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FF-SAATH...wid u alwys[part29UPDATEDpg21] (Page 3)

reema2000 Senior Member
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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
ohmygosh... this sounds like a good upcoming ff... keep it up and continue soon! =D

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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
this is really good please continue
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Originally posted by nandini90

well i think u r indeed doing so much wrong..do yu know tht....hehe..lols..i mean...itna achcha likhna achchi baat nahi hoti...hehe...waise....mein toh kaafi impressed hoon....kaafi nahi..bahut.....lols....excellent yaar..tumhe toh patha hai ki i neva watched kyph....but u hav just done a gr8 job yaaaar.....am loving it....mujhe nahi patha tha ki tum itna achcha likh sakthi hooo......

all reading out there...plsssss comment yaaar...atleast for the amt of hardwork she has put to write this...cum on.....

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nan...!!! u realy scared me idiot....neways thanx dear for the commentEmbarrassed
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and the rest of you guys who commented too...thanx a lawwwttttt...wil b updatin soon...xpct it today itslf... Big smile
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PART TWO...its gona be a small part... because most of you guys who are reading are not putting in a comment.. Ouch

''dadi...aapko aaj hi jaana hai kya??? its not fair dadi...abhi abhi toh mujhe kuch dino ki chutti mili hai... aap jaayegi to hum kya karenge??'',, angad startd complaining the next morning.

dadi was leaving for nainital wher the khannas used to live when the boys were small. that is how they knw the sharmas because both the families were neighbours and very good family friends. once a while dadi used to go to nainital and live there somedays because it is the place where her husband was buried.

''angad beta... tumhe toh pata hai main saal me do ya teen baar jaati hoo nainital. mujhe thodi waqt tumhare dadaji ke saath bhi bitaani hai warna jab main bhi oopar jaaungi na uske paas, wo mujhse baat bhi nahi karenge..'', dadi grinned.

''DADI..!!! hum aapko miss karne ki baat kar rahe hai aur aap mazak kar rahi hai??? very bad dadi..", shabd folded his arms and shook his head.

''aarre beta....main aaungi na 5-6 days ke baad. tab tak tumhare laaakho girlfriends ke saath masti karna. theek hai??''

shabd got excited...''theek hai dadi... aapke liye lakho kya...karodo ladkiyo ke saath flirt kar saktha hu main. waise bhi...thanx dadi... u gave me a work to do while you are gone. otherwise i wud hav got bored.''

''shut up shabd'', angad half grinned at his brother.

''dadi...bhai ko bhi ek idea do na...time spent karne ke liye.. ye ladkiyo ka mamla usse sambhal nahi jayega.'', shabd leapt out of his chair and ran as angad startd chasing him.

dadi laughed and had her lugguage filled into the car. both angad and shabd dropped dadi at the airport where naina and dilip were waiting to give dadi her sent off. naina hugged dadi and whispered in her ears,
''aapko pata hai na, is baar kya karna hai?? koi galti mat karna. agar angad ko pehle se hi pata chal gaya toh, aap janti ho na kya hoga?''.. dilip nodded and smiled from behind naina.

dadi smiled and touched naina's head,''tum fikr mat karo. mujhe pata hai kya karna hai aur kaise karna hai. bas tum shagun ki taiyaariya kar do. is baar to main tumhare bahu ke saath hi waapas aaungi.''

''ye kya baat ho rahi hai saas bahu ke beech...arre hume bhi toh suna..'', shabd showed his tongue.

dadi pinched his ears,''bada badmash hota jaa raha hai..''

she kissed everyone and boarded the flight to nainital.






....do post in replys...next part wil b coming up tonite. Tongue
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 1:40am | IP Logged
awesome dear sooo sweet Clap
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PART THREE


''om jai jagdish hare...swami jai jagdish hare...''

suryaban and gayatri woke up... gayatri startd fimbling with her clock all drowsy..''arre time kya hua??? HAYE BHAGWAAAN!!! aap uthiye...8 baj gaye aur aap abhi bhi so rahe hai. bachche bhi uth gaye. suno...kripa pooja kar rahi hai...arre uthiye toh!'' she startd shaking suryaban.

''gayatri!!! pehle tum bed se uthar jao phir mujhe uthne do. tum aise mujhe pakad ke rahegi to me kaise uth jaaunga??'', suryabhan smiled at his wife.

both the parents bathed and came down to the living room to see that their two daughters had cooked breakfast and arranged the table and were doing pooja til the parents came down. when they saw that their parents have come, both of them came and touched their parents feet.

''jeete reh putthar. jissi ghar me jaayegi khushi hi milegi'', the parents wished kripa and mahi.

all the four had breakfast, and then a phone started ringing.

suryaban went to pick the phone.

