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FF:What may happen next -Part 4 Updated

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 5:25am | IP Logged

Moving on from the May 9 episode where some forum members are hoping for roothna-manana scenes between S/U. Currently I dont feel inspired but I still hope you all like it:

Part 1:
Its dinner time and Sandeep is working on his computer. He thinks its better to get his work done before Urmi comes with his dinner. Once she is there he wont be able to get a single thing done. There is a knock on the door. Sandeep thinks its Urmi. He asks the caller to come in...the door is open. The caller is Sujata.
S: Arre aunty aap ne kyun taqleef kiya...mujhe keh diya hota...main chala aata.
Sujata: Koi baat nahin Sandeep. Waise tum ne aaj bahut achcha kaam kiya.
Sandeep smiles.
S: Aunty kya hua...Urmi nahin aayi?
Sujata: Haan...woh uske sar mein dard hain. Isi liye so gayi. Lagta hain tumhe sirf Urmi ka khana padosna hi pasand hain.
S: Nahin aisi baat nahin hain aunty.
Sujata: To phir baitho main pados deti hoon.
S: Nahin aunty main baad mein kha longa...abhi bhookh nahin hain. Urmi ne toh dinner kar liya na?
Sujata: Nahin woh aise hi so gayi.
S: Aunty agar meri zaroorat ho to..
Sujata: Tumhe bula longi. Tum chinta mat karo. Main chalti hoon.
The next morning Sandeep gets up and makes tea for himself. As his habit he goes to the balcony with the newspaper and sits down so that he can get a strategic view of Urmi's balcony. He keep looking for her from time to time but she hasnt come out as she usually does every morning. He wonders if she is really sick. He gets up and calls up Sujata.
S: Aunty main Sandeep...Urmi kaisi hain?
Sujata: Uth gayi hain...college ke liye taiyyar ho rahi hain.
Urmi is coming out of her room.
S: Ab kaisi tabiyat hain uski?
Sujata: Lo usi se pooch lo.
She gives the phone to Urmi and says 'Sandeep'.
U: Kahiye...
S: Ab sardard kaisa hain?
U: Thik hoon.
S: Tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahin ki tumhare sar mein dard hain?
U: Aap ko kya farak padta? Achcha mujhe late ho raha hain. Main phone rakh rahi hoon.
She puts down the phone and Sandeep wonders what happened. Then he remembers their fight the previous day. Sandeep had thought she would have forgotten about it by now maybe she is still angry over it.
Urmi comes down looking pretty in a yellow shalwar. The deewane as usual drool over her. She gives them a fake smile. Sandeep is coming down and sees her. Their eyes meet and he starts going towards her when he sees Kavita and Gayatri in their porch. Urmi is disappointed at his hesitation and gets into a rickshaw and goes away.
Later that day Urmi is coming out with some of her friends from the college. She turns when hears someone call her. Its Sandeep. Her friends ask Urmi who is the guy. Urmi says its Sandeep babu. Now they want to be introduced to him. So Urmi has no choice but to introduce her friends to him. Sandeep greets everyone. Finally the girls take their leave. After they go Urmi also starts to walk away.
S: Urmi...ruko toh..mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hain.
He stops her by holding her hand.
S: Suno...I am sorry. Mujhe tumse aise baat nahin karni chaiye thi...
Urmi ignores him and walks away. She hails a rickshaw and gets in. Sandeep comes after her in his bike.
S: Urmi mujh se baat to karo.
Urmi ignores him and asks the rickshawallah to drive fast. The rickshawallah who had been seeing all this stops the rickshaw and says.
Rickshawallah: Oh babu...dekhne mein to sharif lagte ho...par ladki ko pareshan karte ho.
S: Dekhiye...yeh hamara aapas ka mamla hain. Yeh meri hone wali patni hain.
Urmi is surprised and a little elated.
Rickshawallah: Kyun memsaab yeh babu thik keh rahe hain kya?
By now few people had gathered around them. Sandeep is embarrassed. He looks around and finds Urmi watching him.
U: Haan yeh sahi keh rahe hain.
Rickshawallah: Tab toh memsaab yeh hanuman prabhu shri raam aur sita maiyya ko apni rickshaw mein zaroor bithata par mujhe lagta hain aapko babu ki baat sun leni chaiye.
Sandeep and Urmi smile at his words. Sandeep gets down from his bike and gives her his hand. She gets down from the rickshaw and sits on his bike. Sandeep tells the onlookers.
Chaliye..chaliye...paisa vasool ho gaya...ab sab log apna apna kaam kijiye. They go from there.
Sandeep stops the bike near a pani puri guy.
S: Yahan ki pani puri bahut achchi hain.
Saying so he orders for 1 plate of pani puri for Urmi and they stand near the pani puri stall.
U: Aap nahin lenge?
S: Tum khao.
S: Dekho Urmi I am really sorry...
Urmi gives him a 'I know you will never change' look.
S: Dekho Urmi aisi baat nahin hain ki mujhe parwah nahin hain ki hamari shaadi ho rahi hain ya nahin.
U: Aapke baton se aur aapke bartav se toh aisa nahin lagta...jab hum bahar milte hain uski planning hamesha main hi karti hoon. Aur aajkal toh hum kabhi bahar milte hi nahin. Aur woh akhri baar kab tha jab aapne mujhse pyaar se baatein ki ho...ya phir pyaar se dekha bhi?
S: Dekho Urmi tumhari mummy hum par bahut bharosa karti hain. Hamare rishte ke baare mein unhe pata hote hue bhi woh tumhe mere ghar bhejti hain. Main unke vishwas ko thes nahin pahunchana chahta hoon. Aur main nahin chahta ki koi tum par ungli uthaye. Hume abhi tak Rasik uncle ki manzoori nahin mili. Main chahta hoon ki woh khushi khushi iss rishte ko manzoori de. Na ki iss majboori mein ki tumhari badnami ho rahi hain.
Urmi(smiling and holding his hand): Aap chinta mat kijiye...aisa hi hoga...aur agar nahin hua toh...
S: Plan B?
They start laughing...
U: Pani puri bahut achchi hain. Yeh lijiye.
She offers him one pani puri and he eats it. A lock of hair falls over her eyes and irritates her. Sandeep moves it away and touches her hair lightly.

