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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 11:23am | IP Logged
@rukz it was very funny bechaara armaan.........riddhima ne uske saath yeh kya kardiya LOL ....aur jaise ki pehle hi maine keh diya tha ki aapka part.............bahut bahut bura honga woh uss se bhi bura hai........just kidding Wink
@afreen very nice part chalo tumne padman/shashank ki shaadi ke baare mein socha..awesome

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
thankyou Yogitha...bus mujhey tumhare isi support ki zaroorat thi...Inshallah agey bhi buray buray parts likhti rahu ge... LOL LOL
BTW today is the 24th...yachna..she going to be free rite!
Aur amy...ye kahan gaye...akele akela ff kholne ka irada lagta hai! Embarrassed

Edited by rukz - 24 June 2008 at 1:27pm
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
lovely parts.. Clap Clap Clap i'm enjoying it..Plzz continue soon Smile
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
recap:Armaan: byee jaan..c u in the evening...miss ya
He kisses her and leaves
In sanjeevani...
Armaan saara time bus yehi sochta raha ke kia usse papa
se iss barey mein baat kerni chahiye...he really thought
if he had a right to ask him about such personal kinda
stuff..he was confused..aise mein armaan ko ridhima ki
bohat yaad a rahi thi...but..abhi to uska duty time
shuru bhi nahi hua tha..and cell phones..not allowed in
sanjeevani..to baat ghar per hi ho sakti thi naa...
khair, abhi sanjeevani mein ye baat armaan ne kisi ke
saath discuss nahi ki the..pehle ridhima se to confirm
ker leta...

AFter the hectic shedule, finally the duty time was
over..finally armaan could now go home...on his way as
usual, he bought some red roses for ridhima...

It was 7:30 pm when armaan reached home...
Ridhima opened the door for armaan...
Armaan was not as much tired as he used to before..ajj
kaam thoda kam tha so he was a bit fresh fresh
A:hey jaan..kaisey ho...
R:em fine armaan...
A:ye lo....tumahre flowers....
R:armaan....tum hamesha red roses kyun latey ho mere
liye..??
A:kyun..achey nahi laagey?
R:nai...achay hai..bohat achay...lekin roz roz?
A:kyun...mein apni biwi ke le itna bhi nai ker sakta..
R:ker saktey ho...
A:*smiles*...andar chaley?
R:haan...
They both go inside...
Ridhima sets the flowers in the vase placed near the
window..while armaan sat on the sofa...he was just
admiring her beauty..her dark black blowing away with
the wind...and her white saree's pallo irritating her
again and again...armaan just loved that...
he could not resist more so he got up!

He went near her...
whispered in her ear..
A:tum aj bohat khobsoorat lag rahi ho ridhima...
She just blushed...
Armaan kinda blocked his way...
R:armaan, hato...mujhey janey do...
A:nahi...
R:armaan please...(typical line of hers)
R:armaan...mujhey arima ko check kerrney jana
hai..please naa..aur tum bhi usse nahi miley...
A:he then realised ke armaan atey saath arima se mila hi
nai...
A:han...chalo...tum bhi na ridhima..mujhey aisey cheezo
mein busy ker deti ho..
R:mein............
He smiled, went, turned and winked...
They both went upstairs in arima's room...
Arima was sleeping..kyunki armaan ke aney ke kuch hi diar pehle ridhima ne usse feed kia tha...

Armaan just kisses his angel's fingers and left..
After one hour,when he got changed and had dinner and all ridhima and armaan went in their room...

A:ridhima...mujhey tumse ek baat kerni thi...
R:han bolo armaan...
changed her clothes..now wearing a silk white gown...
A:aaj mein ney sanjeevani mein papa se baat kerney ki bohat koshish ki..u knw about his marriage with padma aunty..lekin mein apney app ko hamesha rokta raha ke shaid i dont have a right to talk about papa's personal life...
R:tum aisa kyun sochtey ho armaan....tum unkey bete jaisey ho....obviously tumhara jaq banta hai..
A:phir bhi ridhima..mujhey kuch theek nahi laaga...
R:tumse nahi hoga...humein kal papa ke ghar ja ker unse iss barey mein baat kerni hogi...
A:hmm..shiad tum theek keh rahi ho...khair...waha kyun khari ho...idhar ao mere paas...
Ridhima came closer to armaan....
she sat next tom him on the bed...
Armaan then removed her hair from her back and planted a gentle kiss on her neck....
A:Ridhima tum....................................

Edited by rukz - 24 June 2008 at 2:11pm

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
awwwww poor armi dnt know wot 2 2 shashank last part was very cute updte soon plzzz
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 8:23pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by rukz

thankyou Yogitha...bus mujhey tumhare isi support ki zaroorat thi...Inshallah agey bhi buray buray parts likhti rahu ge... LOL woh toh hamesha doongi sirf bure parts likhne meinLOL
BTW today is the 24th...yachna..she going to be free rite! ji haan woh free ho gayi hai shayad aaj aayengi bhiEmbarrassed
Aur amy...ye kahan gaye...akele akela ff kholne ka irada lagta hai! mujhe bhi unke khayal aise hi lagthe hai..........amy di jaldhi wapas aajooEmbarrassed

abhi nest wala part padhkar comments baad mein karoongi kyunki mujhe abh school jaana hai

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
waah kya lokhte ho yaar!!!!!! bohut khub bohut khub . do continue
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an amzng superb n mindblwing prt Smile Smile

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