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Posted: 15 years ago

Ashi was on her way to her friends when she noticed Suhaan sitting beside the lake, all alone

 

        "Suhaan?" she thought, "Should I go n ask him?" she hesitated a bit but finally went to him, "Can I sit here for a while?"

 

        "Huh?" as he looked up, "Why? Aren't your friends giving you enough company?" he asked harshly

 

        "Don't you think I should be the one asking this?"

 

        "Look that's none of your business"

 

        "Ok ok I got it, something surely has happened, isn't it?"

 

        "So? That's completely between us"

 

        "Fine, I would not ask any further. Can I say something?"

 

        "What?"

 

        "You know you look more handsome when angry" she stated

 

        "Are u trying to flirt with me?"

 

        "Am I? I don't think so"

 

        "Good for u, as I'm not……" he was cut

 

        "I know you are not interested in girls" she completed sitting beside him

 

        "Hmmm" she could sense his anger taming down

 

        "Can I ask you something more?"

 

        "No"

 

        "Ok I won't" she said making a sad face, he didn't miss that

 

        "What is it?"

 

        "Why are you so different from the others?"

 

        "Different?"

 

        "Hmm, you are bossy, short tempered, hate girls……"

 

        "Hello pull up your brake, I'm not that"

 

        "What? Don't you hate girls?"

 

        "Yes I do"

 

        "Why?"

 

        "I'm not bound to tell you the reason"

 

        "Ok if not me, then anyone else"

 

        "But I don't want to……."

 

        "Believe me you'll feel better"

 

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Posted: 15 years ago

        "Did I ask for a suggestion?"

 

        "No. Ok lemme guess, did anyone ditched you n so you have started hating girls?" she asked

 

        "No"

 

        "I hope you are straight right?" n he surely gave a shot back, "Oops sorry" she bit her lip

 

        "Don't you have anything else to do?"

 

        "Hmm, then it leaves me with only one option"

 

        "What?"

 

        "You might have experienced something earlier, may be when you were a child………" as he looked at her, "You know it happens with many, is it that case?"

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
That's ends my update now 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
woooooooooooow excelent n simply super,

dialogues r rockin realy weldun sweety,

loved them,


Aarthi
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Posted: 15 years ago
I'll try to update by tomorrow!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
cool
loved it
update was long and lovely
 
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Posted: 15 years ago

Here's the next part:

 

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        "Why is Ashi taking so much time?" asked Neelu

 

        "Hmm it's already 10 mins" said Siya, "I think she has fallen asleep"

 

        "Wait I'll check n come" Tamy said, as she went straight to their tent, but she was not there, "Where can she go now?" she was on her way to return when some voice caught her attention n on further checking it was Ashi's, she was sitting pretty with him "Oh this is the case, she didn't talk to him then……..May be she's not sleeping but living her dream for sure" she smiled to herself n returned

 

        "Where's she?" asked Neelu

 

        "She's tired, wanted to rest, let her be" she lied knowing it well that the news would not be liked by all

 

        "Did u hear?" started Neha excitedly

 

        "What?" Tamy asked with equal urge

 

        "We are going to party all night, n no one will be sleeping tonight" finished Siya

 

        "Oh wow, that's great" Tamy said

 

        "It is n the boys have already started to get the party rolling" said Neha

 

        "Ashi's really intelligent" Rehana said

 

        "N why aren't we?" asked one

 

        "Because she's already gone to charge herself up for the party n we are still sitting here" finished she

 

        "So true na…..why aren't we so?" suggested Sneha

 

        "Hmm" Tamy could do nothing but smile; she's surely busy to charge herself, what better way to do it

 

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        "You didn't answer me?" she asked again, "Is it really that case?"

 

        "Why don't you leave me alone?" he suggested, awkwardly sweet was his voice

 

        "So you want to be alone?"

 

        "Hmmmm"

 

        "How long?"

 

        "I don't know"

 

        "Ok I won't ask u why do u hate girls, but you can surely tell me what happened now, isn't it?"

 

        "I din't knew u were so sticky" he said

 

        "N I thought u know how to atleast talk to girls"

 

        "Oh heavens help me" he sighed looking at the sky above, she tapped his shoulder

 

        "I'm really sorry to irritate you so much, sorry" she said getting up, he understood it well that he had been rude despite the fact that she has helped him to cool down

 
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Posted: 15 years ago

"Ashi" he called as he caught her hand, her heart nearly forgot to beat by this act of his "I'm sorry" he signaled her to sit as she gained her sense back

 

        "That's ok" she said sitting down, "As I know you are a bit disturbed over something but that does not mean you can behave like this with me ever again" she warned smiling to which he smiled back

 

        "I can't promise" he said smiling, "Actually I should thank you"

 

        "Hmm"

 

        "You know I was in my worst mood ever, but you……."

