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An Arrow of Love~RN fic..udtd-pgs 47 & 48 [9/6] (Page 37)

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
~Thirty Eight~

Over the few days, Ashi was feeling quite restless about hiding the fact anymore to him

"You know Rahul…..I should……" as they walked out

"Tell him the truth?"


"Great idea, come let's go" he quickly turned

"I'm serious Rahul"

"Even am serious……you want to tell him rite?" she nodded, "So let's go n tell him"

"Just like that?"

"I know it's too difficult for you to accept but…..someday you have to" as her eyes brimmed with tears, "Ashi please, it's not over yet"

"It'll once he knows"

"May be not, he's started trusting you…….you are probably one his best friends…….so may be he'll not…." he said hopefully

"No Rahul, I have seen the pain in his eyes for his Bhai whenever he talked of Aayesha…….he hates me"

"That was a matter of the past, but have you heard him discussing that now?"

"No but that's because the need never arised"

"Ok you want me to find out how he feels of her now?....which is you infact"

"But how……won't he get to know that?"

"You don't worry, I'll take care of that….ok"


"Now wipe out your tears……….I hate tears" he said in a mimic tone of Rajesh Khanna, n she was bound to smile


Christmas was something that was not to be missed by any of them, they had arranged a party as usual, n stayed together overnight……well most of the girls missed the overnight stay, but whatever time they spent together…..Ashi was having it to the full


Snigdha was to be admitted that day, so they were a bit busy arranging all when the two came over

"Hi how are you here?" he asked

"We are not here to see you, where's Snigdha Di?" asked Manish

"Thank God as am very busy right now" he declared

"Ya ya we know that, would be Mamu" teased Rahul
"That sounds funny yet sweet" he said,

"Hmm, n it'll sound sweeter when he'll say that" Manish said

"I don't like to correct the same thing dude, it'll not be a boy" he sternly said

"Ok ok girl……who would say that you hate girls?"

"Suhaan used to hate girls, not anymore right?" asked Rahul

"Ummm, well I don't love them but ya I don't feel that itch anymore when around them"

"Well, if we are done with your analysis, can we go n meet Di?"

"Ya sure" as they went to her

"Hi Di" greeted they

"Dids they are here only to see you, n not me" he declared

"Really sweet of you" she said, "Come sit"

"So how are you feeling now?"

"I'm quite fine……oh Suhaan"


"Just call up Anu to ask whether he's coming here or go straight there?"

"Ofcourse he'll be here" he said n she stared on, "Ok I'll do that…don't scare me"

"Di he's too sure of a girl, what do you think?"

"Well I want a girl too, but that doesn't mean I won't be happy, if it's a boy" she cleared

"That's sweet"

"Actually I have seen my brothers grow up in front of me, especially Suhaan, so want a girl for a change"

"Ya I remember Di used to be so caring when she visited him in hostel" Rahul said as she smiled

"He was closest to me, even today he said that he won't be able to work in office, thankfully Dad was pleased by it"

"I still am Dids" he said when back,

"I know…."

"Ohk Jijs is on his way, to you"

"Di… know there's someone else too, whom Suhaan confides in?" Manish started

"Who?" she asked

"Ofcourse, Manish… know all my secrets" he said

"No am not talking of myself"

"Then who?" asked he


"What rubbish! This is all wrong…….Dids just don't believe him" he ruled out
"Why?....yes Manish you carry on"

"I'm outta here…….Mom" as he went out calling

"He'll never acknowledge that" said Manish

"He'll, once he gets to know that himself" Rahul added

"If am not wrong, Ashi is the same girl whom he went to see that midnight?" she asked

"Really?" jumped Manish, as Rahul nodded "I din't knew that"

"There are many things you still don't know" he said


"Like Ashi is………" as Mrs.Malhotra came in

"Snigdha, you must get ready now"

"Hmm sure Mom"

"Ohk Di, we are downstairs then….." said Manish

"Aunty where's Suhaan?" Rahul asked, he was eager to find out about Aayesha

"Ah……he's down arranging, for the first time in his life, he's acting responsibly" she gladly announced

"No Mom…..he's always been that towards me, so I won't take that" retorted Snigs, as they smiled n went out

"Ok there's a long life ahead to back him, now get ready"


"Your Dad n Sameer are on their way to the hospital"

"Oh they are not coming here?"

"No your Dad said, he'll meet Mr. Mittal, the trustee there"

"Mom, was that needed?"

"You know him better, n he thinks contacts should be used at the right time, so……"

"Hmmm, sometimes I think Anu n Dad are so similar"

"Well you wanted that, isn't it?"

"Ofcourse I did n have no qualms about that"

"I know, you wouldn't have got a more apt husband for yourself"

"Hmmm" as she hugged her


Ashi was calling up Rahul when they were on their way back home,

"Yes Ashi…..tell me"

"Actually, Rahul I have been trying to contact Suhaan, from long time…."

"Hmmm so?"

"But he's rejecting it"

"May be he's busy, they have taken Snigdha Di to the hospital"
"Oh how's she? You have gone to meet her right?"

"She's fine, infact we left together when they went there"

"Ohk thanx, I'll not disturb him then….bye cya later" as she hung up

"What was she saying?" asked Manish

"That Suhaan is rejecting her calls….."

"N she got worried; huh…….Ashi sometimes behaves in such a childish manner"

"But why is he not taking calls?"

"What do you mean?"

"I mean……should I try once?"