A little away the stunned deewane are watching hiding from behind a wall. They can see only Sandeep but can see only Urmi's back.
Hari: Sandeep bhaiyya ek ladki ke saath...
Rahul: Vishwas nahin ho raha hain
Mushtaq: Ki woh bhi hamare tarah niklenge.
Hari: Woh toh humse aage hain. Hum kabhi kisi ladki ko bahar ghumane leke aaye hain?
Jugle: Oye yaar! Iska matlab hamari bhabhi jald hi aane wali hain.
Mushtaq: Haan yaar! Yaani ki Colnelgunj mein jald hi ek aur shaadi meri aur Urmi ke sivay.
Hari: Abey meri aur Urmi ki shaadi.
Rahul: Arre tum log mat lado...iska matlab yeh hua ki Urmi ke darwaze par jo line khadi hain usme se sab pehla number jiska hain woh hat gaya.
The deewane are very happy and they give hi5s to each other.
Rahul: Chal...pata toh hona chaiye ki ladki kaun hain... warna Sandeep bhaiyya ki shaadi kaun karwayega?
Hari: Pichli baar ki tarah yeh ladki haath se nahin jaani chaiye...jab agrawali ne mana kiya tha Sandeep bhaiyya ko tab to main darr hi gaya tha.
Mushtaq: Haan...chal..chal dekhte hain kaun hain.
They all come out to find Sandeep and the 'mystery girl' not there.
Mushtaq: Arre kahan gaye?
Hari: Yahin kahin honge aas paas...chalo dhondte hain.
They get into Jugle and Hari's bikes.
Jugle: Waise yaar woh ladki kuch jaani pehchani nahin lag lag rahi thi?
Hari: Abbe chup...kuch bhi bolta rehta hain.


