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Posted: 15 years ago

        "Maa" shouted Rimi, heading towards the kitchen

 

        "What happened? Why are u shouting?" asked she

 

        "Oh ho u asked me to call her n now u are saying what happened?"

 

        "Hmm, so why didn't she call after reaching?"

 

        "She didn't call because………." she stopped knowingly

 

        "I'm listening go on" she said setting the table

 

        "Because she didn't reach there" she declared happily

 

        "Not reached? But she was to reach there by '7 in the morning……."

 

        "Hmm but there must be some problem" n then she realized it was not right to say that

 

        "What problem?"

 

        "I don't know. But she'll inform us the moment she reaches there" she assured

 

        "This is why I din't want her to go"

 

        "Off ho Maa, she's not away with her boyfriend" as her mother stared hard at her, "I mean she's in a group, n nothing will happen to your baby ok"

 

        "U'll not understand why I say this?"

 

        "I know Maa, but we have grown up enough to take care of ourselves" she said hugging her mother from back

 

        "It's more of a concern when girls grow up"

 

        "Now don't start all that again" she said rolling her eyes

 

        "U'll understand it when u become a mother, especially a girl's mother"

 

        "Oh God please don't let me have any girl child or I would behave like Maa, which I don't want to" the last few words in a mere whisper

 

        "Ok ok now go n call Baba, break fast is ready. U too will get late for your college"

 

        "Ok going" as she went running

 

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     They had taken out all their mattresses n settled themselves well on the field, when Ashi reached them, her eyes searched for…………… him

 

        "Good Morning Ms.Ashi" greeted Ishaan

 

        "Morning" she smiled back

 

        "So how was ur sleep?" asked Niki

 

        "Very nice" she stated

 

        "Oh ho isn't it obvious?" teased one, n they started giggling making her realize that they are making fun of that

 

        "Ah……I din't mean that" slipped her mouth, "Where's Tamy?" she asked on not noticing her around

 

        "Ah she's gone with Rahul" said Esha

 

        "N where's Rahul gone?" she asked again

 

        "He's with Ravs"

 

        "Rahul has gone with Ravs?"

 

        "Ya because Ravs's gone with…..Suhaan" Rimil finished finally

 

        "Uff ho can't u people say it straightly?" she asked

 

        "No we like it the other way round"

 

        "Where have they gone?"

 

        "Well our Mr.Explorer has been very keen in finding out the area, so they had went just for a casual stroll"

 

        "Ah Manish would u please come with me?" she asked

 

        "To find them?" as she stared at him, "Or to find him?"

 

        "Are u coming or not?" she asked sternly

 

        "Ok ok chill, I'm coming" as he got up

 

        "Why are u all teasing me so much regarding that?" she asked on distancing them

 

        "Because we like it"

 

        "But there's nothing in it"

 

        "Really?" he asked, "We didn't miss the look on your face when u're sleeping"

 

        "What rubbish"

 

        "N moresoever Suhaan had never behaved so softly to a girl in his entire life, leaving his Dids n Mom ofcourse"

 

        "Oh he has an elder sister?" she asked happily

 

        "Hmm, n he loves her the most" as she listened on, "No he loves his Bhai more……..basically he loves his family"

 

        "But that's good" she said

 

        "That's very good, but the fact remains that he doesn't likes girls too much……n in this condition his attitude towards u, will surely turn heads, isn't it?"

 

        "Hmm… but why doesn't he like girls, any specific reason?"

 

        "There must be, I heard that once he had to change his school, a co-ed, for he was not fine with his fellow girls"

 

        "Oh then it must have been something serious" she added

 

        "Hmmm probably"

 

        "Did u try to find out the actual reason behind this?"

 

        "Not really, ya but sometimes I feel, I should" as they kept walking, "But why are U so interested in finding it out?"

 

        "Just like that, I think we should have a fair knowledge about our friends" she managed

 

        "Hmm so I like girls, I like partying, I like playing pranks on people………."

 

        "But why are u saying all this to me?" she asked

 

        "U only said that u should have a fair idea about your friends…..is only Suhaan your friend?" Ashi knew she was caught

         

        "Ah…..I mean…"

 

        "Ah got it" he said

 

        "What?"

