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FF..~~Yehi Hai Zindagi~~.P: Sixth updated (Page 2)

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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Ya do carry on.. I liked you presentation.. Looks interesting Big smile Big smile

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Posted: 09 May 2008 at 11:49am | IP Logged
waiting for part 3
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Thanks everyone for liking my FF and waiting for its parts….!!!!

I would request to all the FF writers if they have sth in mind for the continuation of this FF then plz write it....I won't mind if someone is gonna help me...!!!

                              Part III
Su: Oye Rahul yeh kia kar rahay ho...
Ra: Wo....wo....uncle ji aap yahan per Jugle k kapray kiyun pehnay hoye hain???
Su:Mujhe ik baat batao ik baap apnay putr k kapray nahi pehan sakta...!!!
Ra: Haan per aap...????
Su: Arey mera room lock hai....
Ra: (dunno how to handle the situation) acha mein chalta hoon...
Sukha entered the room of Jugle where another "torture" was waiting for him....
Jugle was getting ready when Urmi entered…..
Ur: Jugle…!!! Aap abhi tak tayyar nahi hoye…
Ju: (with a 100000 watt smile)… Nahi bs ho raha ho tum betho kharay kharay nazuk paon dukh jaye gain……..
Ur: Tumhay meray pao k baray mein kab say khayal honay laga….
Ju: Bus….!!! Bachpan say hi mein nay hameesha tumhara hi khayal kia hai….
Ur: So sweet….She pull her cheeks and then........Tish A SLAP….
Ju: (All surprised) Daddy Ji aap….???
Su: Oye mein nahi hona tu phir kon hovay ga…?????
Ju: Daddy kia hamesha ghalat waqt per atay ho…
Su: Oye chup kar….!!!! Ab bhaag yahan say….
Ju: Daddy Ji….
Su: Jao…..
Su…(while thinking) ab yeh Pammi kaisay manay gii????
The scene shifted to Urmi and Zoya…
Ur: Zoya mujhse sabr nahi hota….Zo: Per Urmi tmhe achi tarah maloom hai k sandeep bhaiyya tumse pyaar kartay hain….
Ur: Nahi kartay hogain tu ab tak tu karna shro kardia hoga….(well….. aap thoday say paresshan hoye hodain Urmi k is statement say…Bhai..!! Asal baat yeh hai k Sandeep Babu…!!! Urmi k bachpan k pyaar hain….)
Zo: Tu Urmi pata kaisay chalaye…???
Ur: Isi ka tu afsoos hai kaheein aisa na hojaye k mein "devdasni" ban jaon…
Zo: Per Urmi tu sharaab piyegii….
Ur: Kon kambakhat sharaab piyay ga…Mein tu aanso say hi tarr hojao gii…..
Zoya with tears in her eyes…
Zo: Bus Urmi tu bhi na mazaaq mein ik dum serious hojati ho…
Ur: Per Zoya tu batana mein kaisay Sandeep Babu k dil ka haal kaisay janu…
Zo: Koi na koi tareeqa tu zaroor nikal aye ga…
Then a car is shown parked outside the house of Rasik… An handsome guy came out of the car and entered Rasik's shop…
Key: handsome guy: Hg
Hg: Aap Rasik uncle hain…
Ra: Haan mera naam Rasik hai…Aap kon???
Hg: Mein Rohan….
Ra: Maaf kijye ga mainay aap ko pehchana nahi….
Ro: Mein aap k friend Aakash ka beta…
Ra: Arey aap Aakash k betay hain…..Chalein andar chaltay hain….
Now the scene shifted to Urmi and Sandy….
Ur: Sandeep Babu aap bhi na thoday ultay hain…
Sa: Kiya matlab ulta???
Ur: Matlab yeh ik jawaan larki aap say baat karti hai aur aap itnay teray jawab detay hain aap kabhi seedhi baat kartay hain….
Sa: Tum bachpan say hi filmy ho Urmi…!!!
Ur: Mein filmy tu nahi magar Sandeep Babu jab say dekha aap ko mujhme filmy keera agaya….Sorry sahi shair ban nahi paya…
Sa: Haan tu tum nay meri baat ko xtend kia hai…..Bachpan say hi tu dekhti a rahi ho…
Ur: Acha aap mujhay clearly bataye…
Sa: Kiya…
Ur: K aap kitna waqt lain gain…
Sa: Kiya karnay mein Urmi tum bhi na bohat khainchti ho baat ko itni tu rubber band bhi nahi khichti…
Ur: Uski elastic limit kam hoti hai na….!!!
Sa: (with a laugh) kia Urmi bilkul bachi ho….
Ur: Haan bachi hii hoon mera ehsaas tab hoga jab mein aap ko chorr kar chali jao gii…
Sandy put his hand on her mouth…
Sa: Aainda mujh say door janay ka mat kehna…
Ur: (All shocked) Sandeep Babu…!!!
Sandy put his hand away all shocked to utter a single word….Urmi with a big smile runs to her house….
Now the screen splits in two….Urmi and Sandy thinking
Ur: Sandeep Babu mujh say door nahi hona chahtay….!!!
Sa: Mujhay Urmi ki door janay wali baat kiyun buri lagii…
Ur: Haan who bhi mujhay chahtay hai bus keh nahi patay…..She blushes….
Sa: Mera hath khud bakhud uth gaya kia mujhay waqai uska saath acha lagta hai????
Ur: Sandeep Babu jitney bhi chupaaiye unhai meri mojoodgii achi lagti hai…..
Sa: Jab kal Urmi chali gaye tu mujhay bura kiyun laga…!!!
Ur: Shayad meray chalay ana ka bhi unhay ehsaas hua ho…
Sa: Yeh kia horaha hai mujhay….Kissay poochoon…???
Ur: Bus ik dafa Sandeep Babu ik dafa mujhay apnay dil ka haal tu bataye…..Main aap k dil ka haal jannay k liay baichain hoon…
Sa: Haan shayad mujhay Urmi say pyaar hogaya hai…
Sandy went outside to meet Urmi and tell her "what he feels"…He heard Rasik talking on phone in his shop to someone…
Ra: Haan mein samajh raha hoon…….Bus aap say kia chupana aap tu baray bhai jaisay hain……Haan ji bilkul…….Arre aap ka hi ghar hai jab chahein aa jayein……Bus ik dafa aap Urmi ki baat pakki kardain….
Sandy was left shocked…!!! He did not believe in his ears….
Ra: Sach boloon to main Urmi ko CG mein nahi bihaaon ga…….
Sandy eyes started shimmering with unshed tears….He returned to his home…..And look at the sky….
Sa: Kahan ho maa……Mu..muj…mujhay a.aa..aaaj aa..aap ki za.zaroorat hai….
Sandy couldnot control himself and break down…..!!!!!

