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Ishq Vishq (AK-SK-AR) Epilogue p47 (Page 13)

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
aww very cute
lked da endin great
luvin ru wrk updte soon

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Hi....

I just read youre whole ff, and i can only find one world to describe it with:

AWSOME.....I just loved the ff....(ak is one of my favourite couple)...but anyways

Like I said, youre ff is just great...
Youre ff is different from the others...
You have longer parts( maybe the others have to, but), youre story is very uniqe and different, and you intrudused the charachter in a very pretty way and its lots of other thing that i could mention...

Anyways, please continue youre ff ASAP....cant wait Big smile ...

xo-puzen Embarrassed
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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
really a sweet one please update it soon Clap   


"Zindagi Taj Mahal ho jaye,
Chandani khil ke kamal ho jaye,
Tum jo ban jaao dost mere,
Dil ki dhadkan bhi ek Ghazal ho jaye."


"Yeh dua hai tumhari zindagi sanwar jaaye,
Har nazar mein bas pyaar nazar aaye,
Tumhe jiski talash hai khuda kare,
Woh khud tumhari talaash mein aaye."


Edited by kvn1983 - 28 June 2008 at 9:35pm
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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 5:22am | IP Logged
fab part just read them...
sorry was busy wiht my job that i didnt get time to read ur fick...
gr8 going so AK r childhood sweethaerts... wonder what did Rakhi do to seperate the 2 of them & y????
waiting for the mystery to unfold...
continue soon
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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 7:11am | IP Logged
OMG,i wish everything gets sorted out soon...dere's soo much misunderstanding...
n marriage after 2 weeks??its toooooooooo gud...hope dere ll b lot of excitement........ Tongue Tongue Tongue

nice part...continue soon...

luv
*vini*
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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 11:19am | IP Logged
great part
hope kripa and angad sort out all of their misunderstandings.
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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 12:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by meow23

luvd d prt... it was rockng as usual...... omg so ridz started 2 feel sumthng 4 armi.... thnxx 4 d pm.. contd soonn Smile Smile

thanx dear we appreciate your comment....np and will continue later todayEmbarrassed

Originally posted by aRohAAnGeL

nice part!!

thankyou saara and i are glad you liked it...Tongue

Originally posted by 2113

hey ..it was great...sp d AR part...n its sweet dat u r doin d update n givin d credit to Saara as dis is her idea...for me no matter how gud an idea of a story is...its d writer who creates d magic n give it charm...n ur awesome...keep it up!!!!

thanx dear glad you liked it...awww thank you that means a lot...you just made my day thank you so much...Embarrassed

Originally posted by hyperash

ooooooo that was beautifuuull srsly...left me wantin moreee Wink ....luved the AR part...was cuuute Embarrassed keeep it uup....
thnkss for the pm...will b waitin for hte next 1...doo update sooon Smile
luuuvs aashna

thanx aashna glad you want to read more even though i sorta screwed the part up...Ouch thanx we appreciate it and i'll continue later todayBig smile

Originally posted by sweet-niz

aww very cute
lked da endin great
luvin ru wrk updte soon

thanx dear were glad you liked itEmbarrassed

Originally posted by Xo-PuZen

Hi....

I just read youre whole ff, and i can only find one world to describe it with:

AWSOME.....I just loved the ff....(ak is one of my favourite couple)...but anyways

Like I said, youre ff is just great...
Youre ff is different from the others...
You have longer parts( maybe the others have to, but), youre story is very uniqe and different, and you intrudused the charachter in a very pretty way and its lots of other thing that i could mention...

Anyways, please continue youre ff ASAP....cant wait Big smile ...

xo-puzen Embarrassed

omggoshhhhhh! aisha its been ages remember me...well i think you forgot but i wrote pyaar kya hulchul hai and tanhai way back thenLOL aww and thanx for the comment dear...the storyline is all due to saara thank you she's awesome...im just writing it for her..thats alll..and thanx so much means a lot to both of usEmbarrassed

Originally posted by kvn1983

really a sweet one please update it soon Clap   


"Zindagi Taj Mahal ho jaye,
Chandani khil ke kamal ho jaye,
Tum jo ban jaao dost mere,
Dil ki dhadkan bhi ek Ghazal ho jaye."


