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meow23

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 11:25am | IP Logged
JUS CAME ACROSS DIS FF OF URS LOVED D STARTING IT WAS CUTE Smile REALLY LIKD D WAY U HAV PRESENTED D ENTIRE STORY N DO CONTD
THINK ABT D NAME L8R.
CONTD SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

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dilkeroshni

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 11:31am | IP Logged
watch this space Wink.. sorry its not so good... it was originally written for KIT but i changed it around so it goes with DMG hope you guys like it... criticism  is always welcome... Manny hope you don't mind that i am continuing..

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Aarman: aap ke liye to jaan bhi hazir hai sanam..

Ridhimaa: yeh filmi lines kisi aur ko jake bolo.. they have no affect on me…

Aarman moves in closer to Ridhimaa until his face is only a breath away from her..

Aarman: r u sure it has no affect on you dear…

Ridhimaa: stop it Aarman…(her breath hitches a bit at how close he is to her and she is suppressing a smile)

Ridhimaa: aneway at the party tonight I am going with sooraj.. a friend of mine…

Aarman : oh I see… in that case and he just leaves[**in his mind** now I will see how you will not say that you love me by the end of the party]


***Later that night at the party**

Ridhimaa walks in wearing a red and black sleeveless long dress which is
simple elegant, yet sexy.
( check it out here:
http://www.nexteve.com/images/D/F6226a.JPG)

Her jewelry is red and black hearts
(check it out here.. my fav
http://i3.iofferphoto.com/img/1120546800/_i/7329358/1.jpg )

Her hair is open with a silver/ red hair band
(check it out here
http://i98.photobucket.com/albums/l273/SouthenBelle121/batTi ara.jpg)

her shoes are high heels with a red bow on them
(check it out here
https://www.newagedesires.net/item_images/delight-615%20(2). jpg

please guys check out all the links it will give you a great image of
Ridhimaa's appearance)

At a party…. Ridhimaa walks in with sooraj…the first thing that she sees
makes her blood boil…
[Why is that witch flirting with my Aarman. Get your filthy hands off of him
you stupid witch… wait a minute.. since when did he become my Aarman??
Ridhimaa have you gone maad?]

Ridhimaa walks away from sooraj and
leaves him all alone.. She walks upto Aarman and sees that the girl has put her hand on Aarman's arm.. [ I will seriously kill this girl she thinks.. lemme cool down first]

(She takes a glass from the waiter near her and drinks.. then another
glass.. then another glass.. and then the waiter says miss I think you've
had enough. She replies with whats your problem.. obviously drunk)

Aarman sees this and is shocked speechless and is breathless b/c of her
appearance and beauty also he gets a bit worried abt his Ridhimaa and how she is acting but the other girl is sticking to him like glue..[ now how do I get rid of this churail.. sorry Ridhimaa I wanted to make you jealous..]

All of a sudden Ridhimaa starts to sing. Everyones attention goes to her..

Jawaani Jaan-e-man (points to Aarman) Haseen Dilruba (points to herself)
Milein Do Dil Jawaan Nisaar Ho Gaya ( circles around Aarman)
Jawaani Jaan-e-man (points to Aarman) Haseen Dilruba (points to herself)
Milein Do Dil Jawaan Nisaar Ho Gaya (circles around Aarman)
Shikaar Khud Yahaan Shikaar Ho Gaya ( points to herself)
Yeh Kya Sitam Huwa (raises her shoulders as she circles Aarman)
Yeh Kya zulam Huwa ( makes a sad face and goes to Atul)
Yeh Kya Ghazab Huwa (makes a surprised face and goes to Anjali)
Yeh Kaise Kab Huwa ( turns her hands so it looks like she is asking)
Na Jaanoon Main( moves her shoulder up and down and points to herself)
Na Jaane Woh, (moves her shoulder up and down and points to Aarman)
Aha
Jawaani Jaan-e-man (points to Aarman) Haseen Dilruba (points to herself)
Milein Do Dil Jawaan Nisaar Ho Gaya ( circles around Aarman and touches his chest)