Part 2:

Later in the night...
The deewane return to CG.
Rahul: Bahut doondh liya...arre woh dekho Sandeep bhaiyya ke bike. Aur hum poora sheher unhe doondhte rahe.
They get down from their bikes and sit by the fountain.
Mushtaq: Uff thak gayye.
Hari: Par ab hume yeh kaise pata chalega ki woh ladki kaun thi? Akhir humara bhi koi farz banta hain. Agar Sandeep bhaiyya mohalle walon se kehne se sharma rahe ho toh.
Jugle: Main na...daddyji se baat karta hoon.
Mushtaq: Aur jab woh poochenge woh ladki kaun hain tab kya kahega?
Jugle: Daddyji Sandeep bhaiyya se direct pooch lenge na.
Hari: Aur unhone kuch nahin bataya toh? Akhir ek baar unki mangni tooti hain.
Rahul: Toh phir karenge kya?
Hari: Sandeep bhaiyya pe nazar rakhni hogi..akhir woh uss ladki se doobara zaroor milenge.

The deewane see Urmi passing by with Sandeep's tiffin and they go and block her way.
Jugle(with his typical drooling expression): Hello Urmi
U(with her fake smile): Hello Jugle
Rahul: Tum Sandeep bhaiyya ke liye dinner leke jaa rahi ho?
U: Nahin main itni raat ko unke liye breakfast leke jaa rahi hoon.
Jugle: Waise Urmi bahut jald hi tumhe yeh sab baar baar Sandeep bhaiyya ke ghar nahin jaana padega unko tiffin dene.
U: Haan...yeh to tum sach keh rahe ho.
Deewane: Kya?

Sandeep comes out in his balcony and sees Urmi talking to the deewane.
S: Urmi!
U: Abhi aati hoon. (To the deewane) Ab main chalon?
They give her way. Urmi goes and they keep staring at her back till she disappears from view.
The deewane again sit by the fountain.
Jugle: Tum logon ko nahin lagta uss ladki ka hair style bilkul Urmi jaise hain.
Rahul: Ab tu yeh kahega woh ladki Urmi hi thi...kuch toh sharam karo...Sandeep bhaiyya mohalle ki ladki aise thode hi milenge kisi ko bina bataye?
Hari: Nahin magar tum logon ne ek baat notice ki kya Urmi ko uss ladki ke baare mein pata hain?
Rahul: Pata ho bhi sakta hain...
Mushtaq: Par hume pata kaise chalega?
Jugle: Oye! Urmi ko pata hain toh daddyji ko bhi pata hoga...main ek kaam karta hoon...main na direct daddyji se pooch leta hoon.
Hari: Mujhe nahin lagta ki unhe pata hain...agar hota toh woh baat nahin chalate Sandeep bhaiyya ki. Hume na Urmi se poochna chaiye.
Rahul: Par poochega kaun.
The other 3 look at Jugle.

Meanwhile at Sandeep's house Urmi is serving him dinner.
U: Chaliye...aaj poora khatam kijiye. Main ne dekha ki aap ne lunch bhi thik se nahin kiya.
S: Haan..woh kaam tha. Arre tum jaa rahi hoon kya? Baitho na kuch der.
U: Pappa mujhse kuch hisaab karwana chahte hain khane se pehle...mujhe jaana hoga.
S: Toh phir rehne do..ab mat padoso...main baad mein khaa longa.
U: Nahin aap khaa lijiye...main baithi hoon. Pappa ko phone kar deti hoon.
Urmi calls up home and tells Rasik that Sandeep is showing her some new CDs. They will do the hisaab-kitaab after dinner. Sandeep sits down and starts having his dinner. Urmi sits with him and looks at him silently.
S(feeling conscious): Kya hain...?
U: Aaj aapne uss rickshewalleh ko kaha ki main aapki hone wali patni hoon.
S: Haan toh?
U: Sandeep babu...aapne pehli baar kisi anjaan aadmi se yeh baat kahi.
S: Uh-oh...
U: Achcha Sandeep babu ek baat bataiye...apne CG mein sab se pehle hamare baare mein kisko bataya.
S: Kise batonga...apne aap ko.
U: Nahin...apne ilawa...rukiye...main guess karti hoon...aap jaise sharif aadmi ne sabse pehle bauji ko hi bataya hoga jab unhone aapki mangni karni chahi.
S: Nahin...bauji ko nahin.
U: Toh phir kisse...oh Sukkaji se?
S: Nahin.
U: Unhe bhi nahin? Toh phir kisse? Mujhe toh sabse aakhir mein bataya tha.
S: Devyaniji ko. Tumhare birthday par.
U: Kya! Mere birthday par. Usse toh bite 6 mahine se upar ho gaya. Aur mujhe itne der se bataya. Kyun?
S: Urmi dekho..bachchon se aisi baatein nahin ki jaati.
U: Kya? Main bachchi nahin hoon!