"Yeh dua hai tumhari zindagi sanwar jaaye,
Har nazar mein bas pyaar nazar aaye,
Tumhe jiski talash hai khuda kare,
Woh khud tumhari talaash mein aaye."

thanx so much nidha...and i love the poems...i saved both of them...ClapClap

Originally posted by Love''sAngel

fab part just read them...
sorry was busy wiht my job that i didnt get time to read ur fick...
gr8 going so AK r childhood sweethaerts... wonder what did Rakhi do to seperate the 2 of them & y????
waiting for the mystery to unfold...
continue soon

awww its k thank you for reading dear and we are glad you like this ff....yup hmm lets wait and see truth will be revealed in no timeEmbarrassed and will do thnx againTongue

Originally posted by coolvini4u

OMG,i wish everything gets sorted out soon...dere's soo much misunderstanding...
n marriage after 2 weeks??its toooooooooo gud...hope dere ll b lot of excitement........ Tongue Tongue Tongue

nice part...continue soon...

luv
*vini*

yup loads of misunderstanding between all the couples lol....yup decided on doing it early cuz saara forgot to tell me how long exactlyLOL thanx vini we are thankful for your comments and for liking itEmbarrassed

Originally posted by deeya123

great part
hope kripa and angad sort out all of their misunderstandings.

thanx deeya; they will in means timeTongue

thank you everyone for the comments...we both are glad with the response we have been getting for quite a while; keep the comments coming it makes us feel much better in the end of the day...thanx again and will update on saara's behalf later todayEmbarrassed - sukhiTongue



Edited by Mimi_Rani - 29 June 2008 at 12:44pm
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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 11:10pm | IP Logged

Chapter 10:

"Kumkum, I don't think I can go through with this marriage; please don't take it in a bad way but I really do NOT love you or anything, neither are we best friends and I have no clue why dadi thinks we would be happy off together. How about we try and get dadi to bail on us, I mean like try and cancel our marriage but keep the other two going? Will you please pitch in your help?" Sumeet desperately begged to a lost Kumkum. "Kumkum? Hello, bheja fry!" Sumeet screamed trying to get her attention; but she just got up and walked towards the balcony lost in her thoughts.

"Whats with her?" Sumeet asked himself in the mirror, "my hair! He thought to himself, I look horrible; ughh oh well I will get a haircut done tomorrow!" Forgetting about his hair he walked near Kumkum; who stood staring at the sky blankly. "is there something wrong Kumkum?" surprised with his soft tone; he continued on, "kya baat hai aaj tum khoyi khoyi si ho, kissi ne kuch kaha kya?" Kumkum nodded negatively. "toh phir kya baat hai?"

Kumkum turned slightly to stare at him; a slight tear trickling down her eyes, "I was thinking about what Dadi said; I don't know whether to marry you for her happiness or ruin her happiness; I don't know what to do, help you or give dadi a reason to smile, mujhe kya karna chaaye?" kumkum asked helplessly. "im sorry kumkum, but I really don't know what to do either, if you put it that way, I love dadi a lot but I don't think I can marry you because ….because" he stopped, the tears gushing down her eyes made his heart twist in pain. He reached towards her to wipe away the tears but she backed off, nodding her head painfully; and ran off. He stared amazed and shocked, where she had just been standing seconds earlier happy and suddenly in pain; most of all what surprised him was why it hurt him? Dard uska hai lekin tadap yahaan kyun hoti hai? He questioned putting his hand to his heart.