 

        "Signal, trying to call them up, so……" she nodded

 

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        "Suhaan, don't u think we had come much far?" asked Ravs

 

        "Why, are u tired?" he asked

 

        "No I'm not tired, but u know we had to return too" she stated

 

        "Oh really, I thought we would stay on here" poked Rahul

 

        "Well that's not a bad idea either" added Suhaan

 

        "What the hell……."

 

        "Stop it u two" said Tamy

 

        "Then who told u to come along?" asked Suhaan

 

        "Staying back was a worser idea for me" she reasoned

 

        "Oh no Ashi must have woken up by now" Tamy said

 

        "Hmm so?" asked Rahul, while Ravs gave an ignorant look

 

        "She must be searching me, I din't tell her that I'm coming here with u"

 

        "Relax, there are so many people, she'll wait there" suggested Suhaan

 

        "Ya but, she must be……."

 

        "Now stop being her guardian" Ravs said, "She's not a kid"

 

        "Ya Tamy stop being that" added Rahul, as she stared at him surprised; "Because I'm that" he winked

 

        "You? From when u have started doing all this?" he asked

 

        "From yesterday" he declared, "N I seriously think we should return now, or they will some searching"

 

        "Ohk, let's go" as they started, Suhaan's cell rang

 

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        "Hello Rahul" said Manish, "Where are u?"

 

        "Ya, we are returning"

 

        "No we are searching u, Ashi wants to find Tamy n…." he left it

        "Oh she's with me"

 

        "Hmm so where are u?" he asked again

 

        "Can u see any fort kinda thing?" asked Rahul

 

        "Fort?" as he turned around, "Ya ya, I can"

 

        "Good we are somewhat near it"

 

        "Ohk we are coming"

 

        "But……"

 

        "Who was it?" asked Tamy

 

        "Manish, u were right… Ashi had been searching u" said Rahul

 

        "She really needs to grow up" commented Ravs, which they ignored

 

        "Where's Suhaan?" asked Rahul

 

        "He's on a call" said Tamy

 

        "Hmm then probably Sameer Bhai" Rahul said

 

        "How do u know?" asked Ravs

 

        "I know it better"

 

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        "Hey Rahul" called Manish on reaching as ashi went on to Tamy

 

        "Why didn't u wake me up, when u came?" asked she

 

        "Actually Suhaan asked me not to……." she looked towards him, still busy on his call, "Said that u slept late n so…"

 

        "Oh ok" she said "Good morning Ravs"  

 

        "Morning" she replied sternly, "I think u should learn to sleep properly while travelling"

 

        "Why is it bothering u so much if Suhaan didn't complain?" asked Manish n she shot him a look

 

        "I think u should stay away from Suhaan for some time……." suggested Tamy in a whisper

 

        "Why should I stay if someone else has problem with that?" she asked back

 

        "Din't u hear what she did to Soniya?"

 

        "So what? Until Suhaan himself tells me anything, I'll stay normal" she declared, "With whom is he talking?"

 

        "Rahul told that it's his Bhai" said Tamy, n soon he returned

 

        "U know Bhai keeps me so protected, never lets me feel that I'm……." he stopped, "So u are awake?" he said looking at Ashi

 

        "Hmm" she smiled at him

 

        "So what are we waiting for?" asked Suhaan, "Christmas?"

 

        "No" as Rahul n Manish shouted back and they started running to their spot

 

        "Come'on let's run too" suggested Tamy

 

        "Ok" Ashi said

 

        "Ravs u are not coming with us?" asked Tamy seeing her glued there

 

        "I don't like all these silly games" shrugged she

 

        "As u wish" n they started off

 

     The boys had obviously reached much earlier than the girls, so they waited; the girls came running afterwards, Suhaan was a bit surprised to see Ashi running like that, to him she was the soft gentle type, but she proved him wrong. The thought brought a slight smile on his face.

 

     As soon as Ashi saw him seeing her, n their eyes met, she slowed down, being conscious of his gaze. Ravs caught up with them sometime later,

 

        "Ravs, I think u need to be a bit more sporty to woo him" stated Dolly

 

        "Thanx dear for the info" she replied back

 

     This time, Suhaan settled himself beside Manish, n Ashi sat with Tamy. They covered the distance munching snacks n juices, giggling over each other.