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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 3:15am | IP Logged
And yeah tell me plz how to add 4 vellas....part...just a lil hint...!!!
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Posted: 10 May 2008 at 11:50am | IP Logged
that was nice...plz continue...well the velle would see this guy and start plotting against him.
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Posted: 11 May 2008 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kshreya2002

that was nice...plz continue...well the velle would see this guy and start plotting against him.


Thankyou...!!! Big smileBig smileBig smile Well, right now Rohan, that new guy is gonna play an important role he will be there for some more parts...!!!!WinkWinkWink
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 11:49am | IP Logged

                          Part IV

Rasik introduces Rohan to Urmi…

Ra: Urmi insay milo inka naam Rohan hai…

Ur: Pappa Rohan kon…

Ro: Aap mujhay nahi pehchanay gii mein aap k dad k friend ka beta hoon…Rohan….Hi

Ur: Hi,(Turning towards Rasik) pappa mein jao??….

Ra: Beta agar koi kaam hai tu jao warna thodi dair Rohan say baat karlo…

Sujata: Ary aap bhi na abhi abhi Rohan aaya hai aur aap hain k….

Ra: Oh Sorry beta…Tum araam karlo…

Ro: Are nahi uncle aap logon k beach beth kar tu koi thakan nahi rahi….

Ra: Yeh tu tumhara barappan hai….

 

Scene shifted to crying Sandy…Meanwhile Sukha Singh entered…

Su: Arrey Sandeep zara baat sunna…

Sandy wiped his tears…

Sa: Ji bhaisaab…

Su: Oye Sandeep kia hua tujhe…

Sa: Kuch nahi bhaisaab bus zara aankho mein kuch chala gaya tha aap bataye na kuch kaam tha…???

Su: Bachpan say jaanta hoon mein tumhe…!!! Chalo batao kia baat hai….Agar mujhay apna bhai samajhtay ho tu…

Sa: Bhaisaab kia aap bhi…!!!

Su: Bataye ga nahi…!!!

Sandy told everything to Sukha….!!!

Su: Waisay sach boloon tu mujhay pata nahi kiyun is baat ka shak tha likin kabhi tumsay poocha nahi….

Sa: Ab shak ho ya yaqeen kia faayda….???

Su: (with a laugh)..Tum pyaar karnay waloon ko jaantay nahi ho…Wo saat samandar paar kar k bhi apna pyaar pa letay hain…!!!

Sa: Sukha bhaisaab aisa novels mein hi acha lagta hai…Reality mein yeh saari baatein bay-buniyad hain….

Su: Kia matlab hai tera…??? Tu Rasik ki baat sun kar chup ho jayega….

Sa: Haan kiyun nahi….Rasik uncle ki jaga aap khud ko dekhain….Kia aap apni beti k shaadi mujh jaisay shaks k saath kar wadain gay….!!!!

