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ruha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

 

 

Me bigaading a songWink

 

Paune bara baje 
Special Squad team to chale
What's going on 


Soye hain raaste
Yeh kaha sab chale
What's going on


Bulaya hai suspect 
Yaha pe jise koi pakad na paaye
Pakdenge maamu-chaachu 
To kaun usko aaye bachaane

Dekho criminal bhaage
Peechhe yeh to pade
What's going on ...Wink

 

Very silly I knowLOLLOL

 



no it's dam good ,want to say you are a good poet ,no buttering,it's true.
great ,will wait for more Smile
nice oneLOL LOL LOL

maha_prakrti IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 4:47am | IP Logged
wah humne hum par aaj ek Irshaad Kiya hai... Aur kya maange ye dil!!!!!!! Wah wah Tongue Evil poem bhi likhne lagi hai Wink
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 7:53am | IP Logged

@ruha..thanks Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

@krithika...mahi ne dekh liya to maaregi...usne mujhe uspe poem likhne ko kaha tha..ab tak nahin likhi Ouch Ouch

I wrote a poem on my dog once.

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Ammu... Mahi nahi maregi... Poem hi to hai, yahan Irshaad kar de.... Waise doggy ka poem hume nahi sunaoge Smile
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 12:51pm | IP Logged

 

Ok Krits...here's the poem...

 

The Dog's Hunt

 

There chirps a tiny bird

Sitting on the fruit tree

Its small bright black eyes

Keeping a watch on me

 

I wait for my chance

Ready to pounce

The shiny blue-black-green feathers invite me for a meal

Closer and closer I crawl

The bird just within my reach

 

A mighty pounce

My strength used up to the last ounce

I leap

As high as I can go

I miss

I fail

The bird is offended and gives a tiny wail

 

A familiar sound

A loving call

It's lunch time

And here I'm gone..

 

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Sweet.... If your doggy can read he will be happy Smile
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:39pm | IP Logged


Use sunaayi thi...he pretended to sleep but when I complained to mom he got up n gave one of his silly grins....he licked me a lot then Smile
ruha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
great one,you loved your doggy very much na?

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