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FF-SAATH...wid u alwys[part29UPDATEDpg21] (Page 17)

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 3:45am | IP Logged
this was so romantic...so the truth about Kripa and Prem is finally revealed. I so happy that Angad finally got to fulfill his dream. please write soon..I am waiting for Shabd and Mahi part..thanks

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hey
very cute update
finally they confessed!!!
plz continue soon!!
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Please update soon...waiting
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hey grt part cont soon
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thankkkuuuu guyssss............... i am updating now....
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for all u shahi fans..

PART TWENTY SIX



same night at the khanna mansion...

at dinner...

naina: ye angad aur kripa abhi tak nahi aaye... shabd tume pata hai angad kaha gaye???

shabd shook his head: bhai ka plans toh kisi ko bhi pata nahi hota... par prem ne phone kiya tha ye kehne ke liye ki kripa angad ke paas hai...toh dono shayad bahar se khakar aayenge...

everyone smiled that at last the two are together...they had been avoiding each other for long... mahi was trying to catch shabd's eye... but he wasnt looking... aaliyah sensed something was up. she caught mahi's eyes and jerked her head as if to happen wats up. mahi gestured she wil tell her after dinner.

after dinner...

aaliyah caught up wid mahi in her room.

aaliyah: kya hai mahi???

mahi: aali...mujse badi galti ho gayi...

aaliyah was confused: kaisi galthi...???

mahi: maine apne pyaar ko pehchan ne me der kardi..

aaliyah: der kaise??? pehchaan toh liya na??? ab jaake shabd ko bata...

mahi: kaise bataau??? woh mujse rooth gaya hai... maine usse kaha ki muje nahi pata ki me usse pyaar karta hoon ya nahi... par me ab jaanti hoon...i love him...

aaliyah laughed: chaho to sab kuch hai aasan...

mahi looked up in distress... she thought aaliyah would help her and now she was laughing like crazy...

mahi: ye kya pepsi ke ad laga rakha hai... tume hasi aa rahi hai???

aaliyah: arre...kitna correct hai woh ad ke slogan... bhai ne tume patta liya na... jab ki tum usse nafrat karti dhi... bhai toh ab sirf rootha hai...tum chaho toh use manaana itna mushkil bhi nahi hai...

mahi: par kaise...woh mere taraf bhi nahi dekh raha hai...

aaliyah: tum dono ko privacy ki zaroorat hai... aur woh tume beech baat me chod ke jaa bhi sakta hai...woh nahi hona chahiye... ha!!! aise karo...aaj raat uske kamre me ghus jaao aur baat karo. bhai zaroor maanenge...

mahi: nahi nahi...main aise kaise kar sakthi hoon??

aaliyah sighed: mahi... tume aise awkward feel karne ke zaroorat nahi hai... akhir tum uske hone waali biwi ho... tume haq banta hai

mahi's eyes lit up.

aaliyah lured shabd downstairs for sometime and mahi pretending to have headache went to shabd's room and hid herself. out of curiosity, mahi checked shabd's cupboard which was a bit open as if he had been looking at something inside and had to leave in a hurry.

she opened to see a beautiful red lehenga and a diamond necklace. a paper bit fell from the jewellery box. it said...

" for my princess...
this is for u to feel that u r a princess...
ruling my heart...
with love...
yours and yours only
shabd
"

she felt awed... after all shabd truely loved her. she dint think a bit. she went and changed herself to the dress shabd so lovingly bought for her.

she admired herself in the dress. shabd was right... she did look like a princess...she smiled.

suddenly she heard footsteps outside. sensing shabd's return, she hid herslef behind the curtain.

shabd entered the room and locked it. he sat on his bed for sometime. he couldnt stand the fight he was having with mahi now...after all, he was the one who started the fight this time. he sighed and walked towards the cupboard where he had kept his little treasure. he opened and found that it wasnt ther. he felt confused about where he had kept it. he turned and checked the whole room.his eyes fell on a pair of feet below the curtains. he sighed and put his hands on his waist.

shabd: kaun hai waha...???

no reply.

shabd: dekho...i can see you... kaun hai??? aaliyah tum ho kya???

still no reply.

shabd walked to the curtains and pulled out the person out, none too softly. shabd looked stupidly at seeing mahi there and that too in the dress he had always anticipated about seeing her in... she truely looked like a princess. mahi winced in pain.

