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FF-Pyar kiya hai.p53pt56-last part, note P68 27/12 (Page 12)

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 10:23am | IP Logged
very good kashish
yeh summit bhi naa LOL LOL
ab next part jaldi likho Embarrassed

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 11:53am | IP Logged
heyyyyyyyyyyyyy it veryyyyyyyyyyyyy good plzzz contuied next part
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
hiii..
read the 2-3 parts together..
they were relli nice Embarrassed
sumit is such a flirty but kk will make him alright soon Wink
bwn..u can just call me jasmine Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
hiiiii kashishk... again a good part yaar. Clap.lagta hai sumit jaldi line pe aa jayega. ...cont. soon Tongue.& u can just cal me poorvi Tongue .
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
@preethi:thnx a lot preethi
@mdtafan:thnx, yeh sumit bhi na bohot flirty hai
@shafoo:thnx a lot shafoo
@jasmine:thnx for the compliments
@sweetpoorvi:thnx for the compl, i hope so ke jaldi line per aa jaye

hey guys here come PART 10

NEXT DAY


(it's a big day for evrybody, kumkum decorates all the bungalow, the bungalow is decorated like a bride)


it's 8 pm

IN wadhwa's house

(sumit is liying on his bed)

sumit(thinks):yaar,aaj pura din kumkum ko nahi dekha, pata nahi kyon mein kumkum ko miss ker reha houn, pata nahi mujhe kiya ho raha hai (loudly) anyways sumit get ready aaj tere bhai jaisai dost ki mangni hai

(he open his cupboard he takes out a very beautiful white sherwani, he gets ready, takes his car and he starts driving toward shaurya's house)


IN KUMKUM'S MAASI'S HOUSE

(everybody gets ready, kumkum in her room is a lil upset she is thinking about her none existing engagement but now she promise to herself she will never thinks about rahul. She gets up and gets ready)


It's 9 pm

(sumit arrives shaurya's house, he is still out, he is looking the decoration of the bungalow)

sumit:wow, it's so beautifully decorated

(then he enters)

sumit:bahir to bahir ander bhi kitni zabardat decoration hai, just loved it.

(he goes to shaurya, and congrats him, he says something in shaurya's hear)

sumit:aab to toun gaya

shaurya:shut up yaar

sumit(normaly):just joking

(the lights off, someone speaks, it's kumkum but sumit doesn't know that)

kumkum:bhayya aaj aapki mangni hai, to mangni se pehle todhi entertainement ho jaye

shaurya:sure, waisai bhi woh shaadi ya mangni hi kiya jahan tum na ho

kumkum:right bhayya

sumit:awaz jaani pehchani lag rehi hai

(then a song starts it's "piya piya", kumkum starts dancing with sonali the lights come back)

(music:kumkum comes from the chair which are in the left, she has wear a very beautiful sari blue,pink with matching jewallery and sonali comes from the stairs which are on right she has wear a blue and yellow sari she is also looking very sweet,they are covered by dupatta when the songs really starts. sonali and kumkum takes off their dupattas)

sumit:yeh to kumkum hai, lekin yeh yahan

(when the songs end shaurya speaks)

shaurya:hey my two sisters u r looking beautiful aur aap dono jab dance ker rehi thi mera dil chah reha tha mein bhi tum dono ko join kar loun

sumit(thinks):what sister kumkum is shaurya's sister

(then sonali and kumkum goes to shaurya and sanjana with rings)

kumkum:bhayya bina waqt zaya kerte huwe aap yeh rings exchange karlein

shaurya:u r right

(shaurya and sanjana exchange their rings, kumkum and sonali hugs the couple and congrats them, sumit is still in a big shock)

kumkum(in mic):hey hey guys, the entertainement isn't finish abhi bohut si masti karni baki hai,aur bhayya ne bataya tha ke un ka dost jo ke sumit hain woh bohot acha dance kerte hain to sumit pls come

sumit:yeh kiya mein is halat mein dance karoun gha

(he goes and kumkum tells dj to put krazzy 4 songs, sumit danse and the song finish everybody claps)

(the ring ceremony end and everybody goes to their home but sumit is still there after some minutes kk goes to him)

kumkum:hi sumit wadhwa, how r u?

sumit(still shocked):hi, i am f9

kumkum:f9 kahin se lag to nahi rehai

sumit:tum shaurya ki behen ho

kumkum:jee sumit...sir, mein shaurya bhayya ki behen houn

(by then, shaurya comes)

shaurya:hey sumit mein tumhe kumkum se to milwana bhool gaya yeh meri behen hai

sumit:lekin yeh mishra hai aur tum kapoor

shaurya:woh darsal yeh meri cousin hai france se aayi hai, waisai to tum dono mil chuke hoge

kumkum:ya bhayya, bhayya aap batein karo mein thak gayi houn to mein sone chalti houn

sumit(thinks):yeh sone ja rehi hai meri neend kharab karke

shaurya:kiya huwa?

sumit:kuch nahi bas thak geya houn, to mein chalta houn ghar, bye

shaurya:bye (thinks:lagta hai ise shock laga kumkum ko ider dekh ker aur yeh jan ker ke woh meri behen hai)

(sumit goes at home to his room)

sumit(thinks):yeh kumkum, shaurya ki behen hai, yeh kaisai ho sakta hai

(he spends all his night in this thought)


NEXT DAY


IT's sunday, (11 am)

kumkum:bhayya sumit ko bhi bula lo,

shaurya:ok,waisai bhi use phirna pasand hai

(shaurya calls sumit)

sumit(tired):hi, shaurya,how r u?

shaurya:hey i am f9 toun to hamesha ki tarah tikh hi hoga, tujhe batana tha ke hum behir phirne ja rehai hain to mein tujhe kuch der tak pick up karne aata houn bye

sumit(try to tells something but shaurya disconnect the phone)

kumkum(talks to herslelf):yeh aaj hi sonali ko bhi kaam perna tha, hamare saath chalti to mil ker mazaa chakate us sumit the bander ko.

shaurya:kumkum neeche aa jao sanjana ko bhi pick kerna hai aur sumit ko bhi

hey guys tell me if it's good or not(if not good i will try to ignore the fault which i make)

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
wow buddy!!ur sure going fast!! Clap Clap it's fantastic & ur flow of the story is excellent Clap Clap Clap just one thing...on Part 7-Pg 10, Sonali should say 'Bhai KK ko job mil gayee'....u've written Sonali ko job mil gayee Smile
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
ohhhhhhhh it cooll dont be upset your goodddddd in writhing story of kumkum and sumit
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very good part Wink
cant wait for the next one Embarrassed

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