 

     On reaching there, they settled in their respective rooms. Two persons per room. Suhaan stayed with Rahul, as Rahul was newer to the group.

 

        "Ah this is so cool" stated Rahul laying back on his bed

 

        "Hello Mr. cool, get up n get ready" ordered Suhaan

 

        "For what?"

 

        "Don't tell me that u have come here to stay in the room……" raising his eyebrow

 

        "No but, what's the hurry? Let us relax now n party tonight, n then we can think of something for tomorrow"

 

        "Oh ho" he said, "I'm so sorry to disappoint u lazy bones, I've already fixed up the plan for myself"

 

        "What?"he asked

 

        "That's a different thing if u don't wanna come with me" he imposed a fake sadness on his face

 

        "Ohk ok I got it" as he sat up, "I wish sumone could make u dance to her tunes, like u do to me"

 

        "Ahan, put ur hopes to rest as no girl can do that to The Suhaan Malhotra" he declared

 

        "I'll do that for the time being" as he began to unpack his luggage

 

        "Hmm, I'll be back after a shower, plz order the breakfast" he said while heading for the washroom

 

        "Ok, what will u have?"

 

        "Some cornflakes n toasts with a sunny side up will be great" he ended with a smile

 

        "Anything else, Sir?" Rahul asked bending to him

 

        "Naaaaah that'll be all" he finished

 

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        "Maa, I'm so sorry that I didn't call u earlier……."

 

        "U know it very well that I'll be so tensed n then too" said her Maa

 

        "Hmm I know Maa, n that's why I had called u now. We had just reached……."

 

        "Ok, with whom are u staying?"

 

        "Tamy ofcourse Maa"

 

        "Hmm, you are fine na?" she asked in a concerned voice

 

        "Ya Maa, u don't worry at all" she assured

 

        "Hmm ok, take care. I'll call u later"

 

        "Luv u Maa, byee" as she hung up

 

        "So aunty is relieved now?" asked Tamy

 

        "Hope so, she worries a lot. I can very well see her face" she ended with a smile

 

        "Ok now go n get ready"

 

        "But I'm hungry, can we eat first?" asked Ashi

 

        "No way, freshn up n then we'll eat" Ashi was not happy with it but she followed

 

Ravs was finding it tiring to leave the room so soon, she wanted to stay back n rest but she knew she couldn't do that………..

 

     Suhaan came out of his room, to look whether anyone is ready or not, found Ashi standing by the balcony, seemingly lost in the scenario visible…… he neared her tip-toing

 

        "Boo" shouted he from her back

 

        "Aaaah" she screamed in fear, as her spell broke,

 

        "Oops I'm sorry, I din't knew u would be so frightened with this" said he

 

        "No that's fine" she said, her breath heavy, "Actually I din't notice that u're here"

 

        "I was not here, just came n saw u" she smiled at his specific explanation

 

        "Ok" she said meekly, his presence was indeed making her conscious

 

        "Are u thinking something?"

 

        "Not really. Why?"

 

        "So u talk this less all the time?"

 

        "Oh no I thought, u might not like talking much" she said

 

        "N why's that?"he asked with a raised eyebrow

 

        "I'm so sorry………"

 

        "Sorry? For what?"

 

        "I know that u don't like……….." as he waited for her to complete, "I slept on your……….shoulder"

 

        "Ah yes… n I'm very upset with that act of urs" he mouthed

 

        "I'm really sorry, I don't know when did I………" n he let out a laugh as she looked on surprisingly

 

        "I know who does it willingly n who doesn't" said he, "I forgot to ask u, are u okay now?"

 

        "Hmmmm, I'm fine"

 

        "No actually u're shivering last night, so……."

 

        "Thanx for getting the shawl for me"

 

        "U are welcome, but not always"

 

        "I know"

 

        "By the way, u are surprising me repeatedly……"

 

        "Why?"

 

        "That time I didn't expect u to run back your way" she blushed a lil', "N now too, u are ready before all…………I must say impressive. I have never seen any girl to get ready so quick"

 

        "Was that a compliment?"