"Hmm……try" as he did but same case with him too,

"He's really not taking it……" as he thought something

"Are you thinking that….."

"Ya am worried for Snigdha di"

"Let's go there ourselves, n check" Manish suggested

"Hmmm" n they reached there within sometime


At the Reception,

"Ah……Mrs.Snigdha……ya Kapoor" asked Manish

"Just a second sir" she said

"She's just been admitted…." Rahul added

"Yes Sir, 5th floor….room no. 516" she said

"Room no.516?" asked another attendant

"Ya……is everything alright?"

"She's been taken to the O.T."

"O.T.? But there was still time for that" Rahul said

"Oh ho let's go n see for ourselves" Manish said as they almost ran


In front of the O.T…...

"Mom, don't worry, Di will be alright" assured Sameer as he made her sit


"No but Mom, she'll be ok" Suhaan sternly completed, sauntering up n down the pasaage

"Suhaan, sit down for a moment" Sameer said

"Why aren't they back still?" he asked, "It's almost 9:30"

"They must be discussing……"

"Is this a time to discuss? I'll check it out" he went

"Suhaan……" Sameer couldn't leave his Mom alone there, so he stayed back

"Did you inform Jyoti (Anuraag's Mom)?" she asked,
"Yes Mom, I called up Kapoor uncle, they said they would be here any moment….you don't worry"


In the doctor's chamber,

"I had told this to her earlier also, she's anaemic by nature, so she needed to boost that up….."

"But is that the only reason not to perform the operation?" asked Anuraag

"Actually yes, her haemoglobin levels have gone down, precisely well below the level required"

"Arrange that from the blood bank, I'm sure there'll be no problem in that" suggested Mr.Malhotra

"I know that Mr.Malhotra but…."

"Look Dr. Dutt, I have brought my daughter here for Mr.Mittal is the trustee, n I would not tolerate it, if anything happens to her or her baby" he warned

"Papa please calm down" Anuraag said

"Her blood group is O-ve, which is very rare. We have already tried in all the possible banks we knew"

"I want results doctor…." his tone raised,

"Normally, first child's blood group matches a father's but….."

"Hmmm, then take it from me, I'm that only" he suggested,

"But Mr.Malhotra, we can't do that here….your BP is quite high"

"Dad" he called softly

"Suhaan" as he turned

"What's wrong? Dids…….." his eyes trying to locate the problem

"Ah….actually, Snigs haemoglobin level is running low…" Anu started

"N they will not allow me to donate" his Dad added helplessly

"N the blood banks don't have it…"

"Jijs……but it's long since Dids has been taken in; her condition is not good n….." his voice shaky

"We know, but they can't operate her in such condition" ended Anu

"Can't operate, what do you mean by that…..what is her group?" he asked

"It's O-ve, can you help" Dr.Dutt asked

"Ofcourse I can, mine is that too" he quickly, "Take it from me as much as you need, but please Dids should be alright" he pleaded
"Ok you come with me" said Dr.Dutt

"Suhaan…" uttered Mr.Malhotra

"Don't worry Dad……..Jijs take him out, I'll set everything" keeping an assuring hand on his Dad's shoulders

"Thanx Suhaan" as he hugged him

"Don't be foolish Jijs" n he followed the doctor


Rahul n Manish reached to see Sameer with her Mom there,

"Sameer Bhai" called Rahul softly, as he went to him, "What's the problem?"

"Actually when we brought Di in, she had started having labour pains……the doctors said they need to operate her, but…"

"But what?" Manish asked impatiently

"They were discussing that she's having some problems, Dad n Jiju have gone to see the doctor"

"Where's Suhaan?" asked Manish

"He was here just now, but had gone to the doctor" as he saw them coming

"Jiju….." Sameer approached him

"I think everything will be fine now" Anu said with a relieved tone

"Suhaan had gone there too, where's he?"

"He's gone with the doctor" Mr.Malhotra said, they looked on curiously,

"Snigs needed blood, it was found from nowhere, Suhaan's got the same group, he had gone with the doctor to donate" explained he

"I should go n stay there with him" Mr.Malhotra suggested

"No Dad, you stay here, I'll go" Sameer said

"Sameer Bhai, you don't bother, we are here to be with him" Rahul said

"Yes Bhai, you stay on here, Jiju might be disturbed in himself, you take care of Uncle-Aunty" Manish added

"Thanx guys, but I'll just peep in n come back" he urged

"Ok, let's go"


At Suhaan's end, he was seen laying on the bed, his upper arm tied with rubber strings to get a better hold of his veins, the nurse quite ready to inject that needle of her's……. n he lay there with an uncomfortable look on his face

"Are you wary of it Sir?" she asked
"No am not" he declared, "It's just that I have not been given enough chance to fall in love with it" he reasoned with a smile

"Don't worry, it's a matter of some seconds" she assured

"You can take your time, I'm cool" it wasn't a cakewalk for the dude afterall, but he managed for his Dids

As she pierced the needle in, his eyes got closed in a reflex turning the other way,

"Sir……. it's done, you can turn now" said she

"Huh?" turning cautiously

"Now lay here in this position, I'll be back after sometime" as she picked up her things

"Ah…..has the operation started?" he asked

"Hmmm, she's been operated, you don't worry at all…your sister will be fine" as she left smiling

"Thank God"

As she opened the door, there stood Rahul n Manish, who had been peeping in for quite a while after Sameer left

"What are you doing here?" she asked

"Actually he's our friend….we wanted to see him" Manish started

"But…..we can't allow anybody in there" she declared outright

"We know that sister, but ……" Rahul was stopped

"Wasn't he fearing that?" asked Manish

"Ya he was…."

