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Edited by ruha - 15 years ago

karta hai 😊
Edited by ruha - 15 years ago

that was really nice piece!!! 😃

that was really nice pooja ........ I want to dedicate it to someone 😳 😳

ok here is one poem:


Daydream

Whenever I day dream,
and day dream I do,
in my secret garden,
I day dream of you.

I day dream of you,
in a faraway land;
embracing me tight
and holding my hand.

Holding my hand,
and touching my face.
Just you and me,
in this peaceful place.

In this peaceful place
a pristine river flows.
Where the unicorns run,
a breeze always blows.

A breeze always blows
and sings of a song;
our love in a place
where you're never gone.

Where you're never gone
is as it would seem,
from dusk until dawn,
whenever I day dream.

And whenever I day dream,
and day dream I do,
in my secret garden,
I day dream of you.

Beautiful creations coming ahead.... Nice on both of you! 😳

Awesome Mahi 👏 👏,kisko dedicated hai.......... 😉
kiske dream dekhe ja rahe hai woh bhi din me 😉 😆 😳
Edited by ruha - 15 years ago

Pooja both of them are dedicated to someone special(love of my life)   😳 😳


@I'm happy you liked it Rithi 😊 Edited by brid - 15 years ago

ok I dedicate this poem to Rithi and to our friendship
thanks for being a good friend Rithi 🤗

Somehow in this great big world
I found my way to you
My friend across the computer lines
my heart, my soul, that's who.

You try to make me smile
with the mail you send my way.
You never fail to drop a line
each and every day.

Whenever I have hurried home
with something, I must share,
I find it just so comforting
that you are always there.

Encouragement you give me
and a friendship that is true.
I'm glad my soul while reaching out
found someone like you...

a perfect poem  for kritika di, containing all ur emotions Mahi,great👏 👏 👏
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Edited by ruha - 15 years ago

Awwwwww....... Mahi ve... That was just touching and thank you so much for having me as a friend and I am glad I have one like you too... Many others in this forum too! 😳 👏