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komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 8:04am | IP Logged

magicgirlankita wrote:

hey kimmi di
so sorry for the l8 reply i got stuck u with something very badly but yaar title pad ke jaan nikal gayi but i enjoyed reading it was awesome
luv ya
@nkit@

thanks ankita...no probs sweety..betta late than nevaWink

xarmaanloverx IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 June 2008 at 5:02pm | IP Logged

Hey Komal...

Just read the scene..I told you I would read it na Embarrassed

@ Scene7: jtni bholi dikhti hai utni hai...badi chalooo cheez hai...[looks at her in deep sleep]apni pat parmeshwar ko yahan sofa pe yun atpata sa chod ke khud aaram se mere h sapne dekh rahi hogi...aur sapne mein bhi mujhe ek chakoo lekar bas mar hi daalne wali hogi...aur phir yeh apni jeet celebrate karegi...yeh patni hai ya...panoti...beta armaan...tu toh gaya.... ROFL...OMG that was tooooo funny....him talking to himself was too too tooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big smileBig smile

I LOVED that .....Im speechless sweety...!!!!!
OMG OMG OMG...
I seriously do not know what to say...i have no words...that was p.e.r.f.e.c.t...i say that to all you scenes..but then you go and write another one and it just tops the last one...I dont read ff's usually....but i ALWAYS look forward to your ones!!!...All your scenes should turn into one big movie...!!!...Absoultly magnificant sweety!!!!...Loved it!!!!!!... Clap

About to read The 8th Part now....

What can i say ...MINDBLOWING...
That was totally perfectly extremly cute and funny and just wanted to go AWWWWWWW....
Ive have run outta words...
Loved it...
Again & Again & Again & Again & Again & Again...
WOW...

Your amazingly talented hun...and the awesome thing is that when you read your scenes you actually imagine this all being acted out...you totally need to get in touch with uday...they could so easily bring this into the story and just sky rocket the trps..
Brilliant stuff komal...

If cant already tellLOL ..im looking forward to the next one!LOLEmbarrassed
Love Ya Hug
xoxoxoxo




Edited by xarmaanloverx - 05 June 2008 at 5:06pm
komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz
komalsirwani
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Posts: 11334

Posted: 06 June 2008 at 4:26am | IP Logged

xarmaanloverx wrote:

Hey Komal...

Just read the scene..I told you I would read it na Embarrassed

@ Scene7: jtni bholi dikhti hai utni hai...badi chalooo cheez hai...[looks at her in deep sleep]apni pat parmeshwar ko yahan sofa pe yun atpata sa chod ke khud aaram se mere h sapne dekh rahi hogi...aur sapne mein bhi mujhe ek chakoo lekar bas mar hi daalne wali hogi...aur phir yeh apni jeet celebrate karegi...yeh patni hai ya...panoti...beta armaan...tu toh gaya.... ROFL...OMG that was tooooo funny....him talking to himself was too too tooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big smileBig smile

I LOVED that .....Im speechless sweety...!!!!!
OMG OMG OMG...
I seriously do not know what to say...i have no words...that was p.e.r.f.e.c.t...i say that to all you scenes..but then you go and write another one and it just tops the last one...I dont read ff's usually....but i ALWAYS look forward to your ones!!!...All your scenes should turn into one big movie...!!!...Absoultly magnificant sweety!!!!...Loved it!!!!!!... Clap

About to read The 8th Part now....

What can i say ...MINDBLOWING...
That was totally perfectly extremly cute and funny and just wanted to go AWWWWWWW....
Ive have run outta words...
Loved it...
Again & Again & Again & Again & Again & Again...
WOW...

Your amazingly talented hun...and the awesome thing is that when you read your scenes you actually imagine this all being acted out...you totally need to get in touch with uday...they could so easily bring this into the story and just sky rocket the trps..
Brilliant stuff komal...

