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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 12:49am | IP Logged

Originally posted by SAMIKSA

amazing
wonderful
awesome Clap

update fast Embarrassed Embarrassed

thank u

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Originally posted by fanatic 21

very very nice

thank uEmbarrassed



Edited by ashu20 - 18 June 2008 at 12:53am
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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashu20

Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey Ashu, hi mahak 
Aaj maine tumhari fic poori padhi.
It's just outstanding. Clap
Good update. i am glad u liked it
Ye Raj itna wild kyoun ho jaata hai ki kiss kar k lip par cut de deta hai. Wink ..
Gunny aur Cadet Aastha ka Gunny Vidya wala chakkar hai. Smile

haan socha thoda naan badal doon hope u liked it
Akriti to Akriti hai hi. Angry haan vo nahi badlegi

Navin aur Arushi ka kuch hona hai ye lagta hai. Wink

wait and watch


Raj aur Naina to bataeyenge nahi abhi kuch bhi Navin ko. Smile
Cont. soon.....i vll update today

 

offcourse i liked it sweety.

Theek kiya Ashta naam kuch alag aur accha bhi hai.

jaldi karo update.

meri fic me bhi aap k comments ka intejaar hai.

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Next scene

All our capt along with major aarushi are in meeting room when col bhatya enters meeting room
Col: hello every one…
All: hello sir...
Col: aaj mujhe aap sab se bahot he serious matter par baat karni hai aur ye baat bahot confidential hai… aur bahot important bhi
Major: sir kahi ye meeting col nanda jiss mission peg aye hai usske bareme to nahi hai….

Col: je haan major maine ye meeting issi liye bulayi hai…

//*Col nanda aur col shaktichandra were best friends ……aur vo raj navin gunny aur abhi ke mentor the aur col nanda insab ko apna bete jaisa mante the par jab col shakichandra ki mot huyi tab vo ek under cover mission par gaye the phir unka bareme koi khabar nahi aayi*//


Raj: kya unka kuch pata chala...i mean kaha hai vo…kaise hai…………….

Col: capt ek buri khabar hai….

There was a silence……..

Col: he is no more….(with tears filled in his eyes)

Gunny: sir ye sab kab huva…..aur kaise…

Col: humme unki body mili aur kafi buri halat me the….he was tortured very badly…

Navin: par kise….. aur kisne kiya…unka mission to successful ho gaya tha aur vo vapas aane wale the maine khud unse baat ki thi..

Col: haan unho ne kaha tha ki unhe kuch imp info tha bahot imp….

Gunny: haan kuch mahine pehle humare I mean meri aur abhi ki baat hue thi unse aur unhone kaha tha ki unki jaan ko khatara hai….aur unhone kaha tha ki agar unhe kuch hojaye to humme unki "bacchi" ka khayal rakne ko kaha tha.…

Raj: kya unki bacchi?????????

Col: unki to koi family he nahi hai….to bacchi..i mean

Navin: shayad unhone Kisi ko adopt kiya ho….vo jab mere posting kma me hue tab mai unse milne gaya tha tab unh one kaha tha ki vo kisiko adopt karne vale hai

Col: gunny kya iss bareme aap ki unse kuch baat hue thi…

Gunny: I don't know sir

Major: mujhe lagta hai sir vo info jo humme chahiye isske bare mai unki beti ko shayad kuch pata hi….

Navin : ya may be…

Raj: to humme usse dhoodna chahiye…uski jaan ko khatra hai….

Col: ok then navin iss mission ke head tum ho…..so plz be careful before u take any step and if u need any help any time u can contact me..

Navin: thank u sir…par…jab major yahaan hai to mai……head kaise

Col: sorry mai to in sab tension me batanahe bhool gaya… u r promoted…….. so congrats major navin…

Col:kal tak tumhe official letter mil jayega…

Navin: thank u sir…

And they all come out….. major aur abhi col bhatya ke saath jate hai aur

Raj: kya hua gunny bahot upset lag rahe ho..

Gunny: vo col …..jab maine last time unse baat kiya tha tab vo bahot udas the bahot dukhi the…unhone tum dono ke bare mai bhi pucha ….sari purani bate yaad ki….unki baat sunkar assa lag raha tha ke unhe pata chal gaya hai ke unki mot hone vali hai..

