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An Arrow of Love~RN fic..udtd-pgs 47 & 48 [9/6] (Page 18)

vvdn Senior Member

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luv u dearEmbarrassed kya update hai. finally sameer ne shadi ke liye haan kar di n mehr is just too sweet, sam really deserve a nice girl like pretty soon Suhaan is getting his Bhabhi that's cool..Tongue
        don't u think Suhaan is too much, why don't he join the C.I.D insted of joining thie bussinessLOLLOLLOL am happy for Sameer but same time worried for Ashi Confused dunno what served in front of her when Suhaan comes to know that she is the one n how Ashi react when she came to know that who's Suhaan is... god too many complecations but i  think ur there to handle that all so am urgly waiting for Sunday n am ready with my packing for sure Rocking picnic.
        i told u that this  RAV'S is real devil, tammy is rite Ashi have to keep distance from her, after hearing what she don with pure Soniya...n Rahul oh god he is such darlling.... i loved the way he teased Ashi , he is real friend of her.Hope our thirsty Ashi got 'HER WATER' soon.
          Rimi is really angel yaar, god give every one the sister like rimi but what she gonna ask Ashi for helping her i think it's surely related to Suhaan.
            so dear plzzzzzz update next part asap.

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hi dear,
          nice ud.... ashi is truly in love with suhaan.... n rahul never miss a chance of teasing her...  so suhaan is on mission to set sameer life properly nice brother-brother relationship..... its nice that sameer is set with mehr so our ashi is free for suhaan... n this ravs she is so dangerous.. i wish she dosen't harm our ashi... well suhaan is their to take care of her..... now all set to go to mahabaleshwar... i have read the further ud also but still i m excited to read the further part again...
so do ud soon
bye love
saanch_69 Senior Member

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  Here's the nxt part :

aTwenty Fiveb



     Ashi was doing the last round of her packing when Rimi stormed in,


        "Di, guess what?" she asked as Ashi turned sumwat surprisingly




        "Oh ho I said guess……" she nagged


        "Rimi, tell me na what's it?" said she


        "Ok I'll give u sum hint n u guess, ok?"


        "Hmmm, ok"


        "Its sumthing for u from……….."




        "Baba" she declared delightfully


        "Baba? What is it?" she asked curiously, "Ah is it sum dress or……….. but surely sumthing to carry with me, right?"


        "Ya u are on the right track, go on" said Rimi


        "Plzzzzz say na" as she went to her to have a look, but Rimi constantly kept her hands behind her back


        "This is not done, u say… may be the ur nxt guess hits the bull's eye" she teased


        "I don't wanna hit ne bull's eye, I'm asking u for the last time, are u telling me, or leave it" she turned with a fake anger on her face


        "Think again, it shall be my gain then"


        "Keep it, I don't need it" she said, "Whatever is yours is practically mine too" she declared


        "Hmmm that's true" nearing her, "Look what Baba has brought for u" as she placed it in front of her


        "What is this?" looking at the box she gave


        "Open it"


        "U open it"




        "It's the same thing, I open or u, what difference does it makes?" said Ashi


        "I know why u are fearing to open it…."




        "Because last time I fooled u, by a similar kinda box, which had the punching boy"


        "Ya……that's partially true, but I want u to open it otherwise too. Believe me"


        "Ok, I shall do the honours ma'am" smiling she said, they sat to open it, Ashi keeping safe distance from the box, "Off ho Di, its not that"


        "Then too, u open it" as Rimi opened it finally


        "Hey look, what it is…….wow it's a digicam"


        "Oh my god, this is so nice of Baba to bring this now"


        "Ya u can use it on your trip, how lucky"


        "U too stupid, its urs too remember" Ashi soothed


        "Then I shud inaugurate it" suggested Rimi


        "Of course, go on"


        "But my first pic will be of…………..urs"


        "No no plz, I'm not in a mood to pose for u" Ashi said backing off


        "Who said u have to pose, u do ur work"




        "Oh ho, try to be natural Di, boys like that" she added


        "I don't need to be liked by any boy"


        "Are u sure no one?"


        "What do u mean?" she asked


        "I mean nothing much just that girls do all to impress boys so………"


        "I'm not like that"


        "Who knows u better than me, right?"


        "Right, I shud go n say thanx to Baba for this" she said happily


        "Ya u shud" Rimi agreed but she was thinking sumthing


        "What happened?"


