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bmtd11 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 8:28pm | IP Logged

Hey members of if. My name is or nickname is moomoo. Im starting a new ff here on india forums. Although this is my second ff it is my first one on india forums. AT first i didnt want to do this cuz there r so many good ffs here i didnt wanna compete but now i have the courage. I know my ff wont be great but i stiil hope you enjoy it.

Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya

This story consists of two people, Sagar and Vidya. They know each other through their siblings. Vidya's sister Shalu is Sagar's sister Chandra's best friend. Sagar and Vidya hardly talk to each other but inside they think they might like each other. Will they remain hi bye friends her become more than friends?


This scene starts off in Vidya's college. Vidya, Shalu, and Chandra are sitting in the library studying.


Sha: Umm Vidya question number seven ki liye tumhe kya answer mila.

V: Muhje 10 mila.

Sha: Aur Chandra tumhe?

C: Muhje bi ten mila hai. All of suden Chandra's phone rings really loud. The librarian looks at her angrly.

C: Sorry mam. Me bas phone answer karke ati hoon.

Sha: Shaid Sagar ka phone hoga.

V: Hain shaid. Chandra returns.

C: Hey guys sagar agya hai. Tum logo ko ride chaiye hai.

Sha: Umm sure.

V: Arrey shalu kyun sagar ko taklif deti ho.

C: Arre koi taklif nai hai. Chalo. They go outside. Sagar is waiting in the car. Chandra sits in the front and Shalu and Vidya sit in the back.

Sha: Hi Sagar.

S: Hi.

C: Arrey koi excitement to dikao. Kya yun hi bol re ho. Kai phir papa se lecture to nai mila.

S: Nai Chandra bas ase hi me tak gya hoon. Office me both kam ta.

C: Oh acha.

Sha: Vaise Sagar aap aur speed Karen. Vidya ko dar lagra hai.

C: Hain! Hain! Karo.

Vidya just sits quietly hearing her self being insulted.

S: Chup karo! Muhje gari chale ne do! They all become quiet. Sagar stops infront of shalu and vidya's house.

Sha: Thank you sagar! Arrey vidya tum bhi thank u bolo.

C: Arrey chor do is par to jaise chup rana ka spell hai.

V: Thank you. Vidya leaves. Shalu follows her. In their house: Vidya's mom and dad come down. Vidya's house is not large but it is pretty nice.

VD: Arrey tum dono age.

V: Gee papa.

Sha: Papa sagar ne hume chor rat a par ise stupid ne ye zaroori bi nai samja ke thank you bola.

VM: Shalu! Vidya tumse bari hai. Istara use se baat nai karte.

V: Arrey mai koi bat nai hai. Tik hi to ka ri hai. Sorry shalu ainda ye galati nai hogi. She leaves and goes into her room. She jumps on the bed and closes her eyes tight. For some reason she sees sagar. She opens her eyes.

V: Ye me jab bi aken band karti hoon to sagar kyun nazar ata hai. Bachpan se asa hota hai. Kyun? Her attention is changed when her phone rings. She goes to pick it up.

V: Hello. It is Chandra.

C: Arrey vidya hi.

V: Hi.

C: Kaise ho?

V: Tik hoon abi tom mile te hum dono.

C: Hain who actually exam ke bad vacation are re hai to meri parents ne socha ke hum log ya ni ke tumhari family aur meri family outing ke liye jai.

V: Vaise idea to acha hai. Me apne parents se bat karti hoon ke hum sab hamara farm house par jate hai.

C: Great idea. Aur hai vidya sorry aje ke liye. Who kya hai shalu ko dek kar me bi bol parti hoon. Really soory.

V: Its ok. Take care bye.

C: U too bye.

Vidya shuts her phone off and goes downstairs. TO her surprise Chandra and her family are already down there.

C: Deka aunty mene ka ta ke vidya jaldi aygi. Sagar is there too just minding his own bussines. Sagar's dad decides to start the convo.

SD: Acha toh ab kya kia jai bhai sab. Hum aapke farm house ja sakte hai.

VD: Kyun nai. Vaise bi vidya ki kahwi har baat achi hoti hai. Muhje ye bi lagta hai ke saab ko ya farm house par jana pasand hoga.

Sha: Muhje nai hoga.

Vm: Par kyun shalu?

Sha: Hum log who har waqt kyun karte hai jo Vidya chati hai.

V: Shalu mene to sirf idea dia ta. Zaroori nai hai ke hum mere hi idea se jai. (as u can see shalu exteremly hates vidya.)

Sha: Tum chup karo. Band karo apna ye bolapan ka drama. Shalu leaves mad. Vidya seems upset.

C: Arrey Vidya tum tension mat lo. Hum farm house hi jainge. Shalu ko me manloo gi. Bas papa ab sab tayari shori Karen.

VD and SD: Bilkul tik kaha. Sagar's family leaves. Vidya looks at her parents.

V: Akir kar galati meri kya hai? Kyun shalu muhjse nafarat karti hai?

Sha: Is sawal ka jawab me tumhe abi dai ti hoon. Bachpan se le kar aaj tak sab ko tumhi pasand ho. Tumhara utna batna sab ko pasand hai. Sakt jelously hai muge tumse. Sorry vidya par kya karoon.

V: Umm koi bat nai hai shalu. Bano mein to ye asa chalta rata hai. They both hug. Shalu thinks to her self: Par vidya ye sab ab ur nai chale ga. Muhjse tumhari ye khoobsurti aur bolapan nai bardash hota. Ye hum sab ke liye vacation hoga par tumhara liye tumhari khoobsurti aur bolapan ke akri din. Sorry vidya but you won't come back beautiful and sweet but the ugliest thing ever.

Precap: Shalu, Chandra, and Vidya are taking a test. Vidya is tensed and all she can think about is Sagar.


Edited by bmtd11 - 04 July 2008 at 10:17am

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chand pari

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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Awwwwsomeee startt...BTW i read your other FF in Apnicommunity everyday and i have to say its relly awsomme...and this too is good..
Pls cont soon Smile
Tariii IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Rayanaa Goldie

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Love the start!!!
How rude is Shalu??? Angry
narmz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 5:50am | IP Logged
omg....moomoo that is jus a really good starting u have to update soon Embarrassed
.Senorita. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Great,Love it Smile
Cont soon
Siddhi_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Awesome beginning.. Cant wait to see what happens next.. Well Done! Big smile
bmtd11 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 7:03am | IP Logged
I am soo glad everyone liked it and thx 4 those of u who read my ff on apnicommunity. i wil defintely update today. hopefully by 2 or 3 clock 4 those of u who live in the us. and thank once again. Smile

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