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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 4:11am | IP Logged
afreeen ur da best dat was sooo cute
great updte

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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 4:54am | IP Logged
hey afreen u r the best.....hats off to ur parts and ur creativity u rocks...




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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 5:45am | IP Logged
aww very nice part afreen............it was soo cute
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Afreen...as usual...the part was very cute and amazing...
chalo chalo...ab meri bari hai..i will continue...lekin haan AFreen, next part mein shashank aur paady ke marraige wali baat tumhe shuru kerni hogi...i cant write that!!! LOL   LOL   LOL   LOL   LOL

Edited by rukz - 24 June 2008 at 6:42am
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 7:07am | IP Logged
recap:"They both go down

Armaan and ridhima having a *kich-kich* conversation while coming down..

A:ridhima, ek baat to batao...
R:haan bolo armaan..
A:tumhare ghar mein itni jaldi kyun dinner kertey hai
R:kia matlab?
A:mera matlab abhi sirf 7:30 huay hai aur khana..em not even hungry...
R:papa hamesha hospital se aney ke baad seedha kahan hi khate hai..
A:ridhima, emin ney ajj lunch late kiya na issi liye mujhey bhook nahi hai...mein nai kha paonga..
R:armaan....meri khatir please thoda sa..
A:theek hai jaan...jaise tum kaho
R:thankyou...


They finally reach the dining table..
All are eating..
Nani:arey armaan beta..tumhari plate to bilkul khali hai...(waqai mein..armaan ki plate mein adhi se bhi kam roti aur thoda sa chicken tha...)
A:nai nai nanai...mein ne to bohat khaya..
Ridhima armaan ko tease kerney ki koshish ker rahi thi...
R:nai nani...inhe thoda aur daal ker do..subha se kuch bhi nahi khaya..
Armaan showed ayes to ridhima ke ye kia ker rahi ho..
R:lao armaan apni plate mujhey do..mein tumhe daal daal ker deti hun...
N:han aur ye lo..do roti aur lo..
Anjali:jejo....mine thorey se rice daal deti hun..
A:nai nai mein itni nai kha paon ga...
R:armaan...ye lo..plate pakaro..
Sh:armaan beta..khalo...subha se tum surgery mein they..khalo..
A:per papa...
R:per wer kuch nai...papa ne bhi keh diya..khao..
Armaan had no option left except eating every single stuff on the plate...

After everyone was done with the dinner,
it was time to go...
Atul and anjali with their son had already left because atul's mum was alone at home..
Armaan and ridhima were now going to leave..
Armaan was having serious pain in his stomach..
A:ridhima ki bachi..ghar chalo..mein tumhe nahi choro gaa..
sh:kuch kaha tumne armaan beta.?
A:nai papa, mein keh raha tha khana bohat acha tha..
R:*laughs*....acha papa...chaltey hai...take care...
Holding arima in her hands...
R:bye nani...
N:bye bacho..

*in the car*

A:aaaaahhh....
R:*laughs*kia hua armaan...
A:ooh,.....jasiey tumhein nahi pata
A:nai to...mujhey to kuch bhi nahi pata
A"theek hai...ghar chalo phir mein batata hun ke mujhey kia hua hai!
They reach home...
Armaan quickly rushes to the washroom...and throws up!
he vomitted 3 times...
He was having a lot of pain...
At first ridhima laughed but then she realised, Armaan was seriously not well...

Ridhima all worried...
R:armaan...armaan...tum theek ho na..
Held his hand when he came out of the bathroom the third time..
A:yeah..em fine...
he sat on the bed...
Ridhima brought medicine for him...
R:ye lo armaan..
he ate it....
R:armaan bed per late jao...
He does that..
r:i am sorry armaan..meri wajah se tumhe...please mujhey maf kerdo..
A:arey dumbo...kaisey baatien ker rrahi ho...ye to cafe mein mein ney kuch ulta seedha kha liya tha..isi liye..
R:phir bhi armaan..i am sorry...she held his hand and kissed it...
A:tum bhi na basket...c'mon..give me a hug...
She hugs him*

Edited by rukz - 24 June 2008 at 7:07am
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rukz

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Afreen...as usual...the part was very cute and amazing...
</span><br><span>chalo chalo...ab meri bari hai..i will continue...lekin haan AFreen, next part mein shashank aur paady ke marraige wali baat tumhe shuru kerni hogi...i cant write that!!! </span>   LOL   LOL   LOL   LOL

accha i'll try LOL LOL LOL
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 7:48am | IP Logged
gals u know what... i never knew atul and anjali were married LOL ...what a shock LOL LOL LOL
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Posted: 24 June 2008 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by choco_girl

hey afreen u r the best.....hats off to ur parts and ur creativity u rocks...




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i love ur creativity toooo..ur creations are awesome..can i use them?....what's ur name? i dont want to call u chocogirl LOL LOL LOL

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