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FF: Its in his Kiss...*Prt 15Pg139*14/04* (Page 63)

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
woooooooooooow kat
wat an update it was Clap
totaly marvelous..
i was really blushing reading all those parts heheh.WinkWink
luv it soooooooo much
n wat??? there is a bomb in riddhima's car..
wow. sounds total filmy hehehe..
eagerly waiting for the next part
luv ya
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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
kat!!!

it really was awesome!!
everythin happened soooooooooooooo fast..
luved d proxi scenez..ohh sooo adorable!!..
although i wud hve wanted 2 koe her reaction 2 kowin it was him...romeo!!
bt neways!!sooooo cute...i luv d way u describes him sleepin in her lapz..her shyness...her instance acceptance..her tryna give her time bt nt bein able 2 hold himself....her givin up d fight wit herself..if ter was ne!
ohhhh!!soooooo juicy!!ehheheh!!(tht was so random - bt yur update was juss 2 juicy!)

y does she hve 2 leave :(!!poor thin..wat is he gonna do without her....m nt much scared..hearin abt d bomb in her car..cuz if she dies..d fic ends... Wink
bt i surely wanna koe watz in yur mindz...curious 2 koe d twist...ohh her baby..might get hurt or smg...ohooooo!!!

update as soon as u can..m content 4 nw..tht was 1 heck of an update..wat was it..sum transit train!!

ohhhh luv yur fic...ur sucha charm!!!{miss yur bed time stories...think u can pen dwn another a of those kindz}

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
ok KAT dat was awesome dunno wat to say .............mindblowing now ridz know bout her romeo awww how cute n it was so romantic.....hey bomb in RD's car oh god Ouch
can't wait for the next part,

luv,
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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
amazing...mindblowing...i am speechless.this part was worth the wait.i guess we all should send the cops at ur place for planting a bomb in riddhima's car.please do continue soon.
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Posted: 09 July 2008 at 12:05am | IP Logged
Hello Kat Hug ,
Thank you so much for this lovely long part Clap
Loved the whole 1st night narration & there after... Wink there is no need for me to put my words here, cos you are the best when it comes to romantic scenes
The Stable scene was quite mind blowing too, the 1st morning of their married life & then seeing a new born, its irony, that a new relation has being born in them too
The whole party scene was good, & then him disclosing that he was her romeo was the best!!!
The Last part, where he gets a call saying that there is a bomb in Ridima's car & he bolts the door...so are you gonna turn him into bad...I hope not...or maybe I understood it wrong....
Thanks for the pm....
Thanks for making my morning even more lovely, however, that cliffhanger is deadly....in true senses....will wait for further parts...
take care
love
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Posted: 09 July 2008 at 12:18am | IP Logged
hey di

awwwwwwww...............

dat was cho cho sweeeeeeetttttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeee Embarrassed

juz luved it Clap

cont super soooooooooooonnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
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Posted: 09 July 2008 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Angry Angry Angry Di Im ready to kill!!!! how could you end it at such a crucial turning point Cry

hehe okay calming down (momentarily Wink ) LOL LOL That was such a 'choooooo chweeeeeet' kind of part LOL LOL In month they became so close that a weeks separation is killing them.. but whats with this bomb thing... please dont kill anyone off... i dont think i can take another Armaan crying scene, his cried enough in the real show, dont make it happen here please Ouch

So Ridz mum being close friends with Bua ji... hmm nice twist, does that mean Buaji will start liking Ridz and accepting her instead of helping Anji plot against her and get rid of her....

OMG it just occured to me, did Anjie have the bomb planted, or was it her parents Shocked otherwise how else could an outsider plant a bomb on a royal car.. its all security tight and stuff right, so only an insider can do such a thing....

uff okay before tempers hit a new high please continue soon

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Posted: 09 July 2008 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Updated comment finally !!(pg 59 LOL LOL LOL Sorry for the delay Kat!!

BTW one question i forgot to ask.....did he actually whisper my juliet to her??? And did she register it???


Edited by jia.. - 09 July 2008 at 5:12am

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