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~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 14)

~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
wwwoooowwww that was just amazing, akash loves manya so why dosen't he say it, and manya is the same, LOLplzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon, i am dying for the next part Embarrassed Wink

sonikudi1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Thanks everyone! Embarrassed

   As Akash and Manya's bodies slowly swayed to the music, Manya looked at him.
A: Kya?
M: Ek baat poochon?
A: Hmm...
M: Isn't it funny how we landed from being the worse enemies to-
A: To what?
   Manya blushed.
M: Friends.
   Akash laughed and nodded.
A: Hmm...hey, ab main ek baat poochoon?
M: Poocho.
A: Kya tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai?
   Soft PKEK music began to play as Manya raised her eyes to meet his. He stared into hers, his eyebrows raised.
M: Uh...
A: Itna mushkil sawaal bhi nahin hai.
   Manya rolled her eyes.
M: Noo. I never loved someone.
   Akash nodded his head.
M: Aur tum?
A: Main kya?
M: Kya tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai?
   He laughed, looking up.
A: No. Flirt, yes, lakein pyar...
   Manya shrugged her eyebrows at him.
M: Kyun?
A: Koi mili nahin thi.
   Manya smiled teasingly.
M: Mili nahin thi?
   Akash looked at her, realizing what he had said. He licked his lips.
A: Yeah.
M: Oh? So ab mil gayee?
   She laughed, but he stared at her intently and whispered,
A: I think so.
   Manya stopped laughing and looked at him, surprised. He grinned naughtily again.
M: Acha? Tho kya woh jaanti hai?
A: Probably.
M: Probably?
A: Hrm. You know the song, Ladki Kyun from Hum Tum?
M: Yeaah...
A: Tho bas. Woh line hai na, "Pyar ussai bhi hai magar shuruaat tumhi se chahe..."
   Manya rolled her eyes.
M: Not truuee! Shiyad woh sharma rahi hogi. Shy, you know? Or maybe woh tumhare pyar per abhi yakeen na kerti ho...
   Akash suddenly stopped swaying and bent close to her, making her step back quickly.
A: Tho kaise yakeen dhilaoon ussai?
   Manya swallowed.
M: How should I know? Maybe you should-tell her...
   Akash smiled and stood straight again.
A: Mera aandaz alag hai.
M: Kaise?
A: Jise main pyar karunga, ussai maana hoga that she also loves me.
M: Um, I think I have to go right now-
A: Abhi?
M: Uh, yeah..
A: Okay.
   As Manya began to walk out, he called her.
A: Aye, Ms. Attitude!
M: What?
   He grinned again.
A: Kya tumhe abhi tak koi nahin mila?
   Manya pursed her lips and smiled mockingly.
M: Mila nahin tha!
   Laughing, she raced out of the party. Akash stared after her and laughed to himself.

   Manya sat on her swing, dressed in a cute black little kurti and churidaar pajama. Her hair flew behind her in the wind as she played with a chain around her neck.
   As she looked up, she suddenly saw Akash wave to her.
M: Ak-
   She stopped as he suddenly faded away.
M: Manya, pagal ho gayee hai tu!
   She sat straight on the swing restlessly. She swung the swing, thinking of him.
M: Why am I thinking about him?
   The wind blew as Manya looked up at the moon, smiling as Akash's face came into view.

