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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 11:01am | IP Logged
wow chaitra dats a real good suggestion but snce ive started with the beach one..il first complete dat n then surely do this marriage one Wink

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Originally posted by komalsirwani

wow chaitra dats a real good suggestion but snce ive started with the beach one..il first complete dat n then surely do this marriage one Wink


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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 11:25am | IP Logged

ohk guys...im updatn teh next scene in two parts...n im dont with the 1st part...so wil update it now...here it is


The cell was ringing constantly...but nobody was answering it....while the caller...kept waitng 4 someone to answer it..the owner of the cel...was busy preparing breakfast...probably for the caller itself...
Well after a few minutes..she came n answered the call...but before could she could just utter a hello....there came a stream of questions frm the other side of the fone...
A:ridhima...phone kyun nahi uthaya?kabse try kar raha hoon?kahan thi tum....pata hai mujhe kitni tension hogayi thi...landline par bh koi phone nahi utharaha...acha suno...raat ko neend theek se aayi ya mere khayalon ne sone nahi diya...
ridhima jawab toh do..are u der?
Anjali:mere pyaare hone waali jiju...agar ap baat karne denge toh hum baat kar sakenge na..
Armaan:anjie tum...tumne ridhima ka phone kyun uthaya
Anjali:cmon armaan...shes my sis...aur waise bhi tumne kyun itni subah subah meri behen ko phone kya...papa ko bata doon
Armaan:bata doon...darta nahi hoon main tumhare papa se...waise bhi ap toh officialy woh meri ho chuki hai...toh main usse subah phone karoon ya aadhi raat mein...koi kuch nahi kar sakta hai
Anjie:well poori tarah nahi...abhi toh bas engagement hui hai...jab tak shaadi nahi hoti tab she's my sis n not ure wife mr armaan malik
Armaan:yeah yeah ms anjali gupta...bas shaadi tak ka hi toh intezaar hai...ohk now act like a real good sali...aur jaake ridhima ko phone do...im missin her yaar
Anjie:kyun armaan..tumhari sali itni borin bhi nahi....cmon...
Armaan:flirting with me haan....see i have no probs...par woh kya hai...agar main tumhare saath flirt karne laga...toh atul mujhe ridhima se shaadi karne layak nahi chodega...so i betta dont flirt with u
Anjie:cmon armaan...atul isnt dat bad
Armaan:oh really...matlab ki atul tumhe acha lagta hai
Anjie slightly blushes n goes:armaaaaan
Armaan:caught u...hehe acha suno...ridhima ko bolo...main abhi aadhe ghante mein waha aaraha hoon...hum saath mein sanjeevani jayenge
Anjie:par tum dono ki aaj chutti hai na..tumne kal hi toh dad se baat ki thi
Armaan:yeah yeh tumhe pata hai mujhe pata hai par ridhima ko nahi pata...usse sochne do ke we're going to sanjeevani
Anjie:u mean ure folling my sis...kahan leke jaoge use
Armaan:dats a surprise...tum bas ridhima ko tayaar rakhna..n usse kuch mat batana...maine ek surprise plan kiya hai
Anjie:dats soo sweet of u armaan....ohks main ridzy ko keh doongi ready ho jaaye
Armaan:ohk saali ji take care
Anjie:bye jeeejuuuu

