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An Arrow of Love~RN fic..udtd-pgs 47 & 48 [9/6] (Page 22)

saanch_69 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 2:48pm | IP Logged

"Great, so let's start" Suhaan said, "So where's my team?" he asked, n Sharib, Neelu…….Ravs joined him


        "Let's go" said she


        "Ah….are u sure you are in my team?" he asked her, a bit irritated by the fact


        "Ofcourse…… one can go against it" she declared, as Suhaan searched for the persons who had created this blunder


        "Great" he said, as if forcing himself


        "Poor he" Tamy couldn't help herself from commenting, Ashi felt bad not to be in his group, but she knew seeing Ravs with him, would be unbearable for her


     Ashi, Tamy, Rahul n Ishaan were in another, while Manish, Soniya, Siya n Ankur comprised the other, n the rest were in their respective groups……


        "Ok, we'll meet at that point" Suhaan said showing a point, as all looked towards it,


        "This time we'll reach there first" Manish declared


        "Well bro confidence is good, but not overt, no one can beat me in this" Suhaan declared before leaving with his group


     At first, it went fine for all of them, but as the heights increased some were feeling quite weaker, the pressure was increasing n the muscles felt hard to support…… when this was the condition with some, some where doing it with equal panache


        "Ravs please walk fast" said Suhaan


        "I'm walking fast, I can't do it more" she announced


        "It seems like you are on a walk" added Sharib


        "Exactly" Suhaan said, "I can't loose this, got it"


        "Then you go, am coming" she said


        "What do u mean by that?" he asked facing her now, "Don't u understand the meaning of a group?" as she kept mum, "We need to reach there, together"




        "Why the hell did you join me?" he asked


        "Suhaan, just cool down, she'll do it fast" Neelu said looking at Ravs


        "Hmm, I'll" she said n started to walk faster


        "Listen, don't walk too fast, it'll worsen it, take steady steps but keep up the pace" he explained to her


        "Okay" as she nodded, she had no choice but to agree


        "I can't lose it in anyway" he said to himself




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saanch_69 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Well that's all for now
Hoping it was nice Smile
aarsow IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
excelent sweety,

loved a lot,dialogues were simply super,do contn,

all the best 4 the next part,

ashu20 Groupbie

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Posted: 21 August 2008 at 4:21am | IP Logged


update was fab.........really lot it...
u r theeeeeeeeeee best
kads_8302 Goldie

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Posted: 22 August 2008 at 5:57am | IP Logged
hi dear,
        how r u.... u ud again thats very  great.... the ud was very nice... first of all ravs can't do the things which will woo suhaan.... but yeh kya ravs ki nazar lag gayi ashi ko she was not able to do that bungee jumping... but this is showing the concerned of suhaan towards ashi that how much he care's about her... rahul n suhaan discussion shows that how many good n close frens she have n they all care about her... oh god suhaan ka ghussa bhi na... but he looks cute that way also.... chalo but ashi cleared things between suhaan n rahul n indirectly she is telling the feelings about herself... that was very cute.....  now they going to some other   place  n  this rahul is so lazy he can't do his packing but bcoz of that suhaan n ashi got time n their part was very nice n suhaan in shirtless scene... i loved that scene in lrl also.. he looks so .......... cute yaar... n poor rahul he has do his packing himself...  poor manish he loves ravs ... how can he can love such a girl... well love is blind.... aur yeh kya tumne toh ashi aur suhaan ko ek group mai nahi rakha... n that ravs is in suhaan group b/c of that our suhaan can loose..  well they will have lot of fun in their further trip n i always have while reading ur fic..
bye kads
vvdn Senior Member

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Posted: 23 August 2008 at 5:52am | IP Logged


      am really tired of telling u that update is ..................
Amazing....Fantastic........ Fantabulous........Cool........bla bla bla
u r simply superb dear.
i luv the fight of Rahul n Suhaan,
i luv the convo betn. Suhaan n Ashi when she came to cool his anger
i luv the convo brtn. Ashi, Suhaan n Rahul when she came to meet Rahul after her packing, Suhaan's embarrassment so cute.....
luv the way Rahul said Ashi a Bandit Queen
                        bus i am really tired why u write it so beautiful
n now they have real  fun of campaning, so let's c what going to happen next.