        "Nothing, just that why Baba has brought this for u all of a sudden?" she asked


        "Any problem with that" Ashi said


        "May be to convince u for sumthing" she suggested her


        "For what?"


        "Another proposal, who knows"


        "What?" she gave a shocking one, "U mean……….." as Rimi nodded


        "Though I'm not sure, but u know…….."


        "I don't think so, Baba wud never do such a thing to me" Ashi said making a puzzled face


        "Gotcha, it's so easy to fool u Di" as Rimi started giggling


        "What the hell? How dare u do that to me? I'm so stupid to fall in ur trap yet again" she almost fumed as she ran after her to catch her but Rimi, being Rimi, was faster ………………..






     While the dinner was going on, Suhaan kept an eye over his Bhai n Mehr, noticed them peeping onto each other at regular intervals, they exchanged smiles too, n for once, Mehr had smiled at him too, like telling him not to be worried anymore for his Bhai… as soon as they left, Suhaan caught up with his Bhai


        "So now tell me, wat is on ur mind?" he asked


        "Wat?" he said sumwat trying hard not to smile


        "Ahan, u can do that now, I know It's on" he declared


        "Wat's on Suhaan?" asked Snigs


        "Dids, it's a yes from her side too"


        "U mean Sameer also………wow u din't tell me"


        "Di, its not fully………" he started


        "Stop it Bhai, she said she likes u even told me that I can call her Bhabhi soon"


        "Really, but wen did she say all this to u Suhaan?" she asked


        "She did, I'm telling u she's perfect for Bhai" as Sameer was left only to blush even more


        "N how do u know that so early?" she asked again


        "B'coz she's cool like me" he stated, "N it will be fun having her at home as family"


        "Oh so all's decided huh?" she winked


        "Ya isn't it Bhai?" looking at him,


        "As far as my view is concerned, I would like to have sum more time"


        "Time? For what Bhai?" Suhaan asked


        "Suhaan, let him be" said Snigs


        "But Dids………." As Snigs stopped him,


        "Sameer, take ur time" she assured n they went to their rooms





     The nxt morning was a rather busy one, with the final packings n all, where sum did it beforehand like Ashi, who din't want to miss out on anything, not to forget the latest addition, her digicam, for which she was excited. Rimi had asked her to capture every single moment, if possible…….


        N on the other hand, there were sum last minute packers, ya Suhaan, who else. N to top it he woke up late, n then almost ran across the house to pack up his essentials, starting from his discman to camcorders n wat not………..he seemed like in a total mess, wandering around in a pair of shorts n tee.


        "Suhaan, atleast have ur meal first" said his Mom


        "No Mom, I dun have time for that now, I'm already running late"


        "How many times do I need to tell u to arrange these a day before?" she asked, "N cum n have this or I'll cancel ur trip at all"


        "Oh ho Mom, dun treat me like a child, I'll have it wen I'm dun with……….."


        "N if u r not dun with, then?"


        "Then too I wud have it, ok now…………where can I keep it?" he said scratching his head, "Oh right" as he rushed to get his kit


        "Why is this boy so messed up?" she said to herself





     As it was scheduled, they were to meet up at Hotel Sidhhartha, Ankur made it sure that no one gets late. All had started to gather up one by one, Tamy n Ashi reached there together n were happy to find sum other people already there,


        "Hey Hi, gud to see u" said Ankur, "I hope u havn't missed anything?"


        "I hope not" replied Tamy, "N if I did then too, I'm sure it won't be a problem"


        "At what time are we going to reach there?" asked Ashi


        "Sumthing around 7am, if all goes perfect" he said n Ashi stared


        "Oh ho don't u worry, it'll be perfect" added Rahul


     Soon after Ravs reached in her plush car, in a mini skirt topped with a tube top n a leather jacket


        "Look who's there" said one from behind n they glanced at her direction


        "Can't she wear sumthing descent?" asked Tamy sumwat louder


        "No" Ankur quickly replied, "Or how else she's going to woo sumone?" he completed with a raised brow


        "Ya didn't u see that day how she sat glued to Suhaan?" remarked Rahul


        "But Suhaan didn't………" Ashi started to protest


        "I know, he didn't"Rahul finished with a glint


        "But do u really think that 'sumone' will get away with this thing?" asked Tamy with a naughty smile as Ashi looked a bit worried


        "But then too they don't stop trying" stated Ankur


        "Hey Ankur" called Ravs,


        "Hi Ravs, come here" she didn't want to, but she did


        "Isn't here neone else?" she asked, completely ignoring them


        "Are we invisible?" whispered Tamy to Ashi


        "Stop it" Ashi mouthed back


        "Not yet, Manish's still not reached" said Ankur, "But he had called me up for whether u hav reached or not?" Ravs rolled her eyes in irritation


        "Did I ask for him?" asked she


        "No, but I thot of informing u" stated Ankur


        "Where's Suhaan?" she came to the point finally


        "Ah…….u were asking for him, u shud have done that earlier" Ankur said in a teasing manner


        "Ok I had dun that now, tell me where's he?"


