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An Arrow of Love~RN fic..udtd-pgs 47 & 48 [9/6] (Page 44)

saanch_69 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 August 2009 at 7:16am | IP Logged
~Forty Seven~

     As he walked in, he was in a trance…..unable to decide where to head. He knew she was Aayesha……the girl he hated, n he's sure he has started doing that again after knowing the truth. But then what was it he just felt…….why did he felt it nice when she hugged him…..why the hell did he want to hug her back tight to him…..when he was sure he doesn't love her anymore…….why couldn't he say anything to her in return, why her sad eyes disturbed him so much

     Suhaan may haven't said this to anybody, but in the deep interiors of his heart, may be even unknown to his own self, he wanted to see her once before he leaves….why??? He himself had insulted her the previous day…then why? All these had occupied his mind as he walked in…..but the announcement brought him back to his senses

        "ALL THE PASSENGERS OF BRITISH AIRWAYS FLIGHT No. BA – 146, ARE REQUESTED TO PROCEED TOWARDS THE CHECK IN AREA" n he approached one of the British Airways' counter there


        "What did you say?" she asked

        "Are you sure this is Ashi?" Sameer asked

        "What kinda joke is this? I met her before on your insistence, remember?"

        "Hmmm" he uttered as he saw her walking out with Rahul n Manish, "We need to go home….now" he hurried

        "But why…… What happened?" she asked following him, confused "Won't we talk to her?"

        "I said we need to go home" he repeated again

        "Sameer….wait" as she went on to stop him, "Tell me what's wrong?"

        "Can't you listen to me once without knowing the reason?" his tone stern

        "Hmmm" she didn't utter a word again following him to the car, she kept mum all through knowing it was surely a very serious thing or he wouldn't have said it like that.

     Sameer drove the car silently, but it seemed there was something constantly brimming up in his mind…..he sat there biting his lip, as he rubbed his temple with his fingers, Mehr knew it was something more than just the Suhaan-Ashi problem


        "Good for him that he didn't do anything to you" stated Rahul

        "Huh?" Manish looked at him, "What did you think he would do?"

        "May be say something insulting yet again" he sighted, "N I had decided not to leave him this time"

        "Rahul please" Ashi interrupted

        "You didn't do that earlier also" said Manish

        "What?" Ashi asked, "What did he do Manish…..tell me?"

        "Nothing like that….just you know, angry young man" he teased

        "I don't repent whatever happened" Rahul said

        "But what did you do?"

        "I……I just" he was hesitating to say that as she looked on impatiently, "I just held him by his collar…that's it"

        "You did that in a restaurant?"

        "Hmm….so? He was talking rubbish"

        "Whatever he was talking, you don't have any right to do that publicly" she declared

        "I was doing that for you…..n you are accusing me?"

        "No I'm not……am just trying to say that you should try to behave yourself when in public"

        "Huh…..I can't control it"

        "But Rahul…..she's right, didn't you notice the faces of the people there?

        "Why would I? I was just seeing him… like that"

        "Ohk fine……I think we should drop this right here" Manish suggested looking at his face

        "Hmmm" Ashi nodded n they went


     As they reached home, he got out quickly n she followed him up to their room, he didn't even care to inform his Mom that they were back…..sitting on the bed with his head down, Mehr neared him,

        "Sameer…." she was a bit stunned by his act, he looked up at her, his eyes dull, "What's so wrong with you suddenly?" she asked sitting beside him, placing an hand over his shoulder

        "You know who she was actually?"

        "Wasn't she Ashi?"

        "She was Aayesha"

        "Who Aayesha?" he kept silent for a moment as if how to start it

        "The girl, to whom I was engaged to…... prior to you"

        "What?" he nodded

        "But how's this possible?"

        "It has been possible… many days, Suhaan has taken her as Ashi….not knowing that who she was"

        "But he must have seen her when you got engaged to her?"

        "No he wasn't here……he was in London then"

        "Didn't he see any of her pics?"

        "No…..we had kept her identity secret from him"

        "But why?"

        "When I told him that I was not going to marry her, because she has someone else in her life…..he was very angry at her"

        "Oh that means she loved him back then only, but that's good"

        "I don't know that, as she didn't tell me his name……but after hearing that Suhaan started hating her, he tried to take out as much information he could from me n Di"

        "You mean he tried to find her out?"

        "Hmmm, that's right"


        "To teach her a lesson…..he's not the one to let go anyone so easily"

        "But that wasn't his thing to do……I mean, if you had no problem with that, why he?"

        "Because he's like that only……he knew that I would do nothing for that, so he took it as his headache"

        "This is too much"

        "I know…..but he has always been like this, fought for me, even when someone bashes up with his friends, he takes a stand for them"

        "That's ok but……following someone who has nothing to do with you now, is just too irritating"

        "When he decides on doing something he turns like this only…..n that is the only reason we had kept her hidden from his reach…fearing that he would harm her"

        "But what's the use? He has messed up his own life so pathetically"

        "I don't know how to resolve this"

        "You mean to say, this is the only reason behind the difference between them?"

        "I don't see any other" he stated, "I don't want his life to get spoilt just because of me" his voice heavier

        "Oh ho Sameer….nothing would go wrong now"

        "If we can set things right?"

        "Why don't you call up his friend…..what's his name….Manish?"

        "Hmm, I would do that" as he quickly dialed him up, "Manish"

        "Ya Sameer Bhai" he said on his way back home

        "I wanted to ask you something"

        "Hmm…." he knew what was coming

        "Is Ashi being Aayesha, the only reason why Suhaan has left her?" his tone clear n strict

        "Yes……it's the only reason, or it was all more than fine between them…..they love each other so much"

        "Did she know who he was before that?"

        "I don't know that exactly but as Rahul told me, Ashi knew that much before but she feared that she would loose him….n thus she couldn't tell him"

        "N when did he get to know of her?"

        "Umm, on her birthday….that's Saturday"

        "I knew it….anyways thanks Manish, I'll call you later"

        "What? Is it the only thing bothering him?"

        "Yes….it is. I knew he loves her too much, or he wasn't the one to be broken that much"

        "Hmm…..but Ashi's a lovely girl, so much right for him" she said

        "I know her, she's good at heart……" escaped his mouth, he glanced at her for her reaction, but she didn't take it otherwise, she wasn't the one to do that…..knowing Sameer well
        "So what are we going to do?"

        "We need to meet her……"

        "Won't we say this to Mom-Dad now?"