She cuts the cell n runs shoutin "ridzi ridzi"....n she sees her sister preparing something....shes goes towards her n asks...
Anjie:ridzz...tum yahan kitchen mein kya rahi ho....doctory chod ke cook banna hai
Ridz:nahi di...main toh bas yeh kheer bana rahi thi..
Anjie:subah subah kheer....kiske liye
Ridz:armaan ke liye...kal baaton baaton mein usne mujhe bataya usse kheer bahut pasand hai...aur woh apne bi ki haaton ki kheer bahut miss karta hai...toh maine bi se recipe li..aur uske liye bana rahi hoon
Anjie:awww dats so sweet of u...im sure armaan bahut khush hoga.,.waise bhi woh ghar aaraha hai..toh yahin khila dena usse
Ridz gets all panicky:what ...armaan ghar aaraha hai...par kyun..papa kya kahenge?
Anjie:cmon ridz...u ppl are engaged now...dad se usne baat karli hai...aur woh tumhe lene aarha hai..tum dono saath mein sanjeevani jaoge..aur is liye usne tumse kaha hai aadhe ghante mein ready ho jao
Ridz:aadha ghanta...omg di...main jaati hoon
N she rushes to get ready...she comes bak in 20 mins wearin her normal salwar kurta...n anjie looks at her upside dwn...
Anjie:yeh kya pehna hai ridz
Ridz:kyun di...maine toh apne normal suit pehna hai..acha nahi laga?
Anjie:nahi ridz...cmon tum apne hone wali pati ke saath pehli baar hospital aaogi...cmon wear something nice...lemme see..
Anjie takes out a nice white churidaar...with a dori behind...n a lovely pretty pattern in the front...n gives ridz...
Anjie:yes tum yeh pehnogi...this is perfect for a date
Ridz:date?par di hum toh sanjeevani jaa rahe hai
Anjie:yes yes...i mean this is perfect for ure first drive together
Ridz is a bit confused but goes n get changed...n she looks awesome...n then anjie dresses her hair...leaves them loose...n then she does a lil makeup for ridz...justa light touch up...something to match with the weather n then puts on a light coloured gloss on her lips...n then goes
Anjie:yes now u look perfect
Ridz:par di...i dont understand...yeh sab kyun
Anjie:arre ridz karna padta hai...dont argue with me...u look greatt..ab chalo armaan aata hi hoga

They go dwn...n see armaan on the door...talkin to nani...n he sees ridz....n almost trips n falls...when nani helps him...
Nani:yeh kya beta tum toh abhi se phisalne lage..abhi toh sirf sagayi hui hai
Armaan blushes...he comes in...n says ridz
Armaan:chalein
Anjie laughs:i know armaan tumhe jaane ki jaldi hai but...ridz ne tumhare liye kuch khaas banaya hai pehle woh toh chakh lo
Armaan:really
And there comes shashank...he sees armaan n smiles
Shashank:arre armaan tum aagaye...come lets have breakfast
Armaan goes n touches his feet...shashank blesses him n they sit on the breakfast table....n nani serves all of them breakfast....n then ridz gets the special kheer made 4 armaan....
Anjie:aur yeh tumhari fav kheer...ridz ne khaas tumhare liye banayi hai
Nani:haan armaan beta..isne khud apne haathon se banayi hai...mujhe toh madad karne bhi nahi diya...keh rahi thi ki saari kheer khud banayegi
Shashank:arre waah meri beti...ne kheer banayi hai...main bhi khaonga
Nani:lekin sabse pehle woh jiske liye yeh kheer bani hai
Anjie:aur tumhe kheer apne haathon se khilayegi ridzy...hai na...papa
Shashank:han haan ridhima beta armaan ko kheer khilao
Ridz blushes n takes the kheer bowl...n then takes a spoonfull of kheer...n feeds him....
Anjie:kyun armaan...kaisi bani...kheer
Shashank:batao armaan kaisi banay hai ridhima ne yeh special kheer
Armaan looks at Ridz n then gives her a smile ...a smile which assured her n told her that her kheer was the very best one he had ....n she understood that but he had to tell the others verbally..
Armaan:bahut achi bani hai
Ridz blushes...n then shashank goes saying he's getting late...n while leaving he just says"enjoy the day kids" n leaves...which leaves ridz confused...but others surely understand...
n then armaan goes"chalein"
Anjie:han haan zaroor...chalo
Armaan:what...tum bhi aarahi ho
Anjie:ofcourse after all tum log sanjeevani jaa rahe ho na...cant ul drop me too
Armaan gives her a look...n anjie laughs...
Anjie:ohk ohk baba jao..warna armaan wil kil me...il go in my car...u ppl have fun bye
Armaan:thanks anjie bye
They leave...Armaan goes n opens the door for ridhima...she just looks at him once...with all her love...n then gets in...n then armaan takes a deep breath n closes her door,..n goes "god i love her" n he too gets in frm the other door

He sits in the car...n then looks at ridz...n she smiles at him....n then he starts the car...she ons the music....armaan is lost in her beauty...though it looked like he was lookin in the front n drivng he was actually lookin at ridz frm the side of his eyes...every now n then...n then he puts his hand on hers .....

