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An Arrow of Love~RN fic..udtd-pgs 47 & 48 [9/6] (Page 22)

saanch_69 Senior Member

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"Oh come on Bhai, I'm not on any school picnic" he said n their tit-tats continued, Suhaan was trying to say something to her, but she was unable to understand


        "Actually Rahul asked me to arrange his……."


        "Ashi am back" Rahul entered announcing, "What is this?"


        "What? Don't u think you owe a thanx to me?" she asked


        "For what?" he asked


        "How mean is that Rahul?" hitting him


        "Oh hello Bandit Queen, just look what have you done?" as   he forced her to look at the clothes




        "You have arranged Suhaan's clothes, not mine" he stated


        "No, it was your's……."


        "Those are mine, u stupid" as he hit her on his head, Suhaan was back after the call n laughing


        "That's what I was trying to tell you then" he said


        "Oh" she bit her lip


        "Well not a problem, somebody's loss is somebody's gain, isn't it Rahul?" he grinned


        "Ha ha ha very funny" sporting a fake smile, "Ashi, do mine too"


        "No way, it's your fault……u should have shown me your clothes before leaving" she reasoned


        "Ya that's true" supported Suhaan as smiling to him


        "U shut up" said Rahul,


        "I'm not doing it n that's final" as she started to leave, but she turned, "If u want I can send someone, interested?"




        "Ahahaha like u don't know……Tamyyyyyy" she shouted before leaving


        "Oh no" as he sat down


        "Oh yes" Suhaan sat beside him placing a hand over his shoulder, "Now be fast, we'll leave early tomorrow" he ordered as he left smiling, poor Rahul had nothing else to do but pack himself





      The day was bright n their moods added to it even more.....they had started as early as 6 in the morning, n because of this early start some were dozing off on their seats. But someone was awake, forcing herself to think some way to kick out Ashi…


        "Ravs give it a break sweety" said a sleepish Dolly, "Aren't u feeling sleepy?"


        "Seems like am devoid of that…….n what kinda friend u are? I'm tensed n u are sleeping" she threw a disgusted look


        "What to do? Whenever I say any plan, you discard it as 'bullshit'… my brain has almost stopped working" she stated


        "But I had to do think of something fast or…….." she was stopped by a hand on her shoulder


        "Come on girls, have some sweet sleep" said Manish


        "Why is it bothering you so much?" asked Ravs


        "Don't u think it has to do all only with me?" he asked raising his brows


        "What rubbish?"


        "Hmm, look if u won't sleep, then u would not be able to take part in the trekking schedule……..n if you won't take part in it, then who's going to be my partner" he said in an explanatory tone


        "Are u finished?" Ravs asked


        "Well almost"


        "Who told u that I'll be becoming your partner? Clear out all these misconceptions ok?" she cleared out


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"If not me, then who?" as she looked at him, "I mean ya there are some who you want to join but…." he knew it well that she meant whom


        "But what?"


        "Are u sure they will stand your tantrums as I'll?"


        "Manish" as she started in a raised voice


        "Ravs what the hell is this?" scolded Ishaan, who was at the back seat


        "Ask that to ur friend instead" signaling at Manish


        "This is not done Dude, u can flirt later"


        "Hello, I was not doing anything of that sort, infact I was asking her to sleep" he explained, "Really, u shoudn't do any good to anybody" as he walked off to his seat, as Ravs sported an ignorant look


        "I don't understand why are u always concerned about her?" said Suhaan, as Manish sat beside him


        "Because she's my friend"


        "I know what does she means to u but……….but she doesn't care for u at all, my friend" he reasoned


        "These things doesn't matter when u like someone"


        "Are u serious?" sitting up instantly,


        "Leave it dude…….who cares?"


        "I do"


        "But she doesn't, infact she cares for……" he left it n Suhaan understood it well, he knew it hurts his friend but he also knew it well that Ravs was not the girl to get easily convinced


        "U know she's very lucky" he said smiling


        "I'm not that depressed for now you are even lying" he stated


        "No I really mean it"


        "Ya ya I know u well"





        "Come on everybody, take out your essentials" announced Ishaan on reaching there


        "Oh we reached so fast" said Ravs


        "Fast? It's already late; I think we should hurry up" Suhaan said


        "Okay, I would just check the arrangements here" Ankur said


        "Wait, I'm coming with u" as Suhaan joined him


        "Shall we decide the groups first?" asked Siya


        "Oh ho u all do those things, but quick" Manish said before leaving


        "I'll be with Suhaan" Ravs announced


        "But we'll be making groups unlike pairs, as per the last time" Sharib said


        "So what…I'll be with him"


        "Okay fine, so if u allow us to proceed, can we?" Ishaan teased


        "Huh" as she left


        "So much attitude man" Tamy said


        "Let her be na" Ashi stopped her





     By the time they returned, the groups were done with…….