Su: Dekh Sandeep mein bhi koi raja maharaja nahi hoon…..Jo mein Bill Gates k betay ko apna damad banao….Hum Colonel Ganj say pyaar kartay hain…Ye jaga humein bohat pasand hai hum iss say door rehna nahi chahtay…Rasik aur Sujata bhabhi bhi Urmi ko apni nazroon say door bardasht nahi karsaktay….!!!

Sa: Emotions kabhi bhi sapno k beach deewar nahi bantay Sukha bhaisaab…Kon nahi chahay ga k uski beti raani ki tarah zindagi bitaye….!!!

Su: Sandeep ya tu tujhay pyaar ka matlab nahi pata ya tu naik-parveen banna chata hai…!!!

Sa: Sukha bhaisaab aap fazool mein naraaz ho rahay hain meinay saari baat theek hi tu kahi hai…!!!

Su: Rasik ko Colonel Ganj mein kia nahi mila jo wo Urmi ki shaadi yaha nahi karega…!!! Ik baat batao Sandeep tu is waqt duniya ka sab say ameer aadmi hai…Pooray Colonel Ganj ki wishes tumharay saath hain….Mujhay batao mein bhi kabhi dosroon k kaamo aagay aagay raha hoon…??? Nahi…Sirf tu hi hai jo sab k kaam apna kaam samajh kar karta hai…!!!

Sa: Rasik uncle ko damad chahiye naukar nahi….

Su: Yeh kaam naukaroon ka nahi hai samjhay…..

Sa: Bhaisaab…!!!

Su: Abhi tu kuch samajhna nahi chahta mein kal aaoga teray pass…!!!

Sa: Bhaisaab rukein to….Arrey…..Kia yaar….!!!!

 

Now Rohan, Rasik, Urmi and Sujata are talking….

Ro: Uncle, yeh Sandeep kon hai…

Ur: (with a wide smile..) Sandeep Babu…Yeh idhar hi rehtay hain….Aap milay gain…

Ra: Kiyun koi khass kaam hai…

Ro: Haan uncle mein ik kaam k silsilay mein Sukha Ji k pass gaya tha unho nay kaha k mera kaam sirf Sandeep hi karsaktay hain isi lie…

Ur: Chalein hum abhi chaltay hain….

Ra: Urmi beta abhi raat hogaye hai…!!!

Ur: Tu pappa Sandeep Babu k ghar tak hi tu jana hai….

Sujata: Jaanay deejey na…Rohan ko koi zaroori kaam hoga…!!!!

Ro: Arre nahi auntie itna zaroori bhi nahi hai mein kal subah chala jaoga…

Ur: (while thinking) Chi…!! Itna acha mauka tha Sandeep Babu say milnay ka…

They talk a little more regarding CG and regarding Sandeep..

Sujata notices that Rasik cut all the talks regarding Sandeep…

Sujata: Urmi tum Rohan ko room dekhado aur Rohan tum ab so jao bohat dair ho gaye hai…

Ro: Ji aunty…!!!

They both went and Rasik and Sujata head towards their respective room…

Sujata while making the bed….: Main dekh rahi thi k aap Sandeep ki baatoon ko bohat ignore kar rahay thay…!!!

Ra: Nahi Sujata aisi baat nahi hai wo Rohan k saamnay mein nahi chahta k Urmi zayada Sandeep ki baat kare….

Sujata: Q??

Ra: Tumhay nahi pata k mein kia chahta hoon…

Sujata: Kiya chahtay hai aap…???

Ra: Urmi aur Rohan ki shaadi…!!!!

Sujata: Urmi say poocha…???

Ra: Wo mana nahi karegii…

Sujata: Haan bhi nahi karegii aap ko pata hai na k jitney bhi rishtay atay hain wo mana kardeti hai….

Ra: Per Rohan ko mana nahi karegii…

Sujata: Q??? Rohan aasmaan say aya hai….

Ra: Sujata tum lar kiyun rahi ho…??? Tumhay Rohan nahi pasand…!!!

Sujata: Pasand hai likin maaf karna Rasik mein apni choice apnay bachi per thopnay wali nahi hoon…!!!

Ra: Urmi ko koi force nahi kar raha…Wo Rohan k saath thoda waqt bitaye gii ussay achay say janay gii….

Sujata: Jab wo kisi ko janna chahti hi nahi hai tu….

Ra: Tum kehna kia chahti ho…

Sujata: Yehi k hum Urmi k inkaar per jo khamoosh hokar beth jatay hai ik baar poochay Urmi say k wo kaisa life partner chahti hai…

Ra: Tum rehna pichlay zamanay mein….

Sujata: Pichlay zamanay ki baatein aap kar rahay hain…

Ra: Acha bus mein tumse behas k mood mein nahi hoon…

Sujata thinks: Main pata lagaaon gi Urmi k har na ki wajah…!!!

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 6:12am | IP Logged
waiting for the next part...btw sandy crying...eyh kuch hazam nahin hua. Wink

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