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Posted: 06 June 2008 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
hi frds
really sorry for delayed ud par mere exams hai.......offfffffffff pata nahi kub khatam honge........................aur haan maine iss ud ko dubara check nahi kiya..to issi liye bahot saare mistakes honge....................so i am really sorry for tat as well...

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Its 9pm lights off ho gaye hai ,in faculty's room..
abhi :navin kya hua tujhe abhi neend nahi aayi?
navin :nahi yaar tu lights off karke soo ja mai zara fresh airme ghoom ke aata hoon..
abhi :theak hai...
on otherside in raj and gunny's room...
gunny: raj ye mess me tu kya bak raha tha...
raj :arre maine to bas ye kaha ke tujhe coffee bahot acchi lagi... aur tune hi to kaha tha ke coffee acchi bani hai....
gunny :haan acchi bani the par tujhe uss aastha ke samne ye sab keh ne ki kya zarurat the...
raj :aur tu kya kar raha tha navin ke samne................ mere tag khech raha tha..
gunny :yeah u know tit for tat...
raj :........smiles
gunny :ok good night......aur vaise bhi kal mujhe jaldi utthna hai...
raj :haan kal aap ka drill hai na first year ke students ke saath..
gunny: raj vll u shut up...tumhe neend nahi aa rahi...
raj :nahi....
raj :mai ek walk leke aata ho..tu so ja...
gunny :ok....
navin is comes near lake he sees a women standing near lake..........she is waering a baby pink colored punjabi suit.....he can see her silky hair covering her face....and wind is blowing.....
aur vo usske kareeb aata hai ...................isse pehle ke vo kuch kahe she turns and suddenly bumps and she was about to fall when he holds her and for few seconds they were in the same position and after some time they realise and ........
navin:sorry...actually vo mai yaha se guzar raha tha ....
lady :its all right.....
navin :lagta hai aap nayi hai........kya aap ko pata nahi ke lights off hone ke baad cadets ko apne rooms se bahar jana mana hai..
lady : haan mai janti hoon....
navin :to aap yaha kya kar rahi hai?????
lady :ye rule sirf cadets ke liye hai rt capt ...
navin : je haan....aur aap
lady :i am major aarushi lamba...
n :plz to meet u...
aa :humari pehli meeting yun un officially hogi mujhe pata nahi tha...
n :smiles...
aa :to capt..... aap iss waqt....... yaha..
n :haan vo room me neend nahi aa rahi thi to issi liye..
navin bahot nervous ho raha tha pata nahi kyon.................aur raj door khade reh kar ye sab dekh raha tha par raj uss ladki ke barerme kuch nahi janta tha to vo thoda confused hogaya tha...
aa :haan bahar kafi acchi hava chal rahi hai..
n :haan...
n :aap ko army join kiye hue kitne saal beet gaye...
aa :six year...
aa :aur aap ko
n :eight years...
aa :maine aap ke bare me bahot kuch suna hai...u r really brave....
n :i think meri behan aur mera dost iss tarif ke haqdar hai unke siva ye sab possible he nahi tha.....
aa :yeah i know....
n :i think aap humare bareme kafi kuch janti hai...
aa :aapke bare mai sara india janta hai and we r really proud of u capt..
n :aap mujhe navin bulasakti hai major.....
n : i mean its not our duty hrs so....
aa :smiles...(for the first time ) she is much more beautiful than he thought........after so many years he felt such thing.......
aa :aub mai chalti hoon....good night capt...sorry navin...
n :good night major...
aa :aarushi.....she smiles and leaves...
aur raj peche se aata hai..
navin :tum...tum kab aaye..
r :tabhi jab aapne uss nayi cadet ko bina koi punishment diye bech diya.......................
n :excuse me vo cadet nahi major hai jinke bare me abhi ne bataya tha....
r :ohhhhhhhhhhh................
n :par mujhe to vo acchi lagi...i mean we just had a friendly chat..............
r :tu mujhe itna explaination kyon de raha hai. i know tujhe vo acchi lagi..i mean as a frd rt navin...
navin :................smiled ...............aub chale..........
and they both leave.......................
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next day morning raj apni bed me hai.....aaj uss ka pehla class 10 baje....so he is having a sound sleep while gunny is getting ready as his furst class is at 8 am ......................gunny leaves the room to take drill....and naina comes to there room....raj is still in bed..
naina enters the room with out knocking....
naina :raj tum abhi soo rahe hoo...
r :haan...............
naina :tum aaj kal kafi lazy ho gaye ho...pehle to subh jaldi utth kar walk ke liye jate the..
r : aur aaj kal raat bhar jaag kar tumhare bhai par nazar rakh raha hoon...
naina : kyon kya hua koi problem hai bhaya theak to hai na ....unhe koi khatra hai kya....
raj :haan...............he had a unvaluable tressure tat he lost yesterday...
naina :what?????????
raj :bichare ka dil chori ho gaya hai.................
naina :wt bhaya is in love........................ really................
raj :jaha tak mai navin ko janta hoon he liked her....
naina :who???????
raj :our new major
naina :but i heard tat she is very strict... and ............
raj :ya i to heard the same thing...but we cant judge her before we meet her....so u keep all such stuff out of ur mind...
naina :but...
raj :tum itni subah subah apne bhai ke love story discuss karne aayi ho!!!!!!!!!
naina :nahi....mai tumhe kuch batane ayi thi...
raj :shot
naina : vo kal mujhe bhaya ne milne bulaya tha....
raj :yeah i know abt tat...but i dint know wt he wanna discuss with u...
naina :he asked me whether i like u....
raj :then wt was ur answer..
naina :before i could answer gunny and abhi came there....
raj :mujhe bahot bura lag raha hai naina...........assa lag raha hai jaise mai kuch galat kar raha hoon...............