                                                                          Luv u n ur Fic
                                                           plzzzzzzz update soon.

P.S. waise i have . apni Ashi madam padhti kya hai college mein?
        n why Suhaan is so stubborn , sometimes he should listen to others right.
saanch_69 Senior Member

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Posted: 23 August 2008 at 9:04am | IP Logged

Here's the next part of AAOL :

aTwenty Nineb



     Ashi was speeding up with every moment,


        "Ashi wait for me" called out Tamy


        "Hmmm" she replied


        "What hmm, you are not even listening to me properly" she complained


        "Oh ho Tamy, let her go" said Rahul, "Seems like she wants to beat even Suhaan at this………"


        "Ahan….then I'm afraid she'll be disappointed" suggested Ishaan


        "Why?" asked Tamy


        "No one can beat him in this" he declared


        "Because no one has ever tried to……" Tamy said


        "No that's not the case…….. as he rightly says, u gotta love what you are doing" Ishaan said, as they patiently listened while moving ahead


        "Seems like he's changed a bit too much" added Rahul


        "U know him quite well, right?" he asked


        "Ya, we have grown up together after all" he said


        "Was he this bossy then too?" Tamy asked


        "Is he bossy?" Rahul asked, as Tamy looked at him with round eyes thinking that she might have said something she shouldn't have, "No I mean… he just bossy?" he asked


        "Ofcourse not, he's not just that………..he can even give a tough competition to Hitler" Ishaan added


        "But u people still love him, don't you?" asked Ashi from behind, who had been listening to them without their knowledge


        "Well well…" as Tamy joined her, "I'm not sure as of what I feel for him, but you are surely in love with him" she declared


        "Tamy, what are you doing?" as she glanced at the boys back, "Are you mad, why are you shouting?" she asked in a whisper


        "Fine then tell me the truth" she asked like warning her


         "Truth? What truth?" she asked, hiding her blush


        "That you had left last night" she replied


        "Last night?" she was clueless what Tamy was referring to, "Did I say anything in my sleep?" she thought


        "Hmmmm…..u were naming him only and smiling in your own dreams" Tamy said

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"No that's simply not possible, I didn't do anything like that" she opposed


        "How can you be so sure? I myself had heard you saying all those things……."


        "Because I never speak when I'm sleeping" she said confidently


        "Have you ever been in love before?"




        "Then how would you do that earlier?" she reasoned, "I have heard that these things happen when someone is in love"


        "What rubbish!"


        "Ok don't believe me, n moresoever what will I gain if u believe me" she finished n walked past her as she stood confused


        "Tamy Tamy……" she called running towards her,


        "Now what?"


        "Did I really said anything?" she asked in a low voice


        "Ya…u still don't believe me…why would I lie to you Ashi?"


        "What did I say?" she was quite emberrased by her own act


        "Hmm so you are interested in knowing your own lines" Tamy asked teasing her


        "Let it be then, I should have known it"


        "Hey girls come on fast" Rahul said walking past them


        "You go we are coming" Tamy replied


        "Tamy…." Ashi started again


        "Oh no" as she stared at her, "Ok fine, you didn't say much as of that but yes you were trying to say something about him"


        "What?" she shouted


        "Ashi are u okay?" asked Rahul but she was too shocked to answer


        "Ya ya she's absolutely fine" Tamy assured, "Ashi let's go"


        "But Tamy did I?


        "Why are so surprised about this? Can't you love someone?" she asked


        "Its not that….I mean how can I love someone so suddenly?"


        "I don't think its something sudden, I have marked the progress" she cleared


        "Do you really think it's….."


        "Ashi what's there to be so tensed about? You should love the feeling of love, isn't it?"

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