Saying so she gets up and leaves in a huff.
S: Urmi! Urmi!
Then he starts laughing.

Part 3:

Urmi comes down the stairs angrily. The the deewane are standing in Jugle's porch. They push him to go talk to Urmi but Jugle keeps saying 'Nahin! Nahin!'. Finally they push him hard and he comes and almost falls in front of Urmi.
U: Jugle!
J: Hello Urmi! Tumse se ek baat karni thi?
U: Kya hua?
J(thinking how to start the topic): Urmi nai film ki DVD ayi hain. Tumhe zaroor pasand ayegi.
U: Kaun si film?
J: Bhoothnath...bahut achchi film hain Urmi.
U: Kya? Bachchon ki film. Main bachchi hoon kya?
J: Urmi tum ladki ho.
Urmi starts walking away.
J: Urmi! Urmi!
Urmi still walks away and Jugle's friends come and join him.
Hari: Iss bewakoof se yeh kaam nahin hoga yeh to hume pehle hi pata hona chaiye tha.
Mushtaq: Haan! Ek choti si baat nahin pooch saka...aur naraz kar diya meri Urmi ko.
J: Tum logon ko agar itni achchi tarah se baat karna aata hain toh phir kisne mana kiya.
Rahul: Main jab Urmi se baat karonga na betelal tab sab ki bolti bandh ho jayegi.
His friends give him a 'Oh Please' look.
Mushtaq: Par ab hum kya karenge?
Rahul: Ek kaam karte hain...Sandeep bhaiyya zaroor uss ladki se milte hain. Hum un pe nazar rakhte hain. Kabhi na kabhi toh hume pata chal hi jayega ki woh kaun hain.
The others agree and they join hands.
 
At the Mehta Urmi enters to find her parents watching TV.
Su: Arre beta tu aa gayi. Chal khana padosti hoon.

Later at dinner...
R: Beta tu na zara Sandeep ko samjha.
U: Kya pappa?
R: Yahi ki ab yeh gana wana chod ke kuch dhande ke baare mein soche. Achche khase teen crore mil rahe the use. Woh bhi usne daan kar diye.
Su: Arre..achcha hi toh kiya usne...sab kitni tareef kar rahe the uski.
R: Woh sab toh thik hain...par use chalo poora nahin toh kuch paise to apne liye rakhna chaiye tha. Kuch business shuru kar deta unn paison se. Main hi usse guide deta. Iss ladke ko na apni koi phikar nahin.
Sujata and Urmi give each other worried glances. 


The next morning Sandeep makes tea for himself, picks up the newspaper and sits in his balcony and starts reading the paper. Urmi comes out to her balcony and looks at him. Sandeep notices this and changes his position in such a way that his back is turned towards her. Urmi is annoyed. Sandeep's landline starts ringing. Sandeep goes and picks up the phone.
U: Maine aapko maaf kiya.
S: Excuse me!
U: Waise main aapko bata rahi hoon ki meri saheli aur main aaj college ke baad Indiranagar wale Gowri Mandir jaa rahe hain.
S: Toh phir jao na...mujhe kyun bata rahi ho?
U: Aap nahin puchenge kyun jaa rahi hoon?
S: Tum toh bina pooche hi bataogi.
U: Woh iss liye meri saheli Priya ne wahan pe mannat mangi thi jo ab poori ho gayi. Woh aapka dost hain na Vijay usse shaadi ki mannat.
S: Matlab tum aur tumhari saheliyan sab ek type ki? Birds of the same feather flock together.
U: Thik jaise aap aur Vijay. Dekhiye agle hafte unki shaadi hain. Aur Priya chahti hain ki Vijay aur woh ek saath pooja karein. Isiliye aap Vijay ko wahan le kar ayenge.
S: Kyun woh khud nahin aa sakta?
U: Agar woh khud aa jayega toh aap kaise ayenge?  
S: Yeh mannat wali baat tumhare mummy ko pata hain?
U: Aap bhi na Sandeep babu...mandir aa rahe hain bass...wahan pe hum bhi apni shaadi ki mannat mangenge ki pappa jald hi raazi ho jaye. Chaliye main rakhti hoon phone.
S: Hmmm.

