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~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 23)

_shizzzyy_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 9:54am | IP Logged
OMG NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Cry y is this always happening to Akash and Manya! and its alwayz b/c of tht Karan!!!!

Edited by s3exicuti4lyfe - 20 June 2008 at 9:55am

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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Awwww Cry its really sad...but i love the suspens LOL btw beautiful writhen part! ur just fabulOusss !! Big smile continue sooooooon! Wink Clap
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Posted: 20 June 2008 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
Yaar! You have to update today! We've all waited sooo much! Please! Please! Please! Don't torture us yaar! LOL
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Let me not torture anyone anymore LOL Hope you like the next part! Embarrassed

Manya woke up from her bed with a startle, suddenly afraid. The windows flew open, shattering a vase on the table. Manya breathed heavily. What was going on?
    Manya laid back down on her bed, anxiously looking outside the window. Still no sign of Akash...
    The phone rang, disrupting the silence of the night. Ring, ring. Manya picked it up.
M: Hello?
     Silence. A heavy breathing, as if trying to deliver a message.
M: Hello??
     Finally, a voice spoke. A voice full of emotions; love, sorrow, regret, guilt...a voice which belonged to Manya's love.
A: I-
M: Akash!
A: Manya-
M: Akash? Kya hua? Tum-tum teek ho na, Akash?
A: I'm sorry, Manya...
     She heard a click on the line as Akash's voice faded away. She rested the phone down, scared. Akash's voice did not seem normal. Was he crying? Was he in pain?
     Manya picked up the phone again and dialed his number. No answer. The phone rang infinitely, no message, no nothing.
M: Akash, kya hua tumhe?
     She stood up and paced around the room nervously. What could she do? She picked up the phone and dialed his house number. His mother answered.
AM: Hello?
M: Um, Akash there?
AM: Nahin, beta. Woh tho kabse bahaar hai.
M: Oh, okay, aunty. Thank you.
     Manya bit her lower lip nervously. Why did Akash's voice sound so full of sorrow? As if those words were the last words he'd be saying to her? He sounded so out of breath...
     She picked up the phone book and looked up Om's phone number, dialing it with shaking hands.
Om: Helloo?
     His voice sounded as if he were sleeping.
M: Uh, Om...tum jaante ho Akash kahan hai?
Om: No. Kahin bahaar hi tha, I think. I don't know.
M: Game ke bahaad woh kahan gaya tha?
Om: Kisi hotel room mein...
     Manya's hear pumped faster. Karan had been in a hotel room, too!
M: Kya?
Om: Yeah, all I know is that Kiran followed him and that was that...
     Manya's heart suddenly sank. Kiran had followed him? To a hotel room?
M: Um, thanks.
     She hung up the phone. Akash couldn't do this to her. Could he? Why would Kiran follow Akash to the hotel room?? Did they-
     Manya clasped her hands against her ears. So this is why he had called. To apologize because he felt guilty. Guilty for playing with her heart.
     Manya picked up another vase and swung it across the window, screaming in anger.
     Her phone suddenly rang again. She grabbed it angrily.
"Hello, is this Manya Sharma?"
M: Who is this?
"Hum hospital se call ker rahe hain. Akash Rathod has been admitted here, and he's saying your name repeatedly..."
M: HOSPITAL? Woh teek hai na? Is he okay?
"He's lost a large amount of blood. Abhi kuch nahin keh sakte. Behthar hoga aap yahan ajayein..."
M: Main arahi hoon! He's alone? Kya hua?
"Yeh police report hai. Koi Ms. Kiran leker ayee hain inhe.."
    Manya swallowed.
M: Um, yeah, I'll be there...
   She hung up nervously. Akash was in the hospital. Why? How? And why was Kiran with him?