"Armaan, humhe kya karna chaaye? Tumhe lagta hai ke hum yeh sab dadi kiliye karna chaaye? Agar sach kahun, toh main dadi kiliye kuch bhi karne kiliye ready hoon chaaye who tumse shaadi karne ko kehti hai ya kuch aur…" Riddhima spoke dreamily; for some odd reason she was actually okay with the idea of marrying Armaan; why no one knew not even her. Armaan turned around to look at her, "Riddz, main tumse shaadi nahin karna chaata!" Riddhima glanced up meeting his powerful gaze; his words pierced through her heart like bullets, a lump formed in the back of her throat and tears tried forcing there way out of her tears. Blinking several times, she spoke, "lekin kyun dadi kiliye bhi nahin?" she suddenly sounded desperate to know why, "kya tum kissi se pyaar kaarte ho?" Armaan turned around, "main tumse shaadi isliye nahin karna chaata kyun ki main nahin chaata ke kissi ko bhi mujhse shaadi karne kiliye majboor kiya jaaye, aur waise bhi I don't want someone who doesn't love me; aur rahiye baat ladki ki, ha ek ladki hai jisse main pyaar kaarta hoon lekin who mujhe pyaar nahin kaarti!" Riddhima turned to look away from his back, that had done it, the tears gushed down her cheeks, landing softly on her hands. With a swift movement she ran out the door; leaving armaan speechless.

"Kripa, you can start coming back downstairs, Rakhi left; she wont be here for a while!" Angad spoke uninterested. Kripa glanced up, finding him dressed in blue jeans, a white button up shirt with two buttons undone, his hair gelled back and a french beard. She inhaled a sharp breath and looked away, her face flushing with heat, "dang does he look tempting!" she thought. "jab mujhe neeche aana ho ga tab main aa jaongi, tum meri chinta maat karo! Waise bhi tumne bahaut kuch ab tak kiya…yeh jhoot tumhe aur nahin karna padega!" Angad walked near her; grabbed her by the arm and swung her around, "maine aaj tak kuch nahin kiya hai samjhi! Isme meri koi galati nahin hai ke tum dusero ki baat maanti hoon lekin unki nahin jinse tum "pyaar" kaarti thi! And what do you think I want to marry you, you can just forget about that, get that, learn it love it and understood it!" he let go of her arm and walked out the room angered by her accusations; when would the truth reveal itself before her eyes, and how much longer would he be able to hold off his longing for her?

A week later things had changed in the mansion, Angad and Kripa were on small talk terms, Armaan and Riddhima talked like friends would and well the same for Sumeet and Kumkum. Lets take a glance at the lives of the couples exactly 7 days later, and yet 7 days before the wedding!

"Kumkum, what should I wear to the party tonight? I don't have anything good to wear, please yaar help me out!" Sumeet begged, Kumkum giggled and walked near his closet, carefully taking out a pair of jeans and black shirt. "Here, this will look nice on you! Now hurry up and lets go, you used to complain to me I take long who takes long now?" she mocked him. Sumeet smirked at her, "Well my dear, we both are going as a COUPLE, that means I have to look good to cover up for your ahem ahem, I will go and change now, cya!" he laughed and walked away. Kumkum's eyes narrowed, and she muttered under her breath, "I'll show you beautiful, that's a challenge Kumkum Mallik does not refuse to take!"

Half an hour later, Kumkum walked down the stairs to find an impatient Sumeet walking back and forth in the living room, "kumkum hurry up yaar, look who's taking long now!" he screamed for the hundredth time when it had just been two minutes that he had been completely ready. He looked up and found Kumkum, dressed in a gorgeous black and silver sari, her hair down in curls, beautiful make up done to enhance the beauty of her eyes; his mouth full open in awe. Kumkum smirked and walked near him shutting his mouth, "andar makki bhar jaayegi!!" and walked away laughing to herself. Sumeet quickly ran ahead of her and opened the door, "let's go my sweetheart!" he spoke by habit, dropping a kiss to her forehead. She looked up into his eyes confused, things had truly taken a turn in their life the past few days!