        "No let it be settled first"


        "Would you come with me to her place?" he asked

        "Is that a question to ask Sameer? Of course I would come"

        "Thanks Jaan….for being besides me" his voice relieved as he hugged her


        Suhaan reached there by 9…..he didn't want to go home, so he went for the office straight from the airport…the staff had just started arriving, n they were more than happy to have him back amongst them

        "That's a pleasant one Suhaan" said Mr. Jones greeting him as he smiled back at him

        "Yeah…..we had been missing you a lot since you left" said Irene

        "That's so sweet of you all" he said before heading to his cabin, things haven't changed much, at least it didn't seem so. But something had really changed somewhere……but he had decided to remain indifferent to that

        "Suhaan…." smiled Alex while hugging him, "I was waiting for you only"

        "You knew I was coming?" he asked

        "Ya….actually I called up Mr. Malhotra yesterday"

        "Who….. Bhai?"

        "No no Senior Mr. Malhotra"


        "Actually…I have been going through some lodging problems these days"

        "Hmm" he uttered while sorting the files on the table

        "So I had asked him if I could stay on in the company's residence for some days"

        "So what did he say?"

        "That I can…n added that you are arriving here, so you will have some company too"

        "So you are going to sit on my nose from now on?"

        "Yeah….." he teased, "Any problem?"

        "Well if the company's owner had permitted you to stay on there….then I suppose I'm left with no choice at all"

        "No if you say…I'll try to manage that" he said

        "Ah…don't you think I'm too used to these tactics of yours?"

        "Yeah….you might be"

        "Have you shifted already?"

        "I'll do that tonight"

        "Cool…..then do me a favor" he said, "I'm giving you some time. Just shift now, n take my luggage along with you"

        "You din't go there? You have come straight from the airport?"

        "Yeah…'s the same thing dude….take my car n luggage too, it's by the reception" he said

        "You are too much"

        "I know" n Alex went out……

     Well the actual thing goes like this ……Sameer had asked Alex to stay on with him, he didn't trust him knowing Suhaan, he would again be like he wants to, but if Alex stays may he'll not be able to do that freely. So Alex had made up a convincing story that would help him to keep a watch on him

        "Suhaan….." he entered

        "Now what?"

        "There's a call from your home" as he took it


        "Suhaan….what's wrong?" Sameer said

        "I didn't do anything yet"

        "Weren't you supposed to call once you reach?"

        "But I don't do that normally"

        "Mom was worried for you…..n we too"

        "Stop worrying so much, I can handle myself"

        "Fine, you had something?"

        "Ah….ya I did"

        "Then why did Alex told me that you didn't?"

        "You know what Bhai….stop treating me like a kid; I'll have it when I'm hungry"

        "Which you won't be ever"

        "Bhai….I have lots a work to do, I'll call you later, n give a hug to Mom from my side" saying he hung up

     After sometime, Alex came back dumping the entire luggage at his place, but he wasn't empty handed,

        "Have this" he said keeping a foiled container in front of him

        "Now what's this?" he asked looking up from the file he was going through

        "Ah….actually I was hungry, I ate while coming back, so thought of you" Suhaan sat still staring at him

        "I know who asked you to do all this"

        "Do what?"

        "This stupid idea must be Bhai's; he was asking me that only"

        "Ok he told me, now just have it"

        "But I don't eat these junk foods"

        "Why do you always jump on to conclusions? At least have a look" he opened it to find chicken salad

        "Fine, I'll have it…..thanks"

        "You are always welcome" he winked at him before leaving



saanch_69 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 August 2009 at 7:19am | IP Logged
      It was almost 3-4 days that Suhaan had left for London, Sameer n Mehr were to visit Aayesha 's place that evening, with all the prior information from Rahul, but they didn't tell him that they might meet her…..thinking she might get cautious

        "But I'm not too sure, how will I start it?" asked he turning on the gear

        "First you decide what you want to know?" she cleared

        "I want to know what happened…..between them"

        "No….you know what happened, isn't it?"

        "Ya but may be she'll be able to tell it clearly" he sighted

        "So basically you want to be sure what you know is right or not?"

        "Yes Ma'am"

        "Cool…..then we should just meet her up, n let the conversation flow naturally"

        "I don't doubt it provided you are there to handle it" he winked

        "Sameer, you know sometimes I wonder….can you do anything on your own other than business….stop depending on me too much, I'll start dominating you"

        "You think you'll start?"

        "Ya…..then what?"

        "You already do that, but I quite like that"

        "I know"

        "Ohk so here we come" as he parked the car

        "Is it theirs?" she asked n he nodded, "How many times did you come here?"

        "Once with Di"


        "No actually twice"


        "Ya I came to drop Rimi once"

        "Who's that?"

        "Her kid sis"

        "You know them quite well?"

        "Can we go in now?"

        "When did I say no" as they walked in through the garden, "Nice stretch"

        "Hmmm" he walked ahead of her, ringing the bell they waited

     Rimi was waiting for her friend

        "I'll take that, it must be Riya" she shouted at the servant, jumping off to the door she went, "Stupid….why are so late?" she asked too sure that it was her only

        "Hi…..Rimi" greeted Sameer with a smile,

        "Shit….am so sorry" she uttered biting her lip, "I thought it was Riya"
        "Stupid Riya" he added

        "Ya……but why are standing out, please come in" she said letting them in

        "Ah…..this is my better half, Mehr"

        "Hi" Mehr greeted her

        "Hi…... I have seen you at your engagement"

        "Oh I'm sorry I din't"

        "Not a problem…..I must say you are so pretty"

        "Thanks n you are too sweet" she said

        "Thank you….come in" she took them in, "Baba…..look who's here"

        "Arre Sameer beta…..come in"

        "Hello Uncle" he greeted touching his feet n Mehr followed him,

        "No beta….that's fine" he said to her, "Rimi go n call you mother, say Sameer beta has come with his newly wed"

        "Hmmm" she went

        "Mr. Malhotra is too particular about these things, but seriously it wasn't needed" he said as the two exchanged looks

        "Ah….Uncle, am sorry but Dad didn't send us here"


        "Actually we wanted to meet…..Aayesha"

        "Aayesha?" her Maa asked as she arrived, "Did she do anything?"

        "No Aunty…..actually we wanted to talk to her" he said, Rimi knew why

        "About?" her Baba asked

        "About… brother"

        "Your brother?"