        "I don't think he'll be cuming………….."


        "Wat?" shouted Ravs n Ashi together


        "Wo wo wo, chill" as he stared at them alternatively, Ashi checked herself rather quickly


        "Why didn't u tell me that earlier, I wudn't have cum at all then" as she turned, almost fuming, but to her luck, Suhaan entered the premises in his car just then, "Ankurrrr…." she turned to him but he was gone from there, leaving them


        "Oh no, why didn't he cum a bit later?" touted Tamy


        "Why?" asked Ashi still glancing at Suhaan


        "It wud have been nicer if she had left before that"


        "N u think she wud have done that without confirming him" reasoned Ashi


        "Hmmm, that's true, neways take care, I'm very worried for u"


        "Oh ho, stop it now" as she found him cuming in their direction


        "Hi" he greeted in general, "All's ready?"


        "Suhaan look wat Ankur's saying…….." Ravs got to him


        "Wat?" he asked a bit surprised, as Ankur winked at him


        "That u are not cuming n all that shit……….."


        "Ya for once I had thot of cancelling that, but…….." he made up


        "Then why didn't u tell me that?" she asked  


        "Oh com'on Ravs, can we talk sum thing important now?" he said, "Is everything alright?"


        "Almost, but dun know where's Manish?" said Rahul


        "Call him" said Suhaan


        "Its unreachable, now u say how to contact him?" asked Ankur


        "Ah he told me last night, he'll be cuming with Ishaan…..where's he?"


        "He too isn't here" said one 


        "One sec" as he called him up instead, "Ring is going………. hello Ishaan where are u?"


        "Suhaan ya we are reaching, 10 more mins"he replied


        "Manish is with u right?" he asked


        "Ya he's with me" as he hung up,


        "They are on their way" he said


        "I dun know u people are doing all this?" commented Ravs


        "Doing wat?" asked Mihir on reaching n all stared at her


        "I mean no one is a child here, if they are to come, they will"


        "U mean we shud not call them right?" Suhaan asked her in a sumwat raised voice


        "Suhaan……." started Rahul


        "No wat does she meant by that? Listen Ravs, u may not be knowing that we all are equal here, n we care for all, got it?"


        "But I was just…..saying that…." she softened a bit


        "If u have any problem with any of us, u can surely leave, we won't mind" as all were shocked, no one else cud say this to her except Suhaan


        "I know u all want me to leave, n now u too Suhaan?"


        "I don't want that but I'm noticing this attitude of urs from quite a few days……….." she kept silent for a min, n glanced at the others, red eyes n a face full of anger,


        "Fine nobody wants me here, I'm leaving" said she but n Suhaan not even glanced at her, as she decended the steps Manish caught her


        "Hey Ravs, where are u going?" asked he


        "That's none of ur business, go to hell" replied she


        "It is very much my business, u are not going anywhere" he commanded, "Hey guys, wat's wrong?" looking at others


        "Nothing dude, u know the usual tiffs…….Ravs said sumthing n Suhaan reacted back" Ankur finshed off


        "N u are leaving?" he asked Ravs, "Don't take it personally, cum" as she followed him, "Suhaan plz finish it off here" he said to him


        "Look who's guarding u?" he said to Ravs,


        "I'm sorry, I promise I'll try not to repeat it" as Manish smiled at her


        "Fine" as Ravs hugged him suddenly,

       "Ravs, its ok" feeling quite embarrassed, Ashi pressed Tamy's hand in a reflex, Manish gulped


        "Wooh, so all set up, n I hope everyone's reached" asked Ishaan, "So we shud finally start off"


        "Ya sure, cum'on everybody load ur luggage up n take ur seats" Ankur said n all followed, after 10-15mins we see the luggage tied up n they were seated properly, with the girls occupying the window seats, Ravs n Ashi had taken the two front seats, n Tamy had yet again warned Ashi for that, n she laughed it off


