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Posted: 15 years ago
yes:D..please continue rukss and yaar yeh amy kahan hai :S
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ya i think the ides of fight is gud, but waht wud be the reason cus it b the carlessness of ridz with the angel or she forgot about armaan or she payes more atention to angel n not at al to armaan this one wud b the big fight n then @ the end armaan will defenatly says sorry cos it was wrong to b jelouse of ur own child

what say???
Edited by arluver15 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
well girls its not a big fight this time...big fight le liye to abhi mere demagh mein khud ek idea nahi a raha tha,,,isi liye this one sided fight...uuh...hope u like my work...big fight ka hum sab mil ker soch ke likhein gey..hope thats fine???Edited by rukz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
recap:The lights are off

Next day...
7 pm in the morning...
Armaan woke up first and went for a bath..
he came out..
got dressed..
Ridhima was still sleeping and armaan didn;t want her to get disturbed so he got ready and went downstairs as he was in a hurry..
he was getting late for his presentation..
he made himself some breakfast and left..

*Sanjeevani*
*8 am*
All the interns reported to Dr.keerti
Dr:good morning interns..
All:good morning dr.keerti
Dr:ajj app logo ke presentation hai..dr.shubhankar aur mere saath...apke ke kaam ko judge kiya jayega aur teh kiya jayege ke kia app case

handle kerney like hai ke nahi..app abhi ja saktey hai..app ko page ker diya jayega...
All:yes dr.

*locker room*
All the interns are going through their cases as they dint want to perform badly..

Armaan was the one who got the pager first..
He grabbed his files and notes and went inside the meeting hall...

His presentation was superb as he had made slides, reffered to many other cancer cases (his case was of a cancer patient)..through global

search recommended advanced medicines...dr.keerti and shubhankar were very impresses by his performance..
He was given excellent comments..
he was awarded with his new badge..

Similarly one by one all the other interns were called and they gave their presentation..

Dr.keerti in the end gathered all the interns and announced that out of all, Dr.Armaan gave the best presentation,he was awarded extra 20

points and got the oppurtunity to assist in a surgery with Dr.Shashank..wereas the rest received 10..

Its was 6 pm..
Time fr the surgery..
The case was very complicated..
A cancer patient, at his last stage..
It was not an easy case, with 70% chances of death...
Surgery went for 3 hours
unfortunateltly the docs were unable to save the patient..
Patient Died*


Armaan was very disturbed by this...
he could not take it..tears came out of his eyes.

Dr shashank:armaan beta,mein janta hun..ye surgery nakamyaab rahi,afterall cancre, last stage..mushkil tha..control urself..ye sab uper waley

ki merzi thi...go home...rest
Armaan remained silent...
Armaan drove home,depressed...disturbed...

Stood at the doorstep and gave the bell...
Ridhima opned the door after 10 minutes..
Armaan was very angry..

A:kahan thi tum..mein kab se bell de raha hun
R:armaan mein wo arima..........................
A:enough ridhima...ek to pehle hi mein itni pareshan hun ooper se....forget it
R:Armaan tum.....sab theek hai naa...
A:haan ridhima...sab theek hai...ager tum apney fazool ke questions poochna band keroge to shaid mere demagh ko rest miley gaa...
R:armaan..
A:ridhima please!
(he was very angry...wasnt listening to her...she was left speechless...remained quiet and heard whatever armaan was saying...)
She ran into her room with tears in her eyes....

It was 10...
Armaan had slept on the couch..
All of a sudden woke up..
went in his room to get changed...
uska gussa thanda ho chuka tha...
He saw ridhima in angels room cleaning her wardrobe..
Armaan came inside angel's room after a bath n all...

he saw angel sleeping,kissed her forehead and went near ridhima...

A:Ridhima...
R:...............
A:ridhima....
R:bolo
A:mere taraf dekho
R:mujhey bohat kaam hai armaan..hum baad mein baat kertey hai
A:ridhimaaa....
he turned her towards his face
A:i am sorry....mein ney ajj tumhare saath bohat batameezi se baat ke...mujhey maaf ker dena...please..em sorry
After saying this, he left..
Ridhima got lost in her thoughts...


Armaan went outside in the balcony, sat on the swing
armaan was crying...
Ridhima came after 10 minutes
sat next to him...
R:kia hua armaan....
A:kuch nahi ridhimaa
R:armaan jhoot mat bolo..please...batao
A:he kept his head on ridhim's lap..
ajj mere haathon se ek khoon ho gaya..mein ek patient ki jaan nahi bacha paya...wo wo..mere haathon see...
R:armaan,aisa nahi kehte...ye sab tumahri ghalati to nahi hai naa...cancer ki laast stage me to kisi ka bhi bachna bohat mushkil hota hai..phir tum...
A:tumhien ye sab..?
R:papa ka phone aya tha abhi..unho ne bataya tum bohat distrbed lag rahey they...
Armaan faced towards ridhima and hugged her...
A:tum ney mujhey maaf ker dia naa ridhima...
R:mein tumse naraz hi kab thi armaan...
He kissed her stomach thrice...
A:i am sorry jaann...i love u
R:i love u too Armaan...chalo,utho aur khana kha lo...its already very late*

Edited by rukz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was great rukz:D..but arent tehy doctors now?:S... lolzzz... i have an idea!...do u remember when armaan said mujhe tumhare saath nahi sona akhar tum mein rakha kya hai... jab un dono ke itni bari fight nahi hue thi kyunke ridz ko karwa chauth karna tha..toh kyun na hum in logon ke is baath par phir se bare fight karwale!... us ke dosre baar yeh kehne ke liye... aur phir ridz arima ke saath suye something like dat:S
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwww dat was very sweeet luvin ur part as usual rukz updte soooon

nizma x
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys please please dont make AR fight too big because we hate it when they fight, and yeah update super, super soon 😊

                thanks a lot Edited by mossfur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by: rukz

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great part Afreen....
</span><br><span>at first i thought u were a guy..u know..ur name is like that...i dint know u were a gal...hehe*
</span><br><span>Good Work </span>smileys/smiley36.gif">


really rukz...thank god ur doubt is cleared 😆 😆 😆 ..actually that is my sirname 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u all for ur lovely comments...i'll try to continue now 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr888888888888 amzng super duper prt........ luvd it 👏