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An Arrow of Love~RN fic..udtd-pgs 47 & 48 [9/6] (Page 24)

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"Days? I would love to do that all my life" he reasoned

 

        "What? So you are intending to stay a bachelor all your life?"

 

        "Why not? Living my life to the fullest" his face showed a certain relaxing glow even with the mere thought, "I can't move around someone all my life, I want to live life on my own terms"

 

        "N what if the girl agrees to live her life on your terms?" Rahul queried

 

        "Ah……….." he thought for a second, "Then too, I love my freedom more than anything else" he gladly declared

 

        "Ok tell me, is there no one in this group that u really find nice?" Vineet asked

 

        "Why are u all after me?" he asked, seemingly stucked

 

        "Now don't try to escape" warned Ishaan

 

        "But…."

 

        "Say na, has no one till date has left a nice impression on you?"

 

        "I have other things to research" he joked

 

        "N what about Ashi? Your current link up?" Mihir asked

 

        "What rubbish? You people are crazy" he shot back immediately

 

        "Don't act ok, we can very well notice your behavior towards her unlike other girls" reasoned Varun

 

        "I don't care whether you belive me or not, there's no supposed link –up between us, got it?" he said

 

        "Then why do you talk to her so politely?" asked Sharib, Rahul knew somewhere they are crossing the line

 

        "Oh is this the clue?" he asked, "Because she's newer member to our gang, n probably because she's a bit sportier than the other girls" he explained

 

        "And?" they further budged

 

        "Fine, she's sweet" saying he got up as if to avoid further details

 

        "Sweet? Hmmm……did u taste?" Rimil threw another

 

        "What?" asked Suhaan, "What did you say?" anger had already got on him

 

        "Suhaan let it be na" Manish tried to stop him

 

        "No, this is not a joke" as he went to him, "Look I may not be as free when it comes to discussing them, but I surely know where to draw the line………"

 

        "Suhaan, he didn't mean it that way" added Varun

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"Respect doesn't need too many ways to display Varun, whatever he had said today just shows how cheap he thinks of them" saying he stormed out

 

        "Suhaan" Rahul followed him

 

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        "Wait I'll bring it from the tent" Ashi said

 

        "Hello this is not done, why are you going now?" asked Neelu

 

        "I'm not going anywhere, I'll be back in a minute……..feeling a bit shivery" she said

 

        "Oooo, can we ask someone to arrange a shawl for you?" teased Siya

 

        "Yaa I heard that someone does it superbly" added Soniya

 

        "Wat's this someone-someone? Do you fear to name him?" Tamy teased a bit more

 

        "Uff, you people are too much" Ashi said before going, blushing all the way to her tent

 

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        "Suhaan please try to understand" Rahul said while Suhaan went on walking, "These type of things keep happening" he knew it was a bit more for him to take but still he said to avoid things turn worser

 

        "Rahul, it might be a normal thing for you" he stopped, "Actually no, Ashi is your friend right?" as he nodded

 

        "I know he was wrong"

 

        "Then why didn't you say that to him, I know he was wrong"

 

        "Because not all things can be changed Suhaan…..they have been like this for years, you or me cannot change them"

 

        "Fine then I would like to stay away from these kinda people"

 

        "They are your friends Suhaan" he said

 

        "I don't care what they are, but they should behave within a certain limit, do you realize how cheap they think about girls if they can talk like that?"

 

        "I'm not that fool, ofcourse I do realize"

 

        "Rahul please, go away" he started again, "I won't be going back now"

 

        "Ok fine but try to not create a big mess out of this" he suggested before leaving

 

 

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Ashi was on her way to her friends when she noticed Suhaan sitting beside the lake, all alone

 

        "Suhaan?" she thought, "Should I go n ask him?" she hesitated a bit but finally went to him, "Can I sit here for a while?"

 

        "Huh?" as he looked up, "Why? Aren't your friends giving you enough company?" he asked harshly

 

        "Don't you think I should be the one asking this?"

 

        "Look that's none of your business"

 

        "Ok ok I got it, something surely has happened, isn't it?"

 

        "So? That's completely between us"

 

        "Fine, I would not ask any further. Can I say something?"

 

        "What?"

 

        "You know you look more handsome when angry" she stated

 

        "Are u trying to flirt with me?"

 

        "Am I? I don't think so"

 

        "Good for u, as I'm not……" he was cut

 

        "I know you are not interested in girls" she completed sitting beside him

 

        "Hmmm" she could sense his anger taming down

 

        "Can I ask you something more?"

 

        "No"

 

        "Ok I won't" she said making a sad face, he didn't miss that

 

        "What is it?"

 

        "Why are you so different from the others?"

 

        "Different?"

 

        "Hmm, you are bossy, short tempered, hate girls……"

 

        "Hello pull up your brake, I'm not that"

 

        "What? Don't you hate girls?"

 

        "Yes I do"

 

        "Why?"

 

        "I'm not bound to tell you the reason"

 

        "Ok if not me, then anyone else"

 

        "But I don't want to……."

 

        "Believe me you'll feel better"

 

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        "Did I ask for a suggestion?"

 

        "No. Ok lemme guess, did anyone ditched you n so you have started hating girls?" she asked

 

        "No"

 

        "I hope you are straight right?" n he surely gave a shot back, "Oops sorry" she bit her lip

 

        "Don't you have anything else to do?"

 

        "Hmm, then it leaves me with only one option"

 

        "What?"

 

        "You might have experienced something earlier, may be when you were a child………" as he looked at her, "You know it happens with many, is it that case?"

 

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That's ends my update now Smile
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woooooooooooow excelent n simply super,

dialogues r rockin realy weldun sweety,

loved them,


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I'll try to update by tomorrow!Smile

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