"What are you people doing here at this time?" asked a junior doctor from behind

"Dr.Sinha, they want to go in to their friend" said the nurse

"Who's in there?"

"Suhaan…" Rahul quickly said

"You mean Mr.Malhotra's son?" as they nodded

"Please doctor" they asked in a pleading tone

"Ok but keep your shoes out"

"Thanx doctor" Manish would have hugged him, if Rahul hadn't stopped him

As they went in,

"Hey dude" Manish said cheerfully on entering, "I thought you were here to get Di admitted, so wrong was I"

"What are you two doing here?" he asked rather surprised, "Why don't you people home yet?"
"Ashi was right, you should have joined an investigation bureau" slipped Rahul's mouth

"Shut up…..I'll see her later, but tell how are YOU here?"

"You know Suhaan; this can be a classic shot to be circulated" as Rahul held his palms infront of him forming a camera angle

"You people are joking n am tensed for Dids" as his face became worried again

"Oh come on, she'll be alright….trust me the time your rocking blood will enter her veins….she'll come out dancing" Manish joked as they shared a laugh

"I hope this time you are right" said Suhaan, as they waited for it get over…..soon he was freed of that syringe, but he had something to ask, "Is this amount sufficient or you can take more…."

"Relax Suhaan, you have given enough for that" assured Dr.Sinha, "N secondly, we can't take more than two bottles from you at once"

"But I don't care if more is needed"

"We don't need anymore……you can be rest assured"

"Are you sure?" he asked, as Dr.Sinha stared on, "I mean……"

"Your sister will be fine, n surely be proud of your act"

"She's always that for me" he said before getting up

"Uh uh… can't get up now…..I'm sending some juice for you, have it n lie down" he ordered before leaving

"But….." as he stared helplessly at them,

"No need to be so dull, I'll get you the latest news" Manish said

"Thanx yaar" n left

"So what are you thinking now?" asked Rahul noticing him

"I was just thinking that if I win, which I'll for sure….then…"


"Bhai will loose n am supposed to ask for something…"

"Hmmmm, so….."

"I was just thinking of taking it as an opportunity to ask about Aayesha……n mind it this time all about her" he said, Rahul got cautious

"Who Aayesha?" he asked

"That stupid girl, with whom Bhai was getting engaged to, prior to Bhabhie"
"Why are you after her? She really might be helpless at that time" he suggested

"I don't understand one thing….." as Rahul looked on, "Why is everybody around me so sympathetic about her?"

"Can't you forgive her Suhaan? Incase she's really a nice girl, you havn't met her anyways"

"Never Rahul……." he stopped as his juice was brought in, n he took it

"But Suhaan, do you want Sameer Bhai not to forget that n remain with those sour moments?"

"Ofcourse not"

"Then please, just throw that out of your life n forgive her"

"I'll try my best to forget her, forgiving seems to be a distant thought though" Rahul knew it was hard, very hard, it was to happen for sure

Soon after Manish came back n yes, with good news…

"Suhaan, what will I get for this?" he asked on entering

"Ah…..ok fine, I'll restrict myself from beating you up a whole year" he said as Rahul laughed


"That's quite a sacrifice on my side……how's Dids?"

"She's perfectly fine……n…."

"And…….I won" he completed excitedly

"Yes….it's a girl" he confirmed, Suhaan jumped out of the bed instantly hugging them

"Hey hey cool it…… are not allowed to…."as the doctor came

"You heard it, it's a girl" he said

"Oh so you like girls?" he asked

"Ya I love them" he spurted out as Rahul n Manish exchanged looks

Sameer later came to see him, n then his Dad too….n soonafter Snigdha was shifted to her room….her in laws too were there, well much before the good news hit them. Mehr too joined in the celebration……… happiness flowed profusely over their faces with the coming of probably the sweetest angel

"Mrs.Kapoor, here you are" as the nurse came in with the baby in her arms

"Oh how sweet" sighed Sameer

"Where's Suhaan?" asked Snigs

"Oh ……he won it right Di?" she slightly nodded
"N now he's more deserving of this" Anuraag added

"Sister, take her to my brother first" said Snigs

"But she might get infection….." said the nurse

"Trust me she won't" as she turned with the baby

"Dids, look it's a girl" he said excitedly on entering

"I was coming to you only" the nurse said


"Did you forget the bet?" asked Sameer

"Oh right! But that wasn't serious…..I only wanted it to be a girl"

"But I was" n then the nurse showed him how to make a bed of arms attached to his chest, though nervous, he did n then he held that lil bundle of joy in his arms, closest to his heart

"Dids, isn't she too small?" as they laughed at his query

"She hadn't been here today, if you didn't….."

"Just cut it out Dids, she was just playing around with her Mamu…right Bliss?" he asked stroking her supple cheeks with the tip of his nose

"So you named her that?" asked Sameer

"Yup…..Isn't she a Bliss?" he asked

"She indeed is…nice name!" replied Sameer as they nodded back

December 27th 2007…….Bliss entered their lives to make it even more blissful!