        "So all done?" asked Ankur


        "Yup…..we'll be divided in six groups, which means 3-4 on an average" said Mihir


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"Great, so let's start" Suhaan said, "So where's my team?" he asked, n Sharib, Neelu…….Ravs joined him


        "Let's go" said she


        "Ah….are u sure you are in my team?" he asked her, a bit irritated by the fact


        "Ofcourse…… one can go against it" she declared, as Suhaan searched for the persons who had created this blunder


        "Great" he said, as if forcing himself


        "Poor he" Tamy couldn't help herself from commenting, Ashi felt bad not to be in his group, but she knew seeing Ravs with him, would be unbearable for her


     Ashi, Tamy, Rahul n Ishaan were in another, while Manish, Soniya, Siya n Ankur comprised the other, n the rest were in their respective groups……


        "Ok, we'll meet at that point" Suhaan said showing a point, as all looked towards it,


        "This time we'll reach there first" Manish declared


        "Well bro confidence is good, but not overt, no one can beat me in this" Suhaan declared before leaving with his group


     At first, it went fine for all of them, but as the heights increased some were feeling quite weaker, the pressure was increasing n the muscles felt hard to support…… when this was the condition with some, some where doing it with equal panache


        "Ravs please walk fast" said Suhaan


        "I'm walking fast, I can't do it more" she announced


        "It seems like you are on a walk" added Sharib


        "Exactly" Suhaan said, "I can't loose this, got it"


        "Then you go, am coming" she said


        "What do u mean by that?" he asked facing her now, "Don't u understand the meaning of a group?" as she kept mum, "We need to reach there, together"




        "Why the hell did you join me?" he asked


        "Suhaan, just cool down, she'll do it fast" Neelu said looking at Ravs


        "Hmm, I'll" she said n started to walk faster


        "Listen, don't walk too fast, it'll worsen it, take steady steps but keep up the pace" he explained to her


        "Okay" as she nodded, she had no choice but to agree


        "I can't lose it in anyway" he said to himself




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saanch_69 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Well that's all for now
Hoping it was nice Smile
aarsow IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 August 2008 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
excelent sweety,

loved a lot,dialogues were simply super,do contn,

all the best 4 the next part,

ashu20 Groupbie

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Posted: 21 August 2008 at 4:21am | IP Logged


update was fab.........really lot it...
u r theeeeeeeeeee best
kads_8302 Goldie

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Posted: 22 August 2008 at 5:57am | IP Logged
hi dear,
        how r u.... u ud again thats very  great.... the ud was very nice... first of all ravs can't do the things which will woo suhaan.... but yeh kya ravs ki nazar lag gayi ashi ko she was not able to do that bungee jumping... but this is showing the concerned of suhaan towards ashi that how much he care's about her... rahul n suhaan discussion shows that how many good n close frens she have n they all care about her... oh god suhaan ka ghussa bhi na... but he looks cute that way also.... chalo but ashi cleared things between suhaan n rahul n indirectly she is telling the feelings about herself... that was very cute.....  now they going to some other   place  n  this rahul is so lazy he can't do his packing but bcoz of that suhaan n ashi got time n their part was very nice n suhaan in shirtless scene... i loved that scene in lrl also.. he looks so .......... cute yaar... n poor rahul he has do his packing himself...  poor manish he loves ravs ... how can he can love such a girl... well love is blind.... aur yeh kya tumne toh ashi aur suhaan ko ek group mai nahi rakha... n that ravs is in suhaan group b/c of that our suhaan can loose..  well they will have lot of fun in their further trip n i always have while reading ur fic..
bye kads
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Posted: 23 August 2008 at 5:52am | IP Logged


      am really tired of telling u that update is ..................
Amazing....Fantastic........ Fantabulous........Cool........bla bla bla
u r simply superb dear.
i luv the fight of Rahul n Suhaan,
i luv the convo betn. Suhaan n Ashi when she came to cool his anger
i luv the convo brtn. Ashi, Suhaan n Rahul when she came to meet Rahul after her packing, Suhaan's embarrassment so cute.....
luv the way Rahul said Ashi a Bandit Queen
                        bus i am really tired why u write it so beautiful
n now they have real  fun of campaning, so let's c what going to happen next.

                                                                          Luv u n ur Fic
                                                           plzzzzzzz update soon.

P.S. waise i have . apni Ashi madam padhti kya hai college mein?
        n why Suhaan is so stubborn , sometimes he should listen to others right.

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