   Akash stared up at the same moon, sitting in his backyard, sighing. Manya's face kept flashing into his eyes, making him smile.
   The flashback of him pulling her into his car played in his mind and he laughed.
A: Damn. Yeh pehli ladki hai jiske baare mein main itna soch raha hoon...
   Om entered his house and sat down next to him.
Om: Aur kyun soch raha hai?
   Akash looked up, startled.
A: Huh?
Om: Manya ke baare mein tu itna kyun soch raha hai?
A: Tu Roopa ke baare mein nahin sochta?
   Om laughed.
Om: Not like you do. I just want to flirt with her. Jaise tu har ladki se kerta hai. But lately, Akash..
A: Kya?
Om: Chod na, yaar.
A: No, tell me!
   Om looked at him.
Om: Are you in love with Manya?
   Akash stared at Om. He frowned and faced the sky again.
Om: See? Just forget it, maine tho aise hi-
A: I don't know.
Om: Huh?
   Akash looked at him.
A: The answer to your question is, I don't know...
   Om stared at him and then burst out laughing.
A: What?
Om: Akash, you've lost it. Jai Shree ki student...and you...
   Laughing, he walked off. Akash shook his head. As he brought it back up, he suddenly saw Manya's head hovered over him. She grinned at him.
M: Ho gaya hai tujhko tho pyar sajna...lakh kerle tu inkaar sajna...
   As her image suddenly faded, Akash jumped up. He laughed. He continued singing.
A: Hai yeh pyar sajna...lalalalaaaa!

   Manya saw Karan pass her in the hallway, his head bandaged. Manya smirked as she walked by him. He stopped angrily.
K: You got something to say?
   Manya rolled her eyes.
M: To you? Absolutely not.
   Karan glared at her.
K: Watch it, Manya. Aaj yahan tumhara protector nahin hai!
M: Tho kya karlo ge tum? Dho daffa maar kha ker samaj nahin aya?
   Karan raised his finger in her face.
K: Just watch, Manya.
M: I am, Karan.
   She spun on her heel and walked out of the building, Karan glaring after her.
M: Stupid idiot!
   As she drove away, a sudden desire for coffee arose within her. She stopped at a cafe and entered, only to find Akash seated.
M: Tum yahan?
A: Manya! Hi!
M: Hi...
A: Bas, college se aate aate coffee per dhil agaya.
   Akash laughed.
A: Sit. Waiter!
   As Manya ordered a coffee, Akash looked at her.
A: Uh, acha, yeh bathao...tum shaadi kise karogi?
M: Huh?
A: Shaadi kise karogi?
M: Umm...jise main pyar kerti hoon...
A: Aurr woh hai-?
   Manya blushed. He bent closer to her.
A: Koi hai kya jo tumhe raatoon mein satata ho? Jo tumhare khwaboon mein aata ho?
   Manya swallowed her spit.
M: Uh...
W: Coffee, ma'am!
   Manya took the cup of coffee, trying to avoid Akash's question. She quickly sipped it.
   The burning coffee burned her lip.
A: Manya!
   He held her softly, looking at her mouth. Manya stared at him.
   The music of PKEK began to play as he looked up at her. He sat back in his seat, clearing his throat.
A: Are you okay?
M: Yeaah...
   Manya looked at him.
M: Acha, tho tumne oos ladki ko bataya that you love her?
   Akash raised his eyes.
A: No. Lakein...
M: Lakein kya?
   Akash smiled.
A: Soch raha hoon batha hi dhoon...


cutemini Senior Member

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 4:07pm | IP Logged
awesoooommmmmeeeeeeeee. just loved it soooooooooooooo much. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue veryyy sooooooooooon
aqsa_h Newbie

Joined: 29 September 2007
Posts: 49

Posted: 21 May 2008 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
ahh..that is soo cute! Please do continue! Tongue
~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

Joined: 24 February 2008
Posts: 1136

Posted: 21 May 2008 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
aaaawwwww that was sssooooo sweet sonia, plzzzzz cont. soon i hope this time she/he says i love you to each other, if not i will say it to akash then it will be too late for manya to have him LOL and i just loveddddddd the part,
_shizzzyy_ IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3612

Posted: 21 May 2008 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
aww tht was soo cute and romantic..luved it..plzz continue soon Smile
pakirani Goldie

Joined: 21 January 2008
Posts: 1715

Posted: 21 May 2008 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
awww....its sooo cute! loved it sooo much!!!
Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 January 2008
Posts: 15022

Posted: 21 May 2008 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Akash must tell Manya tht he love her cant wait for the next part

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