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~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} (Page 11)

Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
plzzzzzzzzz sonia contuied your next part preety plzzzzzzz

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sonikudi1 IF-Dazzler

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Thank you for the comments! Embarrassed

Akash sat on his hood in front of Manya's bunglow, tapping it with his hands like drumbeats. When she didn't show up, he sang loudly,
    Manya suddenly stepped out from inside, laughing at his singing. He looked up with a smile and suddenly couldn't take his eyes off of her. She was wearing a pink sarwar kameez. The music of PKEK began to play as she reached near him, tucking her hair behind her ear shyly.
M: Hi, Akash.
A: Uh...yeah, hi...
    He looked at Manya with a teasing smile. Manya shrugged her eyebrows.
M: Kya?
A: Aaj kal yeh cultural josh charha hua hai tumper, Manya...
    Manya rolled her eyes. She patted her shoulder teasingly.
M: Bas, socha I look best in everything, so why not try cultural?
    Akash raised his eyebrows.
A: Oh? Best in everything?
M: Yeah! Don't you think so?
    Akash looked her up and down flirtatiously. She blushed.
A: Yeah. Perfect in everything.
    Manya looked up and then quickly looked away, smiling slowly.
M: Chalein?
A: Nahin, nahin. Hills per jaane ki kya zarurat hai. Yahin raat guzaar dhaite hain!
M: Ha-ha! So not funny.
A: I wasn't trying to be funny.
    Manya groaned angrily and sat in his car. He shook his head in her direction.
A: Bait tho aise rahi ho jaise main tumhara driver hoon!
    Manya gave him a narrow eyed look. She opened the door.
M: Mujhe nahin chalna tumhare saath!
A: Aye, Ms. Attitude!
    He grabbed her arm and pulled her back. She looked down at where he was holding her with a nervous look.
A: Tumhara hal tho maine soch liya hai.
M: Acha? Kya?
A: I'm going to take you to the hills and throw you off!
    Manya opened her mouth in shock.
A: Yeah! Ek push and down goes Manya! Vaise bhi halki si ho, aise lage ga jaise koi bee fly ker rahi ho!
A: Yeah. You remind me of a bee!
    Manya glared at him.
A: Dekha. Bee se darr lagta hai ki kahin woh sting na ker dhay. Tumse darr lagta hai ke kahin kaat na khao!
    Manya opened her mouth open, shocked.
    She hit him playfully and he began to laugh.
A: Yaar, plan main bana raha hoon tumhe khatam kerne ka aur tum mujhe hi oopar pohchane lagi ho? Chalein?!
    Manya rolled her eyes and walked back to his car, sitting down. He laughed and followed her in the car.

Halfway out of the city and on a quiet road, Akash turned on his radio to the song "Move Your Body" from Johnny Gaddar.
   Manya groaned and changed the song to "Ajab Si" from OSO. Akash looked at her and flipped the song. Manya glared at him and changed it again. Akash gritted his teeth.
A: Manya.
M: Akash.
A: Song change muth karo!
   He changed the song to "Move Your Body" again. Manya groaned.
M: Akash, have some decency and let the girl choose.
   She changed it again to "Ajab Si." Akash glared at her.
A: Girl? LADKI? TUM?
   Manya narrowed her eyes at him. He laughed and changed the song again.
   They both suddenly pounded on the CD player, hitting random buttons. The songs suddenly both went away and "Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyar" from the movie "Plan" turned on.
Chupake-Chupake Chhup-Chhup Ke Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai
Baadalon Ki Baanhon Men Chaand Jaise Khota Hai
Ishq Ke Nashe Men Deewaana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai
Chupake-Chupake Chhup-Chhup Ke Dil Kisi Ka Hota Hai
Baadalon Ki Baanhon Men Chaand Jaise Khota Hai
Ishq Ke Nashe Men Deewaana Samaan Ho Jaata Hai

   Akash and Manya looked at each other. They both burst out laughing and started singing along.
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Hota Hai Hota Hai
Hota Hai Hota Hai Pyaar Ho Jaata Hai