 

In the evening Sandeep is running late. He gets on to his bike to meet Urmi. Jugle notices this from his DVD shop.
J: Sandeep bhaiyya! Sandeep bhaiyya! Rukiye!
S: Kya hain Jugle?
J: Sandeep bhaiyya aap kahan jaa rahe hain?
S: Main apne dost se milne jaa raha hoon.
Jugle looks around and notices his friends are nowhere to be seen. He thinks 'Yeh gadhe kahan gaye iss waqt?'. Then thinks he must delay Sandeep.
Ju: Sandeep bhaiyya nai film aayi hain. Aapko bahut pasand aayegi.
S(irritated): Jugle...main filmein nahin dekhta.
J: Aap dekhiye toh sahi. Waise aap jaa kahan rahe hain.
S: Indiranagar. Mera dost Vijay rehta hain wahan par. Aur kuch?
Jugle's friends still havent come.
J: Ek minute rukiye na Sandeep bhaiyya. Main aapko DVD dikhata hoon.
Jugle goes inside and tries to delay Sandeep by pretending to look around for the DVD.
S(sternly): Jugle!
J(having no other go): Yeh lijiye. Mil gayi...maine khaas aapke liye nikal kar rakhi thi.
Sandeep sees the DVD.
S: Yeh picture na Urmi ko bahut pasand aayegi. Tum meri taraf se usse kehna ki woh isse zaroor dekhe.
Jugle looks down and now sees he has again taken out the DVD of Bhoothnath. Sandeep starts his bikes and goes away. Jugle screams 'Sandeep bhaiyya! Sandeep bhaiyya! Yeh woh DVD nahin hain' and runs behind Sandeep. But Sandeep ignores him and leaves.

From the other end Jugle friends come.
J: Arre kahan gaye the tum log? Sandeep bhaiyya abhi gaye hain.
H: Unhone kaha kuch kahan jaa rahe hain?
J: Indiranagar...apne dost Vijay ke ghar.
R: Par shayad woh uss ladki se milne gaye hain.
M: Haan hume jakar dekhna chaiye ki woh sach much apne dost se milne gaye hain ya nahin. Lekin hum kahan kahan dhoondege unhe?
J: Daddyji ko zaroor pata hoga Vijay kahan rehta hain.
H: Toh phir jaa...pooch.
J: Nahin! Kya kahonga main kyun janna chahta hoon?
R: Yeh na iski bass ki baat nahin. Yeh kaam toh mere jaisa actor hi kar sakta hain. Tum bachche ruko main abhi aata hoon.
Rahul goes and meets Sukka inside his house. He is back after 10 mins with the required information.
R: Chalo betelal.


Meanwhile Sandeep and Urmi are at the temple with Priya and Vijay. They perform the puja while Sandeep-Urmi watch them.
U: Ek din hum bhi aise hi apni mannat poori hone ki pooja karenge.
The other couple complete their pooja. The four start exchanging notes. Priya and Vijay insist both of them must come together to their marriage. Urmi quickly promises them on Sandeep and her behalf.

The deewane meanwhile reach the temple.
H: Vijay ke ghar se pata chala woh log isi mandir mein aaye hain.
Rahul: Woh dekho Sandeep bhaiyya ek ladki ke saath(Sandeep is talking to Priya).
J: Urmi...?
His friends notice Urmi also there talking to Vijay.
M: Haan ab yaad aaya...yeh Priya shayad Urmi ki saheli hain.
H: Isiliye usse Sandeep bhaiyya aur Priya ke baare mein pata hain.
J: Lekin woh Vijay kya kar raha hain.
H: Sandeep bhaiyya usse aise hi laye honge taaki Urmi ko company mil jaaye.
J: Lekin Urmi ko company dene ke liye woh mujhe bhi keh sakte the.
R: Yeh toh woh tab kehte jab woh chahte ki Urmi darr ke bhaag jaye.