Aayi Door Se Dekho Dilruba Aisi Turuturutu ( walks towards Aarman)
Khaayi Bezubaan Dil Ne Chot Yeh Kaisi ( puts her arms around his neck
and goes around in a circle)
Arre Woh,( points to Aarman) Haan Haan, ( moves her head up and down)
Mili Nazar ( outlines her eyes)
Arre Yeh, Haan Haan, Huwa Asar ( circles around Anjali and hugs her)
Nazar Nazar Mein Yeh Sama Badal Gaya ( opens her arm to indicate the surrounding)
Chalaaya Teer Jo Mujhi Pe Chal Gaya ( acts as if to take a shot at Aarman from a bow and arrow)
Ghazab Huwa, ( makes a surprised face) Yeh Kya Huwa,( looks shocked)
Yeh Kab Huwa ( asks Aarman)
Na Janoon Main ( points to herself) Na Jaane Woh, ( points to Aarman) Oho
Jawaani Jaan-e-man( points to ranbir) Haseen Dilruba (points to herself)
Milein Do Dil Jawaan Nisaar Ho Gaya ( moves her body up and down
Aarman's body)
Shikaar Khud Yahaan Shikaar Ho Gaya (puts her arms around Aarman's neck and moves in small steps with him.. in an eyelock)
Yeh Kya Sitam Huwa ( eyelock)
Yeh Kya Gulam Huwa (eyelock)
Yeh Kya Ghazab Huwa (eyelock)
Yeh Kaise Kab Huwa (eyelock)
Na Jaanoon Main Na Jaane Woh, Oho (eyelock)

Dil Yeh Pyaar Mein Kaise ( points to her heart)
Khota Hai Dekho, Aha Aha Aha Aha ( fingers walking towards Aarman)
Kaatil Jaan-e-man Kaise ( motion as if to stab her heart)
Hota Hai Dekho ( motions w/ her head)
Arre Woh, Haan Haan, Mila Sanam ( takes Aarman away from the girl)
Arre Yeh, Haan Haan, Huwa Sitam ( laughs and hugs Aarman)
Woh Dushman Jaana Dildaar Ho Gaya ( points at Aarman and puts his hand over her heart)
Ke Aaj Tak Bilkul Use Pyaar Ho Gaya ( kisses his cheek)
Ghazab Huwa, Yeh Kya Huwa, Yeh Kab Huwa ( makes a surprised face)
Na Janoon Main Na Jaane Woh, Aha ( moves her thumb in a no sign)
Jawaani Jaan-e-man ( points to Aarman) Haseen Dilruba (points to herself)
Milein Do Dil Jawaan Nisaar Ho Gaya( puts her arms around Aarman and
makes him take three small circle steps)
Shikaar Khud Yahaan Shikaar Ho Gaya ( moves her shoulders up and
down)
Yeh Kya Sitam Huwa ( looks in his eyes)
Yeh Kya Gulam Huwa ( they both move closer)
Yeh Kya Ghazab Huwa ( closer)
Yeh Kaise Kab Huwa ( closer)
Na Jaanoon Main Na Jaane Who ( can feel each others breaths and
heartbeats and as if they are alone in the room)

~*~*~*~*~**~*~*~**~*~*~*

and now someone else can continue... whew that took a while



Edited by dilkeroshni - 11 May 2008 at 11:47am

mannyz_1

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 11:36am | IP Logged

Originally posted by meow23

JUS CAME ACROSS DIS FF OF URS LOVED D STARTING IT WAS CUTE Smile REALLY LIKD D WAY U HAV PRESENTED D ENTIRE STORY N DO CONTD
THINK ABT D NAME L8R.
CONTD SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

ok meow23!!Tongue thanks i'm glad you thought it was cute!! naam baad mein sochlenge ok?LOLLOL

mannyz_1

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 11:37am | IP Logged
ok roshni waiting for your part! Wink

harshita_dmg

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 11:57am | IP Logged
wow
dat was a fabulous part Clap Clap Clap
plz continue

dilkeroshni

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by harshita_dmg

wow
dat was a fabulous part Clap Clap Clap
plz continue


thankx harshita_dmg that means alot

mannyz_1

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
kya part tha yaar!!! Clap awesome!!! other ppl contniue too. Tongue are you just going to let roshni do all the work? LOL LOL

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amazin guys

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