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FF:Dil ne tumko chun liya hai prt 5 pg 5 (Page 4)

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 9:17am | IP Logged
just read all 3 parts, sounds very interesting but cud u please make the parts longer??? pleeeasse?? Embarrassed

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AWESOME Clap Clap ..........simply awesome, I don't know any other way to put it. I'm stunned Davi........... you're a brilliant writer.......pls continue, coz you are very good at it.

Edited by esha - 24 May 2008 at 7:15am
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sweet prtz do cont n fell free to PM me! LOL
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Originally posted by kpatel123

just read all 3 parts, sounds very interesting but cud u please make the parts longer??? pleeeasse?? Embarrassed

sure i'll try to make them longer since u so sweetly requested!



Edited by Davi - 25 May 2008 at 10:54pm
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Originally posted by esha

AWESOME Clap Clap ..........simply awesome, I don't know any other way to put it. I'm stunned Davi........... you're a brilliant writer.......pls continue, coz you are very good at it.

thank u so much...really appreciate it...will pm u the link as soon as i update.

thanks again

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Originally posted by twinkle94

sweet prtz do cont n fell free to PM me! LOL

thanx for da comments.....will pm u when i update the next part.

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Hey everybody, thanx for the wonderful comments. Especially to all the silent readers whose pm's I receive.

I'm dedicating this part to esha who has been my inspiration throughout this ff..& kpatel123 I made this part longer…I hope its ok…


Happy reading Smile

Part 4

Shubh and his friends are talking to a guy.

Shubh: You know what to do, right?

Guy: Not exactly.

Shubh: How many times do I have to explain it to u?

Guy: I know what to do. Actually I wanted more money.

Shubh: Are you getting greedy? Anyway, here's the money, just do the job properly.

Guy: Yes sir, no problem. Thanks for the money.

A little later that day….

Aastha, Deepa & Dhruv are getting ready to sit for their test.

Aastha: I'm really nervous for this test, I hope I remember everything.

Deepa: Relax; I'm sure u will be fine, u spent the whole night studying unlike me who fell asleep.

Dhruv: haha u fell asleep, lazy bones…Aastha, don't worry u'll pass, I might just fail because I'm the lazy one.

Aastha: Oh its time…good luck u two.

Dhruv & Deepa: Good luck!!!!

All of them sit the test & come out feeling relieved

Aastha: thank god that's it's done, I hope I did ok. How do u guys feel?

Deepa: a little nervous but I'm glad it's over….

A few weeks pass, Aastha, Deepa & Dhruv are busy with assignments and projects…..

Then one day after the economics class, the lecturer asks to speak to Aastha privately.

Aastha: is there any problem Sir.

Lecturer: Actually Aastha, you are a very intelligent student but I have found some evidence that shows copying in the test. You and another guy have very similar answers. In fact you have the same wrong answers.

Aastha is completely shocked on hearing this.

Aastha: but…sir…I never copied from anybody, I studied really hard for that test.

Lecturer: I understand Aastha but there are procedures we have to follow regarding these cases. You could probably get a zero on the test or even a fail.

Aastha: nooooooooo….this can't happen…I didn't even look at anyone throughout the test…..you were there!

Lecturer: I know Aastha but I've got to speak to the other person as well & then we will see from there.

Aastha runs out from there with tears rolling down her face.

Deepa who was waiting for Aastha sees her running out of class.

Deepa: Hey Aastha, wait where are u going?

Deepa finally catches with her sees her crying. Deepa asks: what happened why are u crying?

Aastha in between sobs: they said…I …I cant believe it….he said I copied in the test…& I could fail because of it….

Deepa: oh my god…what…calm down…we all know how hard u studied…they can't do this…

PS: I have got exams going on at the moment so I won't be updating for the next 2 weeks
I hope u have enjoyed it…plzzzzz comment…



Edited by Davi - 28 May 2008 at 3:35am
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Brilliant work davi Clap please do continue after ur exams .
All d best 4 ur exams .

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