From the moment, Ashi has heard about her, she was impatient to get a glimpse of her……but so well did she knew, it was impossible, so she would compensate with her pics

"Hey Ashi, we are going to Suhaan's house tomorrow…." stated Soniya

"Ya why don't you join us?" asked Renu

"Ah… I'll be busy……I can't come" she said with her hardest heart

"Hey you know what, when Manish asked Ravs to come over with us?" said Siya

"What? She must have rejected coming with us" Anjy said

"Ya….that's predictable….but just listen to her reason….." as they looked on, "She says that every child is the same"

"What a crap she is man?" Tamy said in disgustness, Ashi held her hand
"Ya…..exactly, how can one even think like that?" said Siya

"I just wonder how Suhaan will react to this, when it gets on to his ears?" stated Amu

"Don't worry….Manish will not let it reach him"

"What are we for then?" asked Soniya wickedly

"Why do you people want to create misunderstandings between friends?" Ashi asked

"Because we love it……n hate her" Tamy reasoned

"But eventually it'll hurt Suhaan…..if it reaches him, anyone of you don't want that right?" she asked

"That's true……I heard Suhaan is all Bliss n Bliss day long" said Siya

"That's a unique name right?"

"I think Ashi's right….we should not tell that to him" Riya suggested as Ashi gave a smile

"Ok as you say Ma'am" declared Tamy looking at her


New Year was celebrated, like never before……there were two additons in Malhotra family after all. Mehr's family had joined in too, they had never been so united before..

They arranged special meals for their workers…..n staff….n also did that for the down trodden people……wishes are never enough!


Lately Suhaan had been busier with work….uh uh not at office, but at home…..he was attending his Bliss all day. He was asked to rest for a few days……n he was taking full advantage of that. He got promoted after all….from only a kid brother to a responsible Mamu now. Now he was busy learning how to make her sleep, would roam around the room n humm songs until she's in a deep one. Unlike any other mother, Snigs was quite relaxed with such a help at hand
He had learned how to change nappies, n he did it quite nicely, while his friends laughed n joked over this act of his, he took it with utter pride

One day, when his cell rang, Bliss was sleeping beside him…….he had slept sitting by the bed only…..he got up quickly by the sound

"Uh …hello" he said in a sleepy tone

"Suhaan" even softer was her voice


"What are you doing?"

"Am sleeping…..I mean I was" he sat up while gazing at Bliss

"Sleeping….so early?" she asked as he glanced at the clock

"I mean I was making her sleep n I don't know when I joined"

"How's Dids?" she too calls her that

"She's quite fine now, even went for a drive with Jijs"

"Oh…so you are alone with Bliss?"

"Mom is there but she's busy with some relatives…….so am here with her" he said soothing her cheeks

"Ah….n your Bhai?"

"He's gone out with Bhabhie…..he was eager to do that" he said laughing

"Can I come over then?" she asked cautiously

"Ya sure……why not, n you have not seen her anyways" he said in a complaining tone

"Ok then am coming"

"Hmmmm" as he hung up n went to the washroom to freshn up


Ashi called up Rahul quickly,

"Do you want to take the risk?" asked Rahul

"Yes I want to……I want to see her"

"But Aunty has seen you before, hasn't she?"

"Yes she had, but may she doesn't recognize me now…..much time has passed for that incident" she said hopefully

"Ok, be ready am coming"

"Thanx Rahul" as he hung up quickly to get herself ready


Soon they reached there,

"Ah…..where's Suhaan?" Rahul asked a servant on entering, Ashi was nervous, feeling she was stealing something

"Suhaan baba is in Didi's room"

"Hmmm, come Ashi" as they quickly went up there
"Hey Suhaan…." Rahul said as he entered

"Sshhhhh….she's sleeping"

"Oops sorry"

"Hi Ashi"

"Hi…..oh my goodness, she's so very sweet" as she went beside her

"So you have become a full time attendant to her?" Rahul asked

"Hmmm, n I'm loving every bit of it"

"What do you do for her, the whole day?" he asked

"If I could, I would have slept with her too, but now I start my day with her smile"

"That's so cute" said Ashi


"You must have seen him when the nurse gave her to him, for the first time…."

"What? I was very good for the first time" he retorted

"You have never been so cautious in your whole life" he added laughing

"Ya…….so what? That's because I have never held a baby before" he reasoned

"But still, the moment was worth a watch" Rahul laughed hard n then Bliss started crying

"Look, even she's not liking it" as Suhaan went to her

"Ya ya, she's too addicted to you, what else can she do when you'll leave her for a moment" Rahul teased further

"What can I do if I have such a charm? Isn't it Ashi?" he asked

"Ofcourse…" as he took her up in his arms, Ashi kept a hand below her delicate neck to support it better, their hands got brushed, he was too engrossed to notice anything, but she shivered a bit by his slightest touch

"Thanx" he said smiling

"I know why Ashi's supporting you" he said

"Oh come on, it's nothing like that, she knows what I'm n you don't"

"Ya ya…..ofcourse she does…." Ashi looked at Rahul, "After all she lo……" he stopped suddenly

"I know that" Ashi's eyes filled with surprise n love "Everyone does that to friends"
"But Suhaan………" he tried to

"Ah Rahul, isn't the name too sweet for her?" she asked indicating him to stop

"Hmmm……so can we call her that only?" Rahul asked

"Ofcourse you can……after all you are not that bad Rahul" Suhaan said teasing, while he strolled

"Very funny" n Bliss started crying again

"I think she's hungry" said Ashi

"Hmmm…….Rahul, just call up Dids n ask where is she? Has Mumma forgotten you?" he asked Bliss making a childish face

"I don't think so" she replied

"You know what Dids says…..that she's relieved when I'm with her"

"She must be……"

"Uh Suhaan…..her cell is not ringing…..should I call Jiju?"

