"Har Pal" Some Lines...

Hey guys... me here with more ramblings... This one goes out for the suffering of two separated lovers... apne very own... MICHI...

Ek pal… har pal… rahe hain hum judaadi mein jal…

Rok le kaash koi waqt ko us pal… jiss pal main har faansle jaaye yun dhal…

Qaed reh jaaye inn aankhon mein… unn aakhon ka ayeena…

Jaise gulshan mein sada bhahar mehakta sawan ka maheena…

Comments/Criticisms...

Cheers,
dc

😍 😆 ...Neetu...meri jaan leh kar rahi gi tu!! once again...Masha Allah...

Jaan-e-mann, don't u dare!!😆😆 Aapki jaan bahut keemti hain, aisa na ho koi mere peeche danda le kar pardh jaaye!... Shukriya for the kindness😳

Cheers,
dc

lol...hum bhi dekhte hain unhe hamahri kitni phikar hain...😆😉...lekin Neetu...in seriousness, please do write some more soon...I just love these lines...😊

Thank u!😳 No good... just hopeless😆

Cheers,
dc

Lol... I sense the faith yaar😆 Trust me... meri toh waat'ich lagane ke liye army khadi hogi!... Thank u for the "seriousness", u humble me deeply... Waise I'm serious too... after those three lines of yours, u seriously should start too dude!😳

Cheers,
dc

Neetu!!!! Sukhi was soo right about u!😲!!!😳
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!
👏

Jessu<3

niceeeeeeeeee... nice im sure if michi read that he would be like WOW BALLE mere li likha hai neetu ne hahahah 😆 😆

i see my name being mentioned o well 😆

hahahah! wutsup bro!😉

OMG DC...those line were soooo beautiful...

WWWOOOOWWWW....just like Rima said Mashallah...