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FF-Pyar kiya hai.p53pt56-last part, note P68 27/12 (Page 20)

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:05am | IP Logged
hey guys sorry, i had no time yesterday to post to part, even today too i will send only one part today

@mdtafan:thnx a lot for the compliments, and u r right su hai na
@shafoo:thnxxx a lot for the compliments
@preethi:thnx preethi
@sweetpoorvi:thnx a lot, and i'll try to write somethink romantic after few parts
@pearl29:thnx for ur comments, kumkum ka nasha na ho usa ho skata hai kiya
@jalak-ji:thnx a lot for the compliments
@jasmine:thnx for the cmplimnts,sumit ko to suderna hi tha
@neevfan:thnx a lot for the compliments

thnx everybody who like my ff

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:07am | IP Logged
here comes part 16

(he brings kumkum to her room and he gets kumkum lie on the bed,sumit goes to the toilet in the other side the servant comes to kumkum's room and gives her the cream)

kumkum:thnx

servant:ur welcome

(then the servant leaves, kumkum tries to apply the cream to her ankle but she can't, by then sumit comes and sees kk trying to apply the cream to herself.He smiles and goes near her)

sumit:kumkum do mein laga ta houn

kumkum:nahi mein karloun ghi

sumit:chup chap mujhe cream do

kumkum:yeh lo

(she gives him the cream, he begin massaging)

kumkum:aouch!

sumit:bohot dard ho raha hai?

kumkum:ya

(sumit gets closer to her)

sumit:ab dard ho reha hai?

kumkum:ab better hai

sumit:shuker hai, warna tumhe baar baar uthane se backaching hone lag perta

kumkum:sumit...

(they smiles, sumit is still massaging)

sumit:waisai ek baat poochoun?

kumkum:han poocho

sumit:bura maat manena

kumkum:nahi manoun ghi

sumit:dekho mein sirf janena chahta houn ke kyon rahul ne tum jaisi khubsoorat ladki ko chor diya?

(she moves his hand from her ankle)

kumkum:u want to know why rahul left me?

sumit:kumkum dekho maine kaha tha bura maat manena

kumkum:mein bura nahi mana rehi,

sumit:if u don't want to tell me it's ok

kumkum:sumit,yeh sach to ek na ek din sab ke samne aana hi hai lekin tum mujhse ek promise karo ke yeh sach sirf hum dono ke beech rahe gha, jab thik waqt aaye gha main sab ko bata doun ghi

sumit:son't worry kumkum yeh baat sirf hum dono ke beech rahe ghi

(kumkum narates him all the story)

kumkum:aur phir woh hogaye jo nahi hona chahiye tha

sumit(angry):what?i can't believe that, tumne woh sab kardiya jo ek ladki apne pati ke saath kerti hai, tum to meri dosti ki laik hi nahi ho, rahul ne acha kiya tumhe chor ker

(kumkum is shocked)


hey gus leaves ur coments (tell me if u liked it or not, it will help me for writing in the futur)thnx

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:54am | IP Logged
post twice


Edited by kashishk - 30 May 2008 at 10:58am

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 10:29am | IP Logged
OMG!!! yeh sumit ne kya kehdya Confused Shocked !!!
kash yeh bas ek bura sapna hau Confused
but very good part kashish Big smile
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
i hope Wink.. that kk is dreaming tht if she would tell d truth to sumit how he will react? Wink .....
dying to know wht nxt Wink .updt soon... Big smile
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
wowowowowwowoooooooo coollllll part plzzzzzzz contuied ohhh my god sumit also leve her i feel sad for kumkum sumit also leave herr tht soo sad i cant wait to read next part
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
Su cannot do this........kk must be dreaming or Su might be jokeing with her.....
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Hmm read 3 parts together.... they are nicee Clap Embarrassed

Carry on.. Smile

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