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~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 23)

pakirani Goldie

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 12:06am | IP Logged
wohooo!!!! loved that part a lot!!! go manya Clap Clap Clap

Edited by pakirani - 23 June 2008 at 12:06am

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 7:54am | IP Logged
wow what a part!! Clap loved itt continue soooooon Wink Tongue
~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
woohhoooo, goooo manya, now girl you are hot, and kiran got what she deserved, that's what she get's if she messes with akash's love and akash is such a idiot, he has become sooo bhola bhala LOL
loved it sonia, i was toooo good, especilly when manya taught kiran a lesson LOL plzzzz cont soon,
thanks soooo much for updating quick Hug
sonikudi1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the comments like always! Hug

 The next part is inspired a bit from DMG, but I thought it fit the track well! Next part will be original once again!Smile

   The next day, Akash entered the coffee shop dressed in a sexy white T-shirt and blue jeans. He asked for a cup of coffee and waited.
   The waiter brought him the coffee, placing it on the table. As soon as Akash looked down, he saw a smiley face made out of whipped cream. He looked up confusedly but saw no one.
A: Okayy...
   After finishing his coffee, he got up to pay the bill.
W: No, sir. Your bill has already been paid.
A: Paid? By whom?
    The waiter just smiled and walked away. Akash shrugged and walked out of the coffee shop. The moment he stepped out, he bumped into someone.
A: Hey, watch it-
    He stopped as he realized it was Manya. She had a huge smile pasted on her face. Akash gave her a funny look but began to walk away.
M: Akash!
    He stopped but didn't turn. Manya raced upto him, her smile growing larger.
M: Hi!
    Akash narrowed his eyes at her angrily. Manya's smile went away as she made a pouting face.
M: Ghussa ho?
    She smiled again and held her ears.
M: I'm sorry.
    Her voice came out as sweet and innocent. Akash rolled his eyes and began to walk away when Manya grabbed his arm. Several people in the street looked at them as some students from the coffee shop stepped out.
M: Singing
Kaise Batau Tujhe Baat Jiya Ki
Janu Main To Janu Sari Chaal Piya Ki

    Akash turned, surprised. He shook his head at her and began to walk away when Manya stepped in front of him. She grabbed his collar and traced her finger across his cheek.
M: Jaan Mera Loote Loote
Ratiyan Jagaye Mujhe
Sajna Anari Baiman...

    Akash stepped out of her grip and began to walk away. Manya crossed her arms knowingly and suddenly grabbed a guy's hand, putting it on her shoulder.
M: Chodo mujhee!
    Akash turned, like she had expected, and grabbed the guy's collar angrily. Manya started to giggle. Akash looked at her and noticed it was an act. He let go of the guy's collar and grabbed her arms.
A: Kya chahiye tumhe?
M: Akash, woh sab Kiran ki chaal thi. She lied to you and me.
A: What?
    Manya quickly told him how she had heard Kiran talking.
A: And you believed her?
    Manya frowned.
M: Um, hello, you did too!
A: But still. Mujhe chaut lagi thi, Manya. Hospital mein tha main. You didn't care about that. Main jaane kitna bhi ghussai mein hota, agar tumhe kuch hota, tho tumhare liye sab bhula dhaita. And you? You just left me without even asking me anything.
    He let go of her, tears filling in his eyes. He walked away angrily. Manya teasingly ran upto him.
M: Akash!
A: Manya! Go away.
M: Abhi tak naraaz ho?
A: You know what? Forget this. I-I don't need you!
    He pushed her out of the way as the Hum Tum music played. Manya rolled her eyes.
M: Akash Rathod, tum tho sirf mere ho. Aur agar sachai ne tumhari aankhein nahin kholi, no problem then.
    She smiled to herself.
M: I have other plans!

Manya held Akash's arms as he stopped from going away. He turned and looked at her, love sparkling in his eyes. Manya walked upto him, their hearts both racing...


Edited by sonikudi1 - 23 June 2008 at 4:24pm
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
awww cute part...manya is trying to prove the truth and buddhu akash but im sure they'll be together soon thats what the promo continue soon Clap Clap
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwwww wowowowowow manya have do something tht akash beleived her truth of kirann
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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
tht was soo cute! loved the part..plzz continue soon Smile
pakirani Goldie

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
awwww thats cute!!! continue soon priya! cant wait to read it Big smile

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