 

        "Take it the way u like"

 

        "Oh u din't tell me what have u planned for today?"

 

        "Oh ya, we'll first go for a general sight-seeing, n enjoy all the available sports……. Participation is must" he added

 

        "Hmmm, then?"

 

        "Then I wud like to try some adventurous stuff…….."

 

        "Like what? Trekking?"

 

        "Not today, I'll do that spme other day, a bit tired for it" he said, "May be a Bungee jumping would be nice"

 

        "But I heard that its not available here….."

 

        "How many are in store for me?"

 

        "What?"

 

        "Surprises, I know they are not available here, but am sure we'll have some other way for it"

 

        "Its optional?"

 

        "If u want u can surely come, but I can't force anyone as it's a bit risky"

 

        "Then I would come" she gladly declared

 

        "Are u sure?"

 

        "110%" as they shook hands

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
hello dear.. superb part ...impressed to suhan in this way....really good part
plz continue soon
love
ashu
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
woooooooooow tatz relay nice sweety,

plz do contn,
itz super n intrestn,


All the best 4 the next part,



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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiiii Saanch dear,

        Wat a update simply Fantastic,too cool. Starting is really superb when Ashi getup from her sleep , she too sweet. Like the teasing of Manish.

                 So, Mr. Investigater Suhaan Malhotra started changing good. He don't mind that Ashi slep on his shoulder aur wok am tha ki usne Ashi ke liye Shawl bhi maang li ,really cool. Aur Suhaan ka wo Ashi ko daudte hua dekhana how nice,

 I think Suhaan also started feeling for Ashi but anaware of his feeling , hope he realize very soon. Waise ye sab dekhkar RAV'S is getting jeoulous.n that's y am happy but I hope she don't do anything to Ashi like she did to Soniya,aur waise agar hua to Suhaan hai hi''..

              Suhaan is really changing, wo toh  girls se dur bhagta tha n now he came to talk Ashi when she is alone in the balcony to talk her''.i tell u I really het this RAV'S'..

        Waise yaar yeh  Bungee Jumping  kya chise hai I didn't get that,plzzzzzz explain that to me''

    am waiting for next rocking update.

 

 

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey!!
Amazing update.. loved Suhaan and Ashi <3
cant wait til your next update... please do it fast :)
and keep up the good work
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Posted: 15 years ago

aTwenty Sevenb

 

 

        "Mom, u need not worry anymore" assured Snigs

 

        "But beta, Sameer has not yet said yes for Mehr………"

 

        "I know Mom, but u can't expect him to do that so quickly" as her mother looked at her, "I mean, may be he's not able to come over the previous matter yet" she suggested

 

        "I know, n that's why I had suggested this thing so urgently"

 

        "But don't u think these things should be given time? What if he says yes now n then he regrets later?"

 

        "No I don't want that for sure……..I want him to be happy, just happy"

 

        "It'll happen n that day is not too far, just be patient Mom" Snigs said

 

        "Hmm, I think u are right, I should not force him into anything" she completed in a hopeful voice

 

        "Yes my sweetest Mom, so stop worrying for him anymore"

 

        "Ok……..oh did Suhaan call after reaching there?" she asked

 

        "Hmm Sameer had called him n he said they had not reached yet, but it was around 8…….they must have reached by now"

 

        "N still he didn't care to inform us……."

 

        "He'll..Mom"

 

        "When? He must have forgotten…..I'll call him" as she did

 

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        "Ok Ashi, u do one thing….." he said

 

        "What?"

 

        "Kindly go n knock all the girls out of their rooms………." as she giggled, "What?"

 

        "Nothing…….."

 

        "Uff ho, inform them that we'll be leaving at sharp 12, whoever wanna come, have to gather in the lobby by that time or we'll leave"

 

        "But will they take it in good stride; I mean I don't even know all of them properly…" n then Suhaan's cell rang

 

        "Mom?" he murmured, "Oh shit"

 

        "What happened?" asked she

 

        "I forgot to inform Mom that I have reached" he gushed out hurriedly, "Mom, u know what……I was missing u so much" trying to make up, while Ashi giggled placing her hand over her mouth, he glanced at her

 

        "I know it very well that how much my son misses me…."

 

        "Then?"

