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FF..~~Yehi Hai Zindagi~~.P: Sixth updated

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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 6:47am | IP Logged
I was thinking to write a FF.....Do comment on it....Modz del this topic if I am not supposed to write...!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

      The sun is rising and the chirping of the birds enhance the beauty..All around the world people set out for work but the way of CGians is slightly different....CG k sabhi log Rasik, Ratiraam, Rangeela aur Bashir apni shops khol detay hain...
      From one of the house the voice of crying baby was heard....A woman was trying to calm her......"Arrey my baby! kia hogaya? Kiyun ro rahi ho?" (Yeh hai Mahua....Saurav ki patni.....In dono ki ik hi beti hai Milli....aap soch rahay hogain yeh kaisa naam hai to yeh inko mandir ki stairs per milli thi u iska naam Milli par gaya likin pora CG aur M.S isko apni beti ki tarah hi pyaar kartay hai...)
 
   Sa:Arey kiyun ro rahi hai...Lao mein chup karwao...Tum jakar chai banalo...
Tu aisay chal raha hai inka pariwaar jahan itna khayal rakhnay wali pati ho waha laraai ka to naam hi nahi....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Chalein CG k dosray logoon say miltay hain.....

Dhrr...Dhrr...Dhrr...."Pammi!  darwaza kholo...Pammi  meri gal tu suno...." Surprised!!! Yeh kon hai??? Yeh Sukha Singh hain.....Inki aye din apni patni say laraai rehti hai....Iss bar inki patni yani Pammi insay is liey naraaz hain k inho nay Pammi say yeh baat chupai k woh Pammi ko surprise party day rahay hain....LOLLOLLOL Pammi issi lye inhain ghar mein ghusnay nahi day rhiii...LOLLOL
Pa: Dekhain Sukha Ji aaj mein aapko maaf karnay wali nahi....Poora CG jaanta tha k aap party rakh rahay ho per mein nahi....
S:Pammi just look into the matter....The surprise won't remain if I would have dassy nu....!!!! ROFLROFLROFL
Sukha Ji aisay hi hain....Chalein agay chaltay hai warna inki laraai tu khatam hi nahi hogi.....
Arre yeh tu idhar hi mil gaye...Yeh Ratiraam ji hain.....Single ready to mingle...!!!! Inki sweets ki dukaan hai.....Hmm inko disturb nahi kartay...Rangeela bhi pass mein hi hain.....Insay bhook k waqt hi baat hogi waisay yeh paan bohat acha banatay hain.....
"Are bhai!!! Yeh kia sunti ho Niresh ki amma....Bijli ka bill phir say zayada agaya....." Rukkain...Yeh Gupta Ji hain Yeh thoday say puranay khayalat k hain...In k do betay hain Rahul aur Niresh.....Niresh ki apni job hai likin Rahul film star banay k sapnay hi dekh raha hai.....Inkay ghar per kabhi fursat say aayegain pehlay aap ko CG ki chand say tu milwadain...chalein chaltay hai....SmileSmileSmile
Arre yeh kia yeh tu ja rahi hai par kidhar.......Hmmm Sandeep Babu k.......Yeh Urmi hain.....Rasik aur  Sujata  ki beti....

Sandy is working on his PC...
Ur: Ahemm Ahemm..!!!
Sa: Janay bahara....Aye aur humaray sath kuch meethay pal bitayee...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
Ur: Sandeep Babu aap bhi...
Sa: Babu nahi Sandeeeep kaheiye zayada APNA lagta hai.....
Ur: Poochain gay nahi kia laaii hoon....
Sa: Apkay phool jaisay nazuk hathoon say zehar bhi kha lay gain....EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Ur: Itni jaldi aapko zehar nahi de rahi...
Sa: Yeh tu sheeva-e-husn hai...Aashiq ko tarpana...!!! WinkWinkWink
Ur: Aap kabhi serious bhi hotay hain...
Sa: Chand taray tor doga...Suraj ko mor doonga...Tum ik baar haan kardo....Mein serious bhi hojao ga...!!!!
Ur: Acha bas!!! pappa nay mithaii bhijwaaye hai aap k liye kha lijye ga...
Sa: Pappa ka ashirwaad aur mithaai ki khushi jabhi achi hogi jab aap is husn k ashiq ko apnay haatho say khilayeegii.......


Sorry guys....!!! I have to go and leave my FF ...!!! Will continue it tomm or maybe today's night...!!! Bfr that do tell me are u likin it or not...And do u want Filmy Sandy or Urmi is ok....I can make Sandy serious just need ur opinions.....

Waiting for urs comments.....Eagerly....
 