        "So here we go for Mahabaleshwar" as Suhaan thumped up n all shouted together


        "Ah….Suhaan, sit here" invited Ravs him by her side


        "No thanx, I'll manage" he said with a smile


        "Cum on, I said sorry, so sit here only" as she pulled him to the seat, Rahul sat with Ashi n Manish was left to manage with Tamy(his gal has already booked sumone else)


        "Ok friends we have arranged these food packets for the night, if anybody feels hungry or kinda munching, help urselves" declared Ishaan


        "Can I hav it now?" asked one from behind


        "Ya sure, but the rest have to be in self help manner, I'm sure no one would like to wake up in the night n serve sumone" winked Manish


        "That's so very true" added one, "At least not me"


         "See everyone's like that" it being a video coach, soon a movie was played but all being very tired for the day long packing n all, dozed off after sumtime, excepting sum who retorted to their personal music systems, while few others continued chatting.


     As the night grew darker, Ravs dozed off on Suhaan's shoulder, seeking support through a nap; he tried to woke her up but she was falling off again


        "Ravs….." he called her


        "Mmm" she murmured n further encircled her arm around him


        "Uff….." he gasped, "I can't be like this for the whole night" he said to himself, keeping her hand off his chest, n tapping Rahul (nearest to him), "Rahul, I can't sit like this, can u…………." he was cut off


        "Are u crazy? No way, I can't sit with her" he said, the last words in a whisper


        "I know that, call on Manish….. is he sleeping?" he asked


        "I think so" said he


        "Then woke him up n tell him to shift here, I'll go there………btw who's with him?" he asked for chking


        "Ah its Tamy" he said,


        "I hope she's better than this"


        "Of course"


        "Then call him na…." urged Suhaan


        "Ya ya wait" as she patted on his knee


        "Wat?" asked Manish, almost sleepy


        "U have to shift from here………"


        "Why's that in the middle of the night?"


        "Suhaan can't manage there" he said, as Manish left a smile


        "Ok fine, I'm going" as he stood up


        "U must be happy doing that right?"


        "Stop it" as he went to Suhaan, who was managing hard to keep Ravs' head away from him, "Ya dude wanna help?"


        "No I jus called u up to chat" he joked, "make it quick" he ordered, as Manish sat in his seat n he turned for his


        "Hey hey Suhaan, u sit here, I'll shift back" offered Rahul


        "Why?" as he glanced at Tamy, "Ok, got it, sure. All I want is a hassle free place" as he went to sit beside Ashi. As they exchanged places, Ashi woke up n was amazed to see him by her side, "Sorry to wake u up" he said


        "No that's fine; I was just listening to songs n fell asleep"


        "Actaully, I had to change places, Ravs was constantly falling over me……."


        "Oh" she uttered n smiled at him


        "I hope u won't do that" asked he


        "I hope no"


        "Gud then" as he smiled back, "now go to sleep, we have sum exciting things planned for tomorrow, so make sure that u won't fall asleep then………"


        "Exciting? Like wat?"


        "Ah…'s a surprise" he stated


        "Ok fine, I'll wait"


        "Gud night"


     It was almost dawn, wen a beam of light fell on Ashi's face……….she stirred a bit n found her head tilted on his shoulder. She woke up instantly….


        "Oh I'm so sorry" too embarrassed to even look at him, but wen she did, found him asleep. His face tilted on the edge of her seat, she had never thought of seeing him so close, wanted to capture this moment. His face reflected a calmness n she wished that this moment would never end…………..






That's all for now Smile 



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rituka7 IF-Dazzler

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update soon............

aarsow IF-Sizzlerz

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hey simply super ud,

itz realu gud,intrestn 2,

dialogues simply super,

All the best 4 the next UD,

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wowwwwwwwwwww........loved every bit..
plz continue soon
vvdn Senior Member

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Hiiiiii Saanch,
     i like the update Rimi is really a sweet sis that everyone want's. like the convo betn Ashi n Rimi. n Ashi is so lucky that she found new digi from her Baba .Smile
                     well about Suhaan them he seems too be impossible. last minute pe packing ye toh had hogayi yaar.n this RAVS i tell u i want to slap her, she is so irritating. but update was nice.
                                        plzzzzzzzzzz update asap dear,whant to know what Surprises are store for next.