        "Actually Uncle……my brother……." he hesitated

        "Actually Suhaan n Aayesha have been meeting from the past few months…..but there has been a misunderstanding between them of late….so we thought of clearing that" she let it out in one breath, Sameer smiled at her, as Rimi batted her eyelids

        "Ya Di was telling me" said she

        "Why didn't you tell me?" her Maa asked

        "I din't knew it was Suhaan" she lied smiling at Mehr

        "You know him?" she asked

        "Maa Rahul brought him here remember when Di wasn't well" she whispered

        "Ohk fine…..go n call her down" her Baba said

        "Ah…..Uncle, would you mind if we talk to her alone?" she asked courteously

        "No no beta, that's fine" he said, "Rimi…take them up"

        "Ya sure" as she preceded them to the study, "Please have a seat" showing them, "I'll just be back"


     Ashi sat in the balcony on the swing, unknown of what was going to happen in the next few moments

        "Di" she called on entering

        "Am here"

        "Someone has come to meet you"


        "Some relative"

        "Who Pretty aunty?"

        "No….someone else, you come na" she pulled her up

        "But at least tell me" she turned to go down

        "No no they are waiting in the study"

        "Why there…..isn't Maa-Baba talking to them?"

        "Oh ho….see for yourself" she took her in

        "Ah….hi Ashi" greeted Mehr seeing her enter n she was more than shocked to utter anything as tears brimmed up

        "You people talk…..I'll be back"

        "You can stay back Rimi" Sameer said

        "No that's ok, may be Mom needs me down"

        "Hmm" Mehr made her sit, "Ashi don't worry….we had heard all about the matter" she said

        "But in past few days…Suhaan didn't let us know that his Ashi were you" Sameer said

        "I know……that day when I went to see him in the office….."

        "You came to meet him?" she nodded

        "Ashi…..please let us know it clearly, what had actually happened between you" Mehr urged as Ashi broke down hugging her, "Don't worry…..we'll bring him back to you" she assured her

     Ashi started on……as she felt secured opening up to her

        "When we first met at the pub, I haven't met you then" she said looking at Sameer, "It was the day before his b'day, we had a fight"

        "Ya I remember, he was furious that day" he recalled, "That was you?"

        "Hmm, n then we met through Rahul before he went to London"

        "But didn't you tell him your full name?" asked Mehr

        "I did….but everyone calls me Ashi, so may be he didn't notice that"

        "Hmmm… you loved him when you said you had someone in you life?"

        "No….I said that just like that" she quickly cleared it out

        "But why?"

        "I don't know….."

        "May be you did?" sighted Mehr she looked on, "Anyways even if you didn't we can say that to him?"

        "No…..I don't want to say that….no more lies" her voice determined

        "Ohk…as you say"

        "When did you get to know that he's my brother?"

        "At your engagement party"

        "N you ran away from there?"

        "I was worried n I didn't want to loose……" she stopped

        "N he came to meet you at midnight?"

        "We know that Sameer, don't we?" Mehr asked

        "But I tried to tell him so many times but…..failed"

        "How did he get to know of it?" he asked

        "I don't know…..but…..I didn't hide it knowingly, I can't hurt him so much, I love him" she said sobbing

        "I know" Mehr soothed her looking at Sameer

        "Aayesha look at me" she did, "Suhaan loves you too much, n you too… don't worry at all, it's just that he's too….."

        "He's stubborn……n snobbish too" Mehr added

        "No he's not that bad……" slipped her mouth

        "Oh ho" teased she in return

        "What I mean to say is that…..I'll bring him back to India soon…..n back to you" Ashi looked at him hopefully

        "I know you would….I trust you"

        "N so do I" Mehr added hugging her


     As they reached home, they noticed the spread outs in drawing room

        "Mom was anybody invited today?" she asked

        "No beta…..they weren't invited, they are your Dad's associates"

        "Oh ok"

        "Who Mom?" Sameer asked

        "Mr. n Mrs. Chopra"

        "Mom you should ask Dad not to bring these business matters home" Mehr suggested

        "No no it wasn't that at all"

        "Then?" they asked

        "They were here for their daughter's proposal"

        "What?" shouted Sameer

        "Ya that girl, ah……what's her name? Ya Ravina"

        "But for whom?" he asked

        "Sameer….you are already married" he nodded, "Now who's left?"

        "Suhaan?" this time the shout was even louder

        "Why are you shouting?" Mehr said
        "Because Suhaan would never approve this, I tell you Mom, just call them up n inform this" he urged

        "I know……I even told them this"

        "But they said that he knows Ravina from a long time, she likes him…..n he too"


        "I was thinking of how to tell him this?" his Mom asked

        "I'm telling you….don't do that or he's not coming back soon"

        "Sameer come on" Mehr dragged him into the room, "What's wrong with you?"

        "What's wrong with them? How can they even think like that?"

        "Well I think that half of city is after Suhaan now……"

        "But that stupid has lost his mind" his tone irritated

        "What are we going to do now?" she asked

        "What else…..I need to go there n convince him"

        "Great!" she cheered

        "Hope it turns great"


     From the past few days, he was sure he wasn't missing her at all, he had forced himself to do that……well how can someone miss anyone, when she's right there with him, always….unknown to this fact he lived

     That evening, it was raining when they came out of the office. These days Alex took him home along….almost forcibly.

        "Just wait… seems I have left my cabinet open"

        "How silly is that?"

        "Just five minutes……don't leave"

        "Make that fast"

        "Ya ya" as he ran

     As he stood there watching the rains for sometime….he saw her standing amidst them….enjoying the drops on her. As their eyes met, she smiled wide at him, to which he smiled back…..his of a bit confused one,

        "Suhaan……" called she n he waved at her, "Come here"

        "No am fine… carry on" he replied

        "Oh ho….." failing she came to him, pulling him out of the shed with her,

        "Ashi, what are you doing?"

        "Having fun…..sometimes even you should have, it's not that bad" she said


        "Oh ho……now will you stand like this?"

        "Then what?"

        "It seems like you are being punished to stand here"


        "Go back where you were" she said pushing him

        "Hey I din't mean that" he caught her hand to pull her closer

        "Leave me….I don't want to talk to you"

        "I won't" he grabbed her neck making her hard to move out of his grip, lightly planting a peck on her nose tip making her blush

        "Why are you always like this?"



        "Hmmm…..but you still love me?"

        "I'll always love you" she shouted as her voice echoed in the air

        "Suhaan………" shouted Alex bringing him back, he turned facing him, "What are you doing there?"

        "I was with……." he stopped noticing that he was alone, "I was just enjoying rains" he said coming back

        "But it's so chilly…..I'm sure you would catch cold"
        "Let's move" n they went

     He took a hot shower, n yes he had caught cold, sneezing he came out

        "I told you" said Alex

        "Ya ya….now don't start another set of lectures"

        "What were you doing there?"

