual
u rocked
cant wait for next part

Edited by hrhr - 18 May 2008 at 12:03pm
R1U2K3 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

Now ridhima is also in an naughty mood...
R:Theek hai...ek game khelte hai
A:game...kaisey game...
R:mein pool mein tum se bachne ki koshish kerti hun...ager tum ne mujhey pakad tumhe gift ke tor per 2 kisses milien ge...
A:ha ha ha.....jaan...forget it
A:tumhe swimming nahi ati...aur uper se ab ye game....haar jao ge...ek minute mein ager pakd ker dikha diya to!
R:to kahan na...2 kisses*
A:2 nahi...5
R:count till 10...
Ridhima with the help of the rod...goes into the deep side...armaan is now at one edge of the pool and ridhima on the other,,,
A:7,8,9,......nsket mein aa raha hun.......10!
Ridhima is realy excited kyunki armaan uski taraf teezi se bad raha hai....
Ridhima thoda aur agey janey ki koshish kerti hai lekin rod khatam ho jati hai...
she tries to swim to the other edge and usse agli rod pakadni thi....
Use swimming nahi what is she going to do...
SHe tried hard to swim...she closed her eyes tight and some how tried to swim..
Armaan was in the middle....
Aur ankhien band mein ridhima ko pata hi nahi chala ke woh kis direction mein ja rahi hai...and ends up in the centre of the deep side,,
Ridhima ki sans choot gaye
somehow she could not control aur uska balance too gaya...She started to drown...
WOh nichay jaa rai thi...uskay pair hardly touched the surface....
She wantes to scream!
Armaan could not her...woh apne dehan mein swim ker raha tha...
After 15 seconds...when armaan was nearly on the edge..he saw that ridhima is not there...
He could see her hand going dowm...
He got scared...
he shouted!
He quickly swam to the deep side and somehow manages to take ridhima out from the pool..
He pulled her outside,,,
She was in an unconsious state!
A:jaan!...jaan.....utho na ridhima.....
A:he cried..

next part coming soon!

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pwincess kanzi IF-Rockerz
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pwincess kanzi

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
omg! i hpe riddhimz's ok?! Ouch armaan's cho cute! cntd sn ruk! cnt w8 2 read wats gona happen nxt!
Sona_25 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
here v get one more mindblowing part...
hrhr Senior Member

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Posts: 858

Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
oh poor armiridz
kya socha tha kya ho gay
but i m sure ki ye bhi tumne unhe close lane ke liye kiya hai
well its awesome rukz
u rocked
ArmaanRidhima Senior Member

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Posts: 521

Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
great part!!!!!!!!
omg waiting for the next part Tongue
mannyz_1 Goldie

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Posts: 2468

Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
OMG!!!!!! Shocked Shocked oh....i hope she gets ok yaar!!! Smile Smile rukz you really know how to grip a person with your parts yaar!!! keep it up! Wink Wink

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