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aTwenty Sixb



    She was forced to wake up, with her phone ringing by her side, rubbing her eyes she glanced at the number, it was Rimi's. She didn't even notice that the bus was vacated n she was all alone…


        "Hmm Rimi, wat is it?" she asked in a sleepy manner


        "What do u mean by that?" she asked back, "Maa is very angry, u should have called us here on reaching na…" she complained


        "What I have reached?" she jerked up looking around, "Oh my God, where are they?" she murmured under her breath


        "Di, where are u?" this time in a stern voice


        "I have not reached yet Rimi, believe me" she replied in a shaky voice


        "Di, are u crying?" she sensed


        "No I'm not……." She tried to assure herself that all's fine, n just then she saw Manish entering the bus


        "Thank God u are okay" he touted, Ashi felt relieved to see him


        "Rimi, I'll call u later, n tell Maa that I have not reached there, ok?"


        "Ok, I'll. U take care di. Byeeee"


        "Bye" as she hung it up, "What do u mean that I'm okay?" turning to him, "Did anything happened to me?"


        "Ya, ofcourse" she got terrified, "I mean when we all got off the bus, u kept sleeping……"


        "Really?" she was surprised by this


        "We thought something had happened to u, n were even asking Kishore to check u"


        "For what?"


        "We thought u had been unconscious" well she couldn't really express the feeling she had while Suhaan was around her, she was merely in her senses


        "What rubbish" she stood up straightning her, "Ah whose shawl is this?" she asked folding it


        "Ashi can I ask u sumthing?" he asked seriously


        "Ya go on"


        "Don't take it otherwise ok….."


        "Come out with it, stop this formality" she commanded


        "Ok, if u insist" he sighed, as she waited impatiently, "Did u do anything to Suhaan?"


        "Suhaan, what happened to him?" she asked with much concern


        "No he's fine, but something has surely happened to him" he stated


        "Did………..did he say anything?"


        "No, but I know him better n something is not right"


        "How do u know it?"


        "Ok I'll tell u n u'll know it how"




        "Actually, he sat beside u right" she nodded, "N u rested on his shoulder……"


        "Oh shit! Did I offend him?" she thought


        "N then when u were shivering, he asked for sumthing to cover u up" he finished but she kept waiting




        "U want more?" he asked,


        "This is it?" she stared hard at me, "U scared me man" she seemed relieved, "Oh he covered me up with this?" he nodded, "Is it his?"


        "This is a ladies shawl, how can it be his?"


        "Oh ya" she said noticing it clearly for the first time, "Then whose is it?"


        "Tamy's……he had never done this for anybody, he didn't even say anything to u when he saw u resting on his shoulder" Ashi couldn't help blushing, "U know why he changed places……."


        "Ya Ravs was…….."


        "But he didn't do that to u, why?" he asked


        "How would I know?" she turned back, "Ask him that instead"


        "Tell me honestly, did u give in for the bungee jumping like mad stuffs……."


        "What?" she shouted, "what makes u think so?"


        "Because Suhaan can only be kind to those who agrees to his terms" he stated blankly


        "As far as I remember, I didn't do anything like that"


        "You are surprising me now"


        "I don't think he's that bad"


        "Ya ya I know u know him from years" he said in an exaggerating tone


        "No I'm not saying that but……"


        "I know no one can know him better" raising his collar a bit


       "Hmm, but where is the rest of the group?"


        "Suhaan is down" he replied smiling


        "Oh ho stop it"


        "I think u should thank him….."


        "For?" she asked cuming out of the bus as Manish followed her


        "For everything he did, believe me it's very unlike him" he tried to convince her yet again


        "I got it" trying to end it there, "I'll say a big thanx to him, happy now?"


        "Why would I be happy? U are not saying it to me"


        "Uff stop it please" joining her hands in front, "I'm not used to this much talking in the morning" yawning she managed


        "Ohk I'll end it here for now"


        "Thanx a ton" she stated, "What's wrong? Why are we here?" asked she finally


        "Flat tyre n our ached backs" explained he while walking towards the group which was seen at a distance


        "N how far we are from Mahabaleshwar?" she asked


        "We have crossed Pune, some 50kms back, so roughly a 70-75 kms"




        "Don't tell me u are tired?"


        "No I'm not, actually my Maa must be eagerly waiting for my call……whether I had reached safely or not?"


        "Your mother is very strict na?" he asked


        "Hmmm, but I know she's very worried for us that's why she keeps us under her eye" she stated


        "Good to hear that u understand her point"


        "I think girls understand their parents better"


        "I don't agree, it depends on the upbringing u had"


        "Ya that's true" n they stopped as they neared them




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