Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 33)

~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

Joined: 24 February 2008
Posts: 1136

Posted: 22 July 2008 at 11:39am | IP Logged
woow sonia, i sooooo loved it, plzzzzzz cont soon,tooo eager to know what's going to happenBlushing
lovedddddddd it tooooo muchClap

_shizzzyy_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 February 2008
Posts: 3612

Posted: 22 July 2008 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Sonia tht was AMAZING!! loved da part..plzz continue soon!Smile
cherrgirl2711 Groupbie

Joined: 28 March 2008
Posts: 93

Posted: 22 July 2008 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
DAt was WORTH all the wait !!!!!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KSD4ever Senior Member

Joined: 13 February 2008
Posts: 214

Posted: 23 July 2008 at 3:59am | IP Logged
continue soon i love it
sonikudi1 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 September 2006
Posts: 4683

Posted: 24 July 2008 at 10:49am | IP Logged

Thanks for the commentsEmbarrassed

        Manya and Akash entered his house, hand in hand. No one was home so they had nobody to face.  Manya was shivering in the cold, her dupatta tightly wrapped against her body. She sat down in front of a fireplace, her teeth shattering. Her maang showed her red sindoor. Akash sat down and they both looked at each other. Akash lifted his hands and slowly bent close to her. Manya looked up at him.
M: Akash? Yeh humne kiya kya?
A: Pyar kiya hai, Manya.
M: Kya tum jaante ho, yeh sindoor bar ker hum dhono-
A: Saath janamu ke rishte mein band gaye hain? Tho, haan, Manya, main yeh jaanta hoon. Aur main yeh vaada kerta hoon, ki main hamesha tumhara saath dhoon ga.
        Manya smiled. From outside, heavy rain pounded on the windows. They looked out and saw lightening strike. Manya shivered. Akash looked at her. Manya felt his gaze and looked up at him.
        Akash bent close to her, his breathing growing heavier. He stared into her eyes with a naughty smile and a loving glint in his eye. Manya swallowed in, her breath getting caught in her throat. She stared at him nervously and edged back as their bodies touched.
M: Akash-
        She stood up quickly and turned away shyly. Akash smiled knowingly and stood up, walking after her. The music of PKEK played as he suddenly bent down and gathered his arms around her legs, pulling her in his arms. Manya watched confusedly as he sat her down on a swing and walked away. A few minutes he returned, a plate in hand. Manya laughed as he sat down, revealing food in his plate. He picked up a bite and put it Manya's mouth.
A: Tumhe bookh lagi hogi na?
M: Hmm. Aur tumhe?
         She picked up another bite and placed it in his mouth. Akash smiled.
         As they finished eating, Manya glanced around.
M: Mujhe ghar jaana hai.
A: Ab yeh tumhara ghar hi tho hai...
         Manya stared at him as she remembered the sindoor over her head. Akash raised his eyes.
M: Akash, main yahan tho-
A: Tum meri patni ho, Manya.
M: Akash, mere parents nahin jaante yeh sab hua hai. Aur nahi tumhare parents jaante hain...
A: Bahaar baarish bahut zyada hai, Manya. Mausam kharaab hai. Aur mere parents aaj raat nahin lautein ge, I'm sure of that. And even if they do, tum meri patni ho ab. Mujhe haq hai, Manya. Tumhare ma baap samaj jayein ge ki mausam kharaab tha aur iss liye tum nahin ayee!
        Manya swallowed. Akash nodded his head.
A: Trust me, Manya.
        He picked her up in his arms again and headed upstairs. Manya stared at him, her heart racing, as he entered his bedroom. Manya glanced around nervously.
M: Akash?
A: Sshh...
        The music of PKEK played again as he laid her down on his bed. Manya felt all her energy fade away as he bent down. But to her surprise, he whispered,
A: Good night.
        He stood up and walked away, smiling. Manya stared after him as he sat on the couch.
M: Akash...?
A: Good night, sweetheart.
        Manya laughed and closed her eyes, slowly falling asleep. Akash stayed up and stared at her with a sweet smile. He stood up and put a blanket over her, kissing her forehead softly. He sat down on the ground near the edge of the bed, putting his head over it. His eyes slowly drooped as they both fell asleep...
Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 January 2008
Posts: 15022

Posted: 24 July 2008 at 11:22am | IP Logged
wowowow cute part really
_shizzzyy_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 February 2008
Posts: 3612

Posted: 24 July 2008 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
aww tht was so cute!Embarrassed plz continue asap =]
ttimpy Senior Member

Joined: 03 April 2008
Posts: 922

Posted: 24 July 2008 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
oh wow.........they wont get carried away.......or do u plan was a sweet when will they let their parents know.........

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Zindagi..Teri Meri Kahani(RN)urgnt nt pg116(29/10)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 119 120

Author: Sweet-Lioness   Replies: 956   Views: 129922

Sweet-Lioness 956 129922 10 November 2017 at 3:43pm by Shaina_b
Hamari Adhuri Kahani (SK/AR) pt46 pg86

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 89 90

Author: Harshuillisious   Replies: 715   Views: 82248

Harshuillisious 715 82248 20 February 2012 at 5:34am by golu_1677
Ek Fauji Ki Kahani...RN fic Ch. 9 on 18/12 pg 13

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 14 15

Author: -yashika-   Replies: 113   Views: 34734

-yashika- 113 34734 13 June 2010 at 3:48pm by poojabi
Pyar Hi Pyar AR FF

Author: HeAvEnS   Replies: 6   Views: 6480

HeAvEnS 6 6480 20 July 2009 at 5:56am by vruls
meher and preet/pyar he pyar/PART1 pg1

Author: bulbul123   Replies: 8   Views: 3851

bulbul123 8 3851 22 September 2008 at 1:06am by lil_desi_goddes

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index