"Ask Mom to do that"

"Ok, I'll be back" as he went

"Suhaan…..I think you should rest sometimes" as he looked at her

"Why….am fine"

"I heard that you gave blood to Dids…."

"So what?" he asked, "Oh…….Dad's been very generous at that, n giving me enough rest" he winked at her

"But still……"

"You don't need to worry so much, you look at yourself"

"What's wrong with me?"

"You have been so thin……."

"So you notice these things in girls huh?" she asked him

"No not girls, just said it to you… don't go n speak this up to Rahul" he warned

"Ohk" she gave out a laugh

"Seems like she's sleeping again" he said gazing at her

"Hmmm" as she lightly soothed her hair, "Girls are always prettier, isn't it?"

"Hmmm……..I mean baby girls" he quickly corrected himself

"Suhaan……Aunty's here" Rahul said as he entered

"Mom, I think she's hungry" as he went to her

"You think?" she asked teasingly
"No I mean Ashi said she might be hungry"

"Who's that?"

"Oh ya, you don't know her….." as he turned to her, she was seen busy on her phone, well she was faking it

"Ohk…….did you check her nappy?" his Mom asked

"Errr….no" as he bit his lip

"I knew it" as she checked it n yes it was wet

"Ah……sorry" scratching his head

"A….Ashi…..beta, can you please come with me?" she asked

"Why she Mom?" Suhaan asked

"She can do it, you can't"

"Ah……Aunty you go….I'll send her" Rahul said

"Ok" as she left with Bliss


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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Bliss what a Pretty Name Embarrassed

Well ofcourse it would pretty, Afterall Naam Rakha kisne .. Our very own Suhaan ne LOL He is such a Sweety Pie Embarrassed he really loves his Sister alot Smile

LOVED the Whole Update!! Big smile The hospital scene was quite tensed yet funny, when Manish and Rahul came in LOL They make any situations lighter with their jovial attitude Tongue

It's Cute how Suhaan is acting like the Perfect Maamu these days Big smile Embarrassed Bliss is so Lucky !! .. I wonder if he is so Perfect with bliss, how will he be with his own Kid Embarrassed

Oh Man, that just makes me want Ashi and Suhaan to be Together, Quickly Embarrassed

Great Update Thumbs Up

Take Care

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Posted: 29 July 2009 at 4:30am | IP Logged
I luv SUHAAN n His Bliss. It was such a cute name. He himself is very unique n so is his chosen name. I liked the whole scene in the hospital......his giving blood n taking Bliss in his arms 4 the first was all very nice. Luved every bit of it. I hav always luved SUHAAN n Snighda's bond n so I liked the way SUHAAN was attached to his Bliss.

Anyways, w8ing 4 the next part n thnx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Here comes the next update: Smile

~Thirty Nine~




     Sameer n Mehr were having a great time together, they enjoyed their drive, walked hands in hands by the sea…n went for a movie, well they went for it, who watched it, was a question though, and they were too immersed in each other to watch it anyways


        "Sameer…why did you bring me here?" she asked


        "I thought you would like it……aren't you?"


        "I don't know about that in front…..but ya am surely enjoying this one" as she held his hand even tighter


        "Who told you that you need to watch that?" he said


        "If no one's watching, let's get out of here" she suggested


        "Don't you like sitting with me?"


        "Not in such darkness…….are we doing anything wrong?" as he nodded negatively, "Then……we are blessed to hold hands in public too"


        "You know some times I think, what was I before I met you?"


        "Ummmm, probably you were at least good for something then….."


        "You mean am good for nothing now?"


        "Do I need to say that?"


        "What I'm today is just because of you" he stated


        "Thanks for acknowledging it dear" as she took pride in it


        "I din't mean it that way"


        "You should have clarified that before……"


        "By that I meant, if I'm useless today……it's just because of you"


        "Ah so sweet of you even then……not many men accept that they are useless" she teased even more


        "Well……I think that's enough of my leg pulling…..we should move out now"


        "We are going to……."


        "Wherever you say….provided it's in Mumbai" he joked




        "You mean home?" she nodded, "Ok…."


        "You know Sameer….am really gonna miss her after Di shifts"


        "Hmmm…..even I'll……we can even visit her there too" he suggested


        "Ah… know it very well, that won't look good…after all  it's her in-laws house"


        "Hmmm, even that's true" as she made a glum face, "Hey I have even a better idea" as his eyes sparkled naughtily


        "What's that?" she asked unmindfully


        "We can have it ourselves…….what say?"


        "You know what…….I knew it was coming" as she walked off


        "But that's a safer one" as he followed


        "For you……not for me"


        "But………are we different?"


        "In this……yes we are…you know that better"


        "Ya but even then…….." n she kept her hand over his mouth, "Ummmm…un un um" he continued to speak despite that


        "Are you taking me home or I shall leave you here?" she asked before freeing his mouth


        "Huh! will leave me on the crossroads like this?" faking a sad face


        "Sameer that's enough Drama for the week" she declared before pulling towards the car


        "Ok……but this time my idea was better"


        "Ohk we'll see when the time arrives…….now can we move?"