 

        "Why didn't u call me then?"

 

        "Actually we had just reached Mom, I was going to do that" he said while walking, Ashi kept looking at him from a distance

 

        "Hmmm, anyways how are u?"

 

        "I'm ok Mom, don't worry"

 

        "Take some sleep now, I'm sure u're not able to sleep last night" said she

 

        "Sleep? Noway Mom! I'll be going around the place today, am not here to sleep" he declared

 

        "But Suhaan……." as he looked at Ashi, standing there

 

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"Mom, I'll call u later, luv u byeeeeeee" as he rushed to her

 

        "Suhaan….." his Mom said, "Uff this boy, everytime he does this, n falls ill when he returns" Snigs kept smiling at her Mom's behavior

 

        "Mom, won't u ever let him grow up? He's no more your lil' boy"

 

        "I know that but….."

 

        "No buts Mom, let him be" she said hugging her

 

        'Ok"

 

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        "What happened why are u still waiting here?" he asked on reaching her

 

        "I was saying that they…….."

 

        "Just say that I have asked u to inform this, they'll get it" she nodded, "…..while I'll kick out the boys till then" as he went

 

        "Isn't he a bit bossy?" she asked herself, "But he's very sweet" it brought a glint in her eyes, "Oh ho………girls" as she ran

 

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        "But Suhaan, why do we need to leave just now?" asked Aakash in a sleepy tone

 

        "Who's saying u to leave, I just said that I'll be leaving………… u stay back n sleep, after all we have come here to rest right?" as he shot back, "Useless, I don't understand why do u people……..

 

        "Hmmm thanx, jus give us the location, we'll join u later" suggested Adi

 

        "What? We had thought that we'll enjoy together, but……….anyways here it is" he said handling the catalogues over

 

        "Ok ok, I got it. But lemme get ready….." as he nodded meekly,

 

        "I'll be waiting till 12, be on time" he warned before leaving

 

        "Huh, come on get up. Don't know when he'll stop bossing around?" gushed Ankit

 

    Suhaan later carried on his blackmailing to whoever posed the 'tired' drama to him…….. Meanwhile Ashi went on to knock on the girls' door… Like all rooms, she knocked Rav's n Dolly's too…

 

        "Yes, who's that?" asked Dolly

 

        "It's me Ashi" she replied

 

        "Ashi?" uttered Ravs, "What the hell is she doing here?"

 

        "I'll take that" as Dolly went to open it

 

        "Hi…..actually I just came to ask that are u ready?"

 

        "Ready? For what?" asked she

 

        "Won't u be coming with us for the sight-seeing?" Ashi asked

 

        "Who told u?"

 

        "What's the matter Dolly?" asked Ravs from inside

 

        "I don't know about which thing is she talking?" they both came in

 

        "Actually we'll be leaving at 12, so whoever is interested in going with us, has to gather in the lobby by then" explained Ashi

 

        "Really?" asked Ravs as she nodded, "But I can't get ready by that time…….." declared she

 

        "Then I'm sorry that u'll have to join us tomorrow" said Ashi playfully

 

        "Oh……. so now u'll tell me when I'll be able to join my group?"

 

        "It's not like that Ravs…….u are taking it all wrong" she tried to explain

 

        "Only my friends can call me that" she arrogantly declared

 

        "Actually, I don't know your real name so……."

 

        "It's Ravina….." answered Dolly

 

        "Thanx Dolly" said Ashi

 

        "Shut up Dolly" scolded she

 

        "Anyways, I think my work is done, I shall leave" as she started

 

        "Ah…by the way, who asked u to do all this?" asked Ravs

 

        "Your friend Suhaan" Ashi completed it a fake smile, n turned to leave

 

        "Oh I din't knew, Suhaan was in need of an assistant so urgently" Ravs said to Dolly, making it quite loudable for Ashi to hear

 

        "Din't u know that? Actually he wanted u as one, but u seemed busier, so I stepped in" Ashi taunted, "If u want it back, I can gladly step down, u want it?" as Ravs  bye" banging the door she went

 

        "How dare she talk to me like that?" fumed Ravs

 

        "She's not as delicate as u thought" added Dolly

 

        "I need to think of some other way for her" said Ravs

 

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Posted: 15 years ago

"So u called everyone?" he asked as they sat in the lobby, waiting

 

        "Hmmm" she murmured, he didn't miss her silent form

 

        "Did anyone say anything to u?"

