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FF-Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya NOTEPg154 (Page 33)

bmtd11 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ami_princess

hey plz continue karo na!

i read your fan fiction all in once and i loved it! cant wait to read more!

thank u. galad to u know u liked it.

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
NOTE: Guys be patient with me. I want to update right now but my stupid teacher gave me lots of questions to do so i must finish them. Inshallah in half and hour or less i shall have the update. Please zara intazar karo. I want to update as much as u wanna read it. Just a little while. Thank you.
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Ok guys sorry for the delay but i finally finished my homework. So here it is. I hope you enjoy:
Precap: Guy stops infront of vidya.
V: Asher? Sagar was confused.
S: Kaun hai ye vidya? Vidya looks at him scared.
A: Kyun vidya pataogi nai ke me tumhara ex-lover hoon. Sagar's eyes grow Wide.
S: Exlover?
A: Hain u heard right.
V: Nai sagar ye joot hai.
A: Arrey vidya daro mat na.
S: Kaun hai ye vidya?
V: Sagar woh ye..
S: Bolo vidya? Vidya couldn't speak.
A: Deka zari baat hai ke me jo kena chata hoon who sach hai. Varna ye bol sakti ti. Sagar looks mad.
S: Deko vidya bolo. Bolo! Vidya is still quiet. Sagar takes her by the arm and drags her back to the hotel. He eventually let goes and ignores. He sits on the sofa holding his head. Vidya sits next to him and touches his shoulder. He takes her hand of and walks to the bed. Vidya follows but he doesn't look at her.
V: Sagar? Sagar lies down and closes his eyes.
V: Sagar please meri baat to sune. Sagar turns to the other side.
V: Tik hai jab tak ap meri baat nai sunege to me bi nai songi. Vidya crosses her legs, leans against the headboard, and just stairs at him. Sagar rolls his eyes cuz he knows vidya will eventually fall asleep. However sagar was wrong. A few hours later around midnight he sees vidya still awake. Her eyes have bags under them but she still didn't sleep. Sagar looks at her while she looks back.
S: Abi tak soi nai?
V: Mene kaha na ke jab tak aap meri bat nai sunegen me tab tak nai songi.
S: Acha to bolo. Kaun ta who.. kya naam hai… oh hain Ahser. Kaun ta Asher?
V: Asher mere classfellow ta.
S: Go on…
V: Woh.. he asked me out…
S: And…
V: I refused.
S: So why didn't you say that before?
V: Kyunki usne mere saat kuch aur kiya hai jise kate waqt ajeeb se lagta hai. Sagar gets up quickly.
S: KYa kia hai usne?
V: Usne mere saat zabardasti karne ki koshish ki hai. Unse to had he par kardi.
S: Kitni hard? He looked mad.
V: Itne ke usne meri sari utardi. Who to acha hai ke me bagi.
S:What! Sagar jumps put of bed.
S:Im not gonna let him go. Ill kill him im telling you. How dare he do that? Sagar walks away fast.
V: Sagar! Vidya gets out of bed and holds his arm.
V: Aap asa kuch nai karenge.
S: Kyun nai karonga.
V: Me jo ka re hoon. You are not going to do anything.
S: But vidya…
V: NO! Please. Aapko meri kasam.
S: Tik hai vidya. Tumhari kasam me use nai maronga.
V: Good boy.
S: Par vidya?
V: Gee.
S: Aik do dapar hi sai.
V: NO!
S: Ok ok. But vidya..
V: Yes. Sagar goes close to her and grabs her arms. He lightly kisses her lips.
V: Ye kyat a?
S: My way of saying im sorry.
V: Well you wanna see my way of accepting it.
S: Yes. Vidya gets really close to him and kisses him until she can't breath. She lets go and runs to the bed. She tucks herself in. Sagar is amazed. Suddenly he hears vidya yell.
V: I LOVE YOU! She then goes to sleep. Sagar goes to bed too. In the morning they are watching tv. Sagar gets a call from his dad. After he shuts the phone he looks upset.
V: Kya huwa? Puts her hand on his shoulder.
S: Papa kate he ke hum ab bohut din yan re chook e hain. Ab hume wapas ane cahiye. Shalu aur Chinu ko shaadi ki bi jaldi hai.
V: Toh kya huwa? Hume aik na aik din jana to tah.
S: Par kal kyun! Vidya laughs.
V: Well agar aaj humara yain akri din hai toh phir is ka kuch to acha Karen hain na?
S: Yes! Vidya tum yein aik minute taro muhje kuch kam hai me ata hoon.
V: Ka ja re hain?
S: Bas kaam hai. Aik gante me ajain ga. Itni dher me tum tayar rane phir hum shopping ke liya jainge. Tik hai?
V: Gee. Vidya waits around for sagar. She watches tv and paces around but gets restless.Suddenly she hears a knock on the door. She opens it and begins walking backwards.
Precap: Vidya receives news that sagar was in a accident.
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
oMG great update yaar, plZ cont sooon!!
bmtd11 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:40pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by cutey55

oMG great update yaar, plZ cont sooon!!

aww thanks. ill continue soon but as of right now cant... gotta do something... ill try in an hour or so... but thanks yaar 4 loving it!

Ankuu Goldie

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
OMG ThAT WAS AWESOME HUN!!!! PLEZ CONTINUE SOON Big smile Big smile Big smile
bmtd11 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
hey guys this is it. im thinking of stopping now. nobody likes it. nobody read it or commented so what's the point. why waste a thread. if u r in for me stopping don't comment and ill get the point.
adventure_gurl IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
hey I love this story, it's really sweet! Big smile

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