~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08} - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg!!!!! i loved it!!!! i was dying to read ur FF's for a long time!!! πŸ˜† plzzzz dont make us wait any longer πŸ˜†   
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Posted: 15 years ago
i waited two days... still no update... :( .... please update soon
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Manya entered the park at eight in the night, wearing a green and red churidaar dress. Her hair flew behind her as she entered the park, looking around.
M: Koi hai?
   As she entered further into the park, a chilly breeze blew. It was silent, only the voice of Manya's breathing echoing in her ears.
M: Anyone here?
   She turned around and noticed a balloon hung next to a tree. She walked over to the balloon and read it. It read "AM."
M: Kaun-
   Someone suddenly leaned on the tree, surprising her. She jumped back and saw...Akash!
M: Akash!
A: Hi, Manya.
M: Uh, hi-
A: AM. You like it?
   Manya looked at him.
M: What does it stand for?
   He smiled and walked close to her, making her edge back into the tree.
A: Tumhe nahin patha?
   Manya swallowed nervously.
M: Nahin.
A: Tho phir main batha dhoon?
M: Bathao...
   They were whispering, both of their bodies inches away from each other.
A: It means...
    Manya raised her eyes to meet his gaze.
A: Akash. Manya.
    The music of PKEK began to play as Manya stared into his eyes intently.
A: Akash. Manya. Akash and Manya.
    Manya smiled and pushed him, walking away. He smiled and grabbed her hand.
A: Aye, Ms. Attitude.
    Manya nervously turned back.
A: Pehle yeh tho bathao, Akash aur Manya tumhe kaise lage?
    Manya smiled, looking down.
M: Perfect.
    Laughing, she pulled away her wrist and ran away, sitting on a swing shyly.
A: Oy hoy!
    He walked over to her and sat down, smiling. Manya looked up at him.
A: Ek baat poochoon?
M: Poocho.
A: Tumhare dil ke kareeb koi hai?
    Manya smiled.
M: Tumhare dil ke kareeb koi hai?
A: Hai.
    Manya looked up at him.
M: Kaun?
A: Wohi...jisne meri raatoon ki neendh chura li ho...
M: Raat ko saune nahin dhaiti?
A: No. Ek pal ki liye bhi nahin.
   Manya crossed her arms.
M: Phir tho woh bahut buri hui na?
A: Aye! Ussai buri muth kaho.
M: Acha? Kyun?
A: Woh meri jaan hai.
   Manya stared at him.
M: Kaun hai tumhari jaan?
A: Batha dhoon-yaan dikha dhoon?
M: Dikha dhoon mathlab?!
   Akash grinned. He lightly held her hand and walked her to a corner, where something was covered.
M: Uski tasveer hai?
   Akash smiled. He pulled away the cloth.
A: Nahin. Woh khud hai.
   Manya stared at herself in the mirror. It was a mirror, revealing her image. Manya looked up.
   Akash raised Manya's chin to himself and whispered,
A: Kaisi lagi meri jaan?
   Manya blushed.
M: Kitna pyar karte ho apni jaan se?
A: Sheeshe mein mere uska saaya hai. Tanhai mein woh meri parchai hai...aur mehfil mein...woh mera asmaan hai...
   He walked close to Manya, pushing her hair back as he said those words. He whispered in her ears,
A: Ab tumhari baari, Manya.
   Manya swallowed nervuosly.
A: Tumhare dil ke kareeb kaun hai?
   Manya looked up at him.
M: Woh, jo mere sapnu mein aker mujhe chedta hai. Woh, jiski baahoon mein apni saari zindagi guzarna chahti hoon...
   Akash smiled.
A: Kaun hai woh?
   Manya suddenly pulled his shirt and pulled him forward, throwing her arms around his neck. She laughed and hugged him tightly!
   Akash laughed.
A: AYE MAIN MAR JAWAN!!
   He picked her up, her arms still around his neck, and spun around.
Koi tarsa na tha,
Koi tadpa na tha...
Woh mile istherhan...
dil bhi dhadka na tha...

   The wind blew faster, and the AM balloon that was tied flew up into the air. It flew around the sky, its message flying all over...
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowowow sooooo damm cuteeeeee part reallyy plzzzzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sonia plzz continue soon!! it was sooo cute!!! luved da part! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
yeayyyyyyyyyyyy thy finally said it, well thy showed it πŸ˜† but that was amazing, i loved the part where akash said ' aye main mar javan ' πŸ˜† 😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon sonia i can't wait for the next part 😳 πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
ehmmm... πŸ€” what can i say...it was fantastic...uhmm..noo i need a better word 😳 ...hmm..FABALOUS...ehmm... i just got no words for it  loved it so Much! πŸ‘ 😳

hope u continue soooon!
one request if u dont mind 😳 can u post a longer part asap 😊 Edited by Bahar ^_^ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was really good!!!! plzzzz, sonia....conitnue soon, i love ur FFs. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks! 😊