        "I told you….didn't I?"

        "Enjoying rains…..alone?"


        "Strange n silly too"

        "Anyways good night"

        "Won't you have anything?"

        "Am not hungry, you have it" saying he went in, well not to sleep but to think over what was wrong that he imagined her


     The next morning…..he was in his bed still, hardly opening his eyes, glancing at the watch beside him……n yeah someone else too

        "What are you doing here?" he asked, as Sameer sat comfortably on the couch staring at him

        "Waiting for your sleep to get over"

        "What are you doing in London?"

        "Why can't I come here?" Suhaan turned aside to this, "Now get up….enough of sleeping"

        "It's Sunday…..lemme sleep" covering himself fully

        "I know….but get up"

        "Why? There's no office today"

        "I have something important to talk"

        "Hmmm, am listening"

        "No first you get up, n freshn up, then we'll have our breakfast"

        "Why do I need to follow that?"

        "I heard you haven't taken your dinner last night"

        "Where's that messenger?"

        "He's gone out……now come on get up" pulling him up by his hands

        "Why are you all like this?"

        "You know why….now go n make it quick"

     Sometime later, they were seen having breakfast

        "So what was it?" he asked

        "I know what the problem between you two is" Sameer said

        "Who two?"

        "Now you stop fooling me, you know it very well, who I'm talking about"

        "So what? I don't like to discuss anything about that"

        "But you have to"

        "Why? Is it any compulsion or something?"

        "Yes it is… can't hurt someone for such a silly matter…..forget about someone else, you are hurting yourself the most"

        "It's not as silly as you are making it out to be"

        "Of course it is, punishing someone for a thing which she had done unknowingly… not right Suhaan?"

        "She had kept it hidden from me"

        "Only because she knew she'll loose you if you get to know this"

        "She was so right"

        "No she wasn't…..because you love her"

        "What do I need to do to prove that I don't?" he shouted

        "Nothing much….you have to do it all you used to"

        "Look Bhai…..I know this is going nowhere" he stood up

        "You are avoiding it"

        "I don't need to discuss my personal life with anyone"

        "Seems like you are forgetting who I am?" he asked sternly

        "No certainly not….but remember you had told me once that I have no right to interfere in your personal life"

        "But that was different Suhaan?"

        "No it wasn't…..n now leave this topic"

        "Fine….Mom has sent a message for you" he said


        "There's a proposal for you"


        "I mean for your marriage"

        "What rubbish?"

        "Yes…..she's Mr. Chopra's daughter……you know her well"


        "Ravina Chopra"

        "I don't believe this… can she do it?"

        "You know her well"

        "I would rather choose not to"

        "But will you accept it?"

        "Of course Not" he declared


        "Huh? Excuse me…….I don't want to marry anyone"

        "Except her"

        "Stop it Bhai"

        "Then why not Suhaan?"

        "I don't want to marry anyone, that doesn't mean I would marry her"

        "No matter how loud you shout, you will love her all your life"

        "Fine I would……"


        "I said I would accept Ravs' proposal"

        "Suhaan are you kidding?"


        "You can't spoil your life like this, it's not a joke"

        "It is Bhai to someone, n anyways my life can't get any worser"


        "Are you telling this to Mom…..or I would do that?"

        "Suhaan……think again what are you trying to do?"

        "Bhai it's final" he shouted as he went in n Sameer stood there amused


That's all for now

CYa with the next oneSmile
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Posted: 28 August 2009 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Oh......I am here again praising SUHAAN. Donno y cant c any fault in fact whenever he gets angry, shouts at ppl, hurts them.....I feel he is hurting himslef the most. I feel he's getting all the more helpless. It seems I can really feel his emotions. Well, may b thats coz I am a bit like SUHAAN....too arrogant to think of others n their problems.....but blv me the more I think I shud not care for others the more I actually care for them n I knw SUHAAN in like this only. The more he shows he's hurting others n he doesnt care abt that the ore he's caring abt them. To me, the words 'I dont care' itself shows 'I do care' else it was not needed to say these words.

I liked the way Sameer was trying to make Mehr understand the way SUHAAN is. I knw many think SUHAAN is too stubborn n he shud behave himself but I wud say thats HIM, his nature. For example, Ashi was too nervous to tell SUHAAN the truth. I knw if in her place SUHAAN wud not hav been scared to confess the truth coz he's like that....never afraid to say wats true. But Ashi, by nature, is more shy n nervous n so she cudnt do that. But the irony is one can easily connect wid Ashi's state of mind, her nervousness can be understood too easily coz most of the ppl r like that, most of the ppl wud fear to reveal the truth like this. On the other hand, SUHAAN is too unique by nature to do that. One cannot connect wid his state of mind that easily, one cannot understand his arrogant nature so easily coz ppl r not usually like that.

Anyways, I can go on n on trying to explain that SUHAAN is ryt coz everyday even for once I do think abt HIM n annalyse the whole story. I wud say I liked this part as well. To be true I like his arrogant nature.....I thinkppls shud be like this only...only if ppl can always express their dislikes like him, they dont need to lead a pretending life or they dont need to feel bad from inside or they dont need tobe tensed over anything. They can express freely watever they feel n at the end of the day they can live widout any burden or confusions.

Well, I think I really need to stop now. Pls continue soon n thnx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 29 August 2009 at 6:22am | IP Logged

now he want to marry to ravs' oh god when he will relise that he love her and she is a part of his life lovly update dear

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Posted: 29 August 2009 at 10:40am | IP Logged
see what i mean when i say he's stubborn

Anyways a Great update !! Thumbs Up

Suhaan Loves her soooooo much, but god he is so egoistic Angry You Know if Suhaan was a Real Guy, his Ego would have broke his Love Life Ouch

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Posted: 30 August 2009 at 8:52am | IP Logged
~Forty Eight~

     Sameer called up Mehr by the day really upset of how to tell her the news

        "Sameer" her voice excited, "I was thinking of you know….how are you n how's he?"


        "He isn't ready yet to forgive her right?"


        "Well….we knew it wasn't that easy"

        "But I don't know how to make him understand…."

        "Don't be that upset, he'll realize it soon" she assured

        "But he's ready to marry Ravina"

        "What?" she jumped off her seat

        "That's what I'm saying…..he's totally lost it"

        "He likes her?"

        "No… fact as much as I got from his words, he can't stand her"

        "Then why?"

        "To prove that Aayesha 's out of his life"

        "Does he know what does that mean….Mom was talking of his engagement"

        "I know…..but he's not ready to listen to anybody, what can I do?"

        "Sameer, his mind should be brought at the right place"

        "But how?"

