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Ishq Vishq (AK-SK-AR) Epilogue p47 (Page 5)

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reallyyyyyyyyy coolllllll partssssssss i love them plzzzz contuied soon

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fab part
just loved it
knowingly or unknowingly the guys r surely smitten by the girls weather they like it or not...
well they proved that cheating is fair in both love & war
waiting for kripa's mystery to b unfolded
loved it
continue soon
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thank you everyone for the lovely comments from sara and i...were glad you enjoy this ff

am posting another part today in a bit and sara will post tomorrow... Embarrassed
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Chapter 4:
Kripa drove off like a maniac heading home not daring to think about angad and what he had done. She furiously wiped the tears gushing down her eyes, parked the car and ran upstairs ignoring the screaming kumkum and riddz were doing behind her. She jumped on her bed and cried her heart out, as she drove down memory lane.

Flashback: Childhood Memories:
A little girl and boy are shown playing on the playground with one another, she turns around, her smile gets bigger as she stares at the boy, who smiles back. "chalo kripa hum wahaan khel te hai!" the boy said pointing north. Kripa turns and smiles, "acha chalo, angad jaldi karo naa!" Both run off north and play for a few more hours, when kripa stands up and pulls angad into a hug, "you're the best angad buddhu!"


The friendship between Angad and Kripa was unforgotten, everyone had assumed it would never break; both were so close that they could be seen as an inseparable couple. While the parents as the years went by realized their children would soon fall in love with one another, it had been seen long ago that there definitely was something between them. So many years of friendship would eventually turn into love when neither could not stand a minute away from the other.

Just one or two years before kripa's hatred…:
Kripa was very happy with Angad's company as well as vice versa, everything was perfect for them. One day, as kripa ran into angad's room, to bug him like her usual self would, she opened the door without knocking and bumped into him. Both fell on the bed not realizing what an awkward position it looked like but both had the feeling as though they were safe.

Kripa finally looked away from angad, and realized he only had shorts on, she blushed furiously and let go of him immediately. Jumping off the bed, but angad caught her hand.

"Kripa kya hua, tum teek to ho naa?" angad said smirking, (both are in teen years)

"ha ….who…main ttt…teek hoon angad, kyun kya hua?"

"mujhe lagta to nahin, teri shakkal aisi hai ki jaise tunne kahiye bhoot whoot dekhliya, main itna bhi bura nahin lagta shirt ke bina! Kaafi handsome dekh ta hoon, hai na?" angad asked with an innocent face, kripa nodded negatively, refusing to turn around.

"Angad, tum pagal ho gaye ho kya, chalo mera haat chodo main baat mein aati hoon, teek hai?"

"nahin, mujhe teek nahin lagta, tum yaheen raho naa aur meri madat karo" kripa's eyes grew wide.

"kkkk…kisliye?"

"yeh kya kkkkkripa, kya tum shah rukh khan ho jo kab se kkkk kaare jaa rahi ho?"

"Angad, please mujhe jaane do, waise bhi mujhe chachi ko kaam mein madat karni hai, tumhe jo jaaye tum leh lo lekin mujhe jaane do please…..!"

"areh yeh hui naa baat, mujhe jo chaaye main le lo?"

"ha, lekin jaldi karo, aunty shayad pareshaan ho rahiye hai?"

"pareshaan aur mom? Hmm lagta hai tumhe bhukaar hai? Ek minute yahaan ao"

"nahin main nahin aane waali, jaldi batao kya chaaye?"

Angad smirked, and pulled kripa towards him. Kripa's heart beat began increasing, yes they were good friends but she too had believed one day they were meant to be, and now the position they were in, really was going to complicate things. Kripa squirmed and fought with angad to let her go but he refused to, instead he pulled her against him, so her back was facing his chest. He softly wrapped his arms around kripa's waist and rested his head on her shoulders, where as kripa's heart beats increased.

"angad, kya kar rahe ho? Please jaane do mujhey.."

"nahin, kabhi nahin jaane dhoonga, hamesha kiliye haat tamna chaata hoon aur tum ho ki…" angad said pouting but then realized he wasn't supposed to say that. Kripa just stood there shocked what did he just say?

Angad placed a strand of kripa's hair behind her ear and watched her uneven breathing because of their proximity. He turned kripa around so now she was facing him, "kripa main tumse kuch kehna chaata hoon?"

Kripa gulped as angad chuckled slightly under his breath and continued, "kripa who, hum dhono bachpan se ek doosero ko jaante hai, lekin hai humare parents hamesha yaheen soch te hai ke hum dhono ke beech shayad kuch ho ga, aur aaj main un sab ki baatein sach karna chaata hoon, kripa kitne saal guzaar ge, main tumhari har baat jaanta hoon aur tum bhi lekin ek baat hai jo maine tumse hamesha chupaye, who hai ki main tumse bahaut hi pyaar kaarta hoon….I love you kripa, bachpan se lekhe aaj tak sirf tumhe hi chaha hai maine, kya tum bhi mujhse…"

Kripa stared at him, he loved her she smiled slightly and said, "I love you too angad buddhu!"

The smile on her face grew wider, angad smiled deeply at her and pulled her into an embrace. Both stood their for a while listening to one anothers breathing and heart beat, but eventually forgot that angad wasn't wearing a shirt.

"kripaaaaaaaaaaa! Kahan gayi yeh ladki?" naina screamed from the kitchen.

Kripa immediately let go of angad, and turned around, "angad please mujhe jaane do chachi mujhe dhoonde rahiye hai." kripa said walking towards the door and opening it. She turned around to say something to angad and realized what condition he was in. She blushed furiously and dared not to look at his well tanned abs, masculine body.

Angad raised an eyebrow at her, and realized what effect he had on her, he walked towards her. Kripa walked backwards hitting the wall as angad closed in on her. Just inches away from one another angad smiles at her and places a soft kiss on her cheek. Kripa opens her eyes and sees him blink. Turning crimson red she runs downstairs…..

"I love you kripa, I love you a lot…!" angad whispers behind,…

End of Flashback:
Kripa sat on top of her bed, just gazing out the window thinking about all those memories, how could she forget that room, that room where angad had brought her was where he had once confessed to her that he loved her and now today they were distant very distant, he wasn't the same no more and he forced her to change as well.

Where as on the other hand, we see Angad sitting at the bar a little drunk, thinking about past memories. For hours he sat there remembering the love between him and kripa, the friendship everything until the day hatred was only left in between them. He wiped the tear trickling down the side of his face, got up and left the bar, ignoring Sumeet and Armaan's questioning gazes and screams.

To be continued tomorrow….lol k guys I tried but as you can see im not very good at this….and thank you for all the previous comments….



Edited by Mimi_Rani - 01 June 2008 at 4:04pm

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great part Clap Clap ...wonder what caused angad n kripa to hate each other Cry .....plz cont soon Smile
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
hey just caught up.. great so far.. i wonder what caused the hatred between angad and kripa.. continue soon.. can't wait to read more.. Clap
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hey jus catchin up wiv ur ff
AR fan lool bt luvin da whole concpt
n da characters u chose really interstin
cnt wait 2 read mre updte sooon
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awesome dear , ak ki nafrat ka chakkar kya hia Cry

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