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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 3:31am | IP Logged
hei zen WOOWW.. another rm fic!.... Embarrassed it's sooooo sweet... cont sooooooooon............... Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
Lovely Somni lekin very short yaar! Continue soon!


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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
hey guys
heres part 3!

Rahul stared at the beautiful girl sitting on the swing of his childhood playground.
She looked breathtaking…her curls covering her face, and her duppata dancing in the soft breeze
~
Muskaan
~
She heard his voice breath her name
She looked up slowly, afraid she was imagining it
~
Rahul?
~
Her tears glistened in the moonlight
He couldn't bear to see her in pain
The fact he may be the cause made him hate himself
~
Rahul, what are you doing here?
It's your engagement tonight!
Her eyes brimmed with fresh tears, remembering the reason for all this confusion, this sadness…
~
There was one thing that Rahul could not handle and that was Muskaan crying
Seeing her tears, he closed the remaining space between them and clasped her hand in his, and caressed her cheek with his other free hand…
Rahul…
Tum kya kar rahe ho?
What about ridhima? Your engagement?
~
Muskaan,
Na koi ridhima, na koi armaan
Just you and me
And one truth in this web of lies we both had a hand in creating
~
Which is? - Muskaan tried to say this as normal as possible, given her heart was beating were so loud she was sure that Rahul could hear
~
The truth is….
I love you
~
Saying this, Rahul leaned in and kissed Muskaan, the love of his life,
In a sweet slow kiss, that communicated his immense love for her   


Edited by zen girl - 12 May 2008 at 10:47pm

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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
Oh my god! Somni!!!!! That was beautiful and yet again SHORT! Embarrassed Beautiful! Please continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
thanz sooooo much
yeh but im not getting many replies Confused
does no one else like it? Cry

LOL
iv got about maybe 3-4 more parts planned
so will be posted soon

if anyone cares Cry Cry Cry
LOL melodrama over LOL

luvx sommi
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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Don't worry Somni. It just needs time to be recognized. That happens with all new FFs. Mine were the same way and now thank god, I get many replies. As long as you write from the heart, it's all that matters. I'll still comment! I think ur FF is beautiful! Embarrassed
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
please add ur FF to the DMG Media centre thread so gagan can update the main page..

Please add title and link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=793563

Love Kat
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
hey guys
heres the last part!

Part 4 (last part)

How is this all happening??? What's going on?? Muskaan, shocked out of her life breaks off the kiss that made her stomach flip and her heart flutter…

M:     what did you just say?

R:      I said I love you

M:      but….kaise? kab?, yeh saab sapne hai…yeh saab jhoot hai!

R:      nahi muski, yeh jhoot nahi hai.

Saying this he held onto her hand in both his own…not tightly, but not like he wanted to let go anytime soon….

R: when we were 5 years old I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When you hugged me for the first time, that day in this park, I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When you accidentally tripped me up, and said the sweetest sorry I had ever heard, I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When, on the first day of school, you held my hand because you were scared, I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When were forced to dance together during P.E, I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When I see we fought, I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When I would see you smile I fell in love with you Embarrassed

When you used to call me up in the middle of the night, just to talk or sit there in silence, I fell in love with you Embarrassed

And when I saw you face with tears filling your eyes, after I had announced my engagement to ridhima, I had a feeling that maybe, just maybe you were in love with me too. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

with a tentative smile, rahul looked into muskaans eyes which were filling with tears Embarrassed

Arrey Muskaan, aab kyu ro rahe hai? (y r u crying)

M: I'm crying because I'm happy you idiot
I … I love you too Rahul!

Rahul kissed away Muskaan tears, and brought her into a passionate kiss that took her breath away and gave it back.

R: ab no more crying ok? Smile Muskaan, always smile.


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You are cordially invited to the wedding of
Rahul Garewal
+
Muskaan Chadda

31st December 2008

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