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Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5 (Page 137)

Afreen22 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 12:36am | IP Logged

At the Gupta Residence*
Riddhima opens the door
She sees armaan,atul and anjali
Riddhima:hi atul...tum bhi aaye ho....
She sees armaan and her eyes light up
All of them go in
Armaan: Riddhima..arima kahan hai
Riddhima:upar room main haiArmaan :main usse milkar aata hoon
Riddhima also follows him
Armaan goes up and sees arima sleeping
Armaan: meri angel so rahi hai...(he plants a kiss on her cheek)..papa ne aaj angel ko bohut miss kiya
Riddhima comes from behind :aur mama ko
Armaan: mama ko utna zyada miss nahi kiya
Riddhima:armaaan.i hate u
Armaan..sorry jaan...maine tho tumhe sabse zyada miss kiya..tumhare bin sanjeevani mujhe accha nahi lagta..
Riddhima: maine bhi tumhe bohut miss kiya jaan
Armaan comes closer to Riddhima and hugs her tightly...she gives him a kiss on his lips
Armaan:i love u sooooooooooo much Riddhima
Riddhima :i love u too armaan
They r lost in their world when somebody knocks the door
Armaan: hume disturb karne..koi na koi tho aa hi jaata hai..
Armaan: hamesha aise hi hota hai Riddhima..ab main nahi chodne wala
He slowly pushes Riddhima to the wall
armaan: main tumse poora din door raha...aur ab thodi der tumhe pyaar bhi nahi kar sakta
Riddhima:armaan..tum mujhe baad mein pyaar kar lena..she pushes him and runs to the door
When she opens the door..she finds that it is anjali
Anjali: nani..tum dono ko dinner ke liye bula rahi hai..riddz...door kholne itni der kyun lagayi?
Anjali: i can understand....starts laughing and goes down
Riddhima:armaaan tum bhi na....chalo neeche chale
They both go down
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Sona_25 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 1:17am | IP Logged
very nice afreen... Clap
123abc123 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 4:11am | IP Logged
afreeen ur da best dat was sooo cute
great updte

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 4:54am | IP Logged
hey afreen u r the best.....hats off to ur parts and ur creativity u rocks...



           continue soon...we r waiting..
yogzz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 5:45am | IP Logged
aww very nice part was soo cute
R1U2K3 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 6:42am | IP Logged usual...the part was very cute and amazing...
chalo chalo...ab meri bari hai..i will continue...lekin haan AFreen, next part mein shashank aur paady ke marraige wali baat tumhe shuru kerni hogi...i cant write that!!! LOL   LOL   LOL   LOL   LOL

Edited by rukz - 24 June 2008 at 6:42am
R1U2K3 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 7:07am | IP Logged
recap:"They both go down

Armaan and ridhima having a *kich-kich* conversation while coming down..

A:ridhima, ek baat to batao...
R:haan bolo armaan..
A:tumhare ghar mein itni jaldi kyun dinner kertey hai
R:kia matlab?
A:mera matlab abhi sirf 7:30 huay hai aur khana..em not even hungry...
R:papa hamesha hospital se aney ke baad seedha kahan hi khate hai..
A:ridhima, emin ney ajj lunch late kiya na issi liye mujhey bhook nahi hai...mein nai kha paonga..
R:armaan....meri khatir please thoda sa..
A:theek hai jaan...jaise tum kaho

They finally reach the dining table..
All are eating..
Nani:arey armaan beta..tumhari plate to bilkul khali hai...(waqai mein..armaan ki plate mein adhi se bhi kam roti aur thoda sa chicken tha...)
A:nai nai nanai...mein ne to bohat khaya..
Ridhima armaan ko tease kerney ki koshish ker rahi thi...
R:nai nani...inhe thoda aur daal ker do..subha se kuch bhi nahi khaya..
Armaan showed ayes to ridhima ke ye kia ker rahi ho..
R:lao armaan apni plate mujhey do..mein tumhe daal daal ker deti hun...
N:han aur ye roti aur lo..
Anjali:jejo....mine thorey se rice daal deti hun..
A:nai nai mein itni nai kha paon ga... lo..plate pakaro..
Sh:armaan beta..khalo...subha se tum surgery mein they..khalo..
A:per papa...
R:per wer kuch nai...papa ne bhi keh diya..khao..
Armaan had no option left except eating every single stuff on the plate...

After everyone was done with the dinner,
it was time to go...
Atul and anjali with their son had already left because atul's mum was alone at home..
Armaan and ridhima were now going to leave..
Armaan was having serious pain in his stomach..
A:ridhima ki bachi..ghar chalo..mein tumhe nahi choro gaa..
sh:kuch kaha tumne armaan beta.?
A:nai papa, mein keh raha tha khana bohat acha tha..
R:*laughs*....acha papa...chaltey hai...take care...
Holding arima in her hands...
R:bye nani...
N:bye bacho..

*in the car*

R:*laughs*kia hua armaan...
A:ooh,.....jasiey tumhein nahi pata
A:nai to...mujhey to kuch bhi nahi pata
A"theek hai...ghar chalo phir mein batata hun ke mujhey kia hua hai!
They reach home...
Armaan quickly rushes to the washroom...and throws up!
he vomitted 3 times...
He was having a lot of pain...
At first ridhima laughed but then she realised, Armaan was seriously not well...

Ridhima all worried...
R:armaan...armaan...tum theek ho na..
Held his hand when he came out of the bathroom the third time..
A:yeah..em fine...
he sat on the bed...
Ridhima brought medicine for him...
R:ye lo armaan..
he ate it....
R:armaan bed per late jao...
He does that..
r:i am sorry armaan..meri wajah se tumhe...please mujhey maf kerdo..
A:arey dumbo...kaisey baatien ker rrahi to cafe mein mein ney kuch ulta seedha kha liya tha..isi liye..
R:phir bhi armaan..i am sorry...she held his hand and kissed it...
A:tum bhi na basket...c'mon..give me a hug...
She hugs him*

Edited by rukz - 24 June 2008 at 7:07am
Afreen22 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rukz

<span> usual...the part was very cute and amazing...
</span><br><span>chalo chalo...ab meri bari hai..i will continue...lekin haan AFreen, next part mein shashank aur paady ke marraige wali baat tumhe shuru kerni hogi...i cant write that!!! </span>   LOL   LOL   LOL   LOL

accha i'll try LOL LOL LOL

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