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Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5 (Page 143)

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
awesum...!! Clap Clap

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hey guyz...em free...so i am going to update...
cool naa...stay tunned*

Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 1:08pm
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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
wohooo okie rukzz i hope its a fight eheheh
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recap:Armaan: maine riddhima se kuch zyada hi rudely behave kiya..i am an idiot..parr arima..its ok..main usse shaam mein mana loonga...

After all days hardwork..finally the duty time is over...ajj bhi armaan shashank se koi baat nahi kerta kyunki ridhima told him that they would go together to shashank's place for the wedding thingy...but armaan dint knw..ghar per ridhima was all set for a big fight...
Armaan again before going home,bought a bunch of red roses for ridhima as he remembered the lil fight they had in the morning...usne isi liye kharede ke shaid ridhima isi tarhan maan jati...
But things...huh...dont ask whts going to happen now...

Armaan went home...
He gave the bell...
Trinn Trinn...
it went for lyk 5 times...no one opened the door...with the spare key...he thought maybe something had happened to ridhima...all at that time he thought was...IS EVERYTHING OKAY...

We stepped inside...he hid the flowers behind his back..
A:ridhima tum theek to..........
R:(rudely)...aa hi rai thi mein dervaza kholney...arima ke hi paas thi...mer naye gaye the...
Armaan was all shocked...
A:what rubbish ridhima...mazak band kero...
R:ooh...to ab tumhein mazaak lag raha hai...tumhi kehtey they naa...ridhima ka khayal rakha kero...subha to bohat gussa ker rahey they...thodi dair meri ankh kia lag gaye...tum..tumne mujhe per chilana shuru kerdia....
A:dekho ridima...calm down..tum subha wali baat per abhi tak naraz ho...
A:dekhiye Mr.Armaan Malik, mein yahan sara din akeli hoti hun..ghar ka kaam kerna, safai khana pakana aur arima ka khayal rakhna...asaan nahi hai sab kuch..tumhari tarhan nahi hun...hospital mein 8-7 baje tak rehna, patients(girls) ko check out kerna aur ghar wapas ana...
A:enough ridhima...he angrily threw the flowers on the floor....ager tumhe yehi lagta hai ke mein saara din hospital mein larkiyun ko check out kerta hun to shaid mein app ko yaad dila do...mein ek bachey ka baap hun...aur aisey herqat...chi...how could u even think about it ridhima...aur ager tumhe mujhey per yakeen nahi hota naa...to jao..ja ker apne papa se pooch lo..mein hospital mein kia kerta hun...pichlay ek haftey se rooz unke saath subha se lekar shaam tak surgeries kerta hun...oooh..i am sorry....mein tumhien safayaan ko de raha hun...
R:doesnt knw what to say...kyunki she herself realised...it was too much...
A:mujhey tumse aisey umeed nahi thi ridhima...mein ajj tumse apne subha ke ghalati ke liye maafi mangney aya tha...aur yahaan to tumne hi mujhey itna zalil ker dia...u knw what...Today i hate myself...tumne mujhey ye bataya ke mien kitna gira hua insaan hun..thankyou ridhima...
He picked up his files and stethescope and went in his room....
Ridhima left in tears...

Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 1:35pm

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Awww wonderful update.. Clap Poor Armaan...Ridzi shouldn hve said tht.. Angry Hope everything gets fine soon...Plzz continue soon Smile Smile Smile
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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
o noo rukss dont end there!...continuee!!!!!i hopee armaan ab use kuch kahe!..ulta seeda aur phir fight!woohooo... kafi dino se fight nahi huiii sab kuch itna khushi khushi ho raha hai lol
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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 1:56pm | IP Logged

ARmaan in his room...threw his stethescope and files on the bed...and in anger went in the washroomm...
he was really angry...
Armaan to himself...
Ridhima, humari shaadi ko ek saal honey wala hai per ajj tumne jo ilzaam mere uper laga hai...muje apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai...he was crying....he splashed some water on his face but started to cry loudly...

Ridhima was standing outside the washroom and heard every single thing...what he said and his crying...
R:mujhey maaf kerdo arman...mein tumhe gusaay mein najaney kia kia bol bethi...mein ne itni ghatiya baat apney moo se tumhare liye kaisey nikaal di....jab ke mein achi tarhan janti hun ke mere ilawa tum aur kisi ko dekh to kia aur kisi ke barey mein soch bhi nahi saktey...mein tumse kaisey maafi mango armaan....

Armaan came out of the washroom...he ignored ridhima....
He grabbed his pillow and a sheet and went in arima's room...
He saw arima in her cot playing with the chimes...
He said in a low voice....
A:hey papa's princess....ajj app uth gaye...
Arima smiled...iss bar arima armaan ke godh mein aker nahi roi....she was lyking the way armaan was treating her...
A:arima..ajj papa ap ke paas soein gey...mein janta hun aap jana chahtey ho kyun....papa mama se baat nahi ker rahey...
Arima put her fingers in her mouth...
Armaan gently pulled the out...and took arima in his arms...
A:arima...ajj papa haar gaye....kyunki jitney bhi din woh apkey mama ke saath rahey...apki mama ko abhi tak ye hi nahi pata chala ke mein kitna badal gaya tha...aur hun..mere zindagi mein sirf do hi larkiyan hai...ek mama aur ek aapp...unho ne mujh per bohat ganda ilzaam lagaya arima..aur shaid iske liye mein apki mama ko to kia..apne app ko bhi kabhi maaf nahi ker sakta..mein shaid zindagi bher yehi sochta rahunga ke kia aisey image banaye the mein ney ridhima ke nazroon mein....
he looked at arima and saw that she had gone to sleep....Armaan sobbed and hugged arima...janta hun...ajj mein bilkul akela hun....koi nahi hai meri baat sune wala...khair....

He had put arima back in the cot and he himself went to sleep on arima's single bed...

Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 1:57pm

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
hahaha...dont worry guys...fight itni jaldi over nahi honey waley.....

Edited by rukz - 25 June 2008 at 1:58pm

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