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Our FF : Hastey Hastey Hogaya Love!! (Page 20)

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:53am | IP Logged
awesum...very nice..luvd it..
cont soon

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hey kanika its really an awesome update really loved the way u wrote Clap
i should say hatss off to ur hard work really enjoyed it while reading and i loved the message a lot
and arman saying isse ache ladki..............
is awesome
thanks for pm
pls update it soon i really cant wait for confession scene
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nice part really good
thnx 4 the pm



Edited by mar- - 21 May 2008 at 9:06am
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hey awesome part!thanx 4th pm...plz continue fast
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Here's The Part: Confession-At last!!


Riddhima stepped out of the taxSmilei!...She went foward..She pressed the bell & waitedSmile..No Answer??Confused...She stood there till 10 minutesConfused..She then knocked the door but was shocked to notice that it was openConfused..She thought What if something has happened to Armaan?Or is he playing some prank?ConfusedOuch..She got tensed & opened the doorConfused..She entered..It was pitch darkConfused...She wasn't able to see anythingOuch..

Riddhima "Armaan...Armaan..Tum kahan ho?Ouch"...
No reply!Confused!
After sometime Riddhima "Armaan..tum kahan ho??"OuchConfused
Reply came "Tumhare Dil Mein!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed"
Riddhima shocked..She turned around & saw ArmaanEmbarrassed..

[& yes Ridz was wearing a White suit,the frock styleBig smile..Armaan was wearing a white shirt with blue jeansEmbarrassed..]

Riddhima "Armaan.....tum ye...Embarrassed"

Lights ONSmile!!!....Riddhima saw Armaan on the stairs smiling at her lovinglyEmbarrassed..She looked around & saw the whole living room was decorated with her PhotosEmbarrassed..From the dandiya & salsa as well as some of her basketball photosEmbarrassed...Some of the photos were enlargedEmbarrassed..There was a table in the middle on which was a framed photo keptEmbarrassed...She saw a beautiful picture of her's from the Salsa partyEmbarrassed..Below it was written "My Basket"EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..Riddhima looked up at ArmaanEmbarrassed..he came downEmbarrassed..

She was staring at himEmbarrassed..She was blushing as well as feeling awkwardEmbarrassed..
Armaan came near herEmbarrassed...He held her hand!Embarrassed
Riddhima gasped "T...Tumne mujhe kyun bulaya?"Embarrassed
Armaan "Aise hi!"...staring at her romanticlyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..
Riddhima "A..Aur ye sab kya hai?Embarrassed"
Armaan "Kyun main apne gulaam ki photos nahi laga sakta?"...coming closerEmbarrassed
Riddhima "Laga sakte ho!..Par ek reason bhi to hona chahiye"EmbarrassedWink
Embarrassed...
Armaan "Maine ye lagayi kyunki
main zindagi bhar tumhara chehra dekhna chahta hun!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..Aur vo itni jaldi thodi ho sakta hai to socha photos se hi kaam chala lun!EmbarrassedLOL"...More closerEmbarrassed..
Riddhima "A...Vo...Mujhe jaana hai"Embarrassed
Armaan "Kyun?"Smile
Riddhima thinking of an exuse "Di....wait kar rahi hongi..EmbarrassedWink"
Armaan smiled "Anjali ki night duty hai!"LOLEmbarrassed..coming more closer...Embarrassed
Riddhima looked downEmbarrassed...Armaan cornered herWink..Now she couldn't go anywhere..His both hands were around herEmbarrassed..

Armaan "Riddhima.Kab tak apne dil ki baat chupaogi..Ab keh bhi do!!"Embarrassed
Riddhima closed her eyes...Embarrassed
Armaan came even closerEmbarrassed...
Armaan "Bolo naa??WinkEmbarrassed"
Riddhima slowly "K..Kya?Embarrassed"
Armaan "
I Love UEmbarrassedEmbarrassed"
Riddhima gasped againEmbarrassed..
Armaan "Aakhir bol bhi doEmbarrassed"
Riddhima "Naa bolun to?"Embarrassed
Armaan "To..kuch nahi..."EmbarrassedLOL
Riddhima "Kya?..kuch nahi?.."ConfusedOuch

Armaan "Hmmm>..Kyunki agar tum nahi bhi kahogi tab bhi main jaanta hun ki tum mujhse pyaar to karti hi ho!"EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Ridz blushed..."Armaan..I..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed"
Armaan "I..."Embarrassed
Riddhima "I Love...."Embarrassed
Armaan "I love..."Embarrassed
Riddhima "I Love........My Papa!"LOLLOL..she started gigglingLOLLOL...

Armaan was shockedOuch...He thought she would surely say this timeOuch..
Armaan "Riddhima..."Confused

Riddhima stopped laughing & lowered her eyes "..Pehle tum kaho.."WinkEmbarrassed
Armaan "Aur vo kyun?"Embarrassed...he was caressing her cheek.Embarrassed.
Riddhima "Kyunki..Mujhe sharam aati hai!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed"
Armaan "Accha!..To meri pyaari si gulam ko sharam aati hai!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed"
Riddhima nodded smilingSmileEmbarrassed..Armaan came closerEmbarrassed..Now his lips were touching her earEmbarrassed...
Armaan "
I....Love...U"EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Riddhima closed her eyesEmbarrassed...
Armaan "Ab tum bolo...Wink"
Riddhima "
I Love u 2 Armaan!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed!"

Armaan was so happyBig smile..She hugged him tightlyEmbarrassed....Her arms were around his neck & head on his shoulderEmbarrassed...His arms were around her waistEmbarrassed..

Armaan "I love u very much RiddhimaEmbarrassed!.Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta.Embarrassed.."...

Riddhima smiled & hugged him tighter!EmbarrassedWink
Armaan kissed her on her headEmbarrassed..

Riddhima was so happy.Embarrassed.She felt as if a burden has been removedEmbarrassed..She knew she loved him more than anything so did heEmbarrassed..
He kissed her on her neck a few times from the back as she made herself comfortable in his arms while smiling & blushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedBig smile..

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

So How was it Guys??Big smile..I wrote a lonngggg part to satisfy u allWink..I didn't get enough comments on the previous partCry..Now i want more..plzz plzz commentBig smile..
If anyone doesn't continues till tomorrow or day after then i will do!LOLWink..Bcoz i love to continue here rather my own ffLOL..

& remember..The night is not over yet!..Embarrassed
Picture abhi baki hai mere doston..!LOL

So,the next person who continues should continue from their hugEmbarrassed!..
I hope its OkWink!...Its first time i'm writing a comfession scene.Confused.!

Do read & comment!
Take CareBig smile
Love KanuHeart



Edited by *K@nik@* - 21 May 2008 at 10:27am
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 9:42am | IP Logged

Originally posted by AngelicSoniya

awesum...very nice..luvd it..
cont soon

Thank UBig smile

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by urmila_17

hey kanika its really an awesome update really loved the way u wrote Clap
i should say hatss off to ur hard work really enjoyed it while reading and i loved the message a lot
and arman saying isse ache ladki..............
is awesome
thanks for pm
pls update it soon i really cant wait for confession scene

Thank u so much Urmi Di!....Big smile

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sacred shrine

hey awesome part!thanx 4th pm...plz continue fast

ThanksBig smile

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