They see the two couples come out and hide behind a tree. The men arrange and rickshaw for the girls and they leave. The men also leave in their respective bikes.

H: Chalo film khatam ho gayi. Ab ghar chaltein hain aur aage ki soche.

Part 4:

In the night the deewane are sitting on Jugle's porch.
J: Ab hum kya karein?
M: Kya karein matlab? Bhaijaan ka rishta leke jaate hain Priya ke ghar aur kya?
H: Abey tu jayega rishta lekar? Hum sab kafi mashoor hain iss seher mein. Koi hume seriously nahin lega.
J: Toh phir daddyji se baat karein?
R: Kya tu har waqt daddyji...daddyji karta rehta hain. Main maa se baat karta hoon. Akhir iss mohalle mein saare rishte woh hi karwati hain. 
H: Tum logon ko kya lagta hain...kya Priya hi woh ladki hain. Mera matlab hain dono ko dekh kar lag nahin raha tha ki unke beech aisa rishta hain. Dekha nahin Sandeep bhaiyya Priya se kitne door khade the.
J: Haan yaar...usse toh Sandeep bhaiyya Urmi ke zyada paas khade the.
R: Arre chup kar! Kuch bhi bolta hain. Isse koi yahan se le jao.
M: Toh phir kare kya?
H: Ek kaam karte hain...hum na thode din ruk jaate hain. Thoda confirm karte hain Sandeep bhaiyya par nazar rakh ke. Agar baat galat nikli toh iss baar Jugle ke saath hum bhi pitenge. Aur Sandeep bhaiyya bhi peetne walon mein shamil ho jayenge.

Few days later...
Sandeep and Urmi are having tea at his house. Sandeep is busy with his computer.
U: Sandeep babu..suniye na!
S: Hmm...Kya?
U: Aapko pata hain kal kya hain?
S: Kya hain...tumhara birthday aane mein to waqt hain. Toh phir kya hain?
U: Kal Priya ki shaadi hain.
S: Oh haan..main toh bhool hi gaya tha.
U: Aap jaa rahe hain na?
S: Ofcouse! Mere dost ki shaadi hain.
U: Toh phir thik hain hum dono saath mein wapas aa jayenge.
This catches Sandeep's attention.
S: Oh madam! Aap hosh mein to hain na? Hum saath mein itni raat ko wapas ayenge toh pata hain mohalle wale kya sochenge?
U: Itni raat ko koi hume dekhega bhi nahin.
S: Dekho tum na din ba din laparwah hote jaa rahi ho. Hum ne kya tai kiya tha? Jab tak tumhari mummy tumhare papa se baat nahin kar leti hamare baare mein yeh batein unki kaano nahin pahunchna chaiye. Isiliye tum apne raste aur main apne raste.
U: Aap ek ladki ko itni raat ko akele bhejenge.
S: Tum wahan se 7 baje tak nikal jaogi. Main tumhe rickshew par bitha donga aur vellon se kahonga ki woh tumhare saath jae.
U: Kya! Aap kaise aadmi hain...aap mujhe unke saath bhejna chahte hain.
Sandeep gets up from his chair and comes close to her.
S: Sach kahon toh main tumhe haq se apne saath wahan leke jana chahta hoon...aur usi haq se ghar wapas lana chahta hoon.
U(huskily): Sach
Sandeep nods his head and turns away.
U: Toh phir kaun rok raha hain? Sandeep babu itna achcha mauka mila hain. Chaliye na enjoy karte hain.
S: Achcha! Kaise enjoy karenge? Hindi filmon ki tarah hum dono saath mein nachenge-gayenge. Shaadi mein sab log hamari jodi ki tareef karenge.
U: Hai sach!
S: Phir mohalle walon ko hi nahin...pore sheher ko hamare rishte ke baare mein pata chal jayega.
U: Main kuch nahin jaanti...main chahti hoon ki hum dono saath mein ghar wapas aaye. Bus!
S: Urmi suno...
U(cuting him): Agar aap mujhe wapas leke nahin aaye toh main wahin reh jaongi...ghar wapas nahin aaongi.
S: Dekho function hall wale function khatam hone ke baad hall bandh karna chahenge.
U: Main bahar khadi rahongi.
S: Urmi yeh kya bachpana hain? Main kaise aisa kar sakta hoon.
U: Yeh sochna aapka kaam hain. Hamare relationship mein sochne aur karne ka kaam ab tak maine hi kiya hain. Ab aapki baari.
Urmi gets up and goes and Sandeep looks up to the Almighty for delieverance.