 

        "So you keep on breaking your own records everytime, huh?"

 

        "What?"

 

        "I mean everytime you think it's the worst"

 

        "No I don't get this angry each time, actually someone said such a thing…….anyways"

 

        "About?"

 

        "About a girl" he said straight

 

        "What?"

 

        "Ah…….. nothing much, leave it"

 

        "I won't force if you don't want to reveal it"

 

        "Thanx" as they sat quiet for a few moments, "By the way, your third option was right" he spoke all of a sudden making her surprised

 

        "I guessed it some how" she replied, "Was it something serious?" as he smiled biting his lip, "Huh"

 

        "Well it was indeed serious for me, but…….later it became a matter of joke for my friends"

 

        "They teased you with that?" he nodded meekly, "That's rude"

 

        "It wasn't only rude; it was shameful too"

 

        "Were you in love with your classmate?" she asked

 

        "No not at all"

 

        "Then?"  

 

        "She was one of my Dids' friends"

 

        "So you were in love with her?" she asked surprisingly

 

        "No, I wasn't in love with anyone" he rejected loudly

 

        "Ok ok sorry"

 

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Posted: 15 years ago

"She tried to……." as Ashi waited impatiently, "You know what girls try to do to boys younger to them" he completed hurriedly

 

        "No, how would I know, I never did that to anyone" she stated

 

        "Off ho fine, she tried to act physical with me"

 

        "What?" she was shocked to the core, "How did you know that?"

 

        "I was a teenager then, not a stupid" as she stared at him, "She sat close to me, hugged me every now n then, knowing it very well that I wasn't comfortable at all"

 

        "May be she took you as a brother?" she suggested

 

        "Oh please, then why did she visit home when Dids was absent, n you know she even tried to……." he stopped

 

        "Tried to?"

 

        "Kiss me"

 

        "Did she?" she was all the more curious

 

        "What do you think?" she gave an awkward smile

 

        "So how did it all stop?"

 

        "Dids had caught her red handed, one day when she trying to get close to me"

 

        "Oh then?"

 

        "Then what? Dids gave a solid scold teamed with a tight slap across her face n she left"

 

        "Where is she now?"

 

        "Who cares?"

 

        "I wish I could punch her hard" she murmured

 

        "Did you say something?"

 

        "No……oh so that's why you had been sent to Boarding?"

 

        "How do you know that?"

 

        "Rahul told me where he had met you"

 

        "Oh ok"

 

        "Can't you forget that incident?"

 

        "I wish I could"

 

        "But if someone falls for you now, will you accept her?" was her most important query

 

        "What makes you ask that?"

 

        "Umm……… nothing"

 

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Posted: 15 years ago

"I don't know why I opened it up to you?" he said, "But you were right, I'm feeling lighter" he smiled

 

        "Hmm so the moral of the story is…….. sometimes you should listen to someone else too"

 

        "Right" as they laughed

 

        "Did she kiss you?"

 

        "Why?" surprised was he

 

        "Just like that"

 

        "Hmm, she did" he answered after a moment, "But why are u asking that?"

 

        "Where?" as he was completely taken aback by this query of hers

 

        "What?"

 

        "Just tell me what I'm asking, where did she kiss you?"

 

        "Huh?" he smiled as she sternly looked at him, "On my cheek" 

 

        "Oh………..Like this" as she kissed him lightly on his cheek, shocking him like hell, he kept stunned for a moment or two, unable to react, amazed at her oh so daring act, "If you didn't like it much, you can gladly return it to me" saying she forwarded her cheek to him, making him all the more shocked

 

        "What the hell are you trying to do?" getting up instantly, "How could you even do that to me?" furious at her

 

        "Are you angry with me?" she asked

 

        "What? How can you even ask that? Ofcourse I'm" the thing which disturbed him more was her calm behavior after such a thing

 

        "So now tell me whom do u hate more – Me or that girl?"

 

        "What?"

 

        "Just answer me"

 

        "I don't know, just go away from here"

 

        "No, first answer me" she stuck to it, but he kept mum, almost fuming, "I'm just trying to say that…….."

 

        "Enough is enough; I'm bearing you for quite some time now" as he started to walk away

 

        "Fine then I'll go n say it loud that you had told me your much hidden secret" she teased

 

        "Don't you dare do that or I'll……." he warned but she showed him a thumbs down making him run after her but she was faster this time, while running his feet slipped on the mud n he fell down, his head got hit by a nearby stone resulting him in the water, "Ahhh" he murmured, last he heard was a loud scream that filled the air………..

 

        "Suhaaaaaaaaaaaan"

 

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