 

        "Huh? No…..not at all" she hurried out

       

        "Ravs…right?" he asked n she stared at him, "I don't know why she can't stand anyone; I mean she wants to be in a group but then misbehaves with everyone……."

 

        "May be she stays in the group for some reason….." she suggested

 

        "What are u talking about?"

 

        "I think she does it all for….."

 

        "Hey Ashi, all set? See am on time, as per your notice" Sneha gladly announced as she came with Tamy n Smriti, Ashi smiled to them

 

        "Thank God at least someone took it seriously" sighed Suhaan, "What the hell is wrong with the boys?" as they laughed

 

        "Today girls are ahead in every field, do u want more proof of it?" teased Tamy

 

        "Yes I want more" demanded Ishaan

 

        "Ishaan, where are the others?" asked Suhaan

 

        "Aren't they here yet, I thought I'll be late"

 

        "No, I can't stand this indiscipline" Suhaan declared angrily

 

        "I guess it happens when moving in a big group……."

 

        "Exactly….." touted Manish "N Suhaan, no need to be so punctual dude…. we're here for a relaxation, right?" as he got a shot back, "Ok I have no problem, the moment they come, we'll start" he assured

 

        "I'll leave at 12 sharp" he repeated as the rest stared at each other at his adamance

 

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     Thankfully, almost all had been gathered at the time, not letting him create another fuss over it……..

 

        "Ok, so now that all had gathered up here, I think we should move" said Suhaan

 

        "Hello…….were are we going? I mean the places we would visit now……" asked Manish

 

        "Excuse, am not the guide, its his work to tell, not mine" he replied

 

        "Ok fine, let's go. Come on everybody, get into the bus" said Ishaan, n all followed

 

        "A very Good Afternoon to all of u, I'm Prakash Dubey" the guide gladly announced n they cheered back loudly to him, "Now before  getting to any spot here, I would to present to u a brief history of the place.Mahabaleshwar, established as a health resort in 1829 AD. It was a jail for Chinese & Malay convicts from 1834 to 1864. The capacity of the jail was 120 prisoners. These prisoners introduced cultivation of red potatoes, strawberries & waeving of cane & bamboo baskets. Many of the prisoners stayed at Mahabaleshwar after they were released…………."

 

        "Dude, even am feeling like one of them" whispered Ankur to which some giggled, as the guide continued

         "…… Maharaja Pratapsinha of Satara (1818 to 1839) engineered a scheme to develop Mahabalsewar as a health resort. Sir John Malcolum, the first governer to visit Mahabaleshwar in 1828, established M'war in 1829. Sir Charles Malet, the first resident in Pune darbar of the Peshwas in 1791 happens to be the first European to step on this plateau"

 

        "Oh ho why do we need to know all?" said another

 

 

"Ohk, seems like u are finding all this of much interest, I'll come to your interest………" he got the bored faces, "We'll first be going to Pratap Gadh, which is at a distance of 27 kms from Mahabaleshwar stands the majestic Pratapgadh, housing the tomb of Afzalkhan at the toe of the fort. There is a temple of bhavani mata, the idol of worship of King Shivajiraje Bhosle. There is a statue of Shivaji Maharaj inside the fort called Bale killa"

 

        "Oh no, fort…..that means lotsa walking n walking" said an already irritated Ravs

 

        "Ya n to top it all, we would also be visiting a temple" added Neelu

 

        "I don't understand your problem girls…….." started Rimil, who had overheard their talks, "Tell me one thing that doesn't irritate u"

 

        "Shut up, how can u expect a girl to walk kms with her heels on?" asked Dolly

 

        "Oh ya…….but has anybody forced u to wear those? Can't u wear sneakers, for a change?" said varun

 

        "Dolly just leave it" ordered Ravs

 

        "Ya that's better" ended Rimil

 

        "U know what, I think it'll be better if we don't roam here n there…….." suggested Suhaan

 

        "Hmm, then where do u want to go?" asked Manish

 