        "Do anything….make him understand, scold him….anything will do, but you can't let him do whatever he wants to?"

        "Hmm, I'll try to"

        "Ok…..should I talk to Mom about Aayesha?"

        "I don't think Mom will understand it if you say, she has heard all wrong things about her"

        "I think you are right"

        "Aayesha has messed it up enough…..I really feel bad about her"

        "Don't worry, let's try again, if anything works out"

        "Ok, I'll call you later"

        "Hmm take care" she hung up n went to talk to Mom

     She was a bit nervous after hearing about Suhaan's view on that, but she thought she should try once at least

        "Arre Beta…..why are you standing there?" asked she finding her at the door

        "Mom, I want to ask you something?"

        "First you come n sit here; I want to show you something"


        "You know we were thinking of a double celebration"

        "Double celebration?"

        "Hmmm, we didn't throw a reception for your wedding na….." she stared on, "So your Dad n I was thinking of how about throwing it on the same day as Suhaan's engagement……but if he readies to then" she smiled

        "Why are you marrying him off so quickly Mom?"

        "Suhaan?" she nodded, "'s hard to believe for me that we are talking of his marriage" she smiled meekly, "You know I had thought it'll only remain a dream, but when Mr. n Mrs. Chopra said that….I don't know I felt good about it"

        "But Mom don't you think he's too young for such a responsibility?"

        "He's turning 25 this year….but then it's not too young n he's now quite settled in business n then we all are here to manage"

        "Yes Mom, we are but still…..n more so what Sameer told me Suhaan doesn't likes Ravina that much"

        "If he denies, we are not forcing him"

        "N if he agrees?" she asked cautiously

        "Then we'll get him married" she announced


        "Don't worry marriage will have a year to wait but yes engagement will surely take place now" she was feeling restless to tell her all

        "Mom….I want you to know something"

        "Hmmm….Suhaan…… loves someone"

        "Huh?" came a shocked one

        "Ya I mean he loves you very much, n he'll do anything for your happiness" she managed it remembering Sameer's words

        "But why are you so tensed about his marriage?"


        "I know you must be worried that how's she or will she be able to adjust all here" she nodded meekly


        "You do one thing, once Suhaan agrees, go n meet her at her place….may be I'll go too"



     Sameer was in his room when Suhaan entered

        "Bhai" his face sad

        "What happened?"

        "I…..I'm sorry"


        "I shouldn't have said those words to you" he stated nearing him, "I was angry….n you made me that"

        "You still are"

        "You know it's all your fault"


        "If you had told me earlier that who that girl was, I wouldn't have been trapped like this"

        "Are you saying sorry or accusing me?"


        "Suhaan… least grow up now"

        "How will I unless you stop treating me like a child?"

        "Ohk fine….from now on, I'll try to" he said hugging him


        "Suhaan we went to meet her"

        "Hmm" as he faced him

        "She loves you too much…..don't loose her"

        "I think we have discussed enough about this" he turned

        "Why are you so stubborn Suhaan?" he asked with a raised voice, "Why is it so important for you to oppose others….always?" Suhaan's arrogance was getting on his nerves

        "I have a reason to that" his voice calm

        "No you don't…..I have always taken that whatever you do is childish, n will get it right with age, but this is rubbish! You can't do such a thing out of stupidity" but he stared on, calming down "Suhaan…..I haven't told Mom anything yet….please think over it again"

        "She called me….."


        "You were not here"

        "Did she say anything about that?"


        "N what did you say?"

        "What I had said to you….."

        "You said that you are ready?" he nodded, "You are out of your senses"

        "I can do whatever I want to….." he said, "It's my life" he shouted getting a slap in return


        "Thanks Bhai" he uttered in a heavy voice before leaving

        "Shit!" as he banged his fist on the wall

     Suhaan, as usual had skipped his dinner, Sameer didn't say anything this time………Later in the night, when he peeped in, he found him sleeping, but knew he isn't sleeping, so went over to him……it was very rare that he had scolded him, n this was even more than that, he repented what he did but he couldn't help it either, sometimes it's needed. He sat beside him, trying to talk…….n then suddenly he turned

        "Suhaan….." he stared at him for a moment, "I…." n Suhaan hugged him wrapping his arms around his waist while his head rested on his lap, Sameer smiled at him ruffling his hair, "See you still behave like a kid" he got a denying nod in return, as he bent over to hug him back


     Mrs. Malhotra was happy hearing that Suhaan had given a nod for the proposal….but his voice sounded dull when he did that, this was worrying her the whole night. So she thought of meeting Ravina herself

        "Mehr….I was thinking that as now Suhaan is ready, we should visit the Chopra's once"

        "Hmm…..we need to" she said, though she wasn't in favor of that

        "Ok then I'll call Mrs. Chopra n let her know that we are coming"

        "That will be better"

        "When are they coming back?" asked she for Sameer n Suhaan

        "I'll ask him that Mom" she said n she went on to call Mrs. Chopra

     Later in the day they went to meet Ravina at her place, Mrs. Malhotra was happy to get such a beautiful bride for her son, well she was indeed beautiful, but things which appear beautiful from out, are often uglier in,

        "You are really very beautiful beta" she said holding her chin, unknown to the fact what her son really feels about her.

        "Thanks Aunty" she replied cordially, as her mother signaled her to touch her feet, she wasn't too comfortable with the idea, but she had to. Mehr was making her herself look as normal as she could

     Sometime later we see, Mrs. Malhotra n Mrs. Chopra sitting together sharing their views on the marriage, both appearing extremely happy with the idea….n Ravina took her would be sis-in-law to her living room. After some usual chit-chats, which Ravina did with utter pride….they sat discussing Suhaan

        "So you know him from long, isn't it?" Mehr asked

        "We were in the same college"

        "Oh….but am sure he wasn't interested in you then" she stated, Ravs didn't took it nicely

        "Hmmm……neither was I. We were in different groups then"

        "N what makes you interested now?"

        "Now I love him"

        "Oh…." her brows rose, "But he doesn't….."

        "But he likes me"

        "Are you aware that he loves someone else?"

        "Huh…..I have warned him about her long back, that she's not of our standard, but he didn't listen to me then"

        "As far as I know, she's a nice girl"

        "Nice, my foot…..damn liar" Mehr fist tightened, "Look what she's done to him?"

        "Suhaan told me that someone helped him about the truth" Ravs got cautious at this, "Do you know who it was?"

        "Ah… would I know?"

