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~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 16)

~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

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Posted: 24 May 2008 at 4:25am | IP Logged
same here bahar, i also can't wait, i am ssoooooo impatiante, i just loved it and gosh manya has some temper i loved it sonia, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon Embarrassed Embarrassed

Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15024

Posted: 24 May 2008 at 8:54am | IP Logged
wowowwowwww really akash is soo cuteeeeeee i love the part cant wait to read next part
pakirani Goldie

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Posts: 1715

Posted: 24 May 2008 at 10:30am | IP Logged
omg!!!!! i loved it!!!! i was dying to read ur FF's for a long time!!! LOL plzzzz dont make us wait any longer LOL   
kisna_xox Groupbie

Joined: 19 April 2008
Posts: 53

Posted: 25 May 2008 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
i waited two days... still no update... :( .... please update soon
sonikudi1 IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4683

Posted: 28 May 2008 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
Manya entered the park at eight in the night, wearing a green and red churidaar dress. Her hair flew behind her as she entered the park, looking around.
M: Koi hai?
   As she entered further into the park, a chilly breeze blew. It was silent, only the voice of Manya's breathing echoing in her ears.
M: Anyone here?
   She turned around and noticed a balloon hung next to a tree. She walked over to the balloon and read it. It read "AM."
M: Kaun-
   Someone suddenly leaned on the tree, surprising her. She jumped back and saw...Akash!
M: Akash!
A: Hi, Manya.
M: Uh, hi-
A: AM. You like it?
   Manya looked at him.
M: What does it stand for?
   He smiled and walked close to her, making her edge back into the tree.
A: Tumhe nahin patha?
   Manya swallowed nervously.
M: Nahin.
A: Tho phir main batha dhoon?
M: Bathao...
   They were whispering, both of their bodies inches away from each other.
A: It means...
    Manya raised her eyes to meet his gaze.
A: Akash. Manya.
    The music of PKEK began to play as Manya stared into his eyes intently.
A: Akash. Manya. Akash and Manya.
    Manya smiled and pushed him, walking away. He smiled and grabbed her hand.
A: Aye, Ms. Attitude.
    Manya nervously turned back.
A: Pehle yeh tho bathao, Akash aur Manya tumhe kaise lage?
    Manya smiled, looking down.
M: Perfect.
    Laughing, she pulled away her wrist and ran away, sitting on a swing shyly.
A: Oy hoy!
    He walked over to her and sat down, smiling. Manya looked up at him.
A: Ek baat poochoon?
M: Poocho.
A: Tumhare dil ke kareeb koi hai?
    Manya smiled.
M: Tumhare dil ke kareeb koi hai?
A: Hai.
    Manya looked up at him.
M: Kaun?
A: Wohi...jisne meri raatoon ki neendh chura li ho...
M: Raat ko saune nahin dhaiti?
A: No. Ek pal ki liye bhi nahin.
   Manya crossed her arms.
M: Phir tho woh bahut buri hui na?
A: Aye! Ussai buri muth kaho.
M: Acha? Kyun?
A: Woh meri jaan hai.
   Manya stared at him.
M: Kaun hai tumhari jaan?
A: Batha dhoon-yaan dikha dhoon?
M: Dikha dhoon mathlab?!
   Akash grinned. He lightly held her hand and walked her to a corner, where something was covered.
M: Uski tasveer hai?
   Akash smiled. He pulled away the cloth.
A: Nahin. Woh khud hai.
   Manya stared at herself in the mirror. It was a mirror, revealing her image. Manya looked up.
   Akash raised Manya's chin to himself and whispered,
A: Kaisi lagi meri jaan?
   Manya blushed.
M: Kitna pyar karte ho apni jaan se?
A: Sheeshe mein mere uska saaya hai. Tanhai mein woh meri parchai hai...aur mehfil mein...woh mera asmaan hai...
   He walked close to Manya, pushing her hair back as he said those words. He whispered in her ears,
A: Ab tumhari baari, Manya.
   Manya swallowed nervuosly.
A: Tumhare dil ke kareeb kaun hai?
   Manya looked up at him.
M: Woh, jo mere sapnu mein aker mujhe chedta hai. Woh, jiski baahoon mein apni saari zindagi guzarna chahti hoon...
   Akash smiled.
A: Kaun hai woh?
   Manya suddenly pulled his shirt and pulled him forward, throwing her arms around his neck. She laughed and hugged him tightly!
   Akash laughed.
   He picked her up, her arms still around his neck, and spun around.
Koi tarsa na tha,
Koi tadpa na tha...
Woh mile istherhan...
dil bhi dhadka na tha...

   The wind blew faster, and the AM balloon that was tied flew up into the air. It flew around the sky, its message flying all over...
Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15024

Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
wowowowow sooooo damm cuteeeeee part reallyy plzzzzzz contuied soon
_shizzzyy_ IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3612

Posted: 28 May 2008 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Sonia plzz continue soon!! it was sooo cute!!! luved da part! Embarrassed
~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

Joined: 24 February 2008
Posts: 1136

Posted: 29 May 2008 at 6:28am | IP Logged
yeayyyyyyyyyyyy thy finally said it, well thy showed it LOL but that was amazing, i loved the part where akash said ' aye main mar javan ' LOL Embarrassed
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon sonia i can't wait for the next part Embarrassed Wink

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