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Pragzie IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:11am | IP Logged
LOL ...ridzy se zyaada ammy ko tension ho raha hai........and he wants irritate ridz... LOL LOL LOL .....aawwww.....such a cute cute part!!!!!!komu keep it up...why dont u cont and make dis a ff??

moreremix IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:13am | IP Logged

cho cute Embarrassed Embarrassed
thanks for posting Big smile ... i had not read this one 

keep it upClap

Edited by moreremix - 07 May 2008 at 11:14am
komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:15am | IP Logged
@prags....thanks prags...glad u lked it
@sam di..aww thx dii...ure comment means a lot.. Embarrassed
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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
hmmm nice part continue plzzz
armaanilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
omggg i had not read dis b4 its way tooooooooooooooooo cute!

i had a smile thruout while readin this!
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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:18am | IP Logged
wow its soooooooooooooo cute...i could almost imagine the whole scene...very well written...i was totally into it while reading...amazing Clap
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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:18am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww please continue.... Embarrassed
komalsirwani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2008 at 11:20am | IP Logged

ok's my second scene....


Ridz meets Armaan's parents

Her eyes were shut but she wasnt exactly sleeping....she was thinking or rather enjoying the new flavour of life...
being in love was a thing she longed to do...and now that she was completely in love...she was the happiest...she was thinking
 about his last message...which was about an hour ago..
when she had to  literally beg him to cut the call and go to sleep ...otherwise he would be late for duty the next morning.
.it was after he cut the call..he sent a message...
"waise neend toh aayegi nahi...but phir bhi good night and sweet dreams...and yeah be ready for a surprise tomorrow...
love u"
She still wondered what the surprise could be...hmmm was he taking her on a date...or would he get a special gift for her...
or was it just another prank of his....
NOt being able to decide what his surpise could actually be..she finally thought the best would be to wait n watch n she
went to sleep...It was just 4:30 in the morning
She looked like a lil princess sleeping peacefully...the person had no intention of waking her up but had to since he was
there for that...he quietly shaked her a little...she mumbled some words...and tured to the other side...he went to the
other side....went close to her ear...n whishpered "i love u"...she opened her eyes..only to shock herself...
he quickly put his hand on her mouth to prevent her frm shouting ...and then when he was sure...she would not shout...he
quietly removed his hand frm her mouth...she was excited to see him there but more than that she was shocked...omg wat was
he doing there..wat if someone catches him there ...she would have to answer...
She quickly took him outside to the balcony...and showered him with Q's
R:Armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...kisi ne tumhe dekh liya toh...di uth gayi toh..armaan tum plzz jaon yahan se..
A:yeh kya ridhima..ek toh main itni subah subah tumhe surprise dena aaya aur tum mujhe jaane ko bol rahi ho
R:yeh tumhara surprise hai...yeh toh shock hai...plzz armaan dekho zidd mat karo...tum jaldi jao warna di uth gayi toh hum
mar jayenge
A:uthti hai toh uth jane do..kon darta hai tumhari di se...uthne do...
R:armaan tum samajh nahi rahe
Armaan romantically comes forward towards her ..puts his hand on her face..n says
A:ridhima tumhe mujhpe vishwaas hai na...
R:khud se bhi zyada
A:then dont worry...kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalega ki main yahan aaya tha..bas tum mere saath chalo
R:is waqt???kahan??
A:wahi toh surprise hai...tum jaldi se jao aur change karke aao...main neeche gaadi mein wait karta hoon
R:lekin armaan koi jaag gaya toh..
A:toh tum keh dena hospital mein emergence hai
R:haan..main bas abhi aati hoon ...tum neeche jao
Armaan gets naughty:kyun main tumhare kamre main rukta hooon na
n pushes him outside the dorr of her room...he goes dwn...
A:oh no main toh ridhima ko bolna bhool gaya
He calls her up..
R:armaan main aa rahi hoon na...tum 2 min nahi intezaar kar sakte
A:tumhara intezaar toh main zindagi bhar kar sakta hoon par flhaal maine yeh batane ke liye phone kiya ki...tum wahi dress