        "Hmm……..but Ravina, will you be able to live with such a person who loves someone else?" she was trying each n every way

        "Love? Ah….that was a mere infatuation, he got into her simplicity…..her almost middle class values" her face disgusted

        "So you believe that Suhaan will forget her with time?"

        "Of course he'll"

        "Hmmm, that's good….." she smiled

        "Can I ask you something?" she nodded, "Why is it sounding to me as you are not happy with this thing?"

        "There's nothing like that Ravina….believe me, we are all happy if he is. I just want to clear out everything, before it actually happens, so as to avoid future complications"

        "Well…..I think we are matured enough to handle our own problems rather than elders interfering in each n every matter"

        "It's good to be matured, but maturity doesn't mean knocking out elders" she told her

        "Different people have different opinions"

        "Like Suhaan has a different one from yours….anyways you know him better isn't it?"


        "I think we should leave now"

        "Hmm" as they went to them, n after the formal goodbyes, we see Mother-Daughter-in-law duo heading back

        "She's nice girl, isn't it?" Mehr nodded, "Mr. n Mrs. Chopra are very descent people"

        "Mom…..I just hope Suhaan stays happy in this" Mehr sighted

        "Why do you think he won't?"

        "No I don't think he won't, but going by his nature… just worried"

        "I know you love him as your brother, that's why you worry so much for him…..but trust me, when he's agreed to this I think he'll manage quite well"

        "Hmmm" she smiled back to her, but she knew this isn't so easy for him, n that's what worried her


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Posted: 30 August 2009 at 8:55am | IP Logged
     That day when they came back from office, Sameer went to talk to him

        "I think you should pack your luggage now" he said


        "I mean we need to return"

        "So soon… can leave surely if you want to, I don't want it" he said

        "Suhaan….whether you want it or not, you have to come with me"


        "I think you remember that you have agreed to marry"


        "So they are thinking of your engagement"

        "So soon?" he was clueless that it was to happen so quickly

        "Hmm, what did you think then?"

        "Does that matter anymore?"

        "It does Suhaan…..nothing's done yet, if you say we can inform them that we are not interested" a hope seen in his words

        "Did I say that?"


        "When do we need to be back?" he asked avoiding it

        "By Thursday"

        "I'll ask Richard to arrange the tickets" he said before leaving

        "He's just impossible"

     As they reached home, Suhaan was greeted warmly by his mother

        "I'm so happy beta that you are back" she said hugging him as he responded to it, glancing at his Bhabhie, who stood staring at him

        "Hi Bhabhie" he said but she just smiled as he neared her, "I know why are you looking dull?"

        "Why?" she asked formally

        "You were missing Bhai, isn't it?" she nodded, "Don't worry he's all yours now" he laughed pulling him ahead

        "You are very happy right Suhaan?" she asked smiling

        "Who won't….am back home" he announced a bit more cheerfully

        "Then why isn't your happiness reaching your eyes?" her tone serious, he stood for a moment staring at her n then rolled his eyes at her

        "Ah… just too tired Bhabhie, Bhai is too bad as travel partner" Sameer was surprised at this, "He wasn't that earlier, but I guess you have spoilt him a bit too much" he remarked

        "I wish everyone listened to me as he does" she said

        "Who said he listens to you?"

        "I know……."

        "Wrong! He follows you" he teased glancing at him

        "Ok fine now go n take rest……"

        "What's the hurry Mom?"

        "Your would be in-laws are visiting us by the evening" she informed

        "I don't think it's important for me to stay on" he said

        "Ravina is also coming" added Mehr


        "I asked her to come over….she would have a good time with you, isn't it?" Mehr knew it would irritate him

        "Of course…..she'll" he said walking off to his room as they stared on

        "You know Sameer…..he doesn't deserve Ashi at all"


        "Ya in fact he deserves someone arrogant like Ravina only…..I mean he's broken, but still won't break"

        "Aayesha knows about this thing?" he asked

        "I don't know"

        "I fear how is she gonna react to this?"

        "Well…..I guess it's a punishment for loving such a person"

        "I guess nothing is in our hands now" he said

     The news first hit Manish……Ravs had called him up gladly to inform this…….he was indeed hurt to hear that, but being a true friend to Suhaan, he was worried of his decision

        "Why are you doing this?"

        "I'm sick of answering this to almost everybody I meet now" he stated

        "Doesn't that click why's everybody against this?"

        "No…..I don't want to think about it"


        "We are meeting at Trincas' right?"

        "No…I want to talk to Sameer Bhai, I'll come over"

        "No no…..Bhai will not be at home" he didn't want him to know that they are coming over, n more so he wanted to escape

        "Ohk fine, cya later"


     Manish knew it was difficult, but it was important to tell this piece of news to Rahul

        "I knew it" he said punching his fist on the table

        "I never knew Ravs can do such a thing….." his voice disgusted, all his love washing away as letters on sand do

        "Why are we blaming her? May be he wanted it too" Rahul suggested

        "No yaar, I know him well….may be he's angry on Ashi, but would never think of doing this himself, n Ravs herself told me that she sent her parents to his"

        "I don't know how will I break this news to her?" Rahul said

        "I know it's going to be difficult, very tough…but its better that you tell her before she learns it from somewhere else"

        "Hmmm…..I have to"


You, do you remember me?
Like I remember you?
Do you spend your life
going back in your mind to that time?
Because I, I walk the streets alone
I hate being on my own
And everyone can see that I really fell
And I'm going through hell
Thinking about you were somebody else

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That Somebody's Me

How, How could we go wrong
It was so good and now it's gone
And I pray at night that our paths will soon cross
And what we had isn't lost
Cause you're always right here in my thoughts

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That Somebody's Me

You'll always be in my life
Even if I'm not in your life
Because you're in my memory
You, will you remember me
And before you set me free
Oh listen please

Somebody wants you
somebody needs you
somebody dreams about you every single night
somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
somebody hopes someday you will see
that somebody's me

     The song played on his system, as he stood quiet by the window; he was not allowed to show anyone that he was sad for life has betrayed him, but at least he could cry when alone

     Some distance away, though joined by heartbeats…..sat a girl who had the same thoughts as the song did…..Ashi. These days she didn't cry much, in fact has stopped reacting much, the day when he left her at the Airport, she had cried all night, but then she had got some support from Sameer n Mehr, she had started to think, that may be everything would fall in place someday. She now looked paler than before with dark circles under her eyes she appeared as sick……

     She looked up sensing someone behind her,


        "Hi" he smiled at her, Rahul visited her regularly, joining her to the outside world, but she waited for any news of him

        "Sit" showing him the place beside her

        "How are you?"

        "Good" she said, he looked in her eyes

        "I know you are good"

        "How are others?"