Flashback:

"Kumkum, why are you crying?" Sumeet asked after Kumkum had ran out of his room the other night. Kumkum nodded negatively and through her muffled voice managed to speak, "I…I am…not….cry…crying!" Sumeet glared at her, "you are such a horrible liar, and you expect me to believe that when I see this white water droplets pouring out of your eyes and sliding softly down your cheek? Then my gosh you must really see me as a duffer!" he spoke in mock horror. Kumkum got up quickly, when Sumeet grabbed a hold of her hand, "seriously yaar baat kya hai? Tum ro kyun rahiye ho?" Kumkum overcome with pain turned around and hugged him. Sumeet stood frozen, he was confused, it felt nice to have her there, like he had been complete…he smiled this is where he wanted to be….where as kumkum thought, "kaise batao tumhe ki main tumhe….I love you sumeet, lekin tumhe yeh ehsaas kab ho ga?"

Moments later, both let go of one another unwillingly, Sumeet wiped Kumkum's tears and said, "please don't cry kumkum, you look horrible with tears and to think dadi is going to say you are already making my daughter cry before marriage, what about afterwards? So please cheer up, at least for me!" kumkum smiled and hugged him again as he laughed softly.

End of Flashback:

"Armaan, what do you want to do today, I'm bored, how about a basketball match between both of us?" riddhima asked a sleepy armaan. Armaan looked at her, "not now riddz, I am so tired, I didn't get a good night sleep last night, too much was on my mind." Riddhima's eyes furrowed in frustration, "kya hua; tumhari tabeeyat toh teek hai naa?" Armaan rolled his eyes, "kuch din pehle teek thi lekin jabse tumse dosti ki tabse maine apne liye ek pagal khane mein bed hold kar liya hai!" he laughed silently; while Riddhima grabbed a pillow and began hitting him hard. "Ahhh!" Armaan screamed, shaking with laughter and her soft pillow hits and her anger.

Moments later, the screen moves closer, an entire room is covered in feathers, pillows ripped apart, and in the middle of the bed were two mature rather at this moment immature adults; still hitting one another with pillows. Armaan hit riddhima and vice versa; taking a chance Armaan stole Riddhima's pillow and threw it behind me. Riddhima looked at him and punched him. "awww! Maar daala!" Armaan winced in pain but caught hold of Riddhima's arm causing her to land on him as both fell back. Both looked into one another's eyes; not awkward by their positions, or if they were just friends….but something in his eyes gave her a lot of happiness. She refused to let go until he looked away before he leaned in to do the unexpected. Sighing she looked away as well suddenly red with embarrassment; "sorry!" and with that she took off.

Flashback:

Riddhima sat in the dining room table frustrated with Armaan's constant ignoring her, now and then he would pass a rude remark, or manage to pull off a flirty tone with her but now he had just gotten the worst he could do. He had actually been ignoring Riddhima completely, in hopes of making her realize she loved him! Well it was just a same old same old day when Armaan walked in to the room with hot coffee in his hands, "Armaan!" Riddhima called out to him but he just walked away pretending as if he had not heard anything. Frustrated she ran after him, grabbed his arm and turned him around, the hot coffee spilled over his arm. He winced in pain; Riddhima let out a shriek of pain before grabbing his arm and running his arm under the faucet. "im so sorry! My gosh armaan yeh sab naa hota if you just had turned around!" she sounded frustrated. Armaan rolled his eyes and stuck his tongue out at her; the pain disappearing at the soft touch of her hand.

"Leave it, I can do it myself!" his voice bitter suddenly. She glanced at him shocked as he pulled his hand away; nearly around the corner when she spoke desperate, "please armaan don't ignore me like this, can we atleast please be friends….or enemies, I miss your bugging me!" Armaan turned a sloppy grin on the side of his face, but he managed to turn it into an innocent look, "why do you miss me? What am I to you nothing but a majboori, a forced decision upon you!" he hollered back slightly aggravated. Riddhima glanced up, "because….because…..I like it when you tease me, you make me feel like I'm important…and because I…I… like you!" she whispered the last bit to herself. Armaan walked near her, Riddhima backed towards the sink, staring in his eyes. Suddenly she was stuck between his hold, he tucked a piece of her hair behind her ear, before he leaned down and said, "I missed you too, duffo!"

End of flashback:

To be continued….next parts confessions probably, and wedding rituals…and thanx for the comments everyone really loved reading the replies...saara and i appreciate all of themEmbarrassed

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