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FF : RanKan Love? Part20 - 9/7/08 Pg29 (Page 7)

Anjali_18 Newbie

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wow that was so good Clap
aww ranbir being soo nice Wink
plz continue

janu_2006 IF-Sizzlerz

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gr8 part...
desaigirl101 IF-Dazzler

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Part 5

Recap: Ranbir and Kanya locked in the room. Kanya gets hurt and Rabir takes care of her. Kanya is now sleeping on the sofa and Ranbir on another sofa.

So morning comes and the first one to wake up is Ranbir. He sees Kanya sleeping and smiles. In his head : kanya looks cute sleeping. Then he back to reality and just realizes that he still is hasnt gone back. Ranbir places the blanket on Kanya becuz she looks cold. As he was about to turn away from kanya and go she helds his hand. Ranbir turns around. Kanya is trying to sit up.

Kanya: Ranbir dont go yet i want to tell u something.

Ranbir: What do u want chipkali i dont have all day.

Kanya: First of all i was going to say sorry but now i wont becuz of her rude words.

Ranbir: Whats there to say thanks for. We arent even friends.

Kanya: Whatever, i just wanted to say thanx for taking care of me last time. Thats all now u can leave.

Ranbir: Your welcome (with a sexy and sly smile)

He turns and leaves.

In his and friends dorm room:

Sameer: Hey man where have you been all night?

Akshay: Ya dude where were u? What happened between you and Kanya last night?

Ranbir: Nothing happened between us.

Akshay: Come on stop lying i know u must of done something.

Ranbir: Ok i will tell you. When u guys left me and kanya were watching tv. We got into a little argument and she went to her room and slammed the door. Thats it. (Ranbir thinking:if i tell the guys the whole story they will think ranbir nanda has a heart or feelings or a inch of niceness. Ewww and for this chipkali)

Akshay: Hey Ranbir come back to reality. Hello Ranbir what happend?

Ranbir: Oh nothing

Sameer: Ranbir there is something ur not telling us.

Ranbir: Sameer i told u everything.

Sammeer: Ranbir, Akshay and me have known u for years. Ur hiding something from us and we will find out.

Ranbir: Come on u guys u think i am hiding somthing. Fine think that way becuz i am not hiding anything.

From there on he goes to the bathroom to take a shower and freshin up. Afterward he had to help the guys umpact some stuff because they college classes started tomorrow. So the guys started to work after ranbir finished freshing up.

While in Kanya and her friends dorm::

Kajol and Payal entered the living room and saw kanya laying on the couch watching tv.

Kajol & Payal : Good Morning

Kanya: Good Morning, how was last night?

Kajol: Fun is was the best.

Payal: Ya it was fun. So how did it go with Ranbir?

Kanya: know how would u think a saaaaand like him would act if he has no manners and is rude toward ladies...

Kajol: Dont tell me u guys still didnt work this out.

Kanya: Kajol u know how he is..stubborn....

Payal: Kanya u are stubborn tooo

Kanya: Hey!!!! But last night i saw ranbir is very rude. (kanya thinking: if i tell payal and kajol that i think ranbir has a ounce no less than a ounce of sweetness and niceness they would keep annoying me. Its better off if me and Ranbir has hatred in our blood for each other. And anyway he is a saaaand).

Payal: Hey Kanya come back to life. Hey and anyway why are u sleeping on the couch for?

Kanya: Oh sorry. U kno i was sleeping on the couch becuz....ummm i fell asleep watching tv.

Kajol: Oh really, i know ur lying to me. What really happend.

Kanya: nothing kajol

Kajol: If ur not going to tell me fine! I will figure out sooner or later.

Then Payal and Kajol leave to fix their beds. Kanya tries to get up her foot keeps hurting. After so much pain she finally reaches the bathroom to take a shower. She finally finishes and comes out. Payal then takes a shower and afterward Kajol does. They notice Kanya in the kitchen but dont notice her limping. They are all eating breakfast then the door bell rings. Kajol opens the door and it Sameer and Ranbir and Akshay.

Akshay : Hey everyone

Payal: Hey good morning guys.

Ranbir & Sameer : Good Morning!

They all come in.

Payal: Do u guys want to eat some breakfast.

All of the guys: Of Course,Sure.

Kajol: What do u guys want?

Sameer: I want cofee,u,and a kiss

Kajol gives Sameer a kiss on the lips.

Akshay: Can i have a apple.

Kajol: Sure. How about u Ranbir.

Ranbir: Ummm...How about some coffee.

They sit at the big round table. Akshay sits nexts to Payal. Sameer sits next to Kajol. And Ranbir forcingly had to sit next to kanya.

Ranbir: whispers to kanyas ear..."hows ur foot kanya?"

Kanya: It still hurts a lot

Ranbir: a concerned tone

Kanya: Ya

Ranbir: Did anyone notice

Kanya: NO

Ranbir: oh,ok

Kanya: hey saaand amazing that u called me kanya...

Ranbir: Well i forgot that time chipkali....thanks for reminding me.

Then the doorbell rings and Payal opens it....

Who could be at the door...Read the next update to find out.

Ok guys
What do u think about my update
Leave Comments whether positive or negative or both
I want to know what u think

punjabi.princes IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
great update!
continue soon
sravz23 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 5:49am | IP Logged
please continue soon.
u write very well.
Sallu- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 8:17am | IP Logged
theres nothing negative about it its great !
please continue soooooooooon!
KC294 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 9:57am | IP Logged
its brill continue soon pls
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
great part
continue soon

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