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~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 33)

sonikudi1 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 3:18pm | IP Logged

Okay, so I stink at keeping this FF in my reach because I always lose it. But thanks to ttimpy, I finally found it...againLOL. Thanks so muchHug

Recap- Akash informs Manya that his father does not agree to their marriage. He fills her maang and says no one can separate them now. They go to his house where he feeds her with his own hands and have some cute moments. Akash insists on not letting Manya go home because it is raining outside, and they are also married now. Manya sleeps on the bed whereas Akash sits down on the edge and falls asleep.

::Update::

Manya woke up with a start as she heard a door slam. Akash shifted, blinking slowly as he opened his eyes.
M: Akash, yeh awaaz-
Akash turned to the door and stood up, rubbing his eyes.
M: Koi aya hai, Akash!
They both stood up, walking to the doorway. Just as Akash was about to open it, the door burst in. Manya jumped back as an eldery man, dressed in a black suit glared down on them.
A: Dad-
Manya felt her heart fall. Mr. Rathod stared from Akash to Manya. His eyes turned towards the bed, where the comforter was turned as Manya had just awoken. His eyes grew red in rage.
A: Dad, aisi koi baat-
AD: AKASH RATHOD! MAINE APNI ZINDAGI MEIN NAHIN SOCHA THA KI TUM MERE FAISALE KE KHILAAF JAO GE, AUR WOH BHI ISS LADKI-
He stopped talking as he suddenly saw the sindoor in Manya's maang. Manya inhaled deeply.
M: Uncl-
Mr. Rathod suddenly raised his hand, slapping her hard.
A: DAD!
AD: JUST SHUT UP!
He turned to see a servant behind them.
AD: Iss ladki ke pitah ko call karo. Abhi issi waqt!
Manya breathed in nervously. No one would understand. They never even slept on the same bed.
A: For what, huh? Yeh meri patni hai!
AD: MAIN AISI BHOOL KO NAHIN MAANTA!
A: YEH BHOOL NAHIN HAI! She's my love, goddamit!
AD: I don't give a damn, Akash!
A: Aap aisa nahin ker sakte, Dad! I love her! For once, aap meri baat maane please!
AD: Tumhari baatein hi maanta aya! Aaj tak maine tumhari hi baat maani, Akash! But how can you disgrace your father like that? I raised you all my life and I don't even have the right to choose your bride?
A: You do, Dad, you do! But don't I have some right over my life?
Mr. Rathod's face looked stunned.
AD: Saari umar Ma Baap bachun ki parvarish mein guzarte hain, Akash. Maine bhi guzaari.
His eyes filled up as he raised his hand to his face.
AD: Yeh-yeh ungli pakar ker tumne chalna seekha! Iss seene per ser rakh ker tum saute thay! In kandhun per bait ker khelte thay! Oos waqt nahin tumhe yeh apni zindagi yaad ayee, huh?
A: Dad-
AD: ENOUGH! Koi baap apne baite se apni zindagi ka hisaab nahin maangta. Hamara farz hota hai ki hum tumhe bara karein! Lakein yeh baap aaj tumse maangta hai. Maine jitne saal tumhari parvarish mein lagaye, unka einaam dho mujhe! Mujhe unka hisaab dho, Akash!
A: Main Manya ko nahin chod sakta.
AD: AS LONG AS YOU LIVE UNDER MY ROOF, YOU WILL MARRY KIRAN!
A: THEN FINE! MUJHE NAHIN CHAHIYE AAPKA YEH GHAR!
He grabbed Manya's hand.
M: Akash, nahin-
Akash pulled her down the stairs.
AD: AGAR TUMHARE KADAM ISS CHAAR DIVAARI SE BAHIR PARAY THO-
Akash kept walking angrily. He opened the door. They both stopped, shocked. Manya's mother, dressed in a beige sari, stared at them. Her cheeks were stained with tears.
Manya held her breath as her father stepped up behind her mother. Manya swallowed nervously, clutching Akash's hand tighter.
MD: Let go of my daughter's hand.
Mr. Rathod walked downstairs.
AD: I suggest you take your daughter away from here. Right now.
MD: MERI BETI KA HAATH CHODO!
M: Papa-
He raised his hand, about to slap her. But Akash suddenly grabbed his arm.
A: Meri patni per koi haath utaye, yeh main bardaasht nahin kerta!
MD: HOW DARE YOU!
AD: AKASH, LET GO OF HER!
A: NO!
He began to walk outside. He stopped as he felt someone elses hands cover his free hand softly. He stopped and turned, surprised.
He saw Manya's mother, crying, holding onto him. He let go of his hand and folded her hands in front of him.
M: Ma-
MM: Meri beti mujhe lauta dho, Akash.
She held out her sari as if begging. Manya's tear fell down in it.
AM: Meri beti mujhe lauta dho. Tumhe iss ma ka vaasta. Meri beti mujhe dhay dho!
Akash looked at Manya and saw the tears rolling down her cheeks as she looked at her mother. He suddenly let go of her hand.
She stared at him, shocked.
M: Akash-
Akash stared down, his eyes welling up.
M: Akash, yeh tum-
Manya's mother held onto her, crying.
MM: Chal, beti, chal! Yeh tera ghar nahin hai!
As they pulled her away, she stared back at him in shock. Him filling her maang flashed in her mind.
M: Akash!
Akash looked up, staring at her. She was being dragged away. From him.


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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
awww soo sadd i want manya akash to be togther  as want both parents to be friendss not as revengg all the time
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
aww tht was so sad!!
Thanks 4 pming me Sonia =]
Hope Akash goes and gets her soon!!
Loved da part.
Plzz cont. soonSmile
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
so u finally managed to find the FF.....soniye...........but what a twist........u love to give us shocks............lets see how u resolve the crisis........slapping session bahut ho gaya yaar............
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
that was sooooooooo touching......!!!!!!!!!! i luved it
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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
thanx for the pm......u finally updated....... my commnet:
 
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! u cant separate them please make them come bck together.... the parents are jus hurt dat they didnt listen tothem n manya's mum i thought she would support them cnt believe she did dat.......cant wait for nxt part pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 August 2008 at 11:54pm | IP Logged

AMAZING! This story is so different from all the others! Please continue soon!!!

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Posted: 14 August 2008 at 12:10am | IP Logged
soo sadd!..hope they unite soon!

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