naina :raj tum kuch galat nahi kar rahe ho...aur rahi baat bhaya se chupane ki ............to agar vo dubara mujhse poochenge to mai unhe humare bareme bata dungi....
raj : agar ussne mana kar diya to...
naina raj ke pass jati hai aur uska chera apni haatho me leti hai
naina :"agar mera pyar sacha hai to vo mujhe jarror milega"
and she hugs him....he tightens the grip....................and then they sepatate.............and she was about to leave when he pulls her back and start kissing her on her lips...........................during tat course she gets a cut and blood was oozing from there .................
naina :raj ye tumne kya kiya
raj :i am really sorry i really dont wanna hurt u
naina :raj its not hurting me................. par agar koi mujhse pooche ga ke ye cut kaise hua to mai kya kahungi......................
raj smiles at her and she was abt to leave when door opens suddenly and navin comes there
navin :good morning raj...
he sees naina there'
navin :naina tu yaha kya kar rahi hai...aur ye kya tere lips se bleeding ho rahi hai...are u all rt...chale shalini ke pass chalte hai she will check u...
naina :bhaya...calm down i am fine aur mai yaha sir se doubt poochne aay thi..............aur room ka darvaza band tha .....curtons bhi the to mai darvaze se takara gayi....
navin :ok par tu aub theak to hai na.............
naina :haan bhaya mai theak hoon....
navin :ok gudiya mai aub chalta hoon...
raj :par tu yaha kis liye aaya tha...
navin :mai to batana he bhool gaya....humme col.bhatya ne bulaya.......aur unhe kisi serious matter par kuch discussion kar na hai...
raj :sirf hum charo ko bulaya hai ya.......
navin: humare saath major aarushi bhi aa rahi hai........
raj :ok par kab nikalna hai.....
navin :at 10....
raj :par mera class hai........
navin : all classes are suspended......ok then ...................i vll leave...................aur haan raj ye parde hata do acche nahi hai............
raj :smiles.......as navin leaves.......
raj goes and locks room door..........he turns to naina
raj :accha zoot bol leti ho...cadet naina ah singh
naina :................blushing.............
raj :aur kya bhai hai apne behen ko kuch nahi kaha ulta mujhe parde hatane ko keh raha tha
naina :gave an angry look...:mere bhaya ko kuch mat keh na ok
raj :haan baba.. mai kuch nahi kahunga....
ve naina ke pass aa raha hai...................he just touched her face.............and there is a knock on the door.........
raj opened the door it was gunny
gunny saw naina inside room...............so he just stood outside his own room and told raj tat they all(abhi navin and gunny) are waiting for him in mess and he left the room
naina was really embarressed..........she just said bye to raj and left the room...................
after some time they were in mess and they discussing something.....
raj :kya hua tum log itne tensed kyun ho...
abhi :vo actually mai aur gunny shooting practice kar rahe the to vaha par major aayi aur unhone humse pucha ke kya vo hume join karsakti hai...to humne ha keh diya aur vo chati thi ke iss me kuch excitment ho to..
g :hume aankh par patti bandh ke target ko shoot karna hoga...
raj :iss me itna tension lene ki kya baat hai..
abhi :first let us complete our story....
raj :ok go on..
abhi :pehle humne shoot kiya as usual bull's eye ki side me goli lagi...
then it was major's turn.....she too missed bull's eye just in fraction of centimeter's
g :tabhi piche se cadet aastha aayi and she said "aap log ye bachoke game kyon khel rahe ho"
and major said her to play with us...and guess her shoot was perfect....just like urs raj....
we all were stunned...........and with out saying anything she left the place..
navin :she knows each and every part of kma......aur vo pt 1857 ke bare me bhi janti hai...
abhi raj & gunny :kya!!!!!!!!!!1
raj :par tujhe kaise pata chala
navin :(embarressed)aaj subha mere usse baat hue and geuss wt she was pulling my leg..........can u guys imagine..............
raj :ha haa haaa
abhi :usse humari personal life ke bareme bhi kafi kuch pata hai
gunny :to aap ko kya lagta hai....kya vo kisi galat maksad se yaha aayi hai
raj :i dont think so..
navin: but she is upto something...
abhi :gunny u cross verify her certificate and raj tum uske seher jake usski family ke bareme pata karo...and i vll check tat whether she have any one in arm....
after that thay see our final year cadets..............who were busy in their own world
then raj called naina...
raj :navin mujhe lagta hai humme bahar ja ke baat karne chahiye...
navin :ok then lets leave......
naina :but wts the matter....
raj and navin are in ground with naina
raj :tumhe humare liye ek kam karna hoga
naina :kya
navin :first year ke cadet...cadet aastha par nazar rakhni hogi...
raj :aur usse acchi dosti bhi karni hogi..
navin :haan par tum usspar nazar rakh rahi ho ye baat kisi ko pata nahi chal na chahiye...
naina :haan i vll do tat...par aap ye sab kyon kar rahe hai...kya vo koi galat kam karne aayi hai....
raj :mujhe nahi lagta ke vo kuch galat kam karegi ...par pata nahi kyun....mujhe lagta hai ke.......... she is upto something....i really dont know wt...................
naina :and may i know why do u think so...
navin :we will tat later...
naina :ok ..................mai uss pe nazar rakhungi...
navin :aur agar kuch gadbad lage to humme se kisi ko bata dena.............
naina :ok bhaya...........
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so frds there may be loadsssssss of mistakes.................par kya karu dubara cheak karne ke liye time nahi hai...issi liye asie he post kar rahi hoon..
i am waiting for ur comments...frds
plz do comment
love
ashu

