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FF: Prem and Heer's Love

Durga1191 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:17pm | IP Logged

HEY GUYS I KNOW THERE ARE MANY Fan Fic but I made this so that we don't get bored on the weekend.

 

IN THIS FF AFTER THE REGULAR EPISODES ARE DONE WE MAKE OUR OWN AND WRITE ABOUT IT.

HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT. Wink

if some one is interested please do write. Big smile

 

I'll start the first one

this is from the thursday episode

Heer opens the door and finds no one , she decides to look in the room

H: yaha toj koi bhi nahi hain

She looks around in closet and under the bed and she finds drugs

Just then the police comes and sees her with the drugs and money

PO: hands up u are under arrest

H: maine kuch nahi kiya, woh.....woh toh woh ladki yaha

PO: joh bhi kehna hain police station main jakar kaho

H (crying): lekin maine...

PO: arrest her

PO: hume pure hotel ki talshi leni hogi

M: ok hum subko inform karde te hain

the police officer comes to Prems room and finds the papers and thinks that Prem is also involved in it , so they go to prems house and arrest him as well. Everyone in his family is shocked and can't do anything b/c all the evidence is against him

At the police station Heer and Prem see each other

P: heer tum yaha

PO: oh hello ab baat band, aur tum bhi andar band. Koi tumhe nahi nikal sakta

inside the jail Heer tells prem what she has seen for the last few days and tonight.

P: (angrily yells at her )heer tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi

H: (crying) mujhe nahi .........pata

P:( feels bad and goes towards her) heer iam really sorry

H: nahi mujhe batana chahiye tha

P: nahi mujhe shanti se

H: nahi maine kaha na

they both look at each other and stare for 5 min

the night is going very slowly and heer is walking around the jail and she was about to fall when prem catches her and they just look at each other 

PO: loh yaha police station main romance chal raha hain.

any 1 plz continue

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
awsome fanfic great work yaar Clap Clap keep it up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
Durga1191 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
thanx Big smile
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
awesome job!! Clap Big smile Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwww
too good yaar
sure i wil continue later.i just came form party now.so too lazy for it. Big smile Wink
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
wow....it was so cute.....i jsut loved it...i hope sania continues soon...lols....hehe..

luv nans
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
hehe don't worry i will 2tommriow okie.
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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 4:54am | IP Logged
awww fanks for this... sooo kool
yeh plz do continue soon LOL LOL

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