The next evening Jugle is at his DVD shop. He notices Sandy wearing festive clothes.
S: Jugle woh zara gadi ki chabhi dena.
J: Aap kahin jaa rahe hain.
S: Main kuch dino se dekha raha hoon ki main tu mere aane jane par nazar rakh raha hain. Main Priya ki shaadi mein jaa raha hoon. Ab chabhi milegi.
J(in a dazed state) takes out the keys and gives it to Sandeep. Sandeep takes the keys and goes to Urmi's house. It takes a while for Jugle to come out his dazed state. Finally he regains sense of his surroundings and decides to go in search of his friends. After searching for them frantically he finally manages to find them.
J: Arre kahan chale jaate ho tum log jab zaroorat padti hain.
R: Isko kya hua?
J: Sandeep bhaiyya shaadi kar rahe hain.
The other three are now shocked.
H: Yeh tu kya keh raha hain?
J: Unhone khud mujhse kahan ki woh Priya ke shaadi mein jaa rahe hain. Unhone ne gaddi ki chabhi bhi mangi.
Mushtaq: Iska matlab woh bhaag kar shaadi kar rahe hain.
H: To phir chalon hum kya kar rahe hain yahan par. Aisi shaadiyon mein kisi zimmedaar nagrik ka gawah banna zaroori hain. Sandeep bhaiyya ko hamari zaroorat padegi.
J: Nahin yaar! Yeh shaadi nahin ho sakti.
R: Ab tu kyun villian ban raha hain?
J: Mere sapno ka kya hoga?
M: Kaise sapne?
J: Yahi ki main Sandeep bhaiyya ke shaadi mein khoob nachonga. Maine to gaane bhi soch kar rakhe the. Ab sab kuch chaupat ho jayega.
R: Dekh Jugle ek baar shaadi ho jane de...phir CG mein hum unki shaadi doobara dhoom-dham se karwenge. Tu tab naach lena.
J: Aur aisa nahin hua toh?
R: Betelal tujhe kya lagta hain Bauji aur Sukka uncle bina dhoom dham se shaadi karwaye chod denge kya.
They start to leave.
R: Par Urmi?
M(proudly): Haan yaad aaya...aaj subah jab tum log so rahe the ghode bech kar woh kahin jaa rahi thi...maine poocha toh usne bataya uski kisi saheli ki shaadi hain. Uske baad se dikhi nahin.
H: Woh saheli Priya hi hogi. Chalo jaldi kartein hain. Shayad hume Sandeep bhaiyya ki madad karte dekh woh impress ho jaaye.


Meanwhile at the marriage Urmi is impatiently waiting for Sandeep.
Priya: Urmi tu baith na...aa jayenge.
U: Par kab? Shaadi khatam jo jayega tab?
Urmi is unable to sit still. She gets up and goes near the entrance where Priya's parents are welcoming the guests. Finally Sandeep comes there. He greets Priya's father and walks in. Urmi is very happy. She goes near him only to stop short on seeing her parents enter behind.
Rasik: Arre Urmi beta. Tu itna hi chahti thi ki hum bhi teri saheli ki shaadi mein aaye toh pehle bata deti. Main market nahin jaata aur hume aane mein itni der nahin hoti.
U: Pappa woh...
Rasik notices Priya's parents and Sujata and Rasik go to greet them.
U(sternly): Sandeep babu.
S(hiding a smile): Tum chinta mat karo hum dono saath mein hi ghar lautenge...jab bhi tum chaho.
U: Yeh cheating hain.
S: Not at all...tumne yeh toh nahin kaha tha ki tum SIRF mere saath ghar lautna chahti ho.
Urmi wants to say something but her parents join them. The four go to wish the newly weds and mingle with the guests. Sandeep all the while avoids Urmi. Urmi is annoyed but she is helpless.