If cant already tellLOL ..im looking forward to the next one!LOLEmbarrassed
Love Ya Hug
xoxoxoxo

awwww zeba...all i can tell u is a big thanks....for this wondeful lovly comment...u made my day with this....i loved it totally n welll i hope i live upto ure expectations even further....n thanks for enjoyin my scenes....so muchHug....love ya tooo....Embarrassed

nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posts: 21049

Posted: 06 June 2008 at 7:44am | IP Logged
please update it soon
komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz
komalsirwani
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Posts: 11334

Posted: 06 June 2008 at 7:46am | IP Logged
@kvn...hehe yea sweety.,.wil update soon Wink
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Posted: 06 June 2008 at 10:54am | IP Logged
awsome job kimmy
well done
Clap
xarmaanloverx IF-Rockerz
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Posts: 7355

Posted: 06 June 2008 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komalsirwani

xarmaanloverx wrote:

Hey Komal...

Just read the scene..I told you I would read it na Embarrassed

@ Scene7: jtni bholi dikhti hai utni hai...badi chalooo cheez hai...[looks at her in deep sleep]apni pat parmeshwar ko yahan sofa pe yun atpata sa chod ke khud aaram se mere h sapne dekh rahi hogi...aur sapne mein bhi mujhe ek chakoo lekar bas mar hi daalne wali hogi...aur phir yeh apni jeet celebrate karegi...yeh patni hai ya...panoti...beta armaan...tu toh gaya.... ROFL...OMG that was tooooo funny....him talking to himself was too too tooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big smileBig smile

I LOVED that .....Im speechless sweety...!!!!!
OMG OMG OMG...
I seriously do not know what to say...i have no words...that was p.e.r.f.e.c.t...i say that to all you scenes..but then you go and write another one and it just tops the last one...I dont read ff's usually....but i ALWAYS look forward to your ones!!!...All your scenes should turn into one big movie...!!!...Absoultly magnificant sweety!!!!...Loved it!!!!!!... Clap

About to read The 8th Part now....

What can i say ...MINDBLOWING...
That was totally perfectly extremly cute and funny and just wanted to go AWWWWWWW....
Ive have run outta words...
Loved it...
Again & Again & Again & Again & Again & Again...
WOW...

Your amazingly talented hun...and the awesome thing is that when you read your scenes you actually imagine this all being acted out...you totally need to get in touch with uday...they could so easily bring this into the story and just sky rocket the trps..
Brilliant stuff komal...

If cant already tellLOL ..im looking forward to the next one!LOLEmbarrassed
Love Ya Hug
xoxoxoxo

awwww zeba...all i can tell u is a big thanks....for this wondeful lovly comment...u made my day with this....i loved it totally n welll i hope i live upto ure expectations even further....n thanks for enjoyin my scenes....so muchHug....love ya tooo....Embarrassed

Awww no thank YOU Kommy hun...Big smile...Awww thats sweetHug...i only have praise for you hun...you know you will only get comments that say you're the best from meEmbarrassed...Live up to expectations...Im sure you exceed them hun ....you never fail to disspoint hunny...You out do your self all the timeBig smile...lucky for usEmbarrassed...I dont enjoy them....I LOVE THEMBig smile...HugHugHug...Looking forward to the next part...Lots of love xoxox

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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 8:05am | IP Logged
hey kimmyHug...jus read all the parts Big smile
part 5a -jiju saali convo was nice LOL ...& armaan ke liye spl kheer Embarrassed ...waaah waah ridz...hehe
part 5b -was very so romantic Day DreamingDay Dreaming
part6- night b4 the wedding day....lovely part Clap Clap
part 7-ridz ne kafi tang kiya armaan ko LOL ..daddy armaan..hehe..it was cute Embarrassed
part8-minnee back...wow...awesome part Clap Clap

kimmy each part is fantastic Clap
u have done a brilliant job Clap Clap
keep it up Thumbs Up   

will b waiting for more parts Embarrassed

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