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Always Smile ff rahul muskaan last part!

zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 1:30am | IP Logged

Ok, so this is my first ever fanfic, and it's about Rahul and Muskaan from dmg


Just bear in mind that I am not from India, and have never actually learnt Hindi, just the stuff from movies and serials!





Part 1



15 years ago…


'yeh kya Muskaan?'

'ha muskaaaaaaaaaaaan yeh kya?'

The older boys sneer as they pull one of her curls-


'STOP IT! Stop teasing her!'

A cute little boy with anger raging in his eyes comes charging towards the two bullies, and hits the bigger one square in the jaw, while the other runs off…


The little boy comes slowly towards Muskaan, as if afraid he might scare her if he came any faster

'Muskaan…tum theek to ho na Muskaan?'

'me..Mein theek hoon Rahul'

She says this even as a small tear escapes her large auburn eyes

'Rahul' she sighs, and couldn't hold it in any longer…she launches herself into his arms,

'Ro mat Muskaan, smile….always smile' saying this he hugs her tighter as her sobs cease, and a small smile appears on her face


Present day

Her eyes filled with tears as memories of her past…their past, came into her mind. That was the first time Muskaan saw Rahul as something other than the obnoxious boy her parents made her be nice to at get togethers and picnics. That was the day Muskaan saw something different.

She saw her hero. 


The taxi lunged forward. Traffic.

What else could go wrong?


He had to find her…

Where is she? Where is she????

It was his engagement, one of the most important days of his life and she chooses now to be angry with him?

'Muskaan….where are you'

Saying this he bolts towards the door…..


Edited by zen girl - 23 May 2008 at 8:56pm

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zen girl Senior Member
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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
17 views~no replies??

no one liked it Cry

well even so feel free to critisize!
i wont cry lol!

Edited by zen girl - 09 May 2008 at 11:52pm
kamx2 Goldie

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Hey ther! Its reli gud...i reli liked the the childhood memory...its reli nice, u should definitely continue with it!
Karan.T IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Very nice Clap Clap
shockalot IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:40am | IP Logged
hey Sommi, great part!
I like how they've known each other since childhood, is it their engagement? Why's she mad?
Continue soon! Embarrassed
-Mansi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Woow..its really continue..The starting para is so cute! Embarrassed
Jenifer. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:18am | IP Logged
great stuff!
shelly IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:18am | IP Logged
yh really cute and nice

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