 


Edited by born-leader - 22 July 2008 at 11:59am

Fazila~ IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 9:23am | IP Logged
good attempt.....keep up and dont leave ur stories incomplete........n why would the viewbies del it.......we r not so bad yaar..... Embarrassed Embarrassed Tongue ...little bad bana parta hai... Tongue
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Fazila~

good attempt.....keep up and dont leave ur stories incomplete........n why would the viewbies del it.......we r not so bad yaar..... Embarrassed Embarrassed Tongue ...little bad bana parta hai... Tongue


No u all r very nice..!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed I left it coz I wanna know whether u ppl like filmy Sandy...!!! Anyway will continue it then plz lemme know..!!!
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 10:02am | IP Logged
do continue...i think sandy babu serious hi thik hain...if u want a filmy one...make it a dream.
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 10:14am | IP Logged
haan, dont change them......keep urmi filmy n sandy same serious in front of others and luchaa with urmi hehehehhe LOL Tongue
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Good job.. Clap Clap Clap and please do complete it and i also prefer Urmi filmy and Sandeep Serious.. Big smile


Looking forward to more..
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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 1:02pm | IP Logged

Thnx everyone for your replies....
         &nbs p;     Part II
Sa: Urmi...Urmi...darwazay per kiyun khari hoye ho....
Ur: Husn-e-ashiq......
Sa: Kia???Kia keh rahi ho Urmi kon ashiq kaisa husn...Kaisay batein karti ho...
Ur: Wo..wo mm...aap wo mithaai...aashirwaad....meray haath.....zehar...
Sa: Bus Urmi tum aati bhi sochti hoye ho aur jaati bhi sochti hoye ho.....
Ur: Aap nay abhi kuch nahi kaha....
Sa: Mein kia kahoon ga...!!!
Ur: Chi..
Sa: Ab kia hua....!!!!
Ur: Kuch nahi aap mithaai kha lay mein ja rahi hoon...
She put down the sweet box and run outside leaving Sandy surprised….

Sa: Yeh Urmi bhi na…

Ur….(while running towards Bashir's house…) Zoya…Zoya…..

Zo: Haan Urmi…!!!!( yeh zoya hai Bashir miyan ki beti…Bashir miyan ka ik beta Mushtaq aka Mushi aur ik beto Zoya hai…Ik mamlay mein Gupta Ji aur Bashir Miyan brabar hain….????Betay k maamlay mein….!!!!)

Ur: Zoya pata nahi mujhay kia hogaya…Yeh Sandeep Babu bhi na….
Zo: Urmi phir say…!!!
Ur: Haan phir say…..
Zo: Likin aisa kaisay….
Ur: Pta nahi
Zo: Waisay aisa lagta tu nahi…!!!
Ur: Bus zoya kabhie kabhie ho jata hai…
Zo: Ho jata hai matlab tumhay iss say koi problem nahi???
Ur: Problem kaisii??? Ik pal ki khushi bhi kaafi hai…
Zo: Yeh baat tumhay khushi deti hai???
Ur: Haan nahi tu aur kia gham deti….
Zo: Kya Rasik Uncle bhi thay…
Ur: Pappa??? Zoya pappa kiyun hogain…??? (getting a hint that Zoya has gotten sth else….)
Zo: Tu sirf Rasik uncle k saamnay hi tu wo tumhay aisa keh saktay hai….
Ur..(With a lot of surprise…): KYA???
Zo: BEHAN..!!!!
Ur: What…..??? mein tumhay Sandeep Babu ki behan lagti hoon…..Zoya mein tumhay choroon gi nahi…..
Urmi runs towards Zoya….
Zo: Acha baba sorry…!!! Mein kaisay nahi janu gii k tu hi tu hai Sandeep Bhaiyya k liye perfect choice…
Urmi blushes….
Ur: Bus isi ka tu intezaar hai….Na jane kab say…
Zo: Sabr ka phal metha hota hai….
Ur: Aur sabar nahi hota…!!!Kash meray paas bhi Aladdin ka chiraag hota aur mein apni har wish poori karti…..
Zo: Hmm…!!!

The scene shifted to Sukha's house…where a guy is getting ready wearing SUPERMAN shirt…No!!! you got it wrong its not Jugle its SUKHA……LOLLOLLOL

(ab aisa hua kaisay??? Well yeh tu aap jaantay hain k Pammi nay Sukha ko andar aanay say mana ki atha khair jaisay taisay wo andar aa gaye likin Pammi apnay room mein bethi hain lock kiay hoye….Haan Sukha wohi pehnay rehtay jo wo pehan rahay thay likin chirya ko kia pata k Sukha bhaisaab ki Pammi Bhabhi say laraai hai woh tu unper kar k chali gaye…..Ab bechara Jugle nay apnay pitashree ki madad ki aur apnay kapray inhay day diye………..)

Rahul entered the house...He thought Jusle is reading the newspaper....

Ra:(while thinking) Wah!!! Jugle nay aaj pants pehni hai....

He come forward and start tickling on Jugle....yaani Sukha's stomach....

Su: Oye ki kar raha hai......

Part II end on Rahul's shocked face...!!!!



 

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Posted: 08 May 2008 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Please do carry on..I too prefer the serious Sandy & filmy Urmi combination.

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