Manya reached the hospital, running to the receptionist.
M: Akash Rathod?
R: Unko surgery ke liye leker gaye hain. Aap kaun?
M: Manya Sharma.
R: Oh, yes. Aapka naam le rahe thay woh, and aapka number unke wallet se mila. Filhaal koi Kiran hain unke saath-just go straight and turn left.
    Manya ran across the hallway and turned left, only to find Kiran seated on the chairs. Manya marched upto her.
M: Kya hua Akash ko?
    Kiran glared up at her.
K: Kya hua? Why don't you just admit it?
K: Haan! Tumhare Jai Shree ke ghundu ne bechaare Akash ko itna maara ki-
M: Jai Shree ke-?
K: Haan! Woh sab tumhari chaal thi na? You yelled at him by purpose, so he would come after you and-
M: Come after me? Tho woh hotel room mein kyun gaya, followed by YOU?
    Kiran looked surprised at her question for a second, but then she smiled.
K: Sawaal ka jawaab tumne khud diya hai, Manya.
    Manya was taken aback.
M: What?
K: Hotel room mein, main aur Akash kya ker sakte thay?
    Manya glared at her. She raised her hand and slapped Kiran, hard.
    Kiran raised her finger in Manya's face.
K: Watch it!
M: No, you watch it! Akash agar tumhare saath tha, tho why would he come after me?
K: Because he felt guilty, that's all. Woh dil ka acha insaan hai. Aur tumhare paas woh yeh aane ke liye keh raha tha, that he just used you!
    Manya's eyes were blurred by tears.
M: Why would he do that?
    Kiran laughed bitterly.
K: Simple, Manya. Tum ho Jai Shree se, and we're AD.
M: College ki ek choti si rivarly woh yun nahin nikaal sakta-
K: Oh yeah? Well, get over it. Akash ke liye jeetna sabse zaroori hai, yeh yaad rakhna. Aur Jai Shree ki ek haar mein hamari khushi hai, Manya.
M: You're such a-
K: Uh, uh, uh! Don't waste your time, sweetheart. I don't need to get cursed by a sloppy firsts!
     The words stung Manya hard. She looked at the operation theatre. So Akash had taken her name out of guilt. Out of pure sympathy, pity.
     She looked at Kiran, who was smiling victoriously, and ran out of the hospital, crying.


Akash woke up, breathing heavily. Kiran raced to his side as the doctor checked him.
A: Kiran-Manya-Manya kahan-
K: I'm sorry, Akash.
A: Kya?
K: Maine ussai bahut samjaya...lakein...
A: Lakein kya?
K: She didn't come.
     Akash stared at her. He stood up.
A: Nain! Woh aisi nahin hai!
     Kiran raced to him.
K: Akash! Lay down! Tumhari tabiyat teek nahin hai!
A: Nahin! Mujhe Manya se milna hai-
K: Aur kya kaho ge? She said she just used you, Akash! SHE SAID IT!
     Akash stared at her, stunned.
     Akash stared at her angrily. Kiran held a nurse's arm.
K: Aapne Manya ko call ki thi na?
N: Yes.
A: Woh aisa nahin ker sakti-woh aisa-
K: Oos ne kiya hai, Akash. She USED you!
     Akash stared at the mirror at himself, covered in bandages. Why? Because of her.
     He punched the mirror. Kiran screamed as the blood poured out. The doctors raised to his side but he pushed them away angrily.
A: Tumne aisa kyun kiya, Manya?
     And from outside, Manya yelled up at the sky,
M: Tumne aisa kyun kiya, Akash?

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
OMG i hate Kiran!! plzz get them bac 2gether fast!! luved da part...plzz continue soon!! dyin to read da next parts! Big smile
Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
wowowowo nice part but kiran is suchh a bichhhhhhhhhh how coud she doo thiss she sooo meann makinggg up storyyyy soo gett whats her problam jai sai manya didnt care if they losee AD Angry
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
wow!!! amazing :)
eternal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
love your ff dear just read all of it...kiran is so ughh i dont even start with her...screw the damn colleges...and how can they just fall for it...oh well do continue soon love this ff Clap

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