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FF-Pyar kiya hai.p53pt56-last part, note P68 27/12 (Page 37)

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
cute part cont soon

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sooooooo coolllllll part i love it so much contuied soonn it is going intrestingg.
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hey nice part. read all parts and all r very nice. keep it up and well done Smile
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A cute part bachchaaaaaa Clap Clap Smile

The way they engage.... apne style se as rahi said. Wink liked it.... Tongue
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very very sweet part..........continue the romance...
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damn nice kashish...arre waah dono ki engagement bhi ho gayi Clap Clap Clap.cont dis romance for at least nxt 3-4 parts plz... Tongue
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@preethi:thnx for the compliments, and probably it want have no twist or maybe
@jalak-ji:thnx for the compliment, i'll send the next part soon
@rah_huju:thnx for the compliments, sumit aur kk sab kuch apne hi style mein karte hain
@mdtafan:thnx for the compliments, i'll send next part soon, thnx for saying u like the romantic scene written by me, thnx a lot.
@irika:thnx for the compliments, i'll continue soon
@shafoo:thnx for the compliments, i'll continue soon
@seemahujufan:thnx for the compliments, and i will keep writting u guys keep leaving ur comments, thnx
@verni:thnx for the compliments, i love that u guys like their style to get engaged
@pearl29:thnx for compliments, and i'll try to continue the romance
@sweetpoorvi:thnx for the compliments, dono ki engagement bhi ho gayi lekin abhi asli engagement baaki hai, and i'll try to write romantic scene in the next part too

hey guys pls keep leaving ur comments, thnx a lot

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HERE COMES PART 31

hey guys pls tell me if i write something wrong it'w my very first time that i am writting something romantic


(su goes to his home everybody are waiting for him, they celebrate su's birthday.After celebrating, su goes to his room and starts thinking about kk and kk in her room is thinking about su (when su kiss her in cheek in party and when she kiss on su's cheek in the parking. After sometime they sleep)


NEXT DAY (at 8 pm)


(kk is getting ready as everybody decide to go pune, su is in his room by then su's mobiles ring)

su:hi how r u sweetheart?

kk:i am fine dear n u?

su:i am also fine, kaisai yaad kiya is nacheez ko raat ke 8 baje?

kk:woh darsel hum pune ja rahe hain to tum chalo ghe saath ya nahi?

su:tum kiya chahti ho?

kk:mein chahti houn ke tum....

su:mein kiya?

kk:ke tum maat jao

su:kiya???

kk:i am just joking, tumhe mujhse poochne ki kiya zaroorat hai, mein to har pal tumhare saath rehna chahti houn

su:sachi, agar tum chahti ho to mein aa jata houn

kk:ok jaldi aana

(su gets ready and goes to shaurya's house. Shaurya, Sanjana, Sonali and Kumkum were waiting for sumit)

shau:sumit dekh, sonali mere saath beth jaati hai aur kk tere saath beth jaati hai, ab tu akele to bore ho jaye gha na

su:ok (in shau's ear) thnx sharya (then he moves away)

(su and kk sit in a car and everybody else sit in a car. In the way, su puts indian movies songs and then he takes kk's hand and put down the hand on the (gear).kumkum is looking at sumit, she is silent, after sometime)

kk:hum kitni der mein pohonch jayein ghe

su:1 gante mein

(the car stops)

su:ab is gadi ko kiya huwa, mein abhi check kar ke aaya

(he comes out from the car and checks, by then it start raining, kk comes out)

su:kk tum gari mein betho, varna tumhe sardi ho jaye ghi

kk:tumhe bhi ha jaye ghi, woh dekh hotel, wahan chal ke saty kar lete hain jab tak barish nahi rukti

su:ok, if u want

(they enter the hotel, su goes to the receptionist)

su:hi, i want 2 rooms

recep:sorry sir sirf ek room hi available hai

kk:kiya huwa sumit?

su:woh yeh keh rehi hain, ke is bare hotel mein sirf ek hi room available hai, ab kiya karein?

kk:then humein ek hi room mein adjust karna hoga

su:r u sure?

kk:yes i am sure

(su takes the key and goes toward the room. They enter the room, su close the door)

su:hum tum ek kamre baand ho (goes near to kumkum, holds her by her waist) aur chabi kho jaye

kk:sumit yeh kiya ker rahe ho?

su:pyar kar raha houn

kk:sumit

su:dekho party mein tumne kaha ke hul logon ke beech hain, ab hum dono ke siva koi teesra nahi yahan

(sumit kiss her neck, kk feels something, then su moves his lip towark kumkum's lip)

kk:sumit, no

(kk moves back. Suddenly, she loose control, she fall on the bed,su goes to kk, he kiss on her lips, it was a very long kiss, after that kk wasn't in the condition to stop sumit.Then su offs the light, su show his love on kumkum, they are wrapped in one blanket)



tell me if it's good or not, aaj jo maine likha uske baad to mujhe lagta hai ke aande khane kha time aagaya hai, pls tell me if have the right thounght or wrong

thnx by the way for reading my (bore) ff (what do u guys think)

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