pehen kar ana jo maine us din gift ki thi
R:theek hai..ab phone rakho aur mujhe tayaar hone do
Anjali gets up with ridzy's voice..
A:ridzy kisse baat kar rahi ho...n wats the time..subah ho gayi kya
R:woh...woh...woh di hospital mein emergency i have to go.aur time abhi sirf 5 hua hai..tum so jao...
Anji goes bak to sleep...ridz gets ready n comes down...Armaan is awestruck by her beauty...he keeps staring at her
Ridz comes n snaps her fingers in front of him...Armaan comes bak to the original world
R:kya hua armaan...hosh ud gaye na
A:mera hi yeh haal hai toh unka kya hoga
R:unka? kiska??
A:kuch nahi tum chalo na
R:lekin armaan hum jaa kahan rahe hai
A:koi sawaal nahi...bas chalo
R:theek hai baba koi sawaal nahi
They finally reach the place...Armaan takes her in..
R:armaan yehn toh airport hai..hum airport kyun aaye hai
A:tumhe kisi se milwana tha
A:ridhima kaha na koi sawaal nahi...just wait n watch
R:armaan yeh tumhara koi mazaak toh nahi..plz armaan bolo na...mujhe darr lag raha hai
Armaan innocently:main tumhare saath mazaak kar sakta hoon ridhima
R:haan aur mujhe toh yakeen hai tum ab bhi mazaak hi kar rahe ho
Armaan smiles at her nervousness...the wait at the airpost for abt 15 mins wen there is an announcement of a flight landing
frm Delhi...
R:delhi...delhi mein toh tum rehte ho na .... wahan se kon aa raha hai?tumhare ghar se koi?
A:ridhima...kaha na wait n watch...
Armaan keeps lookin at the passengers getting dwn frm the plane...n finally he finds two similar faces...his smile gets
wider lookin at him...they too have a bigg smile lookin at him..ridzz notices that armi found someone
A:tum yahin ruko...main unhe lekar aata hoon...tumhe dekhkar bahut khush honge
n he leaves..n ridz is left thinking..
Armi walks towards them...
A:mom dad...ap log aagaye...kitna miss kiya maine ap dono ko
He touches their feet n then hugs his mom...
Mom:humne bhi tujhe bahut miss kiya bete...kitna bada hogaya hai tu...par tu itna patla kyun hogaya hai bete?parsoram tera
theek se khayal nahi rakhta na
A:mom ab aap aagaye hai na...ab ap mera khayal rakhna
Dad:arre tum dono maa bete hi batein karte rahoge...ya mere bete ko mujhse bhi milne doge
A:dad...kaise ho ap dad
n he hugs his dad..
Dad:missed u son
A:missed u too dad
Mom:ap tum dono baap bete mil liye na...chalo ghar chalte hai..waise armaan beta...tune kaha tha koi surprise hai..kya
surprise hai
Armaan remembers ridhima....he goes oh no shit...
A:mom dad ap log parkin lot tak just be bak
Mom:lekin armaan beta
but hes gone...they walk towards the parkin lot...meanwhile armaan goes to ridz
R:kahan the tum
A:sorry sorry sorry..ab chalein
R:lekin ab toh bata do...kon aaya hai
A:ridhima...bas 2 min aur..chalo
He takes ridz to the parkin lot...n then finally to his parents
A:mom dad yeh ridhima hai...pturns to ridhima]...aur yeh mere mom dad
Ridhima gets the shock of her life....she has met his mom dad...i mean he dint even tell her...otherwise she wouldve
prepared herslef to meet them...but now she was here standing speechless..n as nervous as she was wen she had to get her
results for her final year...infact more than that
She qucikly touches their that was the onli thing she thot of at that moment..armaan's mom was mesmerised by her
beauty...she goes n kisses ridhima on the forehead..
Mom:tum bahut sundar ho beta
R blushes:thanks aunty
Armaan's dad whispers in his ear...
Dad[to armaan]:mujhe tumhari pasans pasand hai
A blushes:thanks dad
Armaan:mom dad ghar chalein
they get into the car...Armaan and his dad take the front seat while ridz n his mom sit behind...they reach armi's house...
ridz goes with them inside...they start talking
Dad:waise beta tumne apna naam nahi bataya
R:jee Ridheema mera naam ridheema hai
Dad:aur tum kya karti ho
A:woh dad...ridhima doctor hai...mere saath sanjeevani mein
Dad:maine tumse poocha kya...yeh armaan ne isse humesha beech mein bone ki aadat hai
Ridz giggles...armaan gets embarrased
Dad:kya...maine sach hi toh kaha
Mom:ap bhi na mere bete ko bahut pareshan karte hai...tu  ton apne dad ko jaanta hai na armaan woh humesha mazaak karte
 rehte hai tu inki baat ko dhyaan mat de bete...
A:see dats my mom
Dad:yeh kya tum toh humehsha apne bete ki side leti ho
R:toh kya hua uncle...main hoon na main apka side loongi...
Dad:yeh hui na baat
he gives her a hgh five...Armaan keeps starin at this friendly nature of ridz with his family...he gets a smile on his
 face..lookin at ridz chattin with his mom dad..with such ease...she was just perfect he thot...perfect for his mom dad...
n perfect for him...n he loved this perfect person...


Edited by komalsirwani - 07 May 2008 at 11:23am

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