Meanwhile the deewane reach the function hall.
H: Yaar! Mujhe yeh sun kar bahut dhakka laga ki Priya ki shaadi Vijay se ho rahi hain.
M: Haan yaar! Uss zalim ne Sandeep bhaijaan ko dhoka de diya.
R: Lagta hain Sandeep bhaiyya akhri baar shaadi rokne ki koshish karne aaye hain.
They enter the function hall to be greeted by Priya's parents.
Priya's father: Aap log Priya ke dost hain.
J: Nahin ji.
Rahul(hitting Jugle with his elbow): Ji uncle hum uske college mein padte hain.
Priya's father: Aaiye! Aaiye! Khana zaroor khake jaiye.
M: Ji..ji.

They enter and look around to find Sandeep. While they are looking they suddenly find Jugle staring at something. They turn in the direction where he is looking and see Sandeep with Vijay patting him. The four keep staring at Sandeep when someone calls out 'Jugle'. They turn and see Rasik calling them.
Rasik: Tum log yahan?
Deewane(fumbling): Haan uncle woh...
Rasik: Arre chalo hum log khaane jaa rahe hain. Tum bhi hamare saath chalo.

Sandeep by now has come down. He too sees the deewane. Urmi joins them.
S: Tum log? Tum log agar aa hi rahe the toh keh diya hota. Hum saath mein hi aa jate.
Rasik: Ab chalo khane.
The deewane go first followed by Rasik and Sujata. Sandeep and Urmi fall at the back.
U: Sandeep babu yeh phir koi mazaak hain kya?
S: Mujhe nahin pata tha yeh log aa rahe hain. Par chalo achcha hua...back seat par tumhe company mil jayegi.
U: Agar aapne mujhe back seat mein bithaya na. Main aapke saath front seat mein baithongi. Samajh gaye aap? Sirf aap aur main.
Sandeep nods his head.


 

 



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Wah Ksh, It feels like ages since I've read one of your FFs....I loved it..just the way I'd expect him to act! Embarrassed Now I want to see the next part..where the deewane find out that the girl is no other than their very own Urmi....
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writing deewane scenes are really the toughest...let me see if i can do it. actually i wasnt going to write this one...but this suddenly struck me and i couldnt rest till i wrote it. LOL
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I know, I found the deewane one the hardest part of my MOTW FFs. But you've got a knack for them Embarrassed

I'm glad you were struck by the writing bug! Part 4 of mine keeps trying to grab my attention but I just dont have the inspiration yet...
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shreya,

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u got me really emotional! when o when will sandeep act half as sensible as this!!!

but gotto confess - when I was reading it - enjoyed it thoroughly!!! seriously! and ur dreams coming true here! what fun! deewane on investigation mission! LOL

Plz shrey, continue this.. and I tell u right now looking ffd to ur next part more than next chabi episode.

this was such a releif from all the stress i m going thru'..

love you! Hug
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love u too...actually that was one of the reasons for writing the FF...not only did i get the writing ka keeda in me...but also thought mere sapne toh serial mein sach nahin honge...so let me write a FF and make them come true.

btw the diwali episode reminded me that of late there have hardly been any scenes between sandy and the deewane. the sandy-jugle scene in the diwali episode was hilarious. sandy's expression were classic....it was like he was thinking 'why have all the weirdos landed in my house'.



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I know.. and he was in such a beautiful state at that time.. that he was enjoying everything (not screaming at everyone for a change) and also got quite annoyed with jugle when he was disturbing urmi for some rocket bottle purpose. Tongue

I m sick of this current sandy i tell u. he is the most depressing person to have around u lately..

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Originally posted by kshreya2002

btw the diwali episode reminded me that of late there have hardly been any scenes between sandy and the deewane. the sandy-jugle scene in the diwali episode was hilarious. sandy's expression were classic....it was like he was thinking 'why have all the weirdos landed in my house'.

LOL That he did LOL...I think the Sandy-Jugle chemistry used to be good too, even recently when Pammi was threatening to go maike and Sandy was stood in the doorway talking to Jugle in isharas... More of those too please...

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