        "Why don't you ask straight about him rather than taking a long path?" he asked sarcastically, as she smiled meekly

        "No one knows me better"

        "I have news about him" he started, as she looked on unmoved, "He's getting engaged this Saturday" he let it out.

     She didn't react nor moved, sat still in the same way for the next few moments, like the news wasn't heard at all. Rahul felt uneasy at that, as he had thought she would cry or at least say something, so he called her softly, "Ashi" n it was then that he noticed the sheet crushing under palms, he placed a hand on her head to soothe her, "I won't stop you from crying today" he said, "Let it flow out" she looked at him as her eyes poured out tears silently before she finally broke down. Rahul sat there holding her, letting out drops ……till she was more or less calm.


     In the evening, Suhaan was almost ready to go out, or rather run away when Mehr entered

        "Where are you going?"


        "I think you wouldn't be allowed now"


        "They have already arrived n waiting for you"


        "Ahan….I think you shouldn't utter such words for them anymore…..they are a family now"


        "Come let's meet them"


     Suhaan came down with her, acting normal……or trying to be, but two pairs of eyes were always hooked on him, n it irritated him more

     After some usual talks, he thought it suitable to excuse himself from there

        "Where are you going?" asked Ravs but he didn't reply her, instead looked at her parents

        "Uncle would you mind, if I leave?……I have some work to do" he asked

        "No no beta that's perfectly fine, you carry on"

        "Thanks" he smiled

        "But then I'll get bored sitting here" said Ravs in a nagging tone, "I'll come along"

        "No….I have some important…."

        "Yes Suhaan, take her along….n now you should make it a habit" opined his Mom

        "Fine…..come" he said glancing at his Bhai n Bhabhie

        "Great….Dad, he'll drop me home"

        "Ok" he replied

        "Have a great time together" teased Mehr

        "Thanks Bhabhie" Ravs sweetly replied grabbing his arm

        "We are not going for a party…." he said

        "Bye" waved Mehr


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Posted: 30 August 2009 at 8:58am | IP Logged

     Manish was seated at a table at Trincas, when he spotted Rahul entering…..he waved calling him over


        "Are you waiting for someone?" asked Rahul


        "I think I should leave then"

        "Won't you two ever patch up?"

        "I don't think so; whenever I'll see him …..Ashi will come to my mind making me hate him more"

        "So you have readied yourself for that?"

        "No one's ready for this ever, but we have to handle it"
        "Sit……I have a plan" Manish started

        "Huh… n your plans?" he rolled his eyes at that,

        "Just listen to me"

        "I hope it isn't as bad as the previous one"

        "This one's a hit already…..but you need to help me"

        "What do I need to do?"

        "Say sorry to Suhaan"

        "Manish are you out of your mind? I'm never going to say that"

        "Listen to it fully"

        "I don't need to…….you are telling this because you are not well acquainted with Ashi's pain, you know how she cried out when I told her this" his eyes still teary mentioning this

        "I know"

        "No you don't know… are talking as if she's only my friend?"

        "N you are talking as if only she's your friend……Suhaan never was?" he kept mum for a moment

        "So what do you want, that I should forget everything n accept Suhaan gladly?"

        "Did I say that?"


        "Look Rahul I know what is Ashi passing through, but have you ever tried to feel the same about Suhaan?"

        "I don't need to"

        "You do….you can't shut your one side, whether you accept it or not whatever happened to him was wrong"

        "You mean Ashi was wrong?"

        "No…..the situations were wrong, no one in particular"

        "How will it help if I say sorry to him?"

        "Suhaan…..has a problem with him, similar to what we all have when kids" he smiled


        "Yes……he always does something opposite to what others ask him to do"

        "What rubbish?"

        "Din't you notice that the previous time, when Uncle was asking him to go London, he didn't, n when he changed he opposed him then too"

        "What do you mean?"

        "I mean now everyone's after him to forgive Ashi….n won't listen"


        "So if we start saying that whatever he's doing is right for him, n he has taken the decision to marry Ravs…..he'll again oppose all" he explained

        "N if this time he doesn't?"

        "There's no harm in trying once"

        "N for this I need to say sorry to him"

        "Right…..n I suggest do that right away"


        "We don't have much time left"


        "N ya we can ask Sameer Bhai to help us too….."

        "So that when we are not with him, he can continue it" Rahul finished

        "Exactly…so you are saying sorry now"

        "Fine….I'll do that, a last try for Ashi….."

        "N Suhaan" added Manish smiling

        "Hmm…him too" he forcibly added


        "Suhaan….won't you talk to me?" she asked

        "About what?"

        "About anything you like to?"

        "I don't like to" he ignored

        "Ok fine…you know I'm so excited for our engagement"


        "I have bought dresses of three different colors with jewelleries to match…..but am not sure what to wear?"


        "You tell me na what color would suit me best….pink, orange or turquoise?"


        "Which color should I wear?"

        "Black" he touted

        "Suhaan no one wears black at a occasion like this, it's inauspicious"

        "It is" she knew what he meant

        "Ok what are you wearing?"

        "I don't care…." he said stopping the car

        "Who are you meeting here?"


        "Cool" she said getting out

        "You are not going in with me"

        "But why?"

        "Because I'm asking you not to" he stated in a stern tone

        "But what will I do here?"

        "You are staying back…..or if u insist I can drop you back now but you are not going in… it?"

        "Fine….I'm here" she uttered as he walked in, "Huh? Just let me get married n I'll show you what can Ravs do to you?" she murmured

     Suhaan waved at Manish noticing him

        "Rahul….he's here" he told


        "Hi Suhaan"


       "Come sit…." Manish said shifting a bit

        "I thought I was meeting my friend only" he taunted glancing at Rahul, "I'll see you later" Manish stared hard at Rahul n he nodded back

        "Suhaan…." uttered Rahul holding his hand as he passed, he looked down at him, "I….I'm sorry Dude" he said standing up

        "Sorry for?"

        "I shouldn't have behaved like that last time" he said, may be he wanted to say these to him; n Manish's plan has given him an excuse to that

        "Huh….you are not sorry for that" said Suhaan

        "No am really sorry for that" he asked

        "You are sorry for you have lost your bet" he declared, as Rahul tightened his fist, he wanted to punch him hard at that, but Manish asked him to keep calm

        "Suhaan….." he started as Suhaan gave out a meek smile hugging him in return to which he responded

        "I know you well" he said patting his back

        "Hmm" he said facing her as Manish got up

        "Now that calls for a celebration" he said ordering drinks

     After sometime, we see the three of them walking out…..Ravs stood by the car impatiently, she wanted to go in, bored of waiting out, but she didn't dare to do that

     Rahul n Manish clenched their teeth but they managed it

        "Get in" Suhaan said to her

        "Oh hi Manish" she greeted instead but Manish neither glanced at her nor replied her

        "Ohk Suhaan….cya later"

        "Hmm bye" n they drove out

        "What the hell does he think of himself?"