   They laughed together, Manya clapping and Akash tapping the steering wheel. He opened the sunroof and Manya stood up, waving her hands in the air. They both sang along excitedly.
    Manya was still standing in he sunroof when a strong wind blew. From inside the car, her dupatta lightly flew over his face. He saw the road through a light pink fabric. Manya didn't realize it and kept singing. But Akash stopped. He felt her dupatta over his face and smiled, driving slowly. The music of PKEK began to play.
M: Akash!
    Akash snapped out of his trance as Manya's dupatta slid off his face.
A: Yeah?
M: Pass me a drinkk!
    Akash picked up a can of coke and held it up in the sunroof. Manya didn't look down and reached for it.
    Instead of grabbing the can, she suddenly grabbed his hand. Akash looked up, surprised, and smiled.
    Manya looked down, surprised.
M: Oh...!
    She swallowed, but didn't let go of his hand. She stared at him and then quickly let it go, her cheeks blushing.
    Akash grinned. He turned up the music louder and sang,
    Manya pursed her lips a bit nervously and sat back down. He looked at her and grinned, still singing.
A: Dil Ki In Baaton Men Ham To A Jaate Hain
Lekin Hamaari Baat Men Dil Aata Naheen
Dhadakanen Kahati Hain Dil Ki Ye Aadat Hai
A Jaaye Dil Ye Kisi Pe To Phir Jaata Naheen
Ishq Ka Ye Jaadoo Hai
Ishq Ka Ye Jaadoo Hai

Ye Jaadoo Kaun Chalaata Hai

    Manya blushed. She looked at him with a smile and then laughed.
    They both began to sing again, laughing. As Akash approached a beautiful green scenery, the song finished. Their destination had arrived.
    Akash and Manya stepped out of the car, still hype with all the singing in the car.
M: Oh wooow, Akash! I've never seen this place before!
A: Tumne kabhi Jai Shree se bahaar dekha ho tho tab na.
    Manya looked at him.
A: Kaafi cheezein hain that you missed out on.
    Manya knew she was referring to himself. He laughed mischiveously and shook his head.
M: Akaash! Tum bhi na!
    The hills were beyond wonder. Green covered everywhere. Flowers bloomed around the corners, light clouds coming onto the ground. A soft, warm wind blew.
M: Akash. This is too cute!
    Akash nodded his head.
A: It is, isn't it?
    Manya looked at him and crossed her arms mockingly.
M: Tum tho disco type of ke ladke lagte ho, Akash. Tho yeh silent hills kaise?
    Akash looked up at her, surprised by her question. He shrugged and smiled naughtily again, looking at her intently.
A: I guess I had inspiration.
    Manya raised her eyes, looking at him.
A: Kabhi kabhi aap woh cheezein ker daalte ho, jo aapne kabhi sochi na ho...
    Manya looked at him.
M: Kyun?
A: Kyun ki koi aisa ajaate hai, jiske suddenly sab kuch naya try kerne ko jee chahta hai...
    The music of PKEK played as they stared into each other's eyes.
Jo bhi kehna na tha, woh bhi kehne lage,
Jo bhi sun-na na tha, woh bhi sun-ne lage...

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 2:01am | IP Logged
wonderful part Clap !! chooo cweeet!! Embarrassed caint wait for the nexst part Tongue ! sooooo please continue soooooooooooooon Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 7:39am | IP Logged
love it Clap Clap Clap
plz cont soon
Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 8:39am | IP Logged
wowowowowwoowowo what cute sonia thanks for putting your part plzzzzz contuied your next part plzzz
~~BaBy~AnGel~~ Goldie

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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:36am | IP Logged
aaaawwww they are at the hills, now i hope they express their love to each other, loveddddddd itttt great part, plzzzzzz cont soon Embarrassed Clap Wink
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:02am | IP Logged
aww tht was soo cute Embarrassed luved it..plzz continue soon Sonia!! Smile

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