mahi: muje laga...

shabd came out from his thoughts. he frowned...

shabd: aur lagna bhi chahiye... itni raat ko mere kamre me kya kar rahi ho???

mahi: chori karne aayi hoon

shabd: woh toh dikh raha hai... ye dress toh tumne chori hi kiya haina...

mahi: bilkul nahi...mere liye toh khareedke laaye ho na???

shabd: kisne kaha???

mahi: toh phir kiske liye???

shabd: uh....ummm....kyu bataau???

mahi: jab jhoot bolna nahi aata, tab jhoot nahi bolna chahiye...

shabd tried to say something but mahi held up her hand in correct imitation of shabd that said no need to say.
mahi went over to the mirror, as shabd looked on. she admired herself turning around and checking herself in all directions.

mahi: kaise lag rahi hoon???

shabd: dress bahut achcha hai...

mahi: very funny...waise...selection achcha hai tumare...

shabd: i know...dress selection me main aur bhai ka jawaab nahi hai

mahi: main apni baare me keh rahi thi...

shabd looked at her in surprise. did she say wat he thought she said??? shabd shook himself. he shouldnt fall so easily.

shabd: tum chali jaao abhi mere kamre se

mahi: hello... ye mera bhi kamra hai...

shabd: woh kaise???

mahi: tumari mangetar hoon...hone waali biwi hoon...haq banti hai meri

shabd felt his mouth fall open

shabd: theek hai...toh me chala jaata hoon

and he turned around to leave... but mahi felt bad and caught his hand.

mahi: aise math jaao... abhi bhi naraaz ho mujse???

shabd: mahi...ye theek waqt nahi hai baat karne ka

mahi: mmmm....

she walked towards the switch and switched off the lights. moonlight lit the room. she moved towards the balcony and slowly undid her braid. she wanted herself to look exactly the way shabd liked...

and she started humming..."tu rootha toh" from jawaani

tu ruutha to main ro duungi sanam
aaja meri baahon mein aa
tu ruutha to main ro duungi sanam
aaja meri baahon mein aa


shabd walked towards the bed in mock anger and hid his face with the pillow to hide his smile. mahi was trying to seduce him. she sat next to him and pulled him closer.

le legi jaan meri teri naaraazagi
jis mein tu kush rahe meri us mein kushi
tu ruutha to main ro duungi sanam
aaja meri baahon mein aa
ho teri ye saadagi ye bholaapan tera
mera nasib hai khilata joban tera
meri bahaar tu mera qaraar tu
masti se bhar diya tuune jivan mera

tu meri hai main tera huun sanam
pagali hai kya hans de zara


mahi hugged shabd and whisperd in his ears...

chupake se bol de dil mein jo baat hai
ab koyi dar nahin apni har raat hai
apana ye pyaar bhi puuja se kam nahin
mujhako ye naaz hai tu mere saath hai
Tu ruutha to main ro duungi sanam
aaja meri baahon mein aa


shabd had tears in his eyes... she couldnt have confessed her love in a better way. he pulled her into an embrace.

shabd: mahi... i love you

mahi: main bhi shabd... i love you too... muje abhi pata chala ki me tumare bina kitni adhoori hoon... me tumare bina nahi jee sakti... pata hai jab tum gaye the,,, maine tume kitna miss kiya...aur...

shabd closed her mouth to stop her keep on talking...

shabd: chup!!!

he removed his hand and bent towards her... she knew wat was coming.. she closed her eyes. shabd grinned and drew back. mahi dint get wat she expected for sometime. she opened her eyes to see shabd smile at her.

shabd: bahut tadpaya tumne muje...ab tumari baari hai...

mahi frowned at his smile. she pulled shabd down by his shirt and planted a loud kiss on his cheek. she left a bewildered shabd caressing his cheeks. she made to leave the room but shabd called her.

shabd: mahi...

mahi turned around to look at him

shabd had tears of joy: ab nahi jaana...

mahi smiled and hugged him...she stayed in the room and they talked all night...his work...her work... the days that were to come..it was mehendi function of aaliyah the next day... slowly mahi slept off in shabd's arms...




...to b contd....

hope u liked it...and do comment
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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 9:15am | IP Logged
It was such a good part! Mahi finally confessed her love for Shabd! It was so cute. Update soon!
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hey
mahi finally confed!!!
continue soon!

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