Navin: be brave gunny…..hum unka mission pura karenge aur jis kisine bhi unke saat ye kiya hai hum unhe nahi chodenge...

By that time abhi and aarushi come there and they get back to kma

Raj gets a call...
Raj: haan chobey bolo
C: sir apne kaha tha na cadet aastha ke bareme pata karne ke liye..
R: haan kaho
C:…………………………….conversation is mute……………………………
R: ok….
c: jai hind sir
R: jai hind
Every one else is in room (gunny navin abhi and naina)

Naina: bhaya maine aastha ko observe kiya vo sach me ajeeb hai….i mean she pretends to be happy but there is something tat bothers her….
Navin: ok is there anything else…I mean phone calls …
Naina: haan usse bahot saare phone aate hai…din me kam se kam 10 -15 to aate hai…
When I asked her abt it, she said..."mere parents bahot miss karte hai to issi liye" I think vo apne parents ko bahot miss karti hai….

Raj enters the room

Navin: kya hua kiska phone tha
R: chobey ka …ussne aastha ke bareme pata lagaya
Abhi: kya kaha ussne..
R: maine usse sab kuch fax karne ko kaha hai…..
And a page comes from raj's fax m/c
R: naina will u plz bring tat here


************************************************************ ************
Cadet Aastha Rai

             

Age-(sorry sirji ladkiyo ki umar nahi likhi jati)

Parent- died in a plane crash when she was 4 yrs old.
             Brought up in an old age home.

Address –Aastha Rai
                  C/o col s.d. Chandra
           Second innings old age home
                  Mysore

Property-owner of pt&t lmted (one of top company), and partner in two s/w company's


Studied in ooty Bording School. Gold medalist in archery ,gymnastic and shooting.
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Raj: ye chobey kabhi nahi sudharega…dekh vo age ke samne kya likha hai….

Sab has rahe hai…and they all go through the info...

Naina: vo apni smile ke piche kitna kuch chupa ti hai...

Navin: par usse phone kiske aate hai...

Gunny: we will find tat soon…

Raj: do u people still think tat she is up to something…

Gunny: I really don't know yaar...

Navin: raj usse humari personal life ke bareme bhi kafi kuch pata hai…

Abhi: humme lagta hai aub humme aastha ke bareme nahi balki humare mission ke bareme sochna chahiye

Raj: I think abhi is right

Naina: I think abhi humme khaneke bareme sochna chahiye

Gunny: I am with naina...

And they all leave for mess...and our huda and company is also there

Y: arre yaar vo nayi major kal se hum logo ka drill legi

H: kya hot news hai boss…to kal se…

Major comes from behind and completes his sentence

Major: u vll learn how to behave with people properly.

And our teachers are also there in mess in other table and watching all this

Gunny: huda ki to aaj band bajegi

Navin: lets go there before anything else happens..

Raj :wait…..kuch der baad jayenge

Abhi: bechara huda...

Yudi: good morning mam…I mean good afternoon...i mean evening…I mean…

Major: relax cadet ……….

Yudi: cadet yudi mam...

Major: I won't eat u cadet relax…

Huda: we know that u are a vegetarian.

Major: bad joke…..cadet….

Huda: Huda…madam amardeep huda

Major: what ever…………..and there are many chair to sit then why the hell are u sitting on table..

Huda: vo mai …

Navin comes there

Navin: aarushi why don't u join us?

Aa: yeah I will… wait a min

Major:so cadet huda if I found that again then u will get a detention just for a week.

And she leaves with navin...


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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 7:16am | IP Logged
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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 11:52am | IP Logged
awesome too good very nice lovely part waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Hey too good Ashu. Clap
Ye Col Chandra ki beti hai na.
Accha hua daat padi Huda ko. LOL
Arushi Naveen k saath usni strict nahi hai. Wink Wink
Choubey ka nautanki waala fax bhi bada accha tha. Wink
update soon.
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 3:11am | IP Logged
awesome part.....loved d line in d fax regarding d age... LOL Wink

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