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Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5 (Page 144)

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwww armaan crying:(..please continue a longer part na:(

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gr8 parts rukz...i wish ridz shouldnt hav said dat... Angry Angry N yaar,plz continue soon.......u round off left at a cliff hanger only... Confused Confused
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Ridhima was wtching and hearing everything from the
door....
she went in her room and cried her heart out...
R:mein ne tumhar dil dukhaya armaan...tum iskey liye
mujhey jo saza dena chaho de saktey ho....lekin please
mujhey maaf kerdo...please armaan....

Next morning...
Armaan woke up at 7...
he went in the washroom...got dressed and came
downstairs...
Till then ridhima also woke up...
Armaan was making himself some breakfast..
R:mein bana deti huun...
A:thankyou very much but i can do it myself...
R:per...
A:please, jao yahan se...i think tumhe mujhse jaisey
girey huay insaan ke saath khada hona pasand nahi
hoga...
he picked his plate and cup of coffee and came
outside..
Ridhima,crying....
He sat on the dining table and ate his breakfast....
Ridhima again came and stood next to him..
R:armaan...mein tums.......
He got up angrily, picked up his coat, files and
stethescope and left...
R:Armaan mein tumse maafi mangna chahti hun...mujhey
maaf kerdo...please.....
It was 2 pm when ridhima was cleaning the house....she
saw the red roses which armaan brought for her
yesterday inorder to apologize for his mistake but
ridhima.......she cried again....she picked the flowers
and placed them in her room....
Armaan saara din sanjeevani mein kaam kerta raha...
he had two surgeries with dr.shashank today...
he dint even had the time to eat or drink...got free at
9....
went home...
It was 10 pm..
armaan drove the car in a steady speed because he dint
want to face ridhima...
He cried all the way back home...
He entered the house...
Ridhima was waiting for him...
He was very tired....very hungry too...
he saw ridhima...
R:armaan...ajj bohat dair ho gaye....
A;haan ridhima...ajj actually bohat hot patients aye
huay they..bus unhi ke saath....
R:armaan tum....
A:aur kia ridhima....mein sach keh raha hun....mein unhi ke sath tha...
R:armaan please...mein tumse maafi mangna chahti hun...
A;maafi....shuh.....kis cheez ki mafi ridhima....tumne kia kia hai...bolo...kia ghalati hai tumhari...
R:armaan....
A:kia ridhima....infact maafi to mujhey tumse mangni chahiye...I AM SORRY...please mujhey maaf kerdo...mein tumahri ilawa kisi aur ko dekhta rehta hun hospital mein...mein tumahre saath bewafai ker raha hun...is that okay...the word bewafai...haan...ab se tum mujhey yehi kehna...okay...mujhey bohat acha lage gaa....


Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 2:18pm

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more parts coming soon....**

Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 2:30pm
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by saying this armaan left..
Again...Ridhima started to cry....
R:tum kab maaf kero ge armaan...kab....

Armaan upstairs in his room....
A:mein thak gaya hun ridhima tumhe ignore kerte kerte...mein tumse bohat pyaar kerta hun..bohat pyaar...aur tumhe kabhi bhi koi takleef nahi pohanchana chahta..lekin tumne jo mere saath....

Ridhima come upstairs...
Sees armaan sitting on the bed...holding his head...
She came and sat on her knees next to armaan....
R:armaan...please mujhey maaf kerdo...usdin anjaney mein mere moo se pata nahi kia kia.....
A:ridhima....tumne mujhey meri aslyat bataye hai...is mein kia ghalat kiya hai jo tum mujhse baar baar mafi mangne ki koshish ker rahi ho..
R:armaan...tum baar baar aisa kyun keh rahey ho...kia tum ek baar mujhey maaf nahi ker saktey...?
A:ridhima....tumhe ab likhe dena padega ke tumne kuch ghalat nahi kiya....
He got up angrily and stood beside the window...
R:theek hai armaan.....jab tak mujhey nahi maaf kero ge...mein tumhe apni shakal tak nahi dikhonge....ye mera vaada hai tumse..

Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 2:39pm

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OMG,yeh kya ho gaya... Cry rukz plz continue soon...
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Rdihima started to pack her bags...
Armaan pareshan ho gaya...
he went near her...
Whatever she had packed...he unpacked all of it...
A:itna sab kuch honey ke baad ghar to mujhey chor ker jana chahiye...aur yahn sab ulta chal raha hai...
(armaan...now normal....)
R:armaan................
A:chup....ek dum chup.......ek to mujh per ilazzam lagati ho...ooper se ghar chor jani ke dhamki deti ho...mein tumahri dhamkiyoon se darney wala nahi hun...darna to tumhien chahiye kyunki ager tumne ye ghar chora to.......
went close to her and hugged her tight...
A:to mein marr jaonga.....
Both armaan and ridhima...started to cry out loudly...
R:i love u armaan...
A:but i hate u ridhima......
R:its okay...i still love u.....
A:i still hate u....
Armaan tightened his grip...


Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 2:51pm

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