Armaan:ridhima...aaj tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho
Ridz:thanks...
Armaan:aur woh jo tumne kheer banayi thi....woh...
Ridz blushes and goes:mujhe pata hai bahut achi thi
Armaan:nahi woh itni achi thi...woh toh maine sabke saamne yunhi keh di thi ki achi hai but u see u need to improve with ure cooking
Ridz gives him an angry look n goes:armaaan....itni hi napasand hai toh agli baar se tumhare liye kuch nahi banaungi...
Armaan:paaka na...thank god main bach gaya...warna roz aisa khana ....khanapadta
Ridz gets all angry n dosent reply to him...n then he goes
Armaan:gussa ho
Ridz:nahi main kyun gusasa hongi...mujhe kya haq hai tumse gussa hone ka...tumhare liye pyaar se kuch banane ka
Armaan:oh really...
he stops the car...n then goes close to ridzz's ear...
Armaan whispers:haq hai...khana banane ka haq hai...khana khilane ka haq hai...aur gussa hone ka bhi...Mrs Ridhima Armaan Malik...apko poora haq...itni achi kheer banane ka...[ he lifts up her hand]jisse apka yeh deewana apke in pyaare se haathon ko chum sake[n he kisses her hand]
Ridz blushes...and hugs him....
Ridz:tum bahut badmaash ho...mujhe toh laga tumhe sach mein kheer nahi pasand aayi
Armaan:...nahi pasand aayi
Ridz:wat?
Arman:mera matlab ki nahi...mujhe kheer bahut pasand aayi
Both of them laugh n armaan starts bak the car



theyve just started for the journey ...wat happens in the rest of the journey...wil update soon...hope to see some real nice comments frm ul guys Wink



Edited by komalsirwani - 15 May 2008 at 11:34am
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 11:44am | IP Logged
hey komal wow yaar atlast scene samaj aa hi gaya wow yaar how romantic yaar angie ws teasng armaan nd he goi 2 gv her surprise nd he ws almostt faintd 2 saw ridz omg nd ridz ws confusd lke alwys hahahah,,...............
wonderful prt yaar it ws choooooooooooooooooooo cute..........realy lvd it..............ab dekhte hai armaan ka surprise nd wow ridz mde kheer fr hm awwwwwwwwww how sweeeeeeeeeeeet......................nd armaan alwys mazak bt lvly mazak cnt wait fr his surprise
cont sooooooooooooon
luv yachu....
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HAILAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...yaar komal..it was just MINDBLOWING Embarrassed sooo shweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttt Embarrassed ...plzz do update the 2nd part of this soon..cant wait 2 know wat happens Day Dreaming
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 11:52am | IP Logged

yachna wrote:
hey komal wow yaar atlast scene samaj aa hi gaya wow yaar how romantic yaar angie ws teasng armaan nd he goi 2 gv her surprise nd he ws almostt faintd 2 saw ridz omg nd ridz ws confusd lke alwys hahahah,,...............
wonderful prt yaar it ws choooooooooooooooooooo cute..........realy lvd it..............ab dekhte hai armaan ka surprise nd wow ridz mde kheer fr hm awwwwwwwwww how sweeeeeeeeeeeet......................nd armaan alwys mazak bt lvly mazak cnt wait fr his surprise
cont sooooooooooooon
luv yachu....

aww thx a ton yachu...gald u liked it...soo soo soo happy that u actually liked it..thx Embarrassed Embarrassed



Edited by komalsirwani - 15 May 2008 at 11:54am
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mahandra wrote:

HAILAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...yaar komal..it was just MINDBLOWING Embarrassed sooo shweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttt Embarrassed ...plzz do update the 2nd part of this soon..cant wait 2 know wat happens Day Dreaming

awww thx natahsa...glad u liked it..yea yea wil cont real soon this timeEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
hey komal............
wat do i say..........??
amazing ...........wow

i simply loved armaan n angie conversation.....
n Armi--Ridz part was so romantic......... Wink
suprisingly shashank bhi aacha laga LOL LOL LOL

hats off 2 u.....
waiting 4 d next update Wink Wink

--luv nishita

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