        "I have seen it all, you don't need to bother at all" as she rolled her eyes


        "Just get in now n drive me home" he got in at once at her insistence n they started



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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 12:40pm | IP Logged

    Suhaan stood close behind Ashi waiting for her call to get over, n she was standing with it silently……… he waited for a moment, Rahul wanted to tell her but….n he then tapped her shoulder…..making her turn oh so suddenly


        "Wo…ho…ho" he uttered, "Careful Ashi"


        "Oh I'm so sorry"


        "That's ok… that over?" he asked indicating the call


        "Ya….I think it's disconnected"


        "Ohk…..actually Mom was calling you" as she stared on, "Needed help for Bliss"


        "Oh fine" trying to sound as normal as she could, glancing at Rahul


        "You know Ashi……..Aunty needed you for something Suhaan can't do" he said teasing him


        "Ya...ok…..So can you please come with me?" he asked cordially


        "Huh? Oh ya sure"


        "Rahul, come let's go to my den" as they went, "You just wait…..I'll show her Mom's room" he said to Rahul who nodded unwillingly


        "Oh k" he said


        "Ah…..Ashi, 3rd door to the left is Mom's" he said


        "Hmmmm" as she turned, her legs were shaking, that short distance seemed to be the longest for her…Rahul looked on


        "Oh no……Ashi don't go" he chanted as she left "Who told you to come?" he murmured to himself


        "Would you mind to enter?" he asked Rahul


        "Oh right" as they went in


     Ashi knocked as she reached, peeping in cautiously, she knew there was no enough excuse,


        "Who's it?" asked she


        "Aunty…you called me?"


        "Oh ya beta….come in" she was busy getting something from her cupboard, Bliss was still crying, but in a low tone, "Oh I'm so sorry to……"


        "No that's ok Aunty" as she smiled at the other woman sitting with Bliss on her lap; Ashi's chest seemed to be a smaller place for her heart to thump


        "Actually, this is my cousin……." as she introduced her, "She has helped me out"


        "Of course I would…..why do you need to bother her when I'm here?" she asked, "It's ok beta you can leave….thank you"


        "That's perfectly fine" she hurried up


        "Ah…..have I met you before?" asked his Mom n she froze, "Actually your face seems quite similar"


        "Oh…….may be at the engagement party" she suggested


        "Ya may be…..many of Suhaan's friends were there" she said, "Ok beta….sorry again to bother you…. thanks" as she smiled before leaving


     Out of the room, it seemed like a nightmare……which she had seen repeatedly, n woke up from sleep sweating, and she ran from the vicinity of the room….where? She din't knew




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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 12:42pm | IP Logged

     In Suhaan's room……they were chatting….n gulping down snacks, well Rahul had never been so tensed


        "You know I think we should try something different for the wedding? What do you say?" he asked


        "Huh……whose wedding?" Rahul asked in return


        "Of course mine…..who else?" he said as he stared


        "Ya ok"


        "Rahul" n he shouted near his ear


        "Ah……what was that for?"


        "For not listening to me……I'm saying something to you n you are not at all attentive"


        "Hmmm……actually Ashi….."


        "Oh ya right……I forgot about her, it's much time she left na?"


        "Can you please check on her…..she needs to be home right?"


        "I'll do that" as he went n knocked straight, "Ashi….."


        "Oh she's not here beta…… she's left as soon as I told her that it was done already" his Mom said


        "But…..ohk…I'll find her" as he came back quickly, "Rahul…..Ashi's not in Mom's room" he said


        "I knew it" as Rahul stood up quickly


        "You knew it? What?"


        "Let's search her first……" he suggested


        "Ohk…..fine….she must be here only, I'm sure she wouldn't leave without informing you"


        "I'm not" as they went in different directions


        "Ashi" called Suhaan but there was no reply, as he ran here n there, "Woof….I never thought my house was that big" he murmured


        "Ashi" shouted Rahul as he searched through the garden


     Suhaan thought of trying to trace her through her cell, he dialed….n yes after sometime he could hear it ringing


        "Why isn't she picking it up?" he thought, "I hope she's alright" as he went in the direction from where the sound came


     Ashi stood by a wall facing it, in a corner …. hiding her face with her hands…..n alas she was crying profusely, n her cell was tucked in her pocket


        "Ashi" as he cut the call, she didn't move or turn, he went forward n placed a cautious hand on her shoulder, "I hope Mom didn't say something that bad…..or did she?" he asked n the next moment she turned only to hug him tight, she was trembling, "Is everything alright?" he asked again, this time in a worried tone


        "I…..I don't want to loose you Suhaan" she uttered as she gasped, "I really don't" she repeated


        "Loose me?" came a shocked one, "What are you saying Ashi?"


        "I didn't knew that he's your……." n she stopped as it struck her, "Oh hell…..what am I saying?" she thought


        "Ashi look at me……" almost forcing her to do that, as she refused to look up, "Why do you think you would loose me?"


        "After…….what happened?"  as he smiled


        "Ah… are still crying for that?" she nodded, "Look at me….I say look at me" he urged in a commanding tone….n she did, her eyes had turned red by that time, "Is crying your favorite pastime?"


        "Huh?" n he gave a wide smile


        "Look Ashi…..if you didn't loose this friend then….then you will never loose him ever" he declared


        "Really?" she had never looked into his eyes so closely


        "Of course…I like you for what you are……a nice person"




        "Trust me…I'll always be beside you….whenever you'll need a friend" he assured


        "Thanks" as she wiped her tears controlling herself, "Am sorry….." as she soothed his shirt's crushed n wet area


        "That's fine……" he stopped her by holding her hand, as he felt uncomfortable, "But you are very much like Bliss in this" he stated


        "Do you relate everything with her?" she asked n he quickly nodded


        "Can we move now…..Rahul must be still running around for you" they turned n there he was waiting down seeing her with him, "Oh you are here?" he asked as they came down


        "Are you alright?" he asked Ashi


        "Well…..she is now" he answered it for her


        "I think we should leave now…'s pretty late" she suggested


        "Oh right" Rahul said as they started


        "Ah…….Ashi" he called back,




        "What made you think that now…..that you will loose me?" he asked


        "Ah…..that….just like that" she managed


        "No Suhaan, she's lying" poked in Rahul; too shocked was Ashi for that


        "Lying?" he asked, "But….but why would she lie?"