''maaji aap! aap kab aayi? achcha aaj subah. haan haan main aur gayatri thodi der me aayenge. jee...'', the three ladies looked over at suryaban talking over the phone.

he kept the phone and told,'' gayatri, maaji aayi hai. woh hume waha bhulayi hai. jaldi tayyar ho jao.''

mahi and kripa squealed in excitement and went upstairs to get dressed. in half an hour all of them wer dressed. kripa was in a yellow salwar kammeez and mahi in a light blue one all with profound accessories. all went to the big house nearby. dadi invited the sharmas nside with big smile. kripa and mahi touched dadi's feet and hugged her. after sometime, she went upstairs and bought gifts for both kripa and mahi. after sometime both the girls said bye to dadi and their parents and went outside to their friend's house.


dadi talked to suryaban.
''tum logo ne kya socha? kripa aur mahi ko mere saath bhej rahi ho na? un dono se baath ki tumne? agar main kripa aur mahi ko mumbai nahi le gayi toh naina aur dilip mujhe kha denge.''

''humne baat nahi ki abhi tak. par hume lagta hai dono humari baat maan jayegi. aap chinta math keejiye'', gayatri reassured her.

dadi smiled,''waise bhi angad aur kripa ka milna bahut zaroori hai. aur jald se jald hume un dono ki sagaai bhi karni hai. angad ko toh apni nayi album ke liye, nayi aawaaz ki bhi talaash hai. kripa uske saath kaam bhi kar sakthi hai aur un dono ke beech nazdeekiya aa jayenge. phir angad bhi shaadi me vishwaas karne lagenge.''

''jee hum samajh rahe hai... mujhe toh woh chotte angad aur shabd ke bahut yaad aati hai. kripa angad se aur mahi shabd se humesha ladhthi rehti thi. kripa shabd ke saath rehna aur angad mahi ke saath rehna pasand karti thi... bahut achche dost the woh!'', gayatri was lost in thoughts.

''aur hume ye bhi pata hai, iske alawa bhi angad aur kripa ek dusre ko bahut chaahte hai. mujhe yakeen hai ki angad kripa se bahut pyaar karta hai. lekin usse khudh bhi nahi pata. issi liye hi woh aisa kehta hai ke woh pyar vyar me vishwas nahi rakhta kyounki woh abhi bhi kripa ko chaahta hai'', dadi said.

suryaban and gayatri nodded and after sometime they left. [COLOR>


that night, after dinner, suryaban and gayatri called kripa and mahi to talk to them about the journey.
''kripa, mahi...maaji chahti hai ke tum dono mumbai chalo unke saath."

kripa: ''papa...mumbai?? kyoun??''

suryaban:''beta...tum dono ne toh apni padhayi poori ki hai. tum toh singer banna chahti hai na... maaji keh rahi dhi ki angad ke saath gane ke liye who log kisi nayi ladki ko dhoond rahi hai. aur woh log tumhe launch karne ki soch rahi hai.''

mahi: ''wow!!! angad ke saath gana... kripa thats awesome. i dont think u shud waste this opportunity.''

gayatri:''wahi toh hum bhi keh rahe hai beta. tum dono mumbai jaao. naina aur dilip tumhe kush rakhenge and tumhe tumhare manzil tak pahunchne me zaroor madat karenge. they love you girls a lot''.

kripa:''theek hai mama. hum chalenge.''

mahi went around in excitement and hugged everyone.

''achcha beta. maaji 5 din me wapas jaa rahe hai. hum unke saath jaayenge. tumhare saath waha hum 2-3 din rehke wapas aayenge. toh packing abhi se shuru karna.'', gayatri said.

both the girls went about with their packing. kripa and mahi took all those they wanted,{mahi even took her dolls!!! jus 2, okay!}... because they were staying for long. kripa took almost all of her salwar suits.
mahi was confused whether to take traditional wear or modern so she ended up taking all the dresses. by the next four days the packing was done.


on the fourth day... suryaban called mahi to talk to her alone.
'' beta...tum jaante ho hum mumbai kyoun jaa rahe hai?''

''jee papa.. kripa ki aur meri career banane,..''

suryaban: ''woh bhi hai beta...par... hum angad aur kripa ki shaadi karwane chahthe hai. main tumhari ma...naina aur dilip bhi yahi chahthe hai."


mahi was thunderstruck. ''kripa aur angad!!! shadi??? wow papa... ye toh bahut achchi baat hai. main abhi kripa se kehke aati hoon"

suryaban stopped her" nahi beta. hum bus unhe milane chahte hai. aur unhe pyar toh ho jaane do. ek saath waqt bitaana bahut zaroori hota hai. tumse bas kah rahi hoon. tumhari shayad koi madat ki zaroorat pade toh...''

''ab pata chala papa...achcha hai... main dhyan rakhoongi... toh angad... nahi nahi...angad jeeju!!!..'' , both father and daughter laughs.

suryaban thought...''kripa ke saath tumhari bhi socha hai maine beta... par tumhari case main kisiki madat ki zaroorat nahi padegi... shabd khudh iske kaabil hai"





do comment guys...



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awwww "shabd khudh iske kaabil hai" i LOVED that line! plz continue soon... u got me hooked =D

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