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Aways Smile ff rahul muskaan last part up (Page 2)

bhoomikauttam IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
hmmm the story is on fast track.. nice to see Rahul and muskan story.. we r missign that in DMG... I find them also cute.. nice part... Big smile
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
Aww that was so cute! Fab part! Clap Clap Clap

Are you gonna include AR's love story too? Embarrassed
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 2:24am | IP Logged
hey guys
heres the last part!

last part

How is this all happening??? What's going on?? Muskaan, shocked out of her life breaks off the kiss that made her stomach flip and her heart flutter…

M:     what did you just say?

R:      I said I love you

M:      but….kaise? kab?, yeh saab sapne hai…yeh saab jhoot hai!

R:      nahi muski, yeh jhoot nahi hai.

Saying this he held onto her hand in both his own…not tightly, but not like he wanted to let go anytime soon….

R: when we were 5 years old I fell in love with you     

When you hugged me for the first time, that day in this park, I fell in love with you

When you accidentally tripped me up, and said the sweetest sorry I had ever heard, I fell in love with you

When, on the first day of school, you held my hand because you were scared, I fell in love with you

When were forced to dance together during P.E, I fell in love with you

When I see we fought, I fell in love with you

When I would see you smile I fell in love with you

When you used to call me up in the middle of the night, just to talk or sit there in silence, I fell in love with you

And when I saw you face with tears filling your eyes, after I had announced my engagement to ridhima, I had a feeling that maybe, just maybe you were in love with me too.    

with a tentative smile, rahul looked into muskaans eyes which were filling with tears

Arrey Muskaan, aab kyu ro rahe hai? (y r u crying)

M: I'm crying because I'm happy you idiot
I … I love you too Rahul!

Rahul kissed away Muskaan tears, and brought her into a passionate kiss that took her breath away and gave it back.

R: ab no more crying ok? Smile Muskaan, always smile.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You are cordially invited to the wedding of
Rahul Garewal
+
Muskaan Chadda

31st December 2008
juvz Groupbie
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 3:41am | IP Logged
hey...
a very good attempt..
please write some more long ones..
alll the best..
seeya..

Edited by juvz - 24 May 2008 at 3:41am
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 5:18am | IP Logged

Originally posted by juvz

hey...
a very good attempt..
please write some more long ones..
alll the best..
seeya..

 

thank u sooooooo much

 

peaceSmile

bhoomikauttam IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Hi zen,

oyee yeh to bahot fast tha.... hope it wasnt imprompt one.. It was nice .. but felt u really rushed it out soon... hope to read some more in future... and loved that u wrote the story with M & R in mind... Big smile
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Woot! That was really short, but very sweettt! It's really nice to read about RM too, for DMG isn't focusing on them as much! Great story, do continue writing FF's! Clap Clap Clap
zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 5:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by bhoomikauttam

Hi zen,

oyee yeh to bahot fast tha.... hope it wasnt imprompt one.. It was nice .. but felt u really rushed it out soon... hope to read some more in future... and loved that u wrote the story with M & R in mind... Big smile

thank u soooo much for reading my ff Smile

ya, im gonna post my second ff on here soon, maybe today

gonna be on rm aswell, so pls read that one if u like rmSmile

okiez

peace

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