        "Because she doesn't want to hurt you"


        "Rahul stop it" warned she


        "No Ashi….it's the only chance you can say it to him"


        "Rahul please….. I beg you" she pleaded n Suhaan was stunned by her words


        "Enough of it….will anyone tell me what's it?" he asked


        "I'll tell you….n today as she won't be able to tell that"


        "Am waiting…."


        "Rahul no" she said it for the last time before leaving, Rahul caught her hand n gave out a mock smile to her, before facing Suhaan


        "Come on, anybody who will catch you up with Bliss, will get that feeling" as he laughed out


        "What?" he asked n Ashi stared on at him as he winked


        "Ya….what did you think anyways?" he asked Suhaan


        "Rahul……I'll kill you" as he ran after him, n Ashi followed them quietly


     Soon they got in,


        "Ok then…hope to see you soon Mamu" teased Rahul


        "Ya sure…..duplicate Mamu……bye Ashi" he said


        "Bye" she softly replied before leaving


     Their car passed through Snigdha' s,


        "Hey wasn't that Rahul?" she asked


        "Who Rahul?" asked Anuraag


        "Rahul……Suhaan's friend…….n there was a girl with him"




        "I din't knew Rahul had a girlfriend?"


        "Ya…..he should have taken your permission before that, isn't it?" he teased


        "Shut up, I din't mean that" n they reached


     Suhaan was down still,


        "Hey Suhaan…..that was Rahul right?" she asked


        "Ya he just went…..came to see Bliss…"


        "Again n that too with his girlfriend?" asked Anu


        "Girlfriend?.... Oh you mean Ashi?" he asked


        "May be ….."


        "Ashi's not his girlfriend……they are just good friends….in fact she was the one who wanted to see Bliss"


        "Oh…..I missed Ashi by a couple of moments" Snigs said


        "I din't knew you wanted to meet her?" Suhaan asked curiously


        "Nothing like that….it's just that I have met almost all your friends except her" she covered it up


        "Ohk… the way, how was your drive?" he asked


        "Ah…….I enjoyed it…..ask her, if she still enjoys it with me" Anu stated


        "What rubbish Jijs?"


        "Actually Suhaan……may be for the first time he's right" as he looked on, "I missed someone"


        "Who's that?"


        "My baby" she declared, "Where's she?"


        "Oh……She's in Mom's room"


        "Just see Saale Saab……it's not even a month, n she misses her more than me"


        "Isn't that natural?"


        "You too think so?"


        "Hmmmm… are nowhere near to her in this" he teased


        "Well I loose then…….after all she's mine"


        "Uhun…..that's a clever win in fact" as they laughed



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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 12:47pm | IP Logged

She had been quiet from the moment they left,


        "Ashi……are you okay?"




        "You shouldn't have taken the risk at all"


        "But…..I was missing him too much……haven't met him for so many days"


        "Oh……n you didn't think that for even once that what would have happened if he had known the truth?"


        "He'll get to know that one day"


        "Ya…but… did you manage Aunty? Didn't she recognize you?"


        "She did….."


        "What? She did?" as he stopped the car suddenly, "Then Suhaan….."


        "No…….she said that she had seen me somewhere"


        "N what did you say to that?"


        "I said may be she had seen me at the party"


        "Wow….what an idea? I never knew you were so clever" he smiled wide


        "Shut up…..but if she asks Suhaan this then....."


        "Don't worry……I don't think there's a chance to it"


        "Hmmmm….." as she looked at him, "N ya that was nasty" hitting him on his arm


        "Ouch…." laughing hard, "That was for making me run like mad"


        "I'm sorry"


        "From onwards, if you need to do that, please inform me beforehand, so that only he can run around" he joked


        "Rahul …..You are too much"





     Suhaan had started going to office from the past few days, but his heart lay at home, to his Bliss…. He would call up at intervals to enquire about her, n get worried when heard her crying……n Snigs would laugh at his behavior, but knew it very well that he would miss her most once she leaves out.


        "I never knew he could behave like this" Sameer laughed at him


        "So what? At least I'm behaving that for my Niece….but you do that to Bhabhie" he teased back


        "No, that's not true" he denied


        "But Suhaan……You have attached yourself to her in no time" said Snigs


        "Even she's very fond of me…right Bliss" he said gazing at her, "N not to her other Mamu"


        "Ya that's true…..Sameer I don't think she even reacts to you" Snigs said laughing


        "You think? Am sure, she doesn't" Suhaan added


        "Ok fine, she doesn't….she'll once she grows up"


        "But I'll always remain her favorite…n not you"


        "May be because she's the first Girl, you had fallen in love with" he stated


        "N the last too" declaring he stood up


        "Hey I have something about her" Anuraag said as he entered


        "What?" asked Snigs


        "Guess who she typifies most?" he said


        "Who else other than me?" Suhaan took pride in saying that as they gave a Uff not again look