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Posted: 06 June 2008 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
awesome too good very nice
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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 3:49am | IP Logged
very very nice
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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 3:54am | IP Logged
superb Clap .cont soon....
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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 6:06am | IP Logged
LOVELY PART DI.. Clap Clap Clap CADET AASTHA IS BECOMING A MYSTERY Shocked Shocked Shocked WHO IS SHE AND HOW CAN A CADET HIT A PERFECT SHOT??? ITS REALLY INTERESTING... AND I GUESS A NEW LOVE STORY IS COMING OF NAVIN AND MAJOR AARUSHI LOL LOL OVER ALL IT WAS AN AWESOME PART Clap WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART DI...


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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Navin ka dil Aarushi ne chura liya!!! Embarrassed Inki toh pehli meeting mein hi first name par utar aaye!!!! LOL

I glad of it..... now Abhi can be paired with Akriti!!!! Smile

Waise Navin was sharing a room with Raj and Gunny with Abhimanyu!!!! Confused

I loved Raj and Naina's scene!!!It was so romantic!!!! Embarrassed Raj toh subah subah hi shruru ho jata hai!!!!He is so naughty!!! Embarrassed And I loved their joking about Navin and his stolen heart!!!! LOL

Aur Navin kabab mein haddi jab dekho tapak padta hai!!! Angry Naina ne kya excuse bana diya!!!! LOL Aur Navin maan bhi gaya aur ulta Raj ko hi kehne laga!!!!! LOL

Aur ish baar Gunny tapak pada!!!

But yes this Aastha is behaving very suspiciously!!!KMA ke baare mein , sab ki prsonal life ke baare mein aur Point 1857 ke baare mein usse sab pata hai!!!! Confused

Aur uska shot Raj ki tarah perfect hai!!!! Shocked

Uspe nazar rakhni chahiye aur yeh kaam Naina bakhubi karegi!!!Akhir behen aur girlfriend kiski hai!!! Approve

And next time muje aur bhi zyada Raj aur Naina ka romance chahiye!!! Embarrassed

Woh log bahar date pe nahi jayenge??


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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Great update.....loved the way raj gets naughty with Naina. LOL LOL

All the best for your exams Thumbs Up

WAiting for the next update. Wink
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Posted: 09 June 2008 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
amazing
wonderful
awesome Clap

update fast Embarrassed Embarrassed

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