   Manya entered through the gates of the field, ready to cheer on for another Jai Shree and AD match. She entered and right away caught Akash's eyes. He was sitting on the his basketball, his chin in his hand, looking at the door expectantly. The moment she entered, he grinned excitedly and stood up.
A: HI!
   The whole AD team turned and stared at him, surprised. As Akash walked over to Manya, Manya smiled and began to walk towards him.
   Suddenly, a hand caught her arm and pulled her back. Manya turned and saw Roopa.
M: What?
R: What are you doing?
M: Saying hi to Akash-
R: WHY? He's an enemy, Manya! You know hamari rivalry kaise hai!
   Manya turned and looked at Akash who was being helplessly held by Om and Rehan. They both frowned as the buzzer for the game rang.



   In between the break, Manya was sitting on the bleacher alone, deep in thought. Would this rivalry even let them be?
   A sudden pull interrupted her thoughts. She looked up, shocked. She saw Akash grin at her, his finger on his lips.
A: Hii!
   Manya laughed.
M: Akash? Tum yahan?
A: Chaloo!
   He held her arm and they both snuck out to his car. Akash closed the door and grinned.
M: Aise hans kyun rahe ho?
A: Becaussee this will be our FIRST date.
M: Acha? Aur yeh game?
A: Chodo na!
   Manya stared at him.
M: Lakein AD ki win tho tum per-
   Akash leaned close to her, staring in her eyes.
A: Koi game tumse important nahin hai, Manya.
   Manya smiled shyly. They drove upto the hills again, both getting out of the car and sitting on the edge of a hill.
M: Acha, tho bolo, hum yoon chup chup ker milen ge kya?
A: Hrm...I guess so. Batha dhaite hain, phir?
M: No way! College mein life miserable ho jaye gi.
   Akash frowned.
A: Oof, yeh mohabbat ke dushman!
   Manya laughed. She looked at the ground, thinking, when Akash suddenly leaned close, almost breathing on her neck. He pushed her hair softly back and whispered,
A: I love you, Manya.
   Manya looked up, surprised. She stared into his eyes.
M: I-I love you, too, Akash.
   They both smiled warmly, staring into each other's eyes.
M: Aise kya dekh rahe ho?
A: Tumhari aankhoon mein mujhe woh sab nazar aata hai...jiske bina zindagi adoori ho jaye...
M: Pehle bhi tho jeete thay na. Mere bina?
A: Aur ab aisa lagta hai ki mujhe zindagi sirf abhi jaker mili hai...
M: Poori zindagi hoon main?
A: Zindagi tho phir bhi saath chod dhaiti hai....
   He laughed and pressed his forehead against hers.
A: Tumhe tho main jaane nahin dhoon ga...
   Manya laughed.
M: Kitna pyar karte ho mujhse?
A: Tumse thooooda sa zyada!
   Manya sat straight and frowned.
M: What is that, two percent?
   Akash opened his mouth in shock.
A: WHAT? TUM MUJHSE 0 PERCENT PYAR KERTI HO?
   He grabbed her waist and tickled her, both laughing.
A: SAY YOU LOVE ME!
   Manya stopped laughing. She looked at him.
M: I love you, Akash.
   Akash smiled. She was on his lap now, her arms around his neck.
M: Jab ek ladki kisi ko dil dhaiti hai na, Akash, woh apna sab kuch oos ke naam ker baithi hai...tum kabhi yeh barosa thodo ge tho nahin na?
A: Agar kabhi thod bhi diya, tho yeh meri dua hai ki mujhe maut bhi naseeb na ho...
   Manya stared at him, and hugged him tightly.
M: Akash?
A: Hmm?
M: Humein yeh log milne tho nahin dheinge na?
A: No. Lakein chup chup ker milne ka bhi apna hi maza hai, haina?
   Manya laughed.
Hum Lakh Chupayein Pyar Magar...
Dunya ko Patha Chal JAye Ga...

   Akash grinned. Manya stood up and ran across the hill. Akash grabbed her arm and pulled her close.
Lakein chup chup ke milne se...milne ka maza tho ayegaa!
   They laughed as he held her from the waist. He kissed her forehead softly and hugged her tightly.
A: Kabhi kabhi ajnabee bhi kitne kareeb ho jaate hain na?
   Manya nodded.
M: Pyar mein kho jaate hain...
   They both hugged each other, smiling.
Aa rahi hai hassi mujhko is baat par
kis tarha pyaar mein dono khone lage
dono khone lage...hmmmm...ahaha...
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow sonia !! im again speechless becauz i loved it soo Much! ur writhingskills just get better and better😳
hope u writh the nexst part soon! πŸ˜ƒ