        "But that's true…." Anu supported


        "Jiju you too?" as Snigs let out another laugh


        "Hmmm…..I have enough reasons to state that"


        "Like……what?" she asked


        "She's no.9….which signifies adventures, she's short tempered, can take hasty decisions but once taken she'll stand by it"


        "Uuuuuuu!" he sighed, "At least someone's like me here"


        "So is it good or bad?" Snigs asked curiously


        "Well that depends wholly on the decision she makes" Anu stated, "There's more…. They are born fighters, and never become slaves to anybody"


        "Now that's Suhaan" pointed Sameer


        "They always quarrel with their friends and in-laws. They do not like advice" he continued reading


        "I know that's typically Suhaan" he poked in again


        "This one sums it up……"




        "7 & 9 make a great combo….While 7 represents the underlying Divine Unity, 9 represents the physical and the material"


        "Suhaan n Divine?" as he coughed


        "What's so odd about it……n it's not me, it's number 7, can vary you see?" he sighted


        "It does! Is there anything, which is unlike him?" Sameer asked


        "Well this one's not like him….." he said


        "What's that?" Suhaan asked


        "Loving women can make monkeys of them as they will do anything for their beloved" he ended laughing


        "You were so right Jijs that can never be me" he declared, "But that's Bhai……"


        "Huh….at least something's like me"


        "See he didn't deny that one" Suhaan said


        "N you never know Suhaan…… what awaits you tomorrow" Sameer said


        "Bhai please…..stop it" he strictly said "But Dids you be careful" 


        "Hmmmmm" she uttered


        "Oh ho stop being so protective from now only" Anu said, "I'll make her live like a free bird"


        "Ya….But make sure she returns to her own nest every time" Suhaan opined giggling




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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 12:49pm | IP Logged

     Ashi was fed up of seeing Rahul n Tamy playing with each other n not confessing still


        "Rahul….why are you not saying anything to Tamy yet?" she asked one day


        "Why? You only told me, she loves me… can't she?"


        "What do you mean by that….you don't love her?"


        "Yes I do but…….."


        "Just remember one thing Rahul…..if you love someone, there should be no ifs n buts in between… that clear?"




        "You don't how much it hurts…..when your love doesn't acknowledge your feelings the same way you do" her voice heavy


        "Hey….don't say like that, he'll do that one day, trust me" as she smiled "Ok fine……I'll do it"




        "I wanted to propose her after I get settled finally…..only after I can give her something of my own….my own firm"


        "That's sweet but what if she doesn't bother about all that? After all she likes you n not your law firm" she stated




        "Do that before you loose her"


        "Loose her? Why?" he asked in a worried tone


        "I don't know, the day I went to meet her I got to listen that they are finding a match for her….." she said


        "Not possible….." n she curiously asked


        "Did you know anything in that matter?"


        "No but….I know one thing for sure, if it had been anything like that…..she would have told me"


        "May be she didn't want to make you worry for her"


        "You think she can do that?"


        "Hmmm, may be she's upset with you"


        "Oh no…..what should I do now?"


        "That also I'll tell you?"


        "No……but will it look nice if I go n say it to her now?"


        "Of course Rahul…..may be she's just waiting for one nod from you"


        "I love you so much Ashi" as he hugged her


        "Err… that for her" she said smiling


        "Thanks" as he ran n she called up


        "Hey Tamy…'s done" she winked


        "Wow… excited to see this" she replied


        "But don't make him do that too much" she said giggling


        "Oh ho…..I'll give him what he deserves…..a good lesson…..You don't worry"


        "Ok…I'll be waiting to hear it from you" as she hung up





     Rahul reached as fast as he could, reaching up to her room was harder


        "Tamy" he called softly, she was in the balcony then


        "Rahul……what a pleasant surprise?" she asked


        "Are you alright?"


        "Of course I'm, why, don't I look that?" she asked


        "Sometimes…..people are what they hide" he stated


        "N what makes you say so?"


        "I don't know…..but I feel you are hiding something"


        "No not at all" as she turned away, trying hard to suppress her laugh


        "Ah….Ashi told me that.."




        "That your family has been looking someone for you….." he knew how hard was it for him


        "Why did she? I asked her not to….." as Rahul turned her around


        "Tamy….I want you to know something…"


        "Like what?" she asked in the most innocent tone possible


        "I like you quite much"




        "No I mean………. I love you" he said in one breath


       "But I don't….."


        "You don't? But Ashi told me that you….."


        "Oh that means you love me only if I do, otherwise not?"


        "No…….I didn't mean that, did I?"


        "Then what do you mean by that?"


        "That meant I'll love you even if you don't" he said before turning away sadly


        "Oh……" n she stopped him keeping a hand on his shoulder, "N what if I say I love you too?"


        "Tamy please…..I don't like these things, it's fine if you don't, but please don't make a joke out of it" he said sternly


        "Ohk baba am so sorry for that……I shouldn't have done that" she uttered sadly, "But Rahul….I really love you……please believe me" tears had come up in her eyes n then Rahul gave out a laugh


        "I knew it was all planned….."


        "Huh? You knew it?"


        "Of course……..anyways you wanted to hear it from me…..n I wanted that from you" he said


        "Hmmmm" as Rahul neared her


        "So… finally said that…."


        "You too"


        "Ah……I really love you Tamy"


        "I love you too" she replied shyly as he hugged her, "Hey what are you doing?" jolting out of his grip, "If someone sees us like this…."


        "So what? They too will get to know of it without saying" he declared




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