        "Manish, who else?"

        "Now what did he do?"

        "Didn't you notice he didn't reply me?"

        "Now you know how it feels when someone ignores you" he taunted

        "Are you with me or him?"

        "I'm with the right, n fortunately for me, you are never right"

        "But I'm your fiance….you should look after my respect now" she stated

        "Huh….I don't care" he said as she sat there staring hard at him, really he cared none, in fact he wanted her to break this off, but she wouldn't


     Manish had contacted Sameer that night itself, n he readily agreed as he knew it could happen…..

     Sameer n Mehr were discussing it when Suhaan crossed the room

        "Suhaan…." Sameer called, he stopped to peep in, "Come in"

        "Is there anything left to discuss?"

        "Hmm" Sameer indicated to sit

        "We need to ask you something" Mehr started

        "Bhabhie please…."

        "Don't worry, it's not about her" Sameer assured

        "Ya we just wanted to know……that what would like to wear for the party?" asked she

        "Look Suhaan…..if you really think that Aayesha wasn't right for you…..n you are right when you have decided to marry someone else, then we'll not bother you again" Suhaan looked surprised

        "He's right, we only want you to be happy…be it with the girl you love or with girl who loves you" Mehr finished

        "Thanks" he uttered as they exchanged glances

        "So tell me what you are wearing?" she asked

        "I don't know Bhabhie, whatever you think good, it's all the same" he stated

        "Ok, but you have to come along for the measurements" she urged

        "Sorry….I can't"

        "But Suhaan, how's that possible?" he asked

        "You know my measurements right?" he nodded, "Just get me anything n I'll wear it"

        "Are you sure?"

        "Hmm….n please keep me away from these things"

        "Ok but there are some things which you need to select" Mehr informed


        "Won't you select a delicate ring like you did for her?"

        "I won't….just tell me when I'm needed for the event, I'll be there….otherwise don't expect me anywhere else" he declared before leaving

        "Do you think it'll work?" asked she

        "Let's see what happens"

        "But we only have two days in between?"

        "I know"


     Sameer had informed Manish about the first reaction, n now it was left to Manish. They were to meet that evening; Manish had started discussing about Suhaan n Ravs, some moments before he was about to arrive…..

        "You what Ishaan….I always knew Suhaan will not marry Ashi" said Manish

        "Why do u think that?"

        "Simple…..she's not of his stature, we cannot overlook this fact"

        "But he loved her" said he

        "What's love when there are so many things to look forward to" Rahul said

        "Hmm, that's true, but we didn't expect him to do something like this"

        "Well may be his family wanted that, n he couldn't oppose that" sighted one

        "Is Suhaan that type?" Manish asked

        "Not at all" Rahul cleared noticing that he had entered, "But all's well that ends well"


        "N anyways, now Ashi is free too think forward" Rahul stated

        "Rahul, what are you saying?" Manish whispered

        "Ya… long will she sit at home n cry, she needs to live again"

        "That's true"

        "Hi" Suhaan said, though he was listening all

        "Arre Suhaan….come sit"

        "Suhaan….we were talking of you only" informed Ishaan

        "Hmm" sitting down

        "I don't know why I have this good feeling that only you can change Ravs"

        "Why do you feel that?" Rahul asked

        "She never spoke over him, but with us she was oh so unmanageable" commented he

        "What's wrong with you, you can't say this about her anymore, at least when Suhaan's here" Manish said smiling at him

        "Huh….I don't care" he repeated

        "Suhaan…she's your fiance" he further said, "N you are saying this for her?"

        "Yup so"

        "If you don't care for her, why are you marrying her?" asked Rahul in a serious tone

        "I have never done a single thing according to my family's will, may be it's time to repay" he said

        "At the cost of your own happiness?" asked Manish

        "Who said am not happy?"

        "You don't seem to be" stated Rahul

        "I guess no man is happy to loose his freedom isn't it?" he avoided

        "Ya but you look sad?" opined one

        "Not at all….just a bit tired"

        "Exactly…..Suhaan's happy as uncle is very happy, right?"

        "This is perfect; you have taken the right decision"

        "Suhaan…..go home n rest" Manish said

        "No that's fine"

        "No that isn't….tomorrow's going to be a hectic one for you" he informed

        "I know that" n soon we see him heading home

        "Manish am really clueless… he getting anything?"

        "I don't know, let's see"


     There were hoards of people seen in n around the house; the party was indeed huge, with the who's who of the circuit being invited

     Suhaan lay on his bed with his eyes closed when Sameer entered

        "Are you alright?" he asked

        "Hmm" glancing at him

        "Well your clothes are here, I have kept them here……get up n get ready, the guests will start arriving soon" he informed


        "Suhaan" nearing him, "I know how must be feeling…..but you have chosen this yourself"

        "I know….."

        "You are not looking okay" he touched his temple, he had a slight temperature, "I think you should take a pill"

        "I don't need to, I'll be fine in some moments…..ready for the party" he assured

        "Ok….I'll then get ready too"


     Suhaan got ready n got down in a black suit with a baby pink shirt, by then the hall have been well occupied with the streaming number of arriving guests

        "Wow….you are looking awesome" said Sameer


        "Dad was waiting for you" as he took him to meet some guests,

     Soon the intros were done, n they were asked to come over to the stage, it was then, that Suhaan noticed Ravs standing next to her in a deep pink attire, n it was then he was brought to notice what was she going to be in his life from now on…..he was getting engaged to a girl who he has never liked, forget liking…. hated every time she said anything someone
     Ravs was going to be the future Mrs. Suhaan Malhotra, instead of Ashi, who he had loved, he thought he had possessed. He glanced at his friends Manish n Rahul standing down, well near the stage, n then at his Bhai n Bhabhie….all of their faces had a glum look on project, they were all happy from out but he knew they weren't

     N more than them, he wasn't happy……will he be ever be happy without her, the person who taught him love……his heart screamed NO

       "Suhaan" his Mom called


       "She's waiting beta"

        "Mom" he stared at her for a moment before glancing back at Ravs, who seemed proud of her achievement, "I…"

        "What are you saying?" she asked

        "I can't do this Mom" escaped his lips


Am done again


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