        "It's not only about me, I think we all would love to play n flung around beaches, rather than visiting tombs n temples"

 

        "But what to say to this Mr. Prakash Dubey ji" he asked, "N I think we've come pretty close to the fort"

 

        "No no, let's watch this one, and then we would tell him, where we wanna go, n he'll then take us"

 

        "Ohk, that's gud" he agreed, n soon they reached the fort

 

        "Ok now this is the Pratap Gadh fort, we'll be staying here for an hour, photography is allowed to a certain point. So u can roam about by yourself but we'll meet here again in another hour" said Dubey

 

        "Ashi, I think we should take some lovely pictures" said Tamy excitedly

 

        "Hmmm, Rahul we are going that side…." Ashi informed him

 

        "Ok but don't wander too far" as she nodded

 

        "Oh ho don't worry, we girls will stay in a group" assured Siya

 

        "Looks like Rahul has gained a promotion" winked Manish, "From being a friend to guardian"

 

        "Very funny" gushed Rahul

 

        "No way, I can't move in a group like this" declared Ravs as Dolly supported, "I would go with Suhaan" moving next to him grabbing his hand

 

        "Ahan…excuse me" Suhaan said taking his hand out, as everyone waited for Suhaan's reaction but….

 

        "We would have loved to take u along Ravs…" said Varun

 

        "N what do u mean by that?" asked Ravs, "…that I can't come with u?"

 

        "Hmm, we'll be walking to that point" showing the highest point of the fort….. he added

 

        "But what's the need?" she asked

 

        "Actually I wish to take some pictures from the top so……" clarified Suhaan

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"N I'm afraid that u'll not be able to climb upto that hight…..poor ur heels" Rimil futher said n all tried hard to resist their laughs

 

        "Ok fine, leave" said Ravs banging her foot n soon all left

 

        "Suhaan don't u think that Ravs has been crossing her limits off late?" said Ishaan, as Suhaan stared at him, "I mean we knew that she's always sticking to u but…….." Suhaan glanced at Manish who seemed quieter

 

        "Stop it dude, can't we talk about anything else?" he asked

 

        "Hmm, with pleasure, why not talk about Ashi?" suggested Varun

 

        "By anything else, I meant except girls" he clarified, "Doesn't it get boring talking about them all day long?" he asked crossing his hands over Manish's sholulder

 

        "No not at all" winked Manish, "U'll get it later, when u'll fall for someone"

 

        "Not again" said Suhaan as he went ahead of them

 

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        "Hey Ashi, let us have pics from there" ran Tamy to the other side

 

        "Ok" she gladly agreed, "Tamy, but after this we would go in….I need to take sum pics there too"

 

        "But is there photography allowed in?"

 

        "I only want some pics of brick ceilings" she said

 

        "What would u do with that?"

 

        "I like the arrangement of bricks in the domed ceilings"

 

        "Arghhh, I expected it in a bit more romantic way, but…" Tamy said, spreading her hands side ways, "Ok, we'll. But now time for some scenic beauty here" as they took some lovely pics in groups, or singly. As per Ashi's interest, they clicked some pics from inside too.

 

     They were almost back within 1hr, except Ravs……..because she was already waiting for the last half an hour, almost furious…

 

        "What are they seeing in that boring fort?" she asked Dolly

 

        "Taking pictures n running all through, God knows what fun is it?"

 

        "Suhaan too?"

 

        "I din't see him, but am sure he too is busy discovering sights" she replied

 

        "U won't understand it unless u do it urself" informed Reema

 

        "Jus forget it" nudged Ravs, n soon all were set to go.

 

        "Ah Mr. Dubey….can I talk to u for a min?" Suhaan asked

 

        "Ah sure…..what's the matter?"

 

        "Actually, I just wanted to ask where we are heading next?" he asked

 

        "Oh well where does the gang wants to go? I'll take u there only, after all my work is to make u have fun" he said

 

        "Oh that's so nice of u" Rahul added

 

        "Ah….. we would like to go some beach or some open space, if possible from here" suggested Suhaan

 

        "Well that won't be any problem, we can go to Om beach, a bit far but we'll manage"

 

        "Great!.....so guys we are going to the beach" declared Manish n everyone cheered

 

        "Thank God, that guide got convinced" said Ravs

 

     The beach seemed to be the place, where they can run around n play various games or simply splash in the waters. The sea was a bit rough n waters sparkled because of the sunshine, the girls ran taking out their shoes dumping their bags n all……

 

     As for the guys, they were not the ones to miss this opportunity, taking out their shirts they jumped in the waters, making heads turn

 

        "Oh wow, para-gliding" said an excited Sneha

 

        "Hmm nice na?" said Neelu

 

        "Come let's go" suggested Sneha

 

        "No no I'm not going with u"

 

        "But why?"

 

        "I have never done anything like this before" she said

 

        "Neelu, there always a first time for everything" said Ashi

 

        "But Ashi, believe me I'll not be comfortable doing it" Neelu tried to reason

 

        "How can u say that before trying it?" Ashi asked

 

        "Oh really" poked Ravs

 

        "Yes, do u think it otherwise?" Ashi asked

 

        "No, but wanted to see how it happens…..I mean if u could please demonstrate.."

 

        "Me?"

 

        "Ya why not?" urged Ravs

 

        "But how can I?" Ashi said

 

        "Lectures are so easy to give, but equally hard to follow, isn't it, Ms. PA?" taunted she, "Neelu, if u don't want to go, let it be"

 

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        "No Ravs, I want to go, but……"

 

        "Ok, I'll go too…..come on Tamy" called Ashi

 

        "Yippee, even I'll go" Neelu added as they went

 

        "Hey Tamy, where are u all going?" asked Rahul

 

        "Para gliding" replied Tamy

 

        "U too?"

 

        "Ya, I'll be going with Ashi" she said

 

        "Ohk take care n hold the rope tightly" he told to which she nodded with a smile

 

        "Off ho Rahul Sir, leave your sweeet friend at least for a minute n let her enjoy on her own" said Sharib smiling at Tamy, it was by now known to all that Rahul liked her

 

        "Is that so?" he asked

 

        "Yup"

 

        "Ok u take care" as she went

 

        "By the way, u really like her na?" asked Sharib

 

        "Hmmm…." said Rahul, who was still watching her go, "No, I mean she's my friend, n I like all, u too"

 

        "But she tops the list" Rahul tried to protest, but "Ok ok I know it, so don't try to fake" as Rahul smiled

 

     The girls were super excited, Ravs kept a keen watch on Ashi as to where she was heading….

 

        "Ashi, I'll go with u" said Neelu

 

        "But…." started Tamy, "Ok I'll go with Sneha, no problems" she ended with a smile, n they were then tied to their balloons, with tightened belts, two were tied to one balloon

 

        "Ashi, we'll not fall down right?" Neelu asked, as if to assure herself

 

        "No dear, nothing will happen, but still if you are scared, then hold me tight" she said

 

        "Oki" she happily agreed

 

        "So girls, hold the ropes tight, n here we go" cheered the controller

 

        "Yaaaay" they shouted together

 

        "Hey what's that sound?" asked Ishaan

 

        "The girls have gone for para-gliding" said Sharib

 

        "Oh that's cool" said Manish

 

        "Is there any option of water gliding?" asked Suhaan

 

        "I think there should be…." said Rahul

 

        "That's great, let's find out" said Manish n they went

 

        "Wow! I havn't done this for ages" said Rahul

 

        "Awesome fun, isn't it?" asked Rimil

 

     Thankfully, they got the bikes shortly……

 

        "How about a race?" suggested Suhaan

 

        "Yup why not?" said Manish, as he took the other bike, Ishaan sat with him, while Rahul sat with Suhaan

 

        "Hey are u not coming?" Ishaan asked the others standing

 

        "We'll join u as soon as we get the bikes" said one

 

        "Oki" as they started

 

        "Suhaan plz don't let me fall mid-sea, its seeming quite rough" said Rahul

 

        "Chill dude, am not doing it for the first time" he assured

 

        "I know, but I'm sitting with u for the first time" replied he

 

     By then the girls were had enough fun, n returned to the shore.

 

        "Thank u so much Ashi" Neelu said hugging her, "If u had never urged me, I had never attempted it"

 

        "Why are u thanking me? U had done this because u wanted to"