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FF-Pyar kiya hai.p53pt56-last part, note P68 27/12 (Page 22)

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hi my name is irika i am new in this forum your story is so nice keep it up Wink

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@verni:thnx a lot verni
@jasmine:thnx a lot for the comliments
@preethi:thnx a lot
@sweetpoorvi:thnx a lot
@Rah_HuJu:thnx a lot aur aise kaise ho sakta hai ke sumit, hussain ke liye vote na kare
@shafoo.thnx a lot
@irika:first of all, welcome to india forums and thnw a lot for the compliments.

thnx everybody for reading my ff and liking it.

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Partie impressionnante Kanishk ..!! Grand dpart..
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HERE COMES PART 18

(he goes in the dinning room, he sees shaurya)

sumit:hey shaurya tu aagaya

shaurya:aa gaya, kyon nahi aana chahiye tha?

sumit:of course,

kumkum:bhayya, waisai bhi sumit aap ka hi intezar ker reha tha

shaurya:sumit tu mera intezar kyon ker reha tha?

sumit:woh...woh...mujhe ghar jana tha is liye

shaurya:ok then u go

sumit: ok to mein chalta houn, bye

shaurya and kumkum:bye

(sumit leaves the house)

sumit(thinks):pata nahi kyon mera jaane ko dil nahi ker reha, kher ghar to jana pare gha

(he goes to his home)


IN KUMKUM'S HOUSE


kumkum:bhyya kaisa reha din

shaurya:superb, fabulous aur tumhara?

kumkum:acha, infact bohot acha. Apka dost sumit itna bhi bura nahi hai

shaurya:acha jee

kumkum:ya

.............................

IN SUMIT'S HOUSE

su's mom(naina):aagaya beta

su:ya mom, how r u?

naina:mein tikh houn, tu beta?

su:i am very very happy,

naina:woh to shakal se hi nazar aa reha hai, ke aaj tum bohot zyada khush ho, chal khana kha le

su:mom....

naina(interrupt):kha ker aaya houn, roz yeh hi baat kehte ho,

su:mom, aap ne khana kha liya

naina:kha liya

su:mom mein apne room mein chalta houn

.....................

IN SU'S ROOM AT 10 PM

(su is laid on his bed)

sumit:(think: su is massaging kumkum's ankle, kumkum in su's arm)

(he turns his face)

kumkum:tum mujhe hi miss ker rehai the

(he sits and moves his hand toward her face, he was just touching her when she disapears)

SUMIT:mein kyon kumkum ke bare mein itna soch reha houn ? yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? uper se adi bhayya bhi kal aayein ghe, meri taqleef ke baare mein unein kiya pata hai,

(he lay in the bed again)

NEXT DAY



(sumit subah 8 baje jag jata hai)

naina:sumit beta jag ja, 8:10 ho chuke hain

sumit(shout):mom mein jag chuk houn

naina:aaj suraj kahan se nikal aaya

sumit:jahan se roz nikal tha hai

(he gets ready, does breakfast)

su:mom bhayya ko kis time airport se lene jana hai

naina:4 baje

su:ok to mein bhi jaoun gha

naina:tujhe hi to jana hai,dekh mujhe ghar mein tayariyan kerni hain, aur tere papa ne kaha hai ke tu ja ker le aa

su:ok mom no problem

(he goes to the office, for the first he is in the office at 08:45)

sumit(speaks slowly):sumit yeh tuje kiya ho reha hai abhi to sirf 08:45, aaj pehle hi aagaya, waisai to reason dhondta rehta tha office na ane ke liye

(he starts cheking kumkum's project again, someone knocks on the door)

su:come in

kumkum:good morning sumit, lagta hai sari raat mere hi khayalon mein khoye rahe

(he raise his head but no one was there)

sumit:yeh mujhe kiya ho reha hai

(by then someone knocks, it's kumkum)

sumit:come in

kumkum:good morning sir, how r u?

(he stands up, he goes near her again, he touches her cheek)

kumkum(things):yeh mujhe kiya ho reha hai? kyon mujhe acha lag reha hai? (normally) yeh sir aap kiya ker rehai ho?

sumit(comes out from his dreams, and moves away his hand):kuch...kuch bhi to nahi(thinks)yeh mere saath kiya ho reha hai, ab to yeh bhayya hi mujhe bata sakte hain (normally) kumkum ab paoun ki moch kaisi hai

kumkum:sir ab bilkul tikh hai

sumit:that's good, sit

(she sits, they start working until the lunch)

sumit:kumkum lunch time ho gaya hai lunch kerne chalein?

kumkum:ok, wait 2 min

sumit:ok (thinks)han kardi isne warna aaj to tu gaya tha, waisai maine kiya soch ker ise poocha, maine kyon bina soche samjhe hi pooch liya

kumkum:chalo

(they go and eat. After they return to the office and starts working)

IT'S 3:30

sumit:kumkum tum zara is project per kaam karlo mein adi bhayya ko airport se pick karne ja reha houn

kumkum:ok, sir

(he leaves)
..........................

AT THE AIRPORT

sumit:yeh bhayya kahan reh gaye

(he sees adi, goes to him and su hugs adi and say hi to his bhabhi)

su:hi bhayya how r u?

adi(in su's ears):i am fine aur tera haal mujhe pata hai

sumit(in adi's ear):bhayya kyon mujhe aap sata reha ho

adi(in su's ear):ghar ja ker bataoun gha

sumit(in adi's ear):bhayya



pls guys leaves ur comments tell me if it's good or not

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
very nice cont soon Clap
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
very very very nice parts........ab Su ka kya hoga.....
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
veryyyyyyyy nicee and cute part i am wondring tht if adi sumit bhaiay if he sayy to him that he is in love with her i am justt wondreingg tht